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devdahiya
December 19th, 2005, 09:01 AM
Ek chhora ghanna dhapp ke kala tha arr uska babu usppe ghanna chho mei aaya rhya karta. Jib bhi koe galat kaam ho jyata jibe-e kehta," Arre oo paliss ke pedd, arre kaag, arre jhauu etc-2. Chhora ghanna dukhi hogya arr ek din ke bolya:



Babbu re mei tne ghanna suun sataya
Yo kala-pilla tne-e banaya
Meri maa ne bhi goondd belle bhar-2 khaya
Batao tum donuwa nei mill ke mei kyun kalla bhoond banaya
Tamnne mei ibb tahin ghar te kyu na tahya
Dhandda karoon suun arr tharre khoob kamaya
Tumm nyu batao yo suthhra rang mere uppar tamne kyukar chadhhaya
Kyan tahin itani furshat mei banaya
AAkhir te suun mei thara-e jaya
Pher kyan tahin itna rolla machaya.


Chhorre ka babu bolya:

Na teri maa kali arr na mei kala
Ram ji ne bera na ke padd diya chala
Tere ye lille hothh ar sanpp kesi kaya
Issa la le jannu Singhadda aag mei jalaya
Mheinshya ne khol le, na jelli yo lyaya

anilsangwan
December 19th, 2005, 10:31 AM
Mheinshya ne khol le, na jelli yo lyaya

Wondeful Dev Sir!

Yeh Babu...Hamesha Te Jelli le ke Baalkaan ne dara dewen sein...aar hum jise baalak pit-de aaye.......:D:D:D

sanga
December 19th, 2005, 11:32 AM
Sangwan Bhai
Bahut MAja aaya ye pad kar

sanga
December 19th, 2005, 11:37 AM
:) ;) :( :o :eek: Sangwan Bhai
Bahut MAja aaya ye pad kar

anilsangwan
December 19th, 2005, 02:17 PM
Dev Sir,

Kaalu aage k bolya.....suno Jara..

Haan Baabu Maanya ki mein hoon ghana kala,
Par Bhagwaan ki karni pe kiska jor chaalya,
Shiv Ji Bhagwaan they Leelay, aar Krishan bhi Kala,
Chhora kaala howan te bata kiska likdya diwala?

Yoh to mann ka waham se, babu kyun kare phala,
Taawla sa menne byah de, tu ho jya Potte-Potti aala,
Khet mein kaam karoon, Tera ho gaam mein bol-baala,
Eb roley ne rahan de, mein mhains khol k chaalya,



Ek chhora ghanna dhapp ke kala tha arr uska babu usppe ghanna chho mei aaya rhya karta. Jib bhi koe galat kaam ho jyata jibe-e kehta," Arre oo paliss ke pedd, arre kaag, arre jhauu etc-2. Chhora ghanna dukhi hogya arr ek din ke bolya:



Babbu re mei tne ghanna suun sataya
Yo kala-pilla tne-e banaya
Meri maa ne bhi goondd belle bhar-2 khaya
Batao tum donuwa nei mill ke mei kyun kalla bhoond banaya
Tamnne mei ibb tahin ghar te kyu na tahya
Dhandda karoon suun arr tharre khoob kamaya
Tumm nyu batao yo suthhra rang mere uppar tamne kyukar chadhhaya
Kyan tahin itani furshat mei banaya
AAkhir te suun mei thara-e jaya
Pher kyan tahin itna rolla machaya.


Chhorre ka babu bolya:

Na teri maa kali arr na mei kala
Ram ji ne bera na ke padd diya chala
Tere ye lille hothh ar sanpp kesi kaya
Issa la le jannu Singhadda aag mei jalaya
Mheinshya ne khol le, na jelli yo lyaya

devdahiya
December 19th, 2005, 02:21 PM
Dev Sir,

Kaalu aage k bolya.....suno Jara..

Haan Baabu Maanya ki mein hoon ghana kala,
Par Bhagwaan ki karni pe kiska jor chaalya,
Shiv Ji Bhagwaan they Leelay, aar Krishan bhi Kala,
Chhora kaala howan te bata kiska likdya diwala?

Yoh to mann ka waham se, babu kyun kare phala,
Taawla sa menne byah de, tu ho jya Potte-Potti aala,
Khet mein kaam karoon, Tera ho gaam mein bol-baala,
Eb roley ne rahan de, mein mhains khol k chaalya,





Kya baat hei bhai Anil.....Todd padd diya......jamma dhumma uthh gya. Impressed with your poetry. POTTE-POTTI ALLA..........................ha...ha...ha. No one can beat a Jat in anything. Bohot badhhiya bhai. Sawaad aa gya.

anilsangwan
December 19th, 2005, 05:08 PM
Thank you Dev Sir!!!

Aap tein e seekh saakh ke 2-4 likh-likholiye maare they...

aap ne pasand aaye...badi khushi hui ...Thanks once again!!! :)

Cheers

Anil

Kya baat hei bhai Anil.....Todd padd diya......jamma dhumma uthh gya. Impressed with your poetry. POTTE-POTTI ALLA..........................ha...ha...ha. No one can beaat a Jat in anything. Bohot badhhiya bhai. Sawaad aa gya.

jagmohan
December 20th, 2005, 09:16 AM
Dear Dev & Anil,

Bhai chaala paad diya.

Ye saari complile karni padeingi. Keep up the good work...