Betiyan

[choudharyneelam]

Beti jiski gaud mein aati hai
Khushiyon se wo ghar bhar jata hai

Uski pyaari muskan se
Ghar ka har kona chahakta hai

Laad pyaar mein badi hoti hai
Palkon pe bitha har nata rakhta hai

Kitne naazon se palti beti
Maangne se pahle sab milta hai

Babul ka dil ka ye tukda
Jo vidayi pe sabko rula jata hai

[choudharyneelam]

Ek baar ye aati duniya mein
Aur teen janam ye leti hai

Pahle mein banke kisiki beti
Pyaar ye sabse paati hai
Apni bholi aur meethi baaton se
Mann sabka moh le jaati hai

Dusre janam mein banke duje ki amanat
Har bandhan wo nibhati hai
Khushi mein unki khush hoti, dukh mein paunch unke aansun
Khud ke sab dard chhupa leti hai

Teeja janam hai iska anmol
Jisme naya jeevan ye kisiko deti hai
Luta saari duniya uske liye
Apna har gum bhula deti hai


Sabki khushi ka khayal rakhte rakhte
Apni khushi ke sab bhed dil mein daba deti hai

[deepakchoudhry]

Great poem. Jo Naari kay paas woh kis mahatma kay pass bhi nahin hai. :)

[dndeswal]

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क्यों समझती हो खुद को कमजोर बिटिया?
अपनी ताकत पर तुम करो गौर बिटिया ।

सृष्टि में तुम सूर्य की पहली किरण हो
रोशनी का तुम सुनहरा भोर बिटिया ।

मंदिरों की घंटियों की गूँज हो तुम
शक्*ति की पूजा का तुम्हीं ठौर बिटिया ।

धर्म, दर्शन, ज्ञान की उड़ती पतंगें
इन पतंगों की तुम्हीं हो डोर बिटिया ।

तुम रहो चौकस तो बिल्कुल न बनोगी
वासना के भेड़ियों का कौर बिटिया ।

राह में ठोकर लगे, हिम्मत न हारो
फिर करो कौशिश कोई पुरजोर बिटिया ।
एक दिन तुम्हें निश्चित मंजिल मिलेगी ।

- अजहर हाशमी

[vijay]

Woh mahakati hai ghar mein ek khushbu si
Jiski muskurahat se hi chahkata sara jahaan
Maa ki woh pyari beti aur Papa ke dil ka tukda
Bhai karde jiski ek khushi pe apni zindagi kurban

Jiski khilkhilahat se hi hansti hai ye zindagi
Uske naam se hi roshan hai izzat khandan ki
Kya balidaan bhulaa paayega koi us beti kaa
Maryada ke liye jo bhula deti apni pehchann ko

Mamta ka ahsaas hai woh, jeene ki aas hai woh
Apno par lutaa deti hai apne dil ke har ahsaas ko
Woh beti hai, bahan hai, maa hai aur patni bhi hai
Jo har rishtey mein jagaati hai hamaare vishwas ko

[rameshlakra]

Nice words and so very true. Keep it up, all of u.

[cheelu]

g8 thread Neelam jiiieeee
And excellent poems
Keep it up:) :)

[choudharyneelam]

Thanks a lot to all my dear friends for your sweet appreciations:) and i really liked the great work from Deswal Sir's and Vijay's side....Deswal Sir's composition gives me a real touch of what a father is saying to his lovely daughter and Vijay's composition gives a real touch of love and respect to every female:) ...good work from both of you Deswal Sir and Vijay.


:) :) :) :) :)
Neelam

[ritu]

beti vo ehsas h jo hone se pahle praya ho jata h
chintao se bhar jata h man aur lad bhi bahut atah
hi kaisa milega ghar jab ye badi hogi
itne nazo so jo pali kaisi oski nayi jindagi hogi
har kadam pe rahti h ghabrahat si
beti ki kismat kahi dhokha to na degi
betia karati h ehsas adamki ko jameen pe rahne ka
jis ghar me bet hoti h waha dil me narmi hoti
dur rah ke bhi jo ma bap ko khayalo me rakhe
prayi hokar bhi jo apnepan se judi rahe
betia sabki apne gharo me rase base
ma baap nishiant hoke betio ki kushio se kush rahe:) :) :)

[dndeswal]

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बिटिया

प्रतीक्षा
अभी से करने लगी है सयानी बातें !
आठवां जन्मदिन
कुछ दिनों पहले ही गया है
लेकिन अभी से होने लगा है
उसके बड़े होने का एहसास ।

कभी भैया को समझाती
कभी मम्मी और दादी को
दादाजी को भी सलाह देने से नहीं चूकती ।
आफिस जाते वक्*त नहीं करती जिद
बाय, टाटा, शाम को जल्दी आना, बस !
कहां से आ गई इतनी समझ
आफिस के अलावा
कहीं जाने नहीं देती अकेला ।

मंदिर से लौटते में पूछ लिया
प्रतीक्षा, क्या खाओगी ?
तपाक से बोली, बाजार की चीजें नहीं खाते ।

क्या वाकई बड़ी हो गई है बिटिया ?
लड़की के बड़े होने के एहसास से बड़ी
कोई चिन्ता नहीं ।
आईने में चेहरे की लकीरें बता रहीं हैं
सचमुच बड़ी हो रही है
मेरी बिटिया

- संजय परसाई
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[ajayverma1973]

Very nice words, keep posting.....





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बिटिया

प्रतीक्षा
अभी से करने लगी है सयानी बातें !
आठवां जन्मदिन
कुछ दिनों पहले ही गया है
लेकिन अभी से होने लगा है
उसके बड़े होने का एहसास ।

कभी भैया को समझाती
कभी मम्मी और दादी को
दादाजी को भी सलाह देने से नहीं चूकती ।
आफिस जाते वक्*त नहीं करती जिद
बाय, टाटा, शाम को जल्दी आना, बस !
कहां से आ गई इतनी समझ
आफिस के अलावा
कहीं जाने नहीं देती अकेला ।

मंदिर से लौटते में पूछ लिया
प्रतीक्षा, क्या खाओगी ?
तपाक से बोली, बाजार की चीजें नहीं खाते ।

क्या वाकई बड़ी हो गई है बिटिया ?
लड़की के बड़े होने के एहसास से बड़ी
कोई चिन्ता नहीं ।
आईने में चेहरे की लकीरें बता रहीं हैं
सचमुच बड़ी हो रही है
मेरी बिटिया

- संजय परसाई
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[ashok]

hi. its ashok mor . are u a ex raist

[vrshokeen]

Neelam jee JAT Land itne din se hassa raha tha aaj ankhe nam kar di maza aa gaya bhaut hi achhi achhi kavitaye aur unse achha ehsas.


Meri Bitya

[dndeswal]

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कुंकुम रोली चंदन बिटिया
परिवारों का बंधन बिटिया
मेंहदी सा जीवन महकाए
वेणी पायल कंगन बिटिया

माँ-बापू की फिक्र में डूबी
अश्रु की है छलकन बिटिया
भाई के माथे की शोभा
देहरी का अभिनन्दन बिटिया

संबन्धