Kakka Nei Ek Likhi Kavita

[devdahiya]

Kakka nei ek likhi kavita,uska todd nahin pawei
Jei koe iss ki karre buraai,julam kassuta ow dhhawei

Kessu chhora nyu bolya kaka,ND saudda bagga diya
Merri kavita dekh VIkasse,pachhe merre lagga diya
Bebe Sunita nyu bolli kaka,Terri baat merre mann bhawei
Jei koe......................

Poonam bebe nyu boli kaka,tanne chahiye golli
Rupi bolya na dacdarni tu sei ghanniye bholi
Kaka kar rhya uudhh dhikhe,yo tamnne khoob bannawei
Jei koe..........................

Anil Singapore tein chillawei,Kaka kyun masta rhya
Deepshika bebe nyu boli,yu dharti sirr pei thha rhya
Deswal ji baithhe-2 Hindi jabbar bannawein
Jei.........................

Satey bolya talla la dyun,kaka ki matt maari
Ramlal bhai nyu kehrya Baddi kavita bhari
Ritu bebe la kei chassma,Sehaj-2 thi gawei
Jei......................

Mei te nyuhein likhkhen jauun,beshak karo burai
Prashant Chaudhary nyu bolya Kaka,Suthari baat batai
Sabh ka naam likhun kyukkar,Kaki manne bulawei.

[kharub]

Dahiya Sahab ............

Is is possible for you to write it in Devnagiri script ......... really hard to read Haryanvi in english alphabets .............. i would really appreciate that ...

Cheers,

VJ

[devdahiya]

Dahiya Sahab ............

Is is possible for you to write it in Devnagiri script ......... really hard to read Haryanvi in english alphabets .............. i would really appreciate that ...

Cheers,

VJ



Bhai VJ, i will try my level best in future...but just wait...DEswal ji aantte-e hongge....i will request him to translate it in Hindi...Really sorry bhai...par ke karuun...chahun tei mei bhi suun akk Katti thhethh likhuun...will try in future for sure.

[downtoearth]

dev sir,,,, toord paard diya kaatti............ iib aayey hoo aap aapni foooooorrrmmm mein....,,,,,, naa too aapney saarey talent ki issi tissi kar di thee wafa aur mohabbat mein kud key {kiddin}.... heheh klhi khi:D :p :D

[ram6april]

bahut badhiya Dev sahab..........aapne bhi ghanya.. kaa naam likh diya........ aar jo rahge unkaa aagli kavita me.......... aap aakhir me nu likh dende.....

to be continue............

hahahahahahaha
lagge raho.......... arr kheench ke lyo..........

[anilsangwan]

Uncle Ji ... K kahoon... aap ki kavitaon ki sundarta badhhtee e ja rahi sei,,,

bahoot bahoot majedaar... aar menne yaad karann khatir bahoot bahhot dhanyawaad... Mein Singapore tein nyu e JELLI thaaye chillata rahoonga.. innn chinka ne aa ke aap tein Request karnni paddegi.,... aak maharey Jamai ne bulla lyo wapas India...Jo kahogey de dyaangey.... Inki naasan mein lathh de doonga mein haddey.... :D

Laage raho aap...aap ka guidance bahoot kuchh de raha hai hum sab ko....

[devdahiya]

Uncle Ji ... K kahoon... aap ki kavitaon ki sundarta badhhtee e ja rahi sei,,,

bahoot bahoot majedaar... aar menne yaad karann khatir bahoot bahhot dhanyawaad... Mein Singapore tein nyu e JELLI thaaye chillata rahoonga.. innn chinka ne aa ke aap tein Request karnni paddegi.,... aak maharey Jamai ne bulla lyo wapas India...Jo kahogey de dyaangey.... Inki naasan mein lathh de doonga mein haddey.... :D

Laage raho aap...aap ka guidance bahoot kuchh de raha hai hum sab ko....



Bhai Anil tum sarre khush tei mei te aape-e khush.Thanks!

[keshavdahiya]

kaka yeh te aapne saare senti kar diye...waise baat te sabki saachi se....aaj ke aap te saari haan e jii saa laye rakhya karo...aadhi haan te aapki-e baat dekhe jaun sun ki kadd si mera kaka aawe er mein point marun......
kaka nyu e puchkarta rahiye er hum nyu-e aage hi aage bhaddte challe jawan ge.....:)

thanx kaka for so much love...

regards

[dndeswal]

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एक अनार और सौ बीमार - इतना टाईम तो नहीं मिलता पर इन्कार भी नहीं कर सकता, कविता जो इतनी खूबसूरत है !

भाई, न्यूं तै घणे छोहरे सैं जो आई.टी. साफटवेयर के दादा बण रहे सैं पर एक हिंदी का प्रोग्राम नहीं बणाया जाता । भाई जेळी आळे, सिंहापुर तैं आपणे बंगलोर आळे बोस ताहीं संदेश भेज दे आक के तै एक हिन्दी का सस्ता साफ्ट्वेयर बणा दे, ना तै उल्टा आ-कै तेरे पेट मैं चारूं सांगड़ गचो दूंगा !

काका नै एक लिखी कविता
(देव दहिया)


काका नै एक लिखी कविता, उसका तोड़ नहीं पावै -
जै कोए इसकी करै बुराई, जुलम कसूता वो ढावै ।

केसू छोहरा न्यूं वोल्या काका, आंडी सौदा बगा दिया -
मेरी कविता देख विकासे, पाछै मेरै लगा दिया ।
बेबे सुनीता न्यूं बोली काका, तेरी बात मेरे मन भावै -
जै कोए इसकी करै बुराई, जुलम कसूता वो ढावै ।

पूनम बेबे न्यूं बोली काका, तन्नैं चाहिये गोळी -
रूपी बोल्या ना डाक्टरणी, तू सै घणी-ऐं भोळी ।
काका कर रहया ऊध धिखे, यो तमनैं खूब बणावै -
जै कोए इसकी करै बुराई, जुलम कसूता वो ढावै ।

अनिल सिंगापुर तैं चिल्लावै, काका क्यूं मस्ता रहया -
दीपशिखा बेबे न्यूं बोली, यो घरती सिर पै ठा रहया ।
देसवाल जी बैठे-बैठे हिन्दी जबर बणावैं -
जै कोए इसकी करै बुराई, जुलम कसूता वो ढावै ।

सत्ते बोल्या ताळा ला-दूं, काका की मत मारी -
रामलाल भाई न्यूं कह रहया, बड़ी कविता भारी ।
रीतू बेबे ला कै चश्मा सहज-सहज थी गावै -
जै कोए इसकी करै बुराई, जुलम कसूता वो ढावै ।

मैं तै न्यूं-ऐं लिक्खीं-जाऊं, बेशक करो बुराई -
प्रशांत चौधरी न्यूं बोल्या, काका सुथरी बात बताई ।
सबका नाम लिखूं क्यूकर, काकी मन्नैं बुलावै -
जै कोए इसकी करै बुराई, जुलम कसूता वो ढावै ।

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***तुम सब की - मेरी नहीं !
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[devdahiya]

[QUOTE=dndeswal].
। भाई जेळी आळे, सिंहापुर तैं आपणे बंगलोर आळे बोस ताहीं संदेश भेज दे आक के तै एक हिन्दी का सस्ता साफ्ट्वेयर बणा दे, ना तै उल्टा आ-कै तेरे पेट मैं चारूं सांगड़ गचो दूंगा ![/size]








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ओ "काकी" *** - पकड़िये इस कविराय के कान, तू इसनै घणी दुखी कर राखी हो तै !


***तुम सब की - मेरी नहीं !





Ha...ha...ha...ha...........Ow katya rogg ...............Dhhumma thha diya Deswal ji......maar diye hanssa-2 kei.....ha...ha..ha. Thank you so much for taking all the troubles!

[ratheetheraist]

kaka abb main kya kahun...........hehe......par kimme te kheni ee saii,.....;)

kaka tu issi kavita likh kee hum sabney ek taagee he main pirroon kaa kaam bhi karee saii............these things bring u more close to us........:cool::)

thanks &
regards:cool:

[anilsangwan]

kaka abb main kya kahun...........hehe......par kimme te kheni ee saii,.....;)

kaka tu issi kavita likh kee hum sabney ek taagee he main pirroon kaa kaam bhi karee saii............these things bring u more close to us........:cool::)

thanks &
regards:cool:

Sahi kahi bhai rathee... sollaah aane sachhi baat...kaka ne shamma sa baandh raakgya se...aar deswal uncle ji ne to chaar chaand la diye Kavita ke...

