Ek Aur Kavita

[deepakchoudhry]

I have taken slightly different view to all the loss and despair which sometimes is portrayed in our love poems.

I hope you like it.

Prem Ki Dastak

himmat na haar premi, aankh utha kar dekh jara
Is ugate suraj main, apne priytam ki chayaa dekh jara.

Kuch logon ka kehana hai, Ki Kho kar pyar nahin milta.
Ek baar Murzhane per, Woh Pyar ka phool nahin khilta.

Kaisay Kavion (poets) nay baandh diya, Prem ko kuch Insano say
Kaisi niraasha ko jaga diya hai, Apne in afsano main.

Voh bas aata hi hoga, aansoo paunch aur dhyaan lagaa
asha ki darwaze per, kaun dastak deta hai dekh jara.

himmat na haar premi, aankh utha kar dekh jara
Is ugate suraj main apne, Priytam ki chayaa dekh jara.

[choudharyneelam]

I have taken slightly different view to all the loss and despair which sometimes is portrayed in our love poems.

I hope you like it.

Prem Ki Dastak

himmat na haar premi, aankh utha kar dekh jara
Is ugate suraj main, apne priytam ki chayaa dekh jara.

Kuch logon ka kehana hai, Ki Kho kar pyar nahin milta.
Ek baar Murzhane per, Woh Pyar ka phool nahin khilta.

Kaisay Kavion (poets) nay baandh diya, Prem ko kuch Insano say
Kaisi niraasha ko jaga diya hai, Apne in afsano main.

Voh bas aata hi hoga, aansoo paunch aur dhyaan lagaa
asha ki darwaze per, kaun dastak deta hai dekh jara.

himmat na haar premi, aankh utha kar dekh jara
Is ugate suraj main apne, Priytam ki chayaa dekh jara.


EXCELLENT!! FABULOUS!!.....it's so positive

you are the one who started something positive which i always wanted others to do and even asked them to come out with some positive shayari......you did it now....you know this positive thing makes everyone feel very good and never allows one to leave hope.....rest is everybody's luck.....but really i felt very happy to see this positive shayari from you.....keep it up.....and now i'll be looking for more such nice and best shayari:) :) :) :) :)

[deepakchoudhry]

Hi Neelam,

Thank you for encouraging words.

I have been inpired to write by some wonderful poets on this forum so can't take all the credit.:)

Deepak

[choudharyneelam]

Hi Neelam,

Thank you for encouraging words.

I have been inpired to write by some wonderful poets on this forum so can't take all the credit.:)

Deepak


hey it's inspiration and one's own thought that gave you this good creativity.....so you also deserve that credit which all other great people got here.....you also started one really good kind.....so just keep on writing more......i'll be looking forward for more good compositions from you and all other sweet and nice members here who already have posted many good compositions of their own.....so just waiting for others also.....want to see something positive from everyone here.

[jakhar77]

Very nice Deepak bhai.
bahut badhia likha hai.

Keep posting.

[vijay]

Prem Ki Dastak

himmat na haar premi, aankh utha kar dekh jara
Is ugate suraj main, apne priytam ki chayaa dekh jara.

Kuch logon ka kehana hai, Ki Kho kar pyar nahin milta.
Ek baar Murzhane per, Woh Pyar ka phool nahin khilta.

Kaisay Kavion (poets) nay baandh diya, Prem ko kuch Insano say
Kaisi niraasha ko jaga diya hai, Apne in afsano main.

Voh bas aata hi hoga, aansoo paunch aur dhyaan lagaa
asha ki darwaze per, kaun dastak deta hai dekh jara.

himmat na haar premi, aankh utha kar dekh jara
Is ugate suraj main apne, Priytam ki chayaa dekh jara.



Nice composition, Deepak.

Really good and inspiring.

[akanksha]

its touching..

Akanksha Chaudhary.



jai kilkii taull..


I have taken slightly different view to all the loss and despair which sometimes is portrayed in our love poems.

I hope you like it.

Prem Ki Dastak

himmat na haar premi, aankh utha kar dekh jara
Is ugate suraj main, apne priytam ki chayaa dekh jara.

Kuch logon ka kehana hai, Ki Kho kar pyar nahin milta.
Ek baar Murzhane per, Woh Pyar ka phool nahin khilta.

Kaisay Kavion (poets) nay baandh diya, Prem ko kuch Insano say
Kaisi niraasha ko jaga diya hai, Apne in afsano main.

Voh bas aata hi hoga, aansoo paunch aur dhyaan lagaa
asha ki darwaze per, kaun dastak deta hai dekh jara.

himmat na haar premi, aankh utha kar dekh jara
Is ugate suraj main apne, Priytam ki chayaa dekh jara.