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ritu
May 8th, 2006, 06:33 PM
ok bhaiyo tum sab naraj the ek thare tahi kyon nahi dedicate kari koi pem .to ye lo ye pOem bhi os poem ke saath likhi thi mane

KAISA HOTA HE YE HUMSAFAR KA TUM
ME WAHI SAFAR WAHI
LEKIN MERE ME ME JO MILJAYE TUM
AUR BAN JAYE HUM
MUJHE OS TUM KI TALASH H
KASA HOTA H?
KAHA HOTA H?
YA HOTA HE SIRF KAHANIYO AUR FILMO KE HUM ME
MUJHE OS YATHARTH KE TUM KI TALASH H

EB KOA COMPLAIN MAT KARIO .DIDI NE KOI PARTIALITY NAHI KARI

ALL THE BEST TO ALL OF MY UNMARRIED BROTHERS
Take care
Ritu

varunkumar
May 8th, 2006, 08:33 PM
:p Bahin ji..poem to achhi likhi hai
but Rakshabandhan...abhi door hai....:p
But try ur best...HE aur TUM..u will find certainly...

ritu
May 8th, 2006, 08:39 PM
VARUN bhai es poem ki history shayad aapko maloom nahi.mane kuch din pehle apni sisters ke liye ek poem dedicate ki tho to sare bhai bole hamare liye bhi likho ek poem. meri shadi ko to 10 saal ho chuke he aur me apne humsafar ke saath hu .ye poem to mane 13 saal pehle likhe thi before meeting my humsafar.EK BAHAN KO APNE BHAI KE LIYE KUCH KARNE KE LIYE RAKSHA BANDHAN KA INTEZAAR NAHI KARNA HOTA.FOR ME EVERYDAY IS RAKSHABANDHAN
RITU





:p Bahin ji..poem to achhi likhi hai
but Rakshabandhan...abhi door hai....:p
But try ur best...HE aur TUM..u will find certainly...

varunkumar
May 8th, 2006, 08:46 PM
Have a nice time with ur...HUMSAFAR...
chalo aaj bhi aise log hai jo....bhaiyo ka itna khayal....rakhte hai..

ritu
May 8th, 2006, 08:49 PM
thanks varun.jatland is like a family to me.aur ye chote baahn bhai to bahut he aziz he mujhe.I feel like home away from home whenever i am with them.




Have a nice time with ur...HUMSAFAR...
chalo aaj bhi aise log hai jo....bhaiyo ka itna khayal....rakhte hai..

desijat
May 9th, 2006, 03:36 AM
ALL THE BEST TO ALL OF MY UNMARRIED BROTHERS

DIDI o DIDI, TU KAB Nand BANEGI:confused:

Didi O diDI.... TU kab NAND BAnegi:confused:

desijat
May 9th, 2006, 03:38 AM
EK BAHAN KO APNE BHAI KE LIYE KUCH KARNE KE LIYE RAKSHA BANDHAN KA INTEZAAR NAHI KARNA HOTA.FOR ME EVERYDAY IS RAKSHABANDHAN
RITU
I am the only child of my parents, but if i had to wish to have a sis, surely it would have been a wonderfull lady with beautifull thoughts, Like mentioned above:)

Long Live my sister:)

ritu
May 9th, 2006, 05:31 AM
I am the only child of my parents, but if i had to wish to have a sis, surely it would have been a wonderfull lady with beautifull thoughts, Like mentioned above:)

Long Live my sister:)
ab rula ke manega vikas tu mujhe aaja mere bhaii will give u a big hug.from today on u r my brother
ritu di
:)

yashmalik
May 9th, 2006, 09:18 AM
LEKIN MERE ME ME JO MILJAYE TUM
AUR BAN JAYE HUM

KASA HOTA HE?
KAHA HOTA HE?

Ritu

Rituji, I failed to understand these lines, i got rest of the poem easily.
I hope you wont mind explaining me these lines. :)

Kade kade mere sur ke upar te baat chali ja se.

desijat
May 9th, 2006, 11:24 AM
ab rula ke manega vikas tu mujhe aaja mere bhaii will give u a big hug.from today on u r my brother
ritu di
:)
Awwwwwwwww

Thank you so much >:D<
Am honoured:)

ritu
May 9th, 2006, 04:21 PM
yash hindi ko english me likhne ki yahe problem he
Rituji, I failed to understand these lines, i got rest of the poem easily.
I hope you wont mind explaining me these lines. :)

Kade kade mere sur ke upar te baat chali ja se.

downtoearth
May 9th, 2006, 09:19 PM
thanx for such a good poem,,,,,,,,,:) , aur ritu,,,,, bera na iss "MARRIED" word key aagey tey kad "UN" hattega ,,,,,, hehe :p :D :p

ashoksaroha
November 20th, 2006, 08:06 PM
Hi Ritu
First time I read ur poems. I am the most deprived brother of yours. I can not tell you how jealous I am feeling.... but pls dont mind I am by nature a jealous person. No falt of urs.

For my only sister in this world.

yashbeniwal
November 21st, 2006, 09:50 AM
ritu bebe...
thanks 4 such a nice poem.....

trueblueindian
November 22nd, 2006, 07:47 PM
ok bhaiyo tum sab naraj the ek thare tahi kyon nahi dedicate kari koi pem .to ye lo ye pOem bhi os poem ke saath likhi thi mane

KAISA HOTA HE YE HUMSAFAR KA TUM
ME WAHI SAFAR WAHI
LEKIN MERE ME ME JO MILJAYE TUM
AUR BAN JAYE HUM
MUJHE OS TUM KI TALASH H
KASA HOTA H?
KAHA HOTA H?
YA HOTA HE SIRF KAHANIYO AUR FILMO KE HUM ME
MUJHE OS YATHARTH KE TUM KI TALASH H

EB KOA COMPLAIN MAT KARIO .DIDI NE KOI PARTIALITY NAHI KARI

ALL THE BEST TO ALL OF MY UNMARRIED BROTHERS
Take care
Ritu

aankh tae nahi phooot gi meri?????????

Bae hum bhayahlya nae koi julm kar rakhya sae, mahari tahi bhi BEST OF LUCK KEH DETI, thoda khush ho lete, haan humsafar tae mil rahaya sae, but for sure wishes do help, relationship is a matter of life n not just meeting that very best, in agreement or not?

luv u sis

wid much respects, ur bro

sandesh

ratheetheraist
November 22nd, 2006, 07:50 PM
ok bhaiyo tum sab naraj the ek thare tahi kyon nahi dedicate kari koi pem .to ye lo ye pOem bhi os poem ke saath likhi thi mane

KAISA HOTA HE YE HUMSAFAR KA TUM
ME WAHI SAFAR WAHI
LEKIN MERE ME ME JO MILJAYE TUM
AUR BAN JAYE HUM
MUJHE OS TUM KI TALASH H
KASA HOTA H?
KAHA HOTA H?
YA HOTA HE SIRF KAHANIYO AUR FILMO KE HUM ME
MUJHE OS YATHARTH KE TUM KI TALASH H

EB KOA COMPLAIN MAT KARIO .DIDI NE KOI PARTIALITY NAHI KARI

ALL THE BEST TO ALL OF MY UNMARRIED BROTHERS
Take care
Ritu

dost achi kabita likhi hai aapney.. :)
thank you..bebey..!! ;):)

sunitahooda
November 23rd, 2006, 07:59 AM
Ibb lo tere maiye HUSBAND banann ka Jatherr koni :D :p ;) :) DIDI o DIDI, TU KAB Nand BANEGI:confused:

Didi O diDI.... TU kab NAND BAnegi:confused:

jitendershooda
November 23rd, 2006, 10:45 AM
Ibb lo tere maiye HUSBAND banann ka Jatherr koni :D :p ;) :)

ha ha ha ha ha Sunita hey ... itni kardi ... chore ka jee tod diya tene ... Yana balak se yo ibbe :) ... koe na vikas ek bebe to milgi is thread se ... this is the beauty of jatland ... Really good one Ritu ... thanks for sharing ...

jitendershooda
November 23rd, 2006, 10:51 AM
thanx for such a good poem,,,,,,,,,:) , aur ritu,,,,, bera na iss "MARRIED" word key aagey tey kad "UN" hattega ,,,,,, hehe :p :D :p

Sunita hey ... yo Rupi bhi wahe Vikas aali Demand kare hai ... mere batte thaddoo birdave hein ... Sun hey tun bhi kisi hai .. aapne bhaiyan khatir koe chandigarh ke rohtak te toh ke lyaiye ibke gede mein .... ;) dekhe nu daya aani chahiye tene ... isse soodhe balak bata le ... lalten leke tohan te bhi nahi pavenge :)

Rupi mere yaar ... nu kariye ibke koe ... man ralati jatni deekh jya te ... karde break gaad diiye ... yo "UN" te jaa padega eek aaud ne jibbe ... er pher tun Nira "Married" rahe jyaga ... with a lovely pretty companion on the conductor seat :D

ritu
November 23rd, 2006, 07:42 PM
a sunita be kyu jee tode se balak ka.Ibb lo tere maiye HUSBAND banann ka Jatherr koni :D :p ;) :)