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shobhitdeshwal
July 9th, 2006, 12:41 PM
"Maa"--- Phir eik kilak dooragat, goonj uthi kutiya sooni,
Maa uth daudi bhare hraday me lekar utkantha dooni
lutri khuli alak, raj-dhoosar baahein lipat gayin,
nisha-taapsi ki jalne ko dhadhak uthi bujhti dhuni.

"kahan raha tu natkhat firta ab tak mera bhagay bana.
Are pita ke pratinidhi! tune bhi sukh sukh to diya ghana,
chanchal tu, banchar ban bharta hai chaukdi kahin,
main darti tu rooth na jaaye karti kaise tujhe mana"

"main roothun maa mana tu, kitni achhi baat kahi !
le main sota hun ab jakar, bolunga main aaj nahi.
pake phalon se pet bhara hai nend nahi khulne vali"
Shradhha chumban le saprann kuch kuch vishad se bhari rahi.

jal uthte hain laghu jeevan ke madhur-madhur ve pal halke,
mukat udaas gagan ke ur me chale ban ja jhalke
diva-shrant-aalok-rashmiyan neel-nilay me chipi kahin,
karun voh hi swar phir us sansriti me beh jata hai gal ke.

Pranay kiran ka komal bandhan mukti bana badhta jata,
door kintu kitna paratipal vah hraday sameep hua jata!
madhur chandni-si tandra jab kaisi murchit manas par,
tab abhinn premaspad usme apna chitra ban jata

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal.

cooljat
July 9th, 2006, 06:15 PM
very nice poem bro!
keep it up :)

rock on
Jit

msingh
July 10th, 2006, 07:50 AM
shobhit kit te words dhoond ke lawwe see bhai
ek do line ke allawa maine te kuch bhi samaj maine naa aaya
thodi dii easy kavita likha kar bhai"Maa"--- Phir eik kilak dooragat, goonj uthi kutiya sooni,
Maa uth daudi bhare hraday me lekar utkantha dooni
lutri khuli alak, raj-dhoosar baahein lipat gayin,
nisha-taapsi ki jalne ko dhadhak uthi bujhti dhuni.

"kahan raha tu natkhat firta ab tak mera bhagay bana.
Are pita ke pratinidhi! tune bhi sukh sukh to diya ghana,
chanchal tu, banchar ban bharta hai chaukdi kahin,
main darti tu rooth na jaaye karti kaise tujhe mana"

"main roothun maa mana tu, kitni achhi baat kahi !
le main sota hun ab jakar, bolunga main aaj nahi.
pake phalon se pet bhara hai nend nahi khulne vali"
Shradhha chumban le saprann kuch kuch vishad se bhari rahi.

jal uthte hain laghu jeevan ke madhur-madhur ve pal halke,
mukat udaas gagan ke ur me chale ban ja jhalke
diva-shrant-aalok-rashmiyan neel-nilay me chipi kahin,
karun voh hi swar phir us sansriti me beh jata hai gal ke.

Pranay kiran ka komal bandhan mukti bana badhta jata,
door kintu kitna paratipal vah hraday sameep hua jata!
madhur chandni-si tandra jab kaisi murchit manas par,
tab abhinn premaspad usme apna chitra ban jata

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal.

ritu
July 10th, 2006, 10:04 AM
jarruri se tan dun marni on kavitaya m jo teri samajh m na ati .shobhit kit te words dhoond ke lawwe see bhai
ek do line ke allawa maine te kuch bhi samaj maine naa aaya
thodi dii easy kavita likha kar bhai

downtoearth
July 10th, 2006, 10:22 AM
good compo bro ..........keep pouring more...........:)