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ritika
December 29th, 2005, 12:56 PM
Maine kaha jindagi se,kya tayag duen tuje
Tab usne kaha nahin tumhe sangharsh hai karna

Maine kaha deepak se kya bhujha duen tuje
Tab usne kaha nahin tumhe andhkar ko hai mitana

Maine kaha grihana se kya aapna luen tuje
Tab usne kaha nahin tumhe pyar hai bantna

Maine kaha darpan se kya tore duen tuje
Tab usne kaha nahin tumhe pratibimb hai darshana

Maine kaha raste se kya chod duen tuje
Tab usne kaha nahin tumhe manjil ko hai pana

Maine poocha dil se kuen hai sawaloen se ghira
Tab usne kaha kuenki tumhe swayam ko hai pana.

vijay
December 29th, 2005, 01:44 PM
Hi everybody i am a new member.
A warm hello and regards to everybody !

Well written Ritika.

It's your hobby i think , a nice one.

sandylawyer
December 29th, 2005, 01:48 PM
nice piece of work ritika. Do let me know if u have any songs written with u which u want to release in the form of an album. I know a few singers/music directors who r always in search of fresh talent.

karams
February 28th, 2006, 07:28 PM
Really Nice...
Seems you have a flair to excel in what ever you write...