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desijat
May 2nd, 2006, 10:10 PM
It hurts to set you free…..

I often wonder what it that binds me with you is
I often wonder why we are together.
Why can’t I let you go?
Or why can’t we live peacefully forever?

This wouldn’t have been the way it is
If you would have been with me
It hurts to set you free
CAUSE I know, you wont follow me

So many years spent together
So many memories we share
So many incidents, so many stories
Still, can’t stop my tears

Everything seems to be ending now
Everything seems to be torn apart
Everything is no longer interesting
We are busy playing our own parts

So many words left unsaid
So many feelings still remain unexpressed
I wish for a moment of truth
I wish it would have been me, whom u red

And I wish I could stop the time
And never let grew this tree
It hurts to set you free
Because I know you won’t follow me

Still I see a dawn
Still I see the light
Still I have a hope
That you will see my insight

I don’t want to loose you forever
I don’t want to let you go
I don’t want to miss you ever
I just want you to know

True love stands for itself
Wherever we might be
I am setting you free
Cause I know, one day, you will follow me
Written by--
Me

deepshi
May 3rd, 2006, 10:55 PM
accha he ..:)

fool4love
May 4th, 2006, 01:06 AM
good work!.. accha nahi.. bahot accha hai!........ pher nu to bata... ib tahi...ulti aii ak.. nahi;)

desijat
May 4th, 2006, 03:01 AM
good work!.. accha nahi.. bahot accha hai!........ pher nu to bata... ib tahi...ulti aii ak.. nahi;)
naaa:p baat dekhan lag raa

keshavdahiya
May 4th, 2006, 03:19 AM
naaa:p baat dekhan lag raa

baat dekhan laag raa to dekhe ja pher aare to tere latte paadd lenge bhai....

every day I log on
and I start to write
typing my thoughts down
(a very strange sight)
I go to add poem then edit and click
there you are with a comment
through my writings you flick
are you one of those people with nothing to do
than to just sit and wait with a comment or two
you could be my stalker
my poem intruder
who gives me nice comments
then starts getting ruder
you may ask me out on
a virtual date
so I sit and I type
I click and
I wait
and wait wait wait........:p :D


koi baat na khaggad aa jya gi....sabbrr ka fal mittha hota hai......cheer up dude.....

misha0119
May 4th, 2006, 04:48 PM
v. nice
Keep writing!!

sunitahooda
May 4th, 2006, 05:31 PM
Vikas...tanne likhan ka lecence mil gya sai....keep writing!!!!:p :) :D

desijat
May 4th, 2006, 07:48 PM
Vikas...tanne likhan ka lecence mil gya sai....keep writing!!!!:p :) :D
:p :p
Dhanyabaad, and do wait for more:)

I'll b back

desijat
May 4th, 2006, 07:50 PM
v. nice
Keep writing!!
Thank you Misha....

Small motivations are much required to boost up my confidence:)

ritu
May 4th, 2006, 07:57 PM
vikas bhai tu gaya kad tha.




:p :p
Dhanyabaad, and do wait for more:)

I'll b back

ratheetheraist
May 4th, 2006, 08:24 PM
hey vikii.........tht was kooll(seellaa) man..........challan dey gaadey ney dubbii.......;):cool:

desijat
May 4th, 2006, 09:14 PM
Thanks :) waise Vikas pahle baar teri taraf sse itna sharif post dekh raha hun

Chalan de chalan de, Ar Photu mein to katte hi rog kaat diye
Jatland ki chori to ho jegi bawli!!!

pragati
May 5th, 2006, 02:09 PM
Very-Very nice poem Vikas...
Keep it up...