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ritu
May 12th, 2006, 01:06 AM
apne jakhar bhai aajkal saudiarabia me h aur wo bhabi ki yaad me jo ki india me h apni feelings to tukbandi ke madhyam se jahir kar lete he but what about my dear bhabi wo bhi to waha akeli h.so i am dedicting one of my poems which I wrote once my husband was away from me.I asked jakhar bhai to tell us name of bhabi but he did not.
anyway here goes the poem for my sweet jakhar bhabi
chod ke ayi sab apno ko
liye saath kuch sapno ko
tumhare saath rahne ke
os par bhi jab tum
chale jaate ho door mujhse kabhi
to bitte h wo din jaise ki
jjraha ho dil bin dhadkan
kaise batau kaise katti h wo shaame
hota he jinme tera intezaar nahi
rato ko chounk kar jagu me
dekhu jab bagal me tum saath nahi
dekho ji chod ke mujhe najaaya karo
tumhare bin
na to apna he koi
na to sapna he koi
jakhar77
May 12th, 2006, 03:56 AM
Thanks Ritu for a nice poem.
It made me so senti.
You know the pain she is experiencing, but life goes on with pain too.I hope to get back to her soon.
I am sorry, I didn't tell the name but I couldn't get your message in chats.
Her name is Geeta. I will send this poem to her.
Thanks a lot again.
desijat
May 12th, 2006, 05:22 AM
Awwwww so cute
Bhagwan kare aap dono jaldi mile, aur aap saath raho hamesha.:)
ritu
May 12th, 2006, 06:09 AM
koi baat nahi jakhar bhai doori hamesha pyar badati he aur hume rishto ki ahmiyat bhi sikhati he.to GEETA naam he bhabi ka.please do say my hello to her.aur jab india chale jao to dono milke mujhe phone karna.take care of yourself.cheers:)
ritu
Thanks Ritu for a nice poem.
It made me so senti.
You know the pain she is experiencing, but life goes on with pain too.I hope to get back to her soon.
I am sorry, I didn't tell the name but I couldn't get your message in chats.
Her name is Geeta. I will send this poem to her.
Thanks a lot again.
devdahiya
May 12th, 2006, 08:04 AM
Arabia mei beithhya bhai,aankh aali ho gayi
Sarre ho gye duur uskki gaddi khalli ho gayi
Maa-babbu nei chhodd kei ja beithhya bidesh mei
Har dum dil yun keh rhya le chalo merre desh mei
Merre dilbar nei keh diyo mei aawuungga tawalla
AAjkall suun busy ghanna kaam mei ho gya bawalla
Bachche merre chand se,papa-papa keh rahe
Dekho chhotte dil bhi kissi juddai seh rahe
Pett yu pappi sei ghanna,karr detta majboor sei
Beshak durri sei ghanni par dil mera na duur sei
Apni dharti jessi ho,usska koi na jawaab hei
Wappiss aaun jalddi se...merra bhi ye khuwaab hei.
ritu
May 12th, 2006, 08:09 AM
devji bahut bahut achhi rachna likhi aapne.U r a very good poet
Arabia mei beithhya bhai,aankh aali ho gayi
Sarre ho gye duur uskki gaddi khalli ho gayi
Maa-babbu nei chhodd kei ja beithhya bidesh mei
Har dum dil yun keh rhya le chalo merre desh mei
Merre dilbar nei keh diyo mei aawuungga tawalla
AAjkall suun busy ghanna kaam mei ho gya bawalla
Bachche merre chand se,papa-papa keh rahe
Dekho chhotte dil bhi kissi juddai seh rahe
Pett yu pappi sei ghanna,karr detta majboor sei
Beshak durri sei ghanni par dil mera na duur sei
Apni dharti jessi ho,usska koi na jawaab hei
Wappiss aaun jalddi se...merra bhi ye khuwaab hei.
devdahiya
May 12th, 2006, 08:18 AM
devji bahut bahut achhi rachna likhi aapne.U r a very good poet
Ritu bebe,teddkeheye-teddke...issi suthari compliment de di se akk dinn ghanna suthra katte ga......ji sa aa gya...arr compliment bi bebe ki.God bless you bebe!
DHANYAVAAD.
ratheetheraist
May 12th, 2006, 08:25 AM
devji bahut bahut achhi rachna likhi aapne.U r a very good poet
ratheetheraist
May 12th, 2006, 08:27 AM
devji bahut bahut achhi rachna likhi aapne.U r a very good poet
rituji bahut bahut achhi rachna likhi aapne.U r a very good poet
devdahiya
May 12th, 2006, 08:30 AM
rituji bahut bahut achhi rachna likhi aapne.U r a very good poet
OW BADDGYA RAKKASS JOHADD MEI......JHIKKOLL DIYA SARRA PAANI....GADHHAL-GHOLL KAR DIYA SABH KYAHEIN KA..................Konya sudhhrei yu! Ha..ha..ha...isske marro koe BANGGADD taantt mei.
ritu
May 12th, 2006, 08:45 AM
thanku very much rathee ser.aap jitne great to nahi he par choti moti kavita likh lete h.I hope aapke intellectual level ki hogi.aap mere thread to baksh hi diya kare.aap apna kimati waqt mere nacheez threado par gawaege to desh ka kya hoga.:mad:
rituji bahut bahut achhi rachna likhi aapne.U r a very good poet
ratheetheraist
May 12th, 2006, 08:46 AM
OW BADDGYA RAKKASS JOHADD MEI......JHIKKOLL DIYA SARRA PAANI....GADHHAL-GHOLL KAR DIYA SABH KYAHEIN KA..................Konya sudhhrei yu! Ha..ha..ha...isske marro koe BANGGADD taantt mei.