Deswal Uncle ji... Dattoo kuchh din....Isa ND haryanvi software banaoonga.... bahoot badhiya... bahoot e badhiyaa...kasoota e te badhiya,,, Jee sa aajaga sab ne,,,.....Nira e User Phrendly....HA HA HA KILKI @ User Phrendly

[devdahiya]

Sahi kahi bhai rathee... sollaah aane sachhi baat...kaka ne shamma sa baandh raakgya se...aar deswal uncle ji ne to chaar chaand la diye Kavita ke...

Deswal Uncle ji... Dattoo kuchh din....Isa ND haryanvi software banaoonga.... bahoot badhiya... bahoot e badhiyaa...kasoota e te badhiya,,, Jee sa aajaga sab ne,,,.....Nira e User Phrendly....HA HA HA KILKI @ User Phrendly


Bhai good luck Anil...tawwal kariye beera.

[yashbeniwal]

Ram Ram kaka haat jodh kai,

kavita bahut badiya thi, par aapnai apne do laadle bhatije to chodh diye main er rahul..........................
par hum bura na manate hum tai aapke apne sai.............
er apnayaa ka ke jikar karna er ke naa karna..............
hum to padh kai e rajhi to gaye the.................

hahahahhahahahahhahahahhaahhahaahahahahahhaahahah. .........

[sunitahooda]

Bus....manne eitraaz sai raat nai Jatland mai baddan aalyan tai....issi suthri kavita miss hogi thi mere tai....shukar kaka Ji nai uppar nai lya di....tum sarey raatu padey raho so aadey arr jibb mai aaun tai saang sa khatam holey sai:p ;) :D :)

[rahultokas]

Ram Ram kaka haat jodh kai,

kavita bahut badiya thi, par aapnai apne do laadle bhatije to chodh diye main er rahul..........................
par hum bura na manate hum tai aapke apne sai.............
er apnayaa ka ke jikar karna er ke naa karna..............
hum to padh kai e rajhi to gaye the.................

hahahahhahahahahhahahahhaahhahaah

[sunitahooda]

DEKH KISSEY AAYE SAIN DONU KE DONU FOONJJHAD HILLATEY....KAKA KEH DYO INKI BI KIMME....YE BI GHANEY NADEEDAY HANDE SAIN....:p

[keshavdahiya]

par aapnai apne do laadle bhatije to chodh diye main er rahul..........................


hahahahahaha ooooohh NDIIIIIII tu bhi nirra e se rahul....nakal maare to naam te badal deta kasaaai.......mein aur rahul.......yu YASH ji tera e to zikarra karre tha........hahahhahahahha killkki pe killkki
mein aur rahul.........hahahhahahaa

ya te NAYI album relese kar di thamne bhai...by YASH RAJ AND RAHUL......:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

[rahultokas]

Main Nakalchi Baandar soon,,,,,,,,, hahahahaha KILKI @ NAKALCHI BAANDAR:D

hahahahahaha ooooohh NDIIIIIII tu bhi nirra e se rahul....nakal maare to naam te badal deta kasaaai.......mein aur rahul.......yu YASH ji tera e to zikarra karre tha........hahahhahahahha killkki pe killkki
mein aur rahul.........hahahhahahaa

ya te NAYI album relese kar di thamne bhai...by YASH RAJ AND RAHUL......:D:D:D:D:D

[keshavdahiya]

Main Nakalchi Baandar soon,,,,,,,,, hahahahaha KILKI @ NAKALCHI BAANDAR


HHMMM NDIIII nakalchi baander..:D:D:D:D:D:p:p:p:p:p

[sunitahooda]

Ibb pachey tu Jibb nakal kare na Rahul bas nyu likh diye....STATUTORY WARNING: MAKE NECESSARY CHANGES!!!!!! ....killki Pai killki@ warning...fer sab apna sir khujjaein jangey...hahahahahaha

[rahultokas]

Dekh bhai Keshu,,,,,,, kimme keh le par yo ND matna keh,,,,,,,,, iss ND mai manne Kisse ki Baans aawe sai,,,,,,,,, hahahahahahha KILKI @ ND:D


HHMMM NDIIII nakalchi baander..:D:D:D:p:p:p

[sunitahooda]

HHMMM NDIIII nakalchi baander..:D:D:D:p:p: aND BANDAARIYA:p :p :p ...kESHU TU KE SOCHE AKK TUHEY ND BAAT KARNA JANE SAI....DEKH MANNE BI KARDI ND BAAT...:D

