Ishq, Muhhabbat, Barbaadi [Archive]

devdahiya

January 8th, 2006, 08:07 AM

Socha tha sukun paunga pehloo mei tere aa kar
Kyunki tum aaye meri jindagi mei khooda ki kasam kha kar
Na wayde rahe na kasmein rahi, reh gaye afssane
Muhhabbat to cheeze hi aaissi hei,na hum samjhe na khooda jane

Dil lagaya, aagge badhhe, jine-marne ki thi khai kasmein
Bhram mei luut gaya sab kuuchh,tuut gaye wade rasmein
Muhhabbat aag ka hei dariya
Samma jaye ashiq har ek ussmein.

rkumar

January 8th, 2006, 12:48 PM

bahut khoob Dahiya Sahab....

Socha thaa zindgi jannat ban jayegi, aakar kareeb aapke
magar zindgi jillat ban gayee, aaye jab se kareeb aapke

RK^2

devdahiya

January 8th, 2006, 01:07 PM

RK ji thank you for kind words: Infact i have started this thread solely for the expression of MUHHABBAT AND......Side effects there on, please enjoy and all to contribute:

Dil lagga, AAnkhein milli, panchhi huwa ghayal
Ye koi majak nahin hum sach mei thhe uss ke kayal
Lekin wo nikle bedard, kar daala sitam kuchh aissa
Na wo mile na unka pyar mila, bhatak raha huun panchhi jaissa.

devdahiya

January 9th, 2006, 07:49 AM

Na tum bewaffa thhe na hum bewaffa thhe
Lagta hei hamari rahein juda thi

Sham hote hi bujha deta huun mei sarre diye
Dil jalane ko tumhari yaad hi kaffi hei

Dil koi khilona nahin ke behla do ek khilona de kar
Ye toot chuka hei bewaffai se.

Ronne se gar pa luun khoi hui muhhabbat
to mei bhool jaun hansna jindagi bhar ke liye

Na tum khush ho na mei khush huun
Sitamgar kaun tha ye faissla khudda ke haath mei.

downtoearth

January 9th, 2006, 09:23 AM

dev sir,, kabil-e-tariff

misha0119

January 9th, 2006, 10:27 AM

V. nice both! Here's something from my side:

jaane wo gaye kahan jinke dhoondte hain aaj hum nishaan
takleef dii bhi to aisi ki yaadon mein milta hai ab nasha

sejwaldeepak

January 9th, 2006, 11:04 AM

KAKA JI,,

KAKI JI te manna suna dena.. Kadi jhola tha ke bhajna pade:D

Ek Main Bhi Suna Dun Ke ????

Chalo Suna hi dun na te koi aur suna dega aake......

Kal Mila Waqt To Zufain Teri Suljha Doonga
Aaaj Uljha Hoon Zara Waqt Ke Sulajhne Main
Yoon To Sulajh Jatee hain Uljhee Zulfain
Umar Kat Jati Hai Waqt Ke Sulajhne Main

Dil Ko Manana Gar Hota Aaasaaan
Na Karta Kisi Ko Yoon Ye Pareshaan
Tanha Na Rahta Bhari Mehfil Main
Na Hoti Woh Halat Jo Ho Na Bayaan

From Galib Saheb

devdahiya

January 9th, 2006, 04:55 PM

devdahiya

January 10th, 2006, 06:14 PM

Pa ke tum ko laga tha ke mil gaya jahan
Bech diya meine dumazila makan
Ab na tum mile na raha makan
Ye chaddar reh gai hei soo jata huun usko taan

cooljat

January 10th, 2006, 06:23 PM

Rock on.....!
dev uncle yeh kya :rolleyes: aapne to mera hi signature style chura liya
yeh galat baat hai...be authentic, be original...apana kud ka inovate karo,
this is not fair....hahhahha just kidding :D :D :D :D

hey! good stuff thou, u r a Jat kawi

rock on
Jit

devdahiya

January 10th, 2006, 06:29 PM

dev uncle yeh kya :rolleyes: aapne to mera hi signature style chura liya
yeh galat baat hai...be authentic, be original...apana kud ka inovate karo,
this is not fair....hahhahha just kidding :D :D :D :D

hey! good stuff thou, u r a Jat kawi

rock on
Jit

Bhai Jit, i am sorry to have used your signature. I used it only once...aage se taubba....ha...ha..ha. ROCK ON !

devdahiya

January 12th, 2006, 07:42 AM

Janeman-2 karte-2, Bhool gaya thha apna naam
Khana bhi tha chhodd diya, nahi bhata tha koi kaam
Dhoka de kar chale gaye tum, todd diye bandhhan sarre
Yadd tumhari dil mei le kar phirte hein marre-2

devdahiya

January 13th, 2006, 06:58 AM

Ishq karne wallon ko rehta nahi ye dhyan
Ishq ke aage bhi hein kuchh duniya jahan
Par unko uss-se kya hei lena-dena
Kyonki ye ashiq, ishq se jyada soch sakein na.

devdahiya

January 14th, 2006, 09:39 AM

Dil lagana assan hei, toote huwe dil ko sambhalna hei badda mushkil
Toota huwa dil jab rota hei to, jannatt bhi faffak padti hei
Isliye aaie pyar karne walo, na todo dil kisi ka itani bedardi se
Ke tumhe jgah na mille jahanuum ke bhi kissi kone mei.

ravi.shekhar

January 14th, 2006, 10:16 AM

Wah Dev Ji Kya Kah dala aapne, Maza AA gaya. Good One....

isi baat per 2 line hum bhi keh hi dale.

aansu ko ankhon ki dehliz pe laya na karo
apne dil ki halat kisiko bataya na karo
log muthi bhar namak liye ghum rahe hain
apne zakham kisiko dikhaya naa karo

Dosti hoti hai, dil-o-jaan lutaney ke liye
Hum apni hasti mita dein, tumhe paney ke liye
milne ki tumhe fursat nahin
hum likha karte hain apni yaad dilane ke liye

teri dosti main ik nasha hai,thabi to yeh duniya hum se khafa hai,
na karo humse itni dosti,ki dil hi pooche teri dhadkan kahaan hai

Lage raho Jat Bhaio
R.S.Singh
Meerut

pragati

January 14th, 2006, 10:29 AM

Naye Dhang hain ab, zamaane naye hain
na aane ke un ke, bahaane naye hain
nahin kuch hai badla riwaaj-e-muhabbat
hai qissa wahi par, diwaane naye hain

rkumar

January 14th, 2006, 12:35 PM

Naye Dhang hain ab, zamaane naye hain
na aane ke un ke, bahaane naye hain
nahin kuch hai badla riwaaj-e-muhabbat
hai qissa wahi par, diwaane naye hain

Bahut Khoob...masa-allah...aapke kehne ke andaaz naye hain...

bottle purani hai, magar naye paimane hain
purani illat hai, peene ke naye bahane hain
kuch bhi nahi badla hai teri mahfil me saaki
saare sharabi wohi, jaane pahchaane hain

RK^2

devdahiya

January 14th, 2006, 12:40 PM

Bahut Khoob...masa-allah...aapke kehne ke andaaz naye hain...

bottle purani hai, magar naye paimane hain
purani illat hai, peene ke naye bahane hain
kuch bhi nahi badla hai teri mahfil me saaki
saare sharabi wohi, jaane pahchaane hain

RK^2

Wah-2 Rajendra ji...........Chhonk laga diya!

Na bottal nayi na sharaab nayi, Gadbadd hui shabbab se
Kyunki aaj wo aankhon se pilla gaye.

devdahiya

January 15th, 2006, 08:16 AM

Rahein pyar ki itani hoti nahin aasaan
Pyar mei din-raat ho jate hein ek samaan
Na rehta hosh, na rehta kabbu mei dile nadaan
Ishq kyunki hotta hei uppar wale ka farmaan.

bhupiahlawat

January 15th, 2006, 02:01 PM

chand niklega to wo bhi duhai dega
khawabon mein uska chera bhi dikhai dega
ye mohhabat hai dost, jara sambhal ke kar-na
uska aansoo bhi girega to sunai dega

rkumar

January 15th, 2006, 02:07 PM

chand niklega to wo bhi duhai dega
khawabon mein uska chera bhi dikhai dega
ye mohhabat hai dost, jara sambhal ke kar-na
uska aansoo bhi girega to sunai dega

wah janab, kis dhamake se aapk aagaman hua hai Jatland par...sher ke ssath entry ki hai aapne to huzoor. bahut khoob.... taliyon ke saath aapka khairmakdam.. bahut khoob kaha...uska aansoo niklega to wo bhi sunai dega..

RK^2

devdahiya

January 15th, 2006, 05:05 PM

chand niklega to wo bhi duhai dega
khawabon mein uska chera bhi dikhai dega
ye mohhabat hai dost, jara sambhal ke kar-na
uska aansoo bhi girega to sunai dega

Bhuppi, welcome dear.....kya baat kahi hei....dil ko chhoo gai.

Uss aanssu ki keemat gar samajh lo tum
Girta hei ek-2 dil ko rula kar
Ghayal wo karke aatamma meri
Dhotta hei ussko tapak-2 kar.

devdahiya

January 16th, 2006, 04:00 PM

Hai koi jissne pyar mei dhokka, kabhi nahi thha khaya
Jo dil ko karke kissi ke hawalle, nahin kabhi pachhtaya
Pyar-muhhabbat, karne walle subak-2 kar rotte
Ye panchhi unmukt gagan ke, sab kuchh hein kho dete.

devdahiya

January 19th, 2006, 09:52 PM

Jab thhe tum apani jindagi mei har nazar sharabi lagti thi
Ye duniya mei bassne wali har cheez gulabi lagti thi
Ab na shamma rahi na parwane,dil toot chooka parwane ka
Nikal gaye tum duur bohot, koi chance na wapis aane ka.

