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desijat
May 6th, 2006, 11:55 AM
Moving on

Life is a like a river, they tell me
You meet new people as you proceed
New places, new environment,
Different culture and different creed

Someone somewhere is made for you
That is what I have been hearing since am born
Someone somewhere cares for you
Then why is my life so torn?

This is the time I need that someone
This is when I feel so alone
This is when I realize what is right
This is when I know what was wrong

But, No use of crying over spilt milk
What happened is the past
Give it a new start, as smooth as silk
Smile, move on, and just enjoy the contrast

By-
Me

(Please let me know if am lacking somewhere)

prashantacmet
May 6th, 2006, 12:28 PM
U r a great poet....... hats off 4 u.................accept my appreciation............. VIKASSE.........
Moving on


Life is a like a river, they tell me
You meet new people as you proceed
New places, new environment,
Different culture and different creed

Someone somewhere is made for you
That is what I have been hearing since am born
Someone somewhere cares for you
Then why is my life so torn?

This is the time I need that someone
This is when I feel so alone
This is when I realize what is right
This is when I know what was wrong

But, No use of crying over spilt milk
What happened is the past
Give it a new start, as smooth as silk
Smile, move on, and just enjoy the contrast

By-
Me

(Please let me know if am lacking somewhere)

yashmalik
May 6th, 2006, 12:49 PM
Great, looks like a creation of a ameture poet

deepshi
May 6th, 2006, 01:01 PM
keep up d spirits:)

pragati
May 6th, 2006, 01:06 PM
again...A nice poem Vikas.....

desijat
May 6th, 2006, 01:07 PM
Thank you all for the much required appriciation.:)

ratheetheraist
May 6th, 2006, 01:11 PM
keep up d spirits:)

ratheetheraist
May 6th, 2006, 01:15 PM
Thank you all for the much required appriciation.:)

haan tannee te jarurr chaahiyee thii yee............appreciation............:p:p

chaall nun appreciation kee bhukkhee............hahahah.....kilkii@bhukhhaa;): D:D

desijat
May 6th, 2006, 01:17 PM
haan tannee te jarurr chaahiyee thii yee............appreciation............:p:p

chaall nun appreciation kee bhukkhee............hahahah.....kilkii@bhukhhaa;): D:D
Appriciation ki to duniya bhukhi:p je na hoti to noble prize, cups, aur baki cheeze kyu hoti:p

netrapalsingh
May 8th, 2006, 02:55 PM
Thank you all for the much required appriciation.:)

wah bhai too to poet bhia hai good one

ritu
May 8th, 2006, 04:47 PM
goooooooooooooooood:)