[prashantacmet]

Dev ji, aap nu batao aap itni suthri taal kyooker laawo ho Kavita main ?..... ek bai main koshish kari the aapse INSPIRE hokke..chepii thi ek Kavita...... par iss SUNITA ar VIKKASE nai baara ne kaha tai soongh si aayi..... inhoone merre KAVITAI KE CARRIER pai GAAR pher di............. jyooker TOMER ka LAUGHTER CARRIER khoya tha unhoone...... aap to jaano hi ho ye donno kittne KHAPETTAR BALAK hai....... . ROOKKA @ KAVITAI KA CARRIER @ KHAPETTAR BALAK..... uss din tai paachhe himmat kona padti Kavita likhhan ki....... aap issi issi hi likhhu jao..... kissi din pher koshish kar kai dekhuwaa........ar aap dhyan sa raakha karo mharra.... jonssa bhi GADBAD karre..... uski KANPATI pe RAHAPTTE maar maar kai soodha kar to ussne............ROOKKA @ KANPATI PE RAHAPTTA

[keshavdahiya]

Dekh bhai Keshu,,,,,,, kimme keh le par yo ND matna keh,,,,,,,,, iss ND mai manne Kisse ki Baans aawe sai,,,,,,,,, hahahahahahha KILKI @ ND:D


ha ha ha ha ha aapka MATBAL hai ki aap BAANDER khawana pasand karte ho:eek: lekin NDIII nahi..;) .......bhia yu NDIII te kismat aale hoya karen na.....bawalle iisi ke baat kar di atnne hum saare te tanne BAAANDER bhi keh ke khussh saan.....hahahhahhaha killkki @ KHUSH saan

[rahultokas]

theek sai bebe,,,,,,,, ya warning tai mai ibb jaroor likhoonga hahahahahahah;)

Ibb pachey tu Jibb nakal kare na Rahul bas nyu likh diye....STATUTORY WARNING: MAKE NECESSARY CHANGES!!!!!! ....killki Pai killki@ warning...fer sab apna sir khujjaein jangey...hahahahahaha

[rahultokas]

Keshu,,,,,,,,,, tu besak manne baander keh le arr khoob khuss ho le,,,,,,,,,,,,, par yo ND kismat waala nai mubarak ho,,,,,,,,, manne na chahiye yo TITLE NDIII aala hahahahahha KILKI @ NDIII TITLE :)

ha ha ha ha ha aapka MATBAL hai ki aap BAANDER khawana pasand karte ho:eek: lekin NDIII nahi..;) .......bhia yu NDIII te kismat aale hoya karen na.....bawalle iisi ke baat kar di atnne hum saare te tanne BAAANDER bhi keh ke khussh saan.....hahahhahhaha killkki @ KHUSH saan

[keshavdahiya]

THAAM saarya ne mere KAKA ki kavita pe RAABRRI khinda di.....:mad: :mad: ha ha ha ha ...???

tum sabko iski sazza milegi ;) :p .....kaka iib in saryan kiii bhi chaati pe baith ke kavita likh de...er ye jo saarre aade ND paake sein...inke CHAUSANG bitha de kadd mein ??? er is chorri ke tu na marre lekin isske chutkki bhar le ??............ha ha ha ha ha..:D:D:D:D:D:D....killkkkii pe kilkkkiiii @ chutkki

[yashbeniwal]

sunita :mad:
:)
:)
nadeeday nahi hum pyare bhi gaane sai kaka nai,
er thari tarrif nu kar de ek bahar ke log bura maan jaya kare.........
er hum tai ghar ke sai................

er tanni nahi bera " EK APNA MAARAGAA TAI CHAYA MAI GERAGAA".........

JAI KILKI TAUL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


DEKH KISSEY AAYE SAIN DONU KE DONU FOONJJHAD HILLATEY....KAKA KEH DYO INKI BI KIMME....YE BI GHANEY NADEEDAY HANDE SAIN....:p

[keshavdahiya]

ooo bhai Y beniwal yu itna badda badda likh ke kehna chawe se tu bhai mere Y Y Y (why why why).......maan li maare yaar tu ghaar ka se....:p ;) :D.....

iib wow DEEPAK SEJWAL NDIIIIII sarpanch aanne ho rehya se....teri naad pe buttkka bharega woh....tanne itna baad font kyun likh diya.......hahahhahahhaa killkki pe killkkkiii...fukrre..:D :p

[vijay]

Kakka nei ek likhi kavita,uska todd nahin pawei
Jei koe iss ki karre buraai,julam kassuta ow dhhawei

Kessu chhora nyu bolya kaka,ND saudda bagga diya
Merri kavita dekh VIkasse,pachhe merre lagga diya
Bebe Sunita nyu bolli kaka,Terri baat merre mann bhawei
Jei koe......................

