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ritu
May 4th, 2006, 06:42 PM
I am dedicating this poem of mine to all my unmarried sisters and brothers here at jatland
I wrote this poem when my parents were looking for a groom for me.
I was so scared and uncertain about my destiny at that time i wrote this poem.Thanks to god I got a very loving and caring husband.I wish the same for my sisters.
TERE PAAS KITNE SITARAE O AASMAN! MUJHE EK TARA DE DE
NAHI DENA WO APNA CHEHTA DHRUV TARA KOI HALKA SA TIMTIMATA SITARA DE DE
SAGAR TERE PAAS KITNE LAHARAE BHANWAR OR KINARAE
MUJHE EK CHOTE SE TAPU KA SAHARA DE DE
DAER SE KHUSHIO SE BHARA JIVAN NA DE DUKH HI DE CHAHE BHAGWAN
PAR UNKO BATNE WALA EK SAMAJHDAR HUMSAFAR DE DE
prashantacmet
May 4th, 2006, 06:46 PM
Bohat badhiya poem hai RITU bobbo...... per yaa poem hai ek gajal....... chaal jo bhi hai suthri hi............... per teri ek baat ne majhe confuse kar diya katai????......................................
sandeepsomu
May 4th, 2006, 06:48 PM
madam koi choro ke liye bhi nuksa sai to bata do....abhi bahut jarurat sai byah ki umer ho gayi
sandeepsomu
May 4th, 2006, 06:48 PM
madam koi choro ke liye bhi nuksa sai to bata do....abhi bahut jarurat sai byah ki umer ho gayi .
ritu
May 4th, 2006, 06:50 PM
KIS BAAT NE BATA TO SAHI
Bohat badhiya poem hai RITU bobbo...... per yaa poem hai ek gajal....... chaal jo bhi hai suthri hi............... per teri ek baat ne majhe confuse kar diya katai????......................................
prashantacmet
May 4th, 2006, 06:57 PM
ek yaa poem hai ya gajal?http://www.jatland.com/forums/images/icons/icon7.gifhttp://www.jatland.com/forums/images/icons/icon7.gif........
cho main na aayee bobbo.................
KIS BAAT NE BATA TO SAHI
dhayal
May 4th, 2006, 08:00 PM
ek yaa poem hai ya gajal?http://www.jatland.com/forums/images/icons/icon7.gifhttp://www.jatland.com/forums/images/icons/icon7.gif........
cho main na aayee bobbo.................
prashante tane koi kam danda koni ke badi muskil se koi poem likhi thi ush bhe tu gajal bana raha hai
good lage rahe
desijat
May 4th, 2006, 09:25 PM
Harivansh Rai Bachahan ji ki Shaili jhalak ri hai ritu di(Just got to knw u r his fan), Waise, Kuch hum jaise bhaio ke liye bhi padh do bahen
ritu
May 4th, 2006, 09:32 PM
. ab itne pyar se di kah raha to le me emtional hoke title change kar deti hu .dedicated to my sisters and brothers:o
Harivansh Rai Bachahan ji ki Shaili jhalak ri hai ritu di(Just got to knw u r his fan), Waise, Kuch hum jaise bhaio ke liye bhi padh do bahen
desijat
May 4th, 2006, 09:35 PM
:mad: :mad: :p . ab itne pyar se di kah raha to le me emtional hoke title change kar deti hu .dedicated to my sisters and brothers:o
:mad: Hum Ladkio ke haq ko nahi marte:mad:
Hamare liye ek naya thread chalu kia jaye:cool: Jisme likha ho in capitals
"To my brothers Like VIKAS":p
ritu
May 4th, 2006, 09:42 PM
abhi tera padai ka time he.jaab shaadi ka time ayega to tab likh du gi bhai.
:mad: :mad: :p
:mad: Hum Ladkio ke haq ko nahi marte:mad:
Hamare liye ek naya thread chalu kia jaye:cool: Jisme likha ho in capitals
"To my brothers Like VIKAS":p
desijat
May 5th, 2006, 12:45 AM
abhi tera padai ka time he.jaab shaadi ka time ayega to tab likh du gi bhai.
Ritu ji
Ye to baat Taalne aali baat hai:(
meghs
May 5th, 2006, 12:53 AM
nice poem RITUJI
it seems u r a gr8 poetess
ritu
May 5th, 2006, 01:42 AM
thanks megha for ur nice compliment.
nice poem RITUJI
it seems u r a gr8 poetess
mansi1218
May 5th, 2006, 01:45 AM
wonderful poem!!
ritu
May 5th, 2006, 05:48 AM
LIKH DI BHAI JA KE PAD LE TO MY BROTHER VIKAS.