devdahiya

May 20th, 2006, 01:48 PM

ratheetheraist

May 20th, 2006, 01:51 PM

Ruup kya milla unko guuman kar baithhe sanam
Kehte hein ki banaye jayengge aisse hi khubsurat janam-dar-janam
Aei uppar walle samjha merre iss jobban ke nasse mei madhosh yaar ko
Tuut jaya karte hein yahan badde-baddon ke bharamm.

apna bharamm nahii tootyaa kartaa ...........bata dii saii haii ee lee..........khi khi:cool::cool:

mastana kaka...........hahahahhahahha.............hahahaha h......kilkii pe kilkii:p;):D:D:D:D

jakhar77

May 20th, 2006, 06:54 PM

Roop ki kya baat karte ho unki to har ada qatil hai,
bas qatl hone ko dilwalon ki kami hai yahan.
husn ki to aadat hai gumaan karne aur itrane ki
inko dekhne to farishton ki toli thami hai yahan.

Ruup kya milla unko guuman kar baithhe sanam
Kehte hein ki banaye jayengge aisse hi khubsurat janam-dar-janam
Aei uppar walle samjha merre iss jobban ke nasse mei madhosh yaar ko
Tuut jaya karte hein yahan badde-baddon ke bharamm.

meghs

May 21st, 2006, 12:11 AM

Everyone has write really well , hats off to all of u.....:cool:

So here is a bit 4m my side-

Waqt guzar raha hai, par aankhon mein nami si hai,
saath hamare jahaan hai saara, par na jaane kuch kami si hai.......

kaash ki banane wale ne dil kaach ke banaye hote........
kam se kam todne walo ke haathon mein zakhm to aaye hote.....

tum dur jaakar jo itna itra rahe ho,
kabhi hum gaye to vapis BULA NA PAOGE.
hasna jise aadat samajh bethe ho meri,
kabhi hum roye to phir HASA NA PAOGE

ritu

May 21st, 2006, 12:47 AM

bharam to inka kab se tuta pada h
par ye nadan manne ko tayar nahi h
mastana kahta h kaka ko ye bhatija
is alhad ko dekho manners nahi h

haha heee @bharamaya hua bhatija

apna bharamm nahii tootyaa kartaa ...........bata dii saii haii ee lee..........khi khi:cool::cool:

mastana kaka...........hahahahhahahha.............hahahaha h......kilkii pe kilkii:p;):D:D:D:D

keshavdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 01:28 AM

Ruup kya milla unko guuman kar baithhe sanam
Kehte hein ki banaye jayengge aisse hi khubsurat janam-dar-janam
Aei uppar walle samjha merre iss jobban ke nasse mei madhosh yaar ko
Tuut jaya karte hein yahan badde-baddon ke bharamm.

palko ki nami me chupa kar sapno ko..
humne unhe jaane ki izazat de di..
hum toot kar bikhar gaye tukdo me..
unhe muskarane ki izazat de di....

hotho ki zuban ye aansu kehte hai,
jo chup rehte hai lekin fir bhi behte hai,
or in aansu ki kismat to dekhiye,
ye unke liye behte hai jo in ankhon me rehte hai..!!

oo tera bhalla ho manne yu ke kar diya aaj.....oooppss..ooohhhhhhffff:o :(

ritu

May 21st, 2006, 05:23 AM

oo tera bhalla ho manne yu ke kar diya aaj.....oooppss..ooohhhhhhffff:o :([/quote]

re keshu yo shyari ala kaam te mhare jisa tahi chod de.je tu bhi yo ron pitan ala kam shuru kardega te humne haswaga kun.tu t bus kilki paadta he jach se.
please never do that:mad: again.ib te man bhi is khi khi me gyan se aaraha se.poetry te man boring lagan lagi.
aja bhai chal haas le ek be mere gel hahahahahhahahaha:) :D

msingh

May 21st, 2006, 06:02 AM

hum sochte rehte hai kuch bhi
par jane kya hijata hai
ke neend ke aane se pehle
mera sapana bikhar sa jata haibharam to inka kab se tuta pada h
par ye nadan manne ko tayar nahi h
mastana kahta h kaka ko ye bhatija
is alhad ko dekho manners nahi h

haha heee @bharamaya hua bhatija

msingh

May 21st, 2006, 06:06 AM

arre daki yo ke kar diya tane[
bawale te naa hogaya se tu,,,i am shocked
its really good but agar tu yo sab karan lag gaya te aur lyricist ka ke hoga
dev dhiya sir jise arr ya ritu bethi arr vijay
galat baatt
jo thare hisse ka kaam se uss ne kar hehehheheheheh quote=keshavdahiya]palko ki nami me chupa kar sapno ko..
humne unhe jaane ki izazat de di..
hum toot kar bikhar gaye tukdo me..
unhe muskarane ki izazat de di....

hotho ki zuban ye aansu kehte hai,
jo chup rehte hai lekin fir bhi behte hai,
or in aansu ki kismat to dekhiye,
ye unke liye behte hai jo in ankhon me rehte hai..!!

oo tera bhalla ho manne yu ke kar diya aaj.....oooppss..ooohhhhhhffff:o :([/quote]

satyeshwar

May 21st, 2006, 06:52 AM

Everyone has write really well , hats off to all of u.....

