A Poem from deeep inside soul

[georgian]

Roads were long and dirty, my feet were bleeding hard,
I won, I excelled, I realised "I could if I try HARD"

Times were odd, with it's tide against me,
harshest winds, brushed it's ride against me,
I was struggling to recognise myself
Even My Own People began to discard
Still........ I won, I excelled, I realised "I could if I try HARD"

Memories still shiver me, how my luck line faded,
Each morning to live today, my Soul I persuaded,
Darkness around,no friends, no foes, no-one around
Even my shadow deserted me, I lost my trump card
Still........ I won, I excelled, I realised "I could if I try HARD"

my last rupees and pennies were lost in dust,
silt in heart and the brain developed rust,
disillusioned vision, struggling tounge, thirsty lips,
My efforts, my success, my plans all barred,
Still........ I won, I excelled, I realised "I could if I try HARD"


Regards
Charanvir Singh Nain
" I was writing my autobiography, ended writing a few bored poems"

[deepakchoudhry]

Nice ...:)

Keep it up.

Kudhhi Ko Kar Buland Itna...Ki Har Raza sau phele
Khuda Bandey say khud Puchay, Ki bata teri raza kaya hai.

[rekharathee]

really, life peeping out of this poem

[yashmalik]

Great work Mr. Nain. Thanx

do keep posting such inspirational stuffs

[devdahiya]

Great words! Keep it up bhai.

[georgian]

Dear all,
Thanx for the appreciation.
I use to write a lot till 1995, my diary was stolen in march 1995 in hostel.. after that it is only during the peak deviations of mood that transform into poetry..... but your appreciation and love is definitely waking me up to bore u more....... lol :)

[nitindev]

great lines charanvir,, carry on, we all love such tortures..lol... waiting eagerly for next set of lines...

[choudharyneelam]

such a nice poem...very well written.....trying hard and getting everything fulfilled:)