Ritu ji
Ye to baat Taalne aali baat hai:(
prashantacmet
May 5th, 2006, 10:20 AM
acchaaaaaaaa subhassey.... tai to saara Hyderabad palat diya kaam kar kar ke.. KAMARRE................... ebbe chupchupalla pada ro wahi....... na to Lalu ke aadmi tha lejaange tajhe Bihar main .. pher ussne palatiye tu....... asse kamare aadmi ku kaun bakshe bhai...........
prashante tane koi kam danda koni ke badi muskil se koi poem likhi thi ush bhe tu gajal bana raha hai
good lage rahe
yashmalik
May 5th, 2006, 11:37 AM
Nice poem but against copyright act :D
prashantacmet
May 5th, 2006, 12:08 PM
areeee yasheeee bhai yu fotu tera hai ya fer SHAHID KAPPOR ka chep diya tai........ ar bhai jo yu tera hai ...... to haam tajhe Bombai le ke chaalenge Kareena kapoor dhorre......... hihihi.......... hahaha......................
Nice poem but against copyright act :D
pragati
May 5th, 2006, 01:23 PM
Thank you so much Ritu for such a nice poem...I can say that this is a situational poem for me,bcoz now-a-days,i am passing through this phase with a fear of future....I am adding 2 more lines to your poem....
MUZHE BHI BHAGWAN EK PYARA SA SAHARA DE-DE, DUKHO KE BHANWAR ME JO MUZHE THAAM SAKE, EK AISA KINARA DE-DE
NAHI CHAHIYE MUZHE KOI FARISHTA, PER SHAITANO KI ES BASTI SE MUZHE INSAAN EK PYARA DE-DE......
I am dedicating this poem of mine to all my unmarried sisters and brothers here at jatland
I wrote this poem when my parents were looking for a groom for me.
I was so scared and uncertain about my destiny at that time i wrote this poem.Thanks to god I got a very loving and caring husband.I wish the same for my sisters.
TERE PAAS KITNE SITARAE O AASMAN! MUJHE EK TARA DE DE
NAHI DENA WO APNA CHEHTA DHRUV TARA KOI HALKA SA TIMTIMATA SITARA DE DE
SAGAR TERE PAAS KITNE LAHARAE BHANWAR OR KINARAE
MUJHE EK CHOTE SE TAPU KA SAHARA DE DE
DAER SE KHUSHIO SE BHARA JIVAN NA DE DUKH HI DE CHAHE BHAGWAN
PAR UNKO BATNE WALA EK SAMAJHDAR HUMSAFAR DE DE
prashantacmet
May 5th, 2006, 01:27 PM
Bohat badhiya likha Pragati bobbo........ wish u a great luck...... hham bhi aawenge tere BYAAH main.........................http://www.jatland.com/forums/images/icons/icon7.gifhttp://www.jatland.com/forums/images/icons/icon7.gif
Thank you so much Ritu for such a nice poem...I can say that this is a situational poem for me,bcoz now-a-days,i am passing through this phase with a fear of future....I am adding 2 more lines to your poem....
MUZHE BHI BHAGWAN EK PYARA SA SAHARA DE-DE, DUKHO KE BHANWAR ME JO MUZHE THAAM SAKE, EK AISA KINARA DE-DE
NAHI CHAHIYE MUZHE KOI FARISHTA, PER SHAITANO KI ES BASTI SE MUZHE INSAAN EK PYARA DE-DE......
yashmalik
May 5th, 2006, 01:35 PM
areeee yasheeee bhai yu fotu tera hai ya fer SHAHID KAPPOR ka chep diya tai........ ar bhai jo yu tera hai ...... to haam tajhe Bombai le ke chaalenge Kareena kapoor dhorre......... hihihi.......... hahaha......................
Prashate yu mera e photu se, er kareena kapoor te ghani suthri to mhari jatni e se.;)
desijat
May 5th, 2006, 02:46 PM
MUZHE BHI BHAGWAN EK PYARA SA SAHARA DE-DE, DUKHO KE BHANWAR ME JO MUZHE THAAM SAKE, EK AISA KINARA DE-DE
NAHI CHAHIYE MUZHE KOI FARISHTA, PER SHAITANO KI ES BASTI SE MUZHE INSAAN EK PYARA DE-DE......
Amazing one...
Wishing you luck, to find this insaan soon.
pragati
May 5th, 2006, 04:05 PM
Thanks Vikas...
Amazing one...
Wishing you luck, to find this insaan soon.
ritu
May 5th, 2006, 04:15 PM
yash its my own creation.
Nice poem but against copyright act :D
dhayal
May 5th, 2006, 04:59 PM
acchaaaaaaaa subhassey.... tai to saara Hyderabad palat diya kaam kar kar ke.. KAMARRE................... ebbe chupchupalla pada ro wahi....... na to Lalu ke aadmi tha lejaange tajhe Bihar main .. pher ussne palatiye tu....... asse kamare aadmi ku kaun bakshe bhai...........
mein lalu ki parti mein nai hoon tane mubharkh lalu
hahahhaha lalu prashante
prashantacmet
May 5th, 2006, 05:08 PM
Chaal koi baat na,,, tajhe MAYAWATI ki party main bhej deenge....... hihi...... haha.......... hoho...................
mein lalu ki parti mein nai hoon tane mubharkh lalu
hahahhaha lalu prashante
ritu
May 5th, 2006, 06:08 PM
thanks pragati.wish u all the best.lines added by u r very nice.
take care
ritu
Thank you so much Ritu for such a nice poem...I can say that this is a situational poem for me,bcoz now-a-days,i am passing through this phase with a fear of future....I am adding 2 more lines to your poem....
MUZHE BHI BHAGWAN EK PYARA SA SAHARA DE-DE, DUKHO KE BHANWAR ME JO MUZHE THAAM SAKE, EK AISA KINARA DE-DE
NAHI CHAHIYE MUZHE KOI FARISHTA, PER SHAITANO KI ES BASTI SE MUZHE INSAAN EK PYARA DE-DE......
dhayal
May 5th, 2006, 06:11 PM
Chaal koi baat na,,, tajhe MAYAWATI ki party main bhej deenge....... hihi...... haha.......... hoho...................
bhai apni he party bana le aur apni he sarkar bana le aur PM bhi tu banja aur minister bhi tuhi banja tane he mubharkh hahahahhaha:cool: :D ;)
desijat
May 5th, 2006, 06:12 PM
bhai apni he party bana le aur apni he sarkar bana le aur PM bhi tu banja aur minister bhi tuhi banja tane he mubharkh hahahahhaha:cool: :D ;)
Dhayal Bhai ne to bas CHapdasi Bana diye..... Unki aajkal Ghani kumai se kayeen mantriu te:p
prashantacmet
May 5th, 2006, 06:16 PM
kaatya rog.......... wah wah wah vikasse............hihihahaha.....................
Dhayal Bhai ne to bas CHapdasi Bana diye..... Unki aajkal Ghani kumai se kayeen mantriu te:p
dhayal
May 5th, 2006, 06:21 PM
Dhayal Bhai ne to bas CHapdasi Bana diye..... Unki aajkal Ghani kumai se kayeen mantriu te:p
bhai mere office mein kami ish ki toh meine koi desi chahiye tha toh thare achha kon hoga:o :D ;) :cool:
prashantacmet
May 5th, 2006, 06:24 PM
Vikasse....... jabab kona diye....... na to fer...... hihi..... hoho....... bhajja.......bhajja................. jaa legga....................
desijat
May 5th, 2006, 06:27 PM
bhai mere office mein kami ish ki toh meine koi desi chahiye tha toh thare achha kon hoga:o :D ;) :cool:
naa Bhai
U desi yaha Naukri karan na, auro ku karaan ayaa....
Mein to aapki baat katti thi, jo Aapku Sarkar mein Raj ni karna, to piche piche chal do..
hum to Raj karan aayee ar kar ke rahenge......
Akhir CHARAN SINGH ke Ilake kee:p
dhayal
May 5th, 2006, 06:27 PM
Vikasse....... jabab kona diye....... na to fer...... hihi..... hoho....... bhajja.......bhajja................. jaa legga....................
rerrerere tane aaj kal ke kida cat raha hai mane toh yeh bata :D :o :(
desijat
May 5th, 2006, 06:28 PM
Vikasse....... jabab kona diye....... na to fer...... hihi..... hoho....... bhajja.......bhajja................. jaa legga....................
hhahahaha
Pher to ise Adalat kaa Munim bana deo...... Sarpanchu ke dhore baitha baitha hi ungal karta rahga
prashantacmet
May 5th, 2006, 06:40 PM
kida..........na ood chotti cheez..... himmamt hi kona kattan ki..........per aaj tere pacchhe 5-4 baawle kutte jaroor laaggenge....... fer lagwata phirye injection pet main......... hihi.. haha...... arreeeee vikasse.............. chhodiyaan iske paache..........LALLU,SHERU,LALLO ku...........ar uss LAANDE ku bhi khol diye ...... jonsa GHER main bandh rha.......... na to yu bhaaj liya........... uss lagge lagge....... uss laggelagge............arreee kaha gaya bhai SUBHASSEY....... ooooo subhashaeey............
rerrerere tane aaj kal ke kida cat raha hai mane toh yeh bata :D :o :(
choudharyneelam
May 5th, 2006, 06:45 PM
I am dedicating this poem of mine to all my unmarried sisters and brothers here at jatland
I wrote this poem when my parents were looking for a groom for me.
I was so scared and uncertain about my destiny at that time i wrote this poem.Thanks to god I got a very loving and caring husband.I wish the same for my sisters.
TERE PAAS KITNE SITARAE O AASMAN! MUJHE EK TARA DE DE
NAHI DENA WO APNA CHEHTA DHRUV TARA KOI HALKA SA TIMTIMATA SITARA DE DE
SAGAR TERE PAAS KITNE LAHARAE BHANWAR OR KINARAE
MUJHE EK CHOTE SE TAPU KA SAHARA DE DE
DAER SE KHUSHIO SE BHARA JIVAN NA DE DUKH HI DE CHAHE BHAGWAN
PAR UNKO BATNE WALA EK SAMAJHDAR HUMSAFAR DE DE
very sweet poem from God's little girl:)
thanks
netrapalsingh
May 5th, 2006, 07:14 PM
I am dedicating this poem of mine to all my unmarried sisters and brothers here at jatland
I wrote this poem when my parents were looking for a groom for me.
I was so scared and uncertain about my destiny at that time i wrote this poem.Thanks to god I got a very loving and caring husband.I wish the same for my sisters.
TERE PAAS KITNE SITARAE O AASMAN! MUJHE EK TARA DE DE
NAHI DENA WO APNA CHEHTA DHRUV TARA KOI HALKA SA TIMTIMATA SITARA DE DE
SAGAR TERE PAAS KITNE LAHARAE BHANWAR OR KINARAE
MUJHE EK CHOTE SE TAPU KA SAHARA DE DE
DAER SE KHUSHIO SE BHARA JIVAN NA DE DUKH HI DE CHAHE BHAGWAN
PAR UNKO BATNE WALA EK SAMAJHDAR HUMSAFAR DE DE
ritu je namaste, aap itna acha likhtee hai mujhe pata hi nahi tha
yaha mera durbhagya hai main isko kahpi der se padha khar........
aapne UP main janm liye aapki parvarish haryana main hooi aur
ab aap foreign main hai kaphi jagah ka experience hai aap ko
UP ka Deemak, Haryana ka................. sab milakar bhoot kuch hai
aap ke pass age bhi likhte rahiye.
desijat
May 5th, 2006, 09:32 PM
Re netruu
Tu to Tarif bhi tere chutaklu ki dhaal kare mere yaar......
vijay
May 5th, 2006, 10:53 PM
TERE PAAS KITNE SITARAE O AASMAN! MUJHE EK TARA DE DE
NAHI DENA WO APNA CHEHTA DHRUV TARA KOI HALKA SA TIMTIMATA SITARA DE DE
SAGAR TERE PAAS KITNE LAHARAE BHANWAR OR KINARAE
MUJHE EK CHOTE SE TAPU KA SAHARA DE DE
DAER SE KHUSHIO SE BHARA JIVAN NA DE DUKH HI DE CHAHE BHAGWAN
PAR UNKO BATNE WALA EK SAMAJHDAR HUMSAFAR DE DE
Nice written Ritu Ji,
my comments in my way :
Humen sitaron ki chaah nahin rahi kabhi
Hamen ek chota sa assmaan humaara de de
Waqt jo beet gaya yahan ek sunder sapne ki tarah
Uski bus ek chhoti si jhalak huamen dobaara de de
Unko kya maaloom mohabbat kya hoti hai
Unhe sirf humaari mohabbat ka ishaara de de
Phans gai hai kisti samunder ki laharon mein
"Vijay" ki zindagi ko ab koi kinaara de de
cooljat
May 5th, 2006, 11:04 PM
Eib bhaiyon ke liye bhi kuch dedicate kard do didi!
waitin
Rock on
Jit
meghs
May 6th, 2006, 12:28 AM
thanks megha for ur nice compliment.
hi rituji
i think i m rite i just read ur other write ups also u really write well
keep pouring more
pragati
May 6th, 2006, 09:11 AM
Very nice poem Vijay ji....Specially, the last 2 lines, i liked very much...
Nice written Ritu Ji,
my comments in my way :
Humen sitaron ki chaah nahin rahi kabhi
Hamen ek chota sa assmaan humaara de de
Waqt jo beet gaya yahan ek sunder sapne ki tarah
Uski bus ek chhoti si jhalak huamen dobaara de de
Unko kya maaloom mohabbat kya hoti hai
Unhe sirf humaari mohabbat ka ishaara de de
Phans gai hai kisti samunder ki laharon mein
"Vijay" ki zindagi ko ab koi kinaara de de
yashmalik
May 6th, 2006, 11:49 AM
yash its my own creation.
Great !
Can you make some poems on inspiration.
desijat
May 6th, 2006, 11:51 AM
Great !
Do you have poems for inspiration.
Rote hai wo jo kuch kar sakte nahi
rote hai wo jinke bass mein kuch nahi
Na rona tum kabhi ke jahan mein abhi bahut kuch hai baki
Na rona tum ke abhi to pura jaam hai baaki
Ek jhatke mein pi ke na majja kharabh kar
Ye Zindagi hai teri, roke ise na barbad kar
Tu uth is zameen se, pahunch us falak tak
Hasta reh, hasata ja, Zindagi hai tere sath jis talak tak
Maut bhi le to aisi ke wo bhi khud pe sharmaye
Kahe Teri zindagi pe naaz hai mujhe
Ek pal mein tune sadiya ji hai
aa, ab mera ghar Abaad kar.........
By -
Me
me_rathee
May 6th, 2006, 11:53 AM
Ritu ji Ram Ram,
Bahut badhiya but iska heading manne badhiya naa laaga......kiii only for the sisters of jatland. Chorra ne bhi to issi e bahu chahiye jissa aapne hamsafar chahiye.
ANY WAY NICE THREAD .........KEEP POSTING.
prashantacmet
May 6th, 2006, 12:30 PM
VIkasse ..... ua teri aakhirri aali line saabte badhiya lagi.............................................
Rote hai wo jo kuch kar sakte nahi
rote hai wo jinke bass mein kuch nahi
Na rona tum kabhi ke jahan mein abhi bahut kuch hai baki
Na rona tum ke abhi to pura jaam hai baaki
Ek jhatke mein pi ke na majja kharabh kar
Ye Zindagi hai teri, roke ise na barbad kar
Tu uth is zameen se, pahunch us falak tak
Hasta reh, hasata ja, Zindagi hai tere sath jis talak tak
Maut bhi le to aisi ke wo bhi khud pe sharmaye
Kahe Teri zindagi pe naaz hai mujhe
Ek pal mein tune sadiya ji hai
aa, ab mera ghar Abaad kar.........
By -
Me
yashmalik
May 6th, 2006, 12:44 PM
Rote hai wo jo kuch kar sakte nahi
rote hai wo jinke bass mein kuch nahi
Na rona tum kabhi ke jahan mein abhi bahut kuch hai baki
Na rona tum ke abhi to pura jaam hai baaki
Ek jhatke mein pi ke na majja kharabh kar
Ye Zindagi hai teri, roke ise na barbad kar
Tu uth is zameen se, pahunch us falak tak
Hasta reh, hasata ja, Zindagi hai tere sath jis talak tak
Maut bhi le to aisi ke wo bhi khud pe sharmaye
Kahe Teri zindagi pe naaz hai mujhe
Ek pal mein tune sadiya ji hai
aa, ab mera ghar Abaad kar.........
By -
Me
remarkable
keep up posting, i really like inspirational poems
thanx
desijat
May 6th, 2006, 12:59 PM
VIkasse ..... ua teri aakhirri aali line saabte badhiya lagi.............................................
Jai Badout:p Jai Baghpat:p Jai CHaprauli:p
yashmalik
May 6th, 2006, 01:21 PM
oooops...look like i pressed the button a lot of time !
prashantacmet
May 6th, 2006, 01:30 PM
oooooooo SHAHID Kapoor hihi......hahha.....................assa na kare bhai............... kyoun button ne dookhi karan laag rha ......na to haam tera button daab denge............ BUTTON hahaha........ hoho.............
oooops...look like i pressed the button a lot of time !
deepshi
May 6th, 2006, 01:35 PM
ya ruff kaapy se teri--lagya reh:p :mad: :p oooops...look like i pressed the button a lot of time !
ritu
May 6th, 2006, 09:58 PM
pinki ki bachhi mera thread tan raff copy la rakha se.apne david jones ala chutkle pe kyo nahi iski prctice kara deti:confused: :mad: :p :eek: :rolleyes:
ya ruff kaapy se teri--lagya reh:p :mad: :p