Poonam bebe nyu boli kaka,tanne chahiye golli
Rupi bolya na dacdarni tu sei ghanniye bholi
Kaka kar rhya uudhh dhikhe,yo tamnne khoob bannawei
Jei koe..........................

Anil Singapore tein chillawei,Kaka kyun masta rhya
Deepshika bebe nyu boli,yu dharti sirr pei thha rhya
Deswal ji baithhe-2 Hindi jabbar bannawein
Jei.........................

Satey bolya talla la dyun,kaka ki matt maari
Ramlal bhai nyu kehrya Baddi kavita bhari
Ritu bebe la kei chassma,Sehaj-2 thi gawei
Jei......................

Mei te nyuhein likhkhen jauun,beshak karo burai
Prashant Chaudhary nyu bolya Kaka,Suthari baat batai
Sabh ka naam likhun kyukkar,Kaki manne bulawei.




Nice lines Dev Ji,

Har kaka bhul gya ek aur bhatija se, jo respect kare se
Jo apne kaka ki har ek suthari baat pe mare se
Je main sab main aagya to eeb koi shikawa na se
Jei......................

Zindagi zindadilli ka naam se kaka, kaun parwah kare se
Sahi logan ki bhundhi Kismat, bure log adde mauz kare se
Har yo mhara kaka to ebb bada cool customer sa dike se
Jei......................

[keshavdahiya]

THAAM saarya ne mere KAKA ki kavita pe RAABRRI khinda di.....:mad: :mad: ha ha ha ha ...???

tum sabko iski sazza milegi ;) :p .....kaka iib in saryan kiii bhi chaati pe baith ke kavita likh de...er ye jo saarre aade ND paake sein...inke CHAUSANG bitha de kadd mein ??? er is chorri ke tu na marre lekin isske chutkki bhar le ??............ha ha ha ha ha..:D:D:D....killkkkii pe kilkkkiiii @ chutkki

ghnaana naas kar diya saarya ne iss thread ka...:mad: :mad: :mad:

[devdahiya]

ghnaana naas kar diya saarya ne iss thread ka...:mad: :mad: :mad:


Sabh tein batti tei tu jhotte ki dhall haand gya iss merre Kille ruppi thread mei....KICHDHHAND di saari barshim kameen......terre godyan mei lathh dharwa ho sei.Bach jyaiye!

[devdahiya]

Nice lines Dev Ji,

Har kaka bhul gya ek aur bhatija se, jo respect kare se
Jo apne kaka ki har ek suthari baat pe mare se
Je main sab main aagya to eeb koi shikawa na se
Jei......................

Zindagi zindadilli ka naam se kaka, kaun parwah kare se
Sahi logan ki bhundhi Kismat, bure log adde mauz kare se
Har yo mhara kaka to ebb bada cool customer sa dike se
Jei......................




Bhai katti na bhulya,dil mei se tu,kaali matnya manne
Galti hogi maffi de de,baat rahi na dhyanne

Assal baat tei ya sei bhai,kyukkar likhhun naam ye saare
Jo reh jyan sein,burra mannawein,merre sarre pyare
Koe baat na dhyan rakhhun ga baat ghal li kaanne
Galti....................................

[vijay]

Bhai katti na bhulya,dil mei se tu,kaali matnya manne
Galti hogi maffi de de,baat rahi na dhyanne

Assal baat tei ya sei bhai,kyukkar likhhun naam ye saare
Jo reh jyan sein,burra mannawein,merre sarre pyare
Koe baat na dhyan rakhhun ga baat ghal li kaanne
Galti....................................


So nice of you, Dev sir

Aap bujurg so hamare, sabka dhyan to rakhna padega
Koi bura manega, koi rusega, aapko sabne daatna padega
Aapki issi khubi ke karan to saare izzat kare se aapki
Galti...............................