Taj Mahal

[fool4love]

BEFORE MARRAIGE
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TAKDIR HAI MAGAR
KISMAT NAHIN KHULTI
TAJMAHAL BANANA CHAHATA HOON MAGAR MUMTAZ
NAHIN MILTI!
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AFTER MARRAIGE
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TAKDIR HAI MAGAR KISMAT NAHIN KHULTI
TAJMAHAL BANANA CHAHATA HOON
LEKIN MUMTAZ NAHIN MARTI

[dndeswal]

Kamal,

Bhai, design tey aachha banna rakya sey. Per uss boodhi Mumtaaz ka ke karehga - uske geet kyoon gaawne - isten tey achhya Laila ya Shakuntala ka naam likh deta ! Bharatpur allyan ney us "Tajmahal" mein toorra (Gehoon ka bhoosa) bhar diya tha, nyoon kah-ke ak "bhar dyo - ke pharak padde sey - ek mussalmaan ki kabr ey te sey". Poori baat bera karnni ho tey ya thread The truth behind Taj Mahal (http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11125) padh ley (pahlyaan nah paddhi ho tey). Aade ey link kar rahya soon. Manney bi usmey kuchh likhya se.

Par bhai tera kaam aachhya tha - bura mat maneeye.

[fool4love]

Kamal,

Bhai, design tey aachha banna rakya sey. Per uss boodhi Mumtaaz ka ke karehga - uske geet kyoon gaawne - isten tey achhya Laila ya Shakuntala ka naam likh deta ! Bharatpur allyan ney us "Tajmahal" mein toorra (Gehoon ka bhoosa) bhar diya tha, nyoon kah-ke ak "bhar dyo - ke pharak padde sey - ek mussalmaan ki kabr ey te sey". Poori baat bera karnni ho tey ya thread The truth behind Taj Mahal (http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11125) padh ley (pahlyaan nah paddhi ho tey). Aade ey link kar rahya soon. Manney bi usmey kuchh likhya se.

Par bhai tera kaam aachhya tha - bura mat maneeye.

Deswal uncle ji.. maine ya post padh rakhi sai.. it has some serious research! but mai mumtaz ke geet konya ganda... mai to shaadi pe.. joke karu thaa!!.. ar laila ho ya shakuntala ho.. taj to maare paache ee banegaa..:D ! bura kyan baat ka ?.. aap mahre bade so.. koye bhool chuk ho jya to.. keh bhi sako so! cheers!:)

[anildabas1701]

har dil mein ek tiis hua karti sei
har tiis ek raaz kaha karti sei
taj mahal banwane ka hosla har kisi mein kona
par zaalim har dil mein ek mumtaz raha karti hai

[fool4love]

har dil mein ek tiis hua karti sei
har tiis ek raaz kaha karti sei
taj mahal banwane ka hosla har kisi mein kona
par zaalim har dil mein ek mumtaz raha karti hai

wah wah.. anil bhai... ya bhi kasoot kahiii...:D

[sanjay22dahiya]

well said dabas saab,jamane ke sath soch bhi badal jati hai....

arrj kiya hai

"Safar lamba hai,dost banate rehna,
dil mile na mile hath badate rehna,
TAJ na banaye bahut mahenga padega,
har taraf MUMTAJ banate rehna.


Those who stand for nothing fall for anything!!!!!

[devdahiya]

Issi-2 Mumtaz jat ke har ghar mein sein bhot ghanni
Jattaniyan nei ND chhori ek te badhh ke ek janni
Pher kyan tahin mumtaj basawan appne iss dil darre mei
Mhari kamla,aur Santara, Dekho khaddi chobbare mein

Issi-2 mumtaja ne ye pahyaan banddh Kata dein chakkari
Jyahein te ye ibb-bhi dekho parde mei munh appna dhhak rhi
Khol diya je chehra apnna,Mumtaj handdein gi bhaji-2
Jyhein te mei keh rya suun bhai......Inn-ne rakho RAji....raji.

[anildabas1701]

Pher kyan tahin mumtaj basawan appne iss dil darre mei
Mhari kamla,aur Santara, Dekho khaddi chobbare mein

hahaha mahari kamla,bimla,santra,seema,

[fool4love]

mumtaz vaa laiyoo jo oolhaa (gongat) kaade
gaam jaave to.. saasu ke paah(legs) daabe
jee tohe te bhi na paave mumtaz mai isse sanskaar
bhai zarur jaa ke aiyo Jind, Sonipat, Rohtak aar Hisar

[dndeswal]

mumtaz vaa laiyoo jo oolhaa (gongat) kaade
gaam jaave to.. saasu ke paah(legs) daabe
jee tohe te bhi na paave mumtaz mai isse sanskaar
bhai zarur jaa ke aiyo Jind, Sonipat, Rohtak aar Hisar


Bhai Kamal,

Mere ko pata nah tha ke tu itni acchi haryanvi kavita bhi likh sakey sey. Keep it up, bhai.

[rekharathee]

really great,

je beauty dekhni hai to visit haryana ke khet

see the beauty of jat women working with their family members in khet,

having pasina due to heat and still parda on their face

mumtaj beauty fades at this sight

[fool4love]

Bhai Kamal,

Mere ko pata nah tha ke tu itni acchi haryanvi kavita bhi likh sakey sey. Keep it up, bhai.

mai..shayar to nahii.. magaaar eeee haryanaa
jab se jana...maine tujhko..mujhko shayarii aagaii

thank you Deswal sir, aapne haryana ki baat e kuch aisii saii..
aache aache ne shayar bana de!!:)