UMEED...BAKI HAI...(a poem).

[addy]

Main aaya tha jamaane mein,
Bass ek insaan ban ne ko.
Naa jaane kabb taras baitha,
Main bhi Bhagwaan ban ne ko.

Jo mutthi khol karr dekha ,
To mere haath the khaali.
Uski khanakk si goonji,
Kahti thi main hoon niraali.

Yeh bol kar wo chal di,
aur main nihaarta rahaa.
Wo udd chali kahin door,
aur main pukaarta rahaa.

Wo aayegi laut kar,
abhi tak aas hai baaki.
Nihaaroonga uss dagar ko,
jabb takk saans hai baaki.

Aankhen khulengi,
haath faddfadaayenge.
Dhadkan jaagegi,
Honth tharrthrrayenge.

Ungliyaan hilengi,
uss paak daaman se pahchaan hogi.
Ahsaas hoga usey paa liya,
Tabb iss jism se judaa,
ye jaan hogi.

[choudharyneelam]

Extremely Good!!

[neeti]

very sweet....

"Wo aayegi laut kar,
abhi tak aas hai baaki.
Nihaaroonga uss dagar ko,
jbb takk saans hai baaki. "

"Wo aayegi laut kar " -- aas nahi vishwas rakhna...
aas fir bhi chut jati hai.. per agar sacha viswas ho to ..
impossible bhi possible ho jata hai...

[keshavdahiya]

न जाने कबसे
ऊमीदेँ कुछ बाकी हैँ
मुझे फिर भी तेरी याद
कयूँ आती है

दूर जितना भी तुम मुझसे
पास तेरे मै
अब तो आदत सी है
मुझको ऐसे जीने मैँ

ज़िनदगी से कोई शिकवा भी नही
अब तो ज़िनदा हूँ मैँ
ईस नीले आसमाँ मेँ

चाहत ऐसी है ये तेरी बढती जाऐ
आहट ऐसी है तेरी ये मुझको सताऐ
यादेँ गहरी हैँ ईतनी की दिल ङूब जाऐ
और आखौँ मेँ ये गम नम बन जाऐ

सभी यादेँ हैँ, सभी बातेँ हैँ
भुलादो ऊनहे, मिटादो ऊनहे
अबतो आदत सी है मुझको ऐसे जीने मेँ
अबतो ज़िनदा हूँ ईस नीले आसमाँ मेँ

[anilkadian]

wah bhi amardeep, Keshav
bhai ghani emotional line likh di yaar
bahut badiya.....dil chho gi bhai ye kavita

[choudharyneelam]

Bharti you too write beautifully....so keep writing :)

[ravi.shekhar]

Nice One. really nice.

[zigyasa]

very nice poem ....................

[addy]

thanx to all you inspiring ppl out thr..
shall come bak with sm better thots nxt time.

[keshavdahiya]

thanx to all you inspiring ppl out thr..
shall come bak with sm better thots nxt time.

aaare bhai hoode tanne mere tahin specific tahnku na kahi....:o ...manne bhi te ek kavita chappi thi...........hhahahhahaha....:D.....anyway....jus t kidding........gud stuff and we expect something better from you next time......manne te kitte te spanish ganne ki hindi kaari thi..........:p :p

[addy]

aaare bhai hoode tanne mere tahin specific tahnku na kahi....:o ...manne bhi te ek kavita chappi thi...........hhahahhahaha....:D.....anyway....jus t kidding........gud stuff and we expect something better from you next time......manne te kitte te spanish ganne ki hindi kaari thi..........:p :p

Keshu...tera talent uuein eetnaa STAND OUT(SIDE) kaarae sae akk mannae sochi kadde main is nae adversly affect na karr dyun..;) :D
and the song you 've posted is not spanish..its titled.."AADAT" by the group.."JAL":D :D
Better luk nxt time buddy..