Dev kaka teddkeheye-teddke...issi suthari compliment de di se akk dinn ghanna suthra katte ga......ji sa aa gya...arr compliment bi kaka ki.God bless you kaka!
DHANYAVAAD.
ratheetheraist
May 12th, 2006, 09:01 AM
thanku very much rathee ser.aap jitne great to nahi he par choti moti kavita likh lete h.I hope aapke intellectual level ki hogi.aap mere thread to baksh hi diya kare.aap apna kimati waqt mere nacheez threado par gawaege to desh ka kya hoga.
hey ritu.......take itt kooll........itna gussaa sehat ke liye hanikarak haii....kilkii@ haanikaarak:p :D
arrr mannee tee aapkii rachnaa padhii bhii konii thii...........mannee yee cheejj dusrii duniyaa kii laagaa karen........kadey nu sochti ho akk manne padh kee likha hai uuu...hehe:p
arr tu choriyaan kee CAMP ki kaptaanii kukkarr sambhaalegii ..nuu LLAL LAAL muhh bannaa bannaa:p :eek: ..........dekh mhaaree kapptaan (kaka) neyy ..kitnaa cool customer saii......laadd kar kar thakktaa ee konii..jibbee tee ukkii teamm thaarii peyy haawii ho rii saii:cool: ............hehe........ibb teree iss BAYAAN teyy teri kapptaani khatree main aa liii saii:p bata dun sun.........kilkii@ kaptaan@ BYAAN:D
seelliii hoo lee arr aa ferr maidaan main..........arr apnnee thread pey humney kimmee naa likhnaa denaa chaahtii ho naa tee inn RACHNAAYAAN neyy likh likh apnii SINDUUKDDII main gerr liyaa karr.........aadeeyy kee tindsii lenn taaii cheppaa karee innee...kilkii@ SINDUUKADDII @tindsii:D :D
ritu
May 12th, 2006, 09:08 AM
tu airport aayee man len .aan lag rahi su me .tan band karugi apni sinddukdi me me leta rahea tu ud tindsi.tindsi in sindukadi.hahaha
hey ritu.......take itt kooll........itna gussaa sehat ke liye hanikarak haii....kilkii@ haanikaarak:p :D
arrr mannee tee aapkii rachnaa padhii bhii konii thii...........mannee yee cheejj dusrii duniyaa kii laagaa karen........kadey nu sochti ho akk manne padh kee likha hai uuu...hehe:p
arr tu choriyaan kee CAMP ki kaptaanii kukkarr sambhaalegii ..nuu LLAL LAAL muhh bannaa bannaa:p :eek: ..........dekh mhaaree kapptaan (kaka) neyy ..kitnaa cool customer saii......laadd kar kar thakktaa ee konii..jibbee tee ukkii teamm thaarii peyy haawii ho rii saii:cool: ............hehe........ibb teree iss BAYAAN teyy teri kapptaani khatree main aa liii saii:p bata dun sun.........kilkii@ kaptaan@ BYAAN:D
seelliii hoo lee arr aa ferr maidaan main..........arr apnnee thread pey humney kimmee naa likhnaa denaa chaahtii ho naa tee inn RACHNAAYAAN neyy likh likh apnii SINDUUKDDII main gerr liyaa karr.........aadeeyy kee tindsii lenn taaii cheppaa karee innee...kilkii@ SINDUUKADDII @tindsii:D :D
ratheetheraist
May 12th, 2006, 09:14 AM
tu airport aayee man len .aan lag rahi su me .tan band karugi apni sinddukdi me me leta rahea tu ud tindsi.tindsi in sindukadi.hahaha
hahahahahahaha........ya hoi naa baat kaptaaan aallii..........thheekk saii tee SADUKKDDII gellyyaan ekk INNDDII bhii lee aaiyee.......kilkii@ INNDDII:D :D GHANNII TEJJ BHAAJ LUNGAA THHAA KEE UNNE TERII TAXII TEE BHII AAGEYY..........:D :D :cool:
bhuliyyee manna arr ibb bullaanaa airport peyy.........;)
sunitahooda
May 12th, 2006, 10:28 AM
Ritu....ghaniye baddi SINDUKADDI banwani padegi chhori....hahahahahahahaha....yo tai katti daityakaar sai....killki @ DAITYAKAAR:D :p ;) :o
prashantacmet
May 12th, 2006, 10:38 AM
THEEK KAHI AAPNE
Ritu....ghaniye baddi SINDUKADDI banwani padegi chhori....hahahahahahahaha....yo tai katti daityakaar sai....killki @ DAITYAKAAR:D :p ;) :o