So here is a bit 4m my side-

Makhi chadhi pahad par marne ke liye,
Makhi chadhi pahad par marne ke liyeeee,
Maine kaha, makhi chadhi pahad par marne ke liyee,
Makhi chadhi pahad par marne ke liyeeeeeeeee,

Neeche khada Kapil Dev catch karne ke liye!!!!!

Waah waah waah waah!! :p

ritu

May 21st, 2006, 07:28 AM

satyeshwar very nice.hahahahahah:)

kai sirfirae aye kai sirfirae aye
apni beakal ke numayish
jatland pe karne ke liye
onhe maloom nahi har pal tyar he
satyehwar ek moke ki talash me ban karne ke liye

Everyone has write really well , hats off to all of u.....

So here is a bit 4m my side-

Makhi chadhi pahad par marne ke liye,
Makhi chadhi pahad par marne ke liyeeee,
Maine kaha, makhi chadhi pahad par marne ke liyee,
Makhi chadhi pahad par marne ke liyeeeeeeeee,

Neeche khada Kapil Dev catch karne ke liye!!!!!

Waah waah waah waah!! :p

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 10:34 AM

Neend kise aati hai jo sapne aayenge
Sapne to bikharne ke liye hi hote hain
Har roz koi tamanna dum tod deti hai
Har roz kisi apne ko paakar khote hain

devdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 10:38 AM

Neend kise aati hai jo sapne aayenge
Sapne to bikharne ke liye hi hote hain
Har roz koi tamanna dum tod deti hai
Har roz kisi apne ko paakar khote hain

Aissa kya kho diya jo le kar aaye thhe
Hum tou uppar se kuchh bhi na laye thhe
Jisse pa liya wo takdeer bann gai
Aur jo na mila usse bhulla aaye thhe.

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 10:40 AM

Naye Dhang hain ab, zamaane naye hain
na aane ke un ke, bahaane naye hain
nahin kuch hai badla riwaaj-e-muhabbat
hai qissa wahi par, diwaane naye hain

Naya jamana hai aur andaaz bhi naye
Sitam karne ka bhi alag andaaz ho gaya
Bewafaai bhi aajkal adaa ban gai hai
Har roz pyar karke bhool jane ka riwaz ho gaya

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 10:45 AM

Aissa kya kho diya jo le kar aaye thhe
Hum tou uppar se kuchh bhi na laye thhe
Jisse pa liya wo takdeer bann gai
Aur jo na mila usse bhulla aaye thhe.

Kya khoya kya paaya ye kisne dekha
Hum to yahan chahat ki baat karte hain
Dil ka sakoon le gaya koi jhuthe waade karke
Hum to unki is bewafaai par bhi marte hain

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 10:59 AM

palko ki nami me chupa kar sapno ko..
humne unhe jaane ki izazat de di..
hum toot kar bikhar gaye tukdo me..
unhe muskarane ki izazat de di....

hotho ki zuban ye aansu kehte hai,
jo chup rehte hai lekin fir bhi behte hai,
or in aansu ki kismat to dekhiye,
ye unke liye behte hai jo in ankhon me rehte hai..!!

oo tera bhalla ho manne yu ke kar diya aaj.....oooppss..ooohhhhhhffff:o :(

Ankhen num hai unko yaad karke
Woh hamari duniya se chale gaye

Humaare hothon pe shabd nahi hai
woh itna kuchh kahkar chale gaye

Anshu ki kismat mein to bahna likha hai
Unko yaad karke bahte chale gaye

Do char pal ki kushi ki tamanna thi
Wod zindagi bhar ka gum dekar chale gaye

Unke jaane ki kya wajah jaane koi
Unko bus jana tha aur chale agye

Hum to unko hansana chahte thy
Woh "Vijay" ko hi rula kar chale gaye

jakhar77

May 21st, 2006, 01:36 PM

Sapney nahi ye oos ki chand boonden hai
bas suraj ke nikalte hi rukhsat ho jayengi
kabhi dil mat lagao inse tum 'sahil'
inke jane ke baad bas yaadein rah jayengi.
Neend kise aati hai jo sapne aayenge
Sapne to bikharne ke liye hi hote hain
Har roz koi tamanna dum tod deti hai
Har roz kisi apne ko paakar khote hain

jakhar77

May 21st, 2006, 01:45 PM

ye konse mausam kase jamane aa gaye
aaj mohabbat ke bhi dekho kharidar aa gaye.

kal jo apne dil me rahte the dhadkan bankar,
aaj wahi duniya-e-bazaar me bikne aa gaye.

duniya me aitbaar bas un par tha mujhe
aur wo aaj is taraha se berikhi se pesh aa gaye.

kuchh na poochh haal is mausam-e-tanhai ka
ab to ashq aankhon me 'sahil' khoon ke aa gaye.

Ankhen num hai unko yaad karke
Woh hamari duniya se chale gaye

Anshu ki kismat mein to bahna likha hai
Unko yaad karke bahte chale gaye

keshavdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 01:56 PM

palko ki nami me chupa kar sapno ko..
humne unhe jaane ki izazat de di..
hum toot kar bikhar gaye tukdo me..
unhe muskarane ki izazat de di....

hotho ki zuban ye aansu kehte hai,
jo chup rehte hai lekin fir bhi behte hai,
or in aansu ki kismat to dekhiye,
ye unke liye behte hai jo in ankhon me rehte hai..!!

oo tera bhalla ho manne yu ke kar diya aaj.....oooppss..ooohhhhhhffff:o :(

maine jo socha wo kabhi paya nahi,
chah kar bhi main usko bhul paya nahi,
chahta to tha main usko apnana,
per maine usko kabhi ye bataya nahi...
kisi ko palkon par na bithaao,
wahaan to sirf sapne baste hain,
bithaao to dil mein bithaao kyonki,
yahaan sirf apne baste hain...

aur dekhi jaagi...mein zarur bimaar padunga ibb....laiyo mere koi sa CURRENT.....:eek: ......:D :p :D :p

devdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 02:01 PM

maine jo socha wo kabhi paya nahi,
chah kar bhi main usko bhul paya nahi,
chahta to tha main usko apnana,
per maine usko kabhi ye bataya nahi...
kisi ko palkon par na bithaao,
wahaan to sirf sapne baste hain,
bithaao to dil mein bithaao kyonki,
yahaan sirf apne baste hain...

aur dekhi jaagi...mein zarur bimaar padunga ibb....laiyo mere koi sa CURRENT.....:eek: ......:D :p :D :p

Terre current tein kaam na challe tu tei Panipat aale Thermal ki angeethhe mei chhoddna paddega...ha...ha..ha. Dekhya-e na...bimmare ishq terra sussara?

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 05:39 PM

ye konse mausam kase jamane aa gaye
aaj mohabbat ke bhi dekho kharidar aa gaye.

kal jo apne dil me rahte the dhadkan bankar,
aaj wahi duniya-e-bazaar me bikne aa gaye.

duniya me aitbaar bas un par tha mujhe
aur wo aaj is taraha se berikhi se pesh aa gaye.

kuchh na poochh haal is mausam-e-tanhai ka
ab to ashq aankhon me 'sahil' khoon ke aa gaye.

Ek chhota sa dard ka tukda
Kahan failega, kahan simtega
Bas ek tees bankar
Zindagi bhar chubhta rahega
Is dil ke kisi konne mein

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 05:47 PM

maine jo socha wo kabhi paya nahi,
chah kar bhi main usko bhul paya nahi,
chahta to tha main usko apnana,
per maine usko kabhi ye bataya nahi...
kisi ko palkon par na bithaao,
wahaan to sirf sapne baste hain,
bithaao to dil mein bithaao kyonki,
yahaan sirf apne baste hain...

aur dekhi jaagi...mein zarur bimaar padunga ibb....laiyo mere koi sa CURRENT.....:eek: ......:D :p :D :p

Ye chahat hai hi aisi ki kya batayen
Na bata sakte aur na hi chhupa sakte
Woh dil mein basten hain har pal
Ab dil cheer kar to nahin dikha sakte

devdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 05:54 PM

Ye chahat hai hi aisi ki kya batayen
Na bata sakte aur na hi chhupa sakte
Woh dil mein basten hain har pal
Ab dil cheer kar to nahin dikha sakte

Pyar wo talwaar hei jo jigar ke paar hoti hei
Aur jo dil ke paar na ho wo bekar hoti hei
Lahoo-luhaan gar dil na ho pyar mei
Tou aatmma subbak-2 kar nahin rotti hei.

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 06:06 PM

Pyar wo talwaar hei jo jigar ke paar hoti hei
Aur jo dil ke paar na ho wo bekar hoti hei
Lahoo-luhaan gar dil na ho pyar mei
Tou aatmma subbak-2 kar nahin rotti hei.

Ek chot jigar pe khai hai
Ek tasveer dil mein basai hai
Kaun parwah kare ab anjaam ki
Ab to jaan ki baazi lagai hai

ritu

May 21st, 2006, 06:45 PM

please keshu ke kare se yo tu.tere bimar hon te pahla tera yo naya roop dekh ke mhare heart attack ho jaga:confused:

aur dekhi jaagi...mein zarur bimaar padunga ibb....laiyo mere koi sa CURRENT.....:eek: ......:D :p :D :p[/quote]

jakhar77

May 21st, 2006, 06:50 PM

tasveer us jalim ki basai thi is dil me
dhadkan banakar rakha use is dil me
nigahon se ojhal ho gaya wo kab ka
magar abhi bhi mojood hai is dil me.

Ek chot jigar pe khai hai
Ek tasveer dil mein basai hai
Kaun parwah kare ab anjaam ki
Ab to jaan ki baazi lagai hai

jakhar77

May 21st, 2006, 07:00 PM

Tujh bin ye jindagi tanha hai udas hai, tumko ye batayen kaise,
Juban band hai teri ruswai ke dar se, dastan-e-gham sunayen kaise.

har koi poochhta hai meri udas aankhon ka sabab waqt-bewaqt
ab unko kya kahen, daag jo de gaye ho unhen dikhaye kaise.

ab teri yaad ke siwa is duniya me rakha kya hai 'sahil'
bas itan bata hum zindagi ke chaar pal sukoon se bitayen kaise.

Ye chahat hai hi aisi ki kya batayen
Na bata sakte aur na hi chhupa sakte
Woh dil mein basten hain har pal
Ab dil cheer kar to nahin dikha sakte

ritu

May 21st, 2006, 08:15 PM

ye sihkwae shikayat tum kab chodoge
ere ye kaam he aurato ke
tum mard kab inhe chodoge
apni mohabbat pe tumhe yakeen nahi
tum dusre se kya umed karoge
rusva hote nahi sache ashiq yu dindoore pit ke
haaste rahte h wo te apne ishq ki masti me
gar ishq bus ki baat nahi
to mat karo ye koi compulsory cheez nahi h
ye specialization har aire gaire ke bus ki baat nahi h:confused:

keshavdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 09:08 PM

jakhar77

May 21st, 2006, 09:11 PM

Sahi kaha:)
hamare jaisi poem likhna har kisi ke bas ki baat nahi:eek:
ye specialization to hamara hi hai;)
aapka is thread me ghusna compulsory to nahi:p :D

ye sihkwae shikayat tum kab chodoge
ere ye kaam he aurato ke
tum mard kab inhe chodoge
apni mohabbat pe tumhe yakeen nahi
tum dusre se kya umed karoge
rusva hote nahi sache ashiq yu dindoore pit ke
haaste rahte h wo te apne ishq ki masti me
gar ishq bus ki baat nahi
to mat karo ye koi compulsory cheez nahi h
ye specialization har aire gaire ke bus ki baat nahi h:confused:

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 09:39 PM

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 09:50 PM

apni yaadon me hum tumhe basana chahte hai,
apne paas tumhe hum bulana chahte hai,
thak gaye hum tumhe yaad karte karte,
ab hum tumhe yaad aana chahte Hai

kabhi-kabhi aesa bhi hota hai,
pyar ka asar jara der se hota hai,
aapko lagta hai hum kuch nahi sochte aapke baare me,
par hamari har baat me aapka hi jikr hota hai.

grave symptoms.....i can feel that i m dying :( .....becoz of this shayrri....:p

Woh humen yaad karen kahan hamari kismat
Unko to fursat hi nahi aajkal duniya dari se
Humne to is dil ko pyar ka rog lagaa diya hai
Woh to abhi bhi anjaan hain pyar ki beemari se

keshavdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 10:21 PM

Woh humen yaad karen kahan hamari kismat
Unko to fursat hi nahi aajkal duniya dari se
Humne to is dil ko pyar ka rog lagaa diya hai
Woh to abhi bhi anjaan hain pyar ki beemari se

shama-e-tamanna jawaan aaj bhi hai
har hasrat lekin bezuban aaj bhi hai
manzilon ko nahi naseeb mere kaafile to kya
rahon pe mere kadmon ke nishaan aaj bhi hain

bhai Bj marwawega tu manne....kyun excite karre se kasaaaiiii....;)

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 10:39 PM

shama-e-tamanna jawaan aaj bhi hai
har hasrat lekin bezuban aaj bhi hai
manzilon ko nahi naseeb mere kaafile to kya
rahon pe mere kadmon ke nishaan aaj bhi hain

bhai Bj marwawega tu manne....kyun excite karre se kasaaaiiii....;)

Hahahh keshu

In bezubaan hasraton ko koi naam do
Apni chahat ko koi naya anjaam do
Jo pyar kar gaye woh log aur thy
Tum pyar mein ab koi naya kalaam do

devdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 10:43 PM

Hahahh keshu

In bezubaan hasraton ko koi naam do
Apni chahat ko koi naya anjaam do
Jo pyar kar gaye woh log aur thy
Tum pyar mein ab koi naya kalaam do

Yo ke kyan he nei ke naam de ga
Yo chhan na de sabhh nei ghaam de ga
Issne ke berra pyar kunnsi mulli ka naam sei
Yo chhori neei Ralle ka bharr kei ek draamm de ga

HA>>>HA>>>>HA>>>HA. RAKKASS SEI YU!

keshavdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 10:44 PM

Hahahh keshu

In bezubaan hasraton ko koi naam do
Apni chahat ko koi naya anjaam do
Jo pyar kar gaye woh log aur thy
Tum pyar mein ab koi naya kalaam do

yeh milna aur bicharr jaana
kab apne bas ki baat hai
kismat hi milati hai hum ko
kismat hi juddai deti hai
har baar yeh hi hota hai
koi hume bataye to sahi
jo tum se nahi keh paate hai
dharkan se sunayi deti hai.

kyun raazi ho rehya se BJ tu bhai....tere te taaker na leta mein.......kham kha bhosun hun........kaali na maniye katti bhi.....;)

keshavdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 10:46 PM

na raasta sujhayi deta hai
na manzil dikhayi deti hai
na lafz zubaan per aate hain
na dharkan sunayi deti hai
ek ajeeb si kaifiyat ne
aan ghera hai mujhe.
Ke har surat main.
teri surat dikhayi deti hai

kaka jinn de humne tu aare bhi pincher karan laag rehya se.....hehehe..:p :D

Yo ke kyan he nei ke naam de ga
Yo chhan na de sabhh nei ghaam de ga
Issne ke berra pyar kunnsi mulli ka naam sei
Yo chhori neei Ralle ka bharr kei ek draamm de ga

HA>>>HA>>>>HA>>>HA. RAKKASS SEI YU!

poonam

May 21st, 2006, 10:47 PM

yeh milna aur bicharr jaana
kab apne bas ki baat hai
kismat hi milati hai hum ko
kismat hi juddai deti hai
har baar yeh hi hota hai
koi hume bataye to sahi
jo tum se nahi keh paate hai
dharkan se sunayi deti hai.

kyun raazi ho rehya se BJ tu bhai....tere te taaker na leta mein.......kham kha bhosun hun........kaali na maniye katti bhi.....;)

Keshu, the poet! yo te hamne bera-ae na tha ek tu shayar bhi hae...
Good , nice write up..:)

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 10:57 PM

yeh milna aur bicharr jaana
kab apne bas ki baat hai
kismat hi milati hai hum ko
kismat hi juddai deti hai
har baar yeh hi hota hai
koi hume bataye to sahi
jo tum se nahi keh paate hai
dharkan se sunayi deti hai.

kyun raazi ho rehya se BJ tu bhai....tere te taaker na leta mein.......kham kha bhosun hun........kaali na maniye katti bhi.....;)

Ye milna to kismat ki bat hai
Aur bichhadana unke haath hai
Kya hua jo nahi kah payee unko
Dil ki har dharkan to unke sath hai

keshavdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 11:01 PM

Ye milna to kismat ki bat hai
Aur bichhadana unke haath hai
Kya hua jo nahi kah payee unko
Dil ki har dharkan to unke sath hai

jab yaad aati hai tumhari muskura lete hai,
kuch palo ke liye har gam bhula dete hai,
kaise bhig sakti hai aapki palken,
aapke hisse ke aansu to hum baha lete hain.

bj datt jya ne marre yaar....baache ki jaan lega kya.....:D

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 11:24 PM

jab yaad aati hai tumhari muskura lete hai,
kuch palo ke liye har gam bhula dete hai,
kaise bhig sakti hai aapki palken,
aapke hisse ke aansu to hum baha lete hain.

bj datt jya ne marre yaar....baache ki jaan lega kya.....:D

Ye anshoo kisi bewafa ke liye nuhin hain
Ye to hamari sachi mohabbat ke liye hai
Ye palak nahin bheeg sakti kisi bewafa ke liye
Woh hamari jann humari khushi ke liye hai

keshavdahiya

May 21st, 2006, 11:41 PM

Ye anshoo kisi bewafa ke liye nuhin hain
Ye to hamari sachi mohabbat ke liye hai
Ye palak nahin bheeg sakti kisi bewafa ke liye
Woh hamari jann humari khushi ke liye hai

muskan tere hotho pe ho to khushi mere dil me hoti hai,
agar dard tere dil ko ho to akhein meri roti hai,
aap mehsus karke dekho pyar aisa hi hota hai.....

vijay

May 21st, 2006, 11:51 PM

muskan tere hotho pe ho to khushi mere dil me hoti hai,
agar dard tere dil ko ho to akhein meri roti hai,
aap mehsus karke dekho pyar aisa hi hota hai.....

Ye dard kahan mahsoos karoge tum
Ye to ek ahsash hai iss zindagi ka
Ye ankhen roti hui rahti hain har dum
Pyaar to ahsash hai ek bandagi ka

keshavdahiya

May 22nd, 2006, 12:02 AM

Ye dard kahan mahsoos karoge tum
Ye to ek ahsash hai iss zindagi ka
Ye ankhen roti hui rahti hain har dum
Pyaar to ahsash hai ek bandagi ka

vaade bhi usne kya khoob nibhaye hai,
zakhm muft aur dard tohfe me bhijwaye hai.
is se badhkar wafadari ki misaal kya hogi
maut se pehle vo kafan le aaye hai.

ritu

May 22nd, 2006, 12:06 AM

bahut samjhaya is nasamaj ko mane
ye kis rah pe tu chal pada h
kaha tu apne nd saude ko chod ke dard ke piche pada h
me to kar chuki apna bahan ka farz ada par
tu ab baawlepan ki rah pe kaphi aage bad chuka h
humari best wishes tere saath h
jaldi aajana wapas tu wo rah teri taseer ke liye mafik nahi h:mad:

muskan tere hotho pe ho to khushi mere dil me hoti hai,
agar dard tere dil ko ho to akhein meri roti hai,
aap mehsus karke dekho pyar aisa hi hota hai.....

keshavdahiya

May 22nd, 2006, 12:12 AM

bahut samjhaya is nasamaj ko mane
ye kis rah pe tu chal pada h
kaha tu apne nd saude ko chod ke dard ke piche pada h
me to kar chuki apna bahan ka farz ada par
tu ab baawlepan ki rah pe kaphi aage bad chuka h
humari best wishes tere saath h
jaldi aajana wapas tu wo rah teri taseer ke liye mafik nahi h:mad:

dete ho kyu ye dard bas humi ko
kya samjoge tum in ankho k nami ko
yu to honge lakhon diwane is chand ke
chand kya mehsus karega ek tare k kami Ko

hehehe...datt jya bebe yu josh zindaaggi mein ek-e be chadhya karre..:D :p
maachan de iib ya chiiiss si bhi.....;)

satyeshwar

May 22nd, 2006, 12:27 AM

Ek aur meri taraf te.... (kati original, kal hi likha tha :p:D)

Jungle Jungle baat chali hai pata chala hai
arey chaddi pehen ke phool khila hai phool khila hai
Jungle Jungle baat chali hai pata chala hai
arey chaddi pehen ke phool khila hai phool khila hai

Ek parinda hai sharminda, tha woh nanga
Haai is se to ande ke andar, tha woh changa
soch raha hai bahar aakhir kyon nikla hai
arey chaddi pehen ke phool khila hai phool khila hai

Jungle jungle pata chala hai chaddi pehen ke phool khila hai
Jungle jungle pata chala hai chaddi pehen ke phool khila hai

deepshi

May 22nd, 2006, 12:39 AM

katti chandnaa sa karr diyaa satte tanne- iste original kadet nhi padhya!:D
nice composition.... carry on- u can b d future galib! ( buss ek paidi neeche se):p
mukarrar.......................................... ......:o

satyeshwar

May 22nd, 2006, 12:47 AM

Thank you Thank you!!
Ise ise main roj likha karoon soon.... :p

desijat

May 22nd, 2006, 12:47 AM

Wahh Wahh

Dev kakaji, i never knew you are a romantic poet too......

Truly inspirational:p

vijay

May 22nd, 2006, 02:09 AM

vaade bhi usne kya khoob nibhaye hai,
zakhm muft aur dard tohfe me bhijwaye hai.
is se badhkar wafadari ki misaal kya hogi
maut se pehle vo kafan le aaye hai.

Woh har waada nibhayenge eatbaar hai
Humare zakhmon ko aur bhi dukhayenge
Ye to adaa hai unki pyaar jataane ki
Unki har ek adaa pe jaan lutaayenge

keshavdahiya

May 22nd, 2006, 02:14 AM

Woh har waada nibhayenge eatbaar hai
Humare zakhmon ko aur bhi dukhayenge
Ye to adaa hai unki pyaar jataane ki
Unki har ek adaa pe jaan lutaayenge

dete ho kyu ye dard bas humi ko
kya samjoge tum in ankho ki nami ko
yu to honge lakhon diwane is chand ke
chand kya mehsus karega ek tare k kami Ko

tuussi gr8 ho ji......lekin mein to aapki dhuul bhi nahi hun.....

keshavdahiya

May 22nd, 2006, 06:17 AM

har ek se baat karna FITRAT hai apki
har ek khush rahe HASRAT hai apki
koi apko YAAD kare ya na kare
hume chod kar sabko yaad karna aadat hai apki

aaj ke baad haath JODD liye hain....iissi shayrri karan ka paap nahi karunaga.....;) :p :D....
sabhi se haath jodd ke muaffi mangtte hue aur QUIT kartte hue.....mein apni tashriff yahan iss taage se bahar le jaa raha hun...TAKHLIYA...:cool:

ritu

May 22nd, 2006, 06:23 AM

ishq ehsas he jo ek dil se nikal ke
dusre dil ko chu jaata h
aur kuch sujhta nahi bus
har paal yaar ke khayalo me
ye bechara jhumta rahta h
oski yaad itni azeez mujhe
kise ke saath batna gawara nahi
hi kese ashqo me baho du me
ye yaad oski itni to bhari nahi
ashiqo ko lagti h duniya rangeen
registan me bhi samandar dekhte h
khush rahte h wo khayalo me kisi ke
aur har taraf khushiya batate rahte h
ishq jo na bana sake insan ko behatar
os ishq me baat hi nahi
ishq to hawan ko inssan banadata h