rain urf barish

[ritu]

suna he india me bahut garmi pad rahi he.
me jab india me thi aur monsoon ata tha to wo pahli barish was so special to me.
aise he ek monsoon ki pahli barish ke liye mane ye poem likhi thi

kon kahta he milte nahi dharti aur gagan
maine sawan ke badlo ke madhayam se hote dekha he unka milan
musladhar barish se bante he dhara par bulbule
jaise kahti ho dhara asman se hath re manchle!
aati he saundhi saundhi khushboo mitti se barish ke baad
jaise ki mili ho koi praysi apne pritam se lambe intzar ke baad
is par se us par ban jata he inderdhanush ambar me
jaise ki war liya ho saunkta ne prithviraj ko sayanwar me

ritu

[yashmalik]

^^ Nice 'kool' poem Ritu di.
Monsoon season is the most awaited season in Northern India no doubt. Summers are at their peak and northern Indian has caught by 'desert soil rain' coming from heat-erosed Rajasthan.

Bera na yu ram kad barsega !

[desijat]

Ritu di
Ghani bhadiya KAvita likhi.....

PAr jis hisab te Barish ki kami hori Dilli mein, Assa lage ak barish sirf KAvita mein hi dekh ke ji sa manana padega:p

[prashantacmet]

RITU BOBBO, poem to teri bohat CHOKKHI hai.... par tai yu Prithviraj ar Syoungita ka kissa kyoun jod diya iss meeh ke peom gailla...........tajhe pata ek SYONGITA ristee main ke laage thi Prithviraj ki......?????? asse example naa diya kare aapni poem main........ jee sa khataa hoja mharra...................
suna he india me bahut garmi pad rahi he.
me jab india me thi aur monsoon ata tha to wo pahli barish was so special to me.
aise he ek monsoon ki pahli barish ke liye mane ye poem likhi thi

kon kahta he milte nahi dharti aur gagan
maine sawan ke badlo ke madhayam se hote dekha he unka milan
musladhar barish se bante he dhara par bulbule
jaise kahti ho dhara asman se hath re manchle!
aati he saundhi saundhi khushboo mitti se barish ke baad
jaise ki mili ho koi praysi apne pritam se lambe intzar ke baad
is par se us par ban jata he inderdhanush ambar me
jaise ki war liya ho saunkta ne prithviraj ko sayanwar me

ritu

[dndeswal]

RITU BOBBO, poem to teri bohat CHOKKHI hai.... par tai yu Prithviraj ar Syoungita ka kissa kyoun jod diya iss meeh ke peom gailla...........tajhe pata ek SYONGITA ristee main ke laage thi Prithviraj ki......?????? asse example naa diya kare aapni poem main........ jee sa khataa hoja mharra...................

Ritu is writing nice pieces of Hindi poetry. Every artist or poet has his/her own way of composition - though some incidents or quotes may not be accurate in others' point of view. Bhai Prashant, historically it is true that Pritiviraj had kidnapped Sanyukta. But the story goes that both of them were true lovers and she actually wanted to choose Prithviraj in 'Svayamvar' which did not happen as her father did not call Prithviraj on this occasion, because of some personal feud.

Ritu ji, I understand that your PC is not having Hindi fonts, and that you are unable to read Hindi on your computer. I am writing below your stanza in Hindi so that others can enjoy it in Hindi also. If you are unable to see Devanagri script on your own PC, please follow the steps which I have explained in my thread Tips for use of Hindi on your computer (http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=13233) (You have to instal or download Hindi font file 'Mangal' - which is very simple).

कौन कहता है मिलते नहीं धरती और गगन ।
मैने सावन के बादलों के माध्यम से होते देखा उनका मिलन ॥

मूसलाधार बारिश से बनते हैं धरा पर बुलबुले -
जैसे कहती हो धरा आसमान से - हट रे मनचले !

आती है सोंधी-सोंधी खुशबू मिट्टी से बारिश के बाद ।
जैसे कि मिली हो कोई प्रेयसी अपने प्रीतम से लंबे इंतजार के बाद ।

इस पार से उस पार बन जाता है इन्द्रधनुष अंबर में ।
जैसे कि वर लिया हो संयुक्ता ने पृथ्वीराज को स्वयंवर में ॥
.

[ritu]

thanks deswal ji .



Ritu is writing nice pieces of Hindi poetry. Every artist or poet has his/her own way of composition - though some incidents or quotes may not be accurate in others' point of view. Bhai Prashant, historically it is true that Pritiviraj had kidnapped Sanyukta. But the story goes that both of them were true lovers and she actually wanted to choose Prithviraj in 'Svayamvar' which did not happen as her father did not call Prithviraj on this occasion, because of some personal feud.

Ritu ji, I understand that your PC is not having Hindi fonts, and that you are unable to read Hindi on your computer. I am writing below your stanza in Hindi so that others can enjoy it in Hindi also. If you are unable to see Devanagri script on your own PC, please follow the steps which I have explained in my thread Tips for use of Hindi on your computer (http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=13233) (You have to instal or download Hindi font file 'Mangal' - which is very simple).

कौन कहता है मिलते नहीं धरती और गगन ।
मैने सावन के बादलों के माध्यम से होते देखा उनका मिलन ॥

मूसलाधार बारिश से बनते हैं धरा पर बुलबुले -
जैसे कहती हो धरा आसमान से - हट रे मनचले !

आती है सोंधी-सोंधी खुशबू मिट्टी से बारिश के बाद ।
जैसे कि मिली हो कोई प्रेयसी अपने प्रीतम से लंबे इंतजार के बाद ।

इस पार से उस पार बन जाता है इन्द्रधनुष अंबर में ।
जैसे कि वर लिया हो संयुक्ता ने पृथ्वीराज को स्वयंवर में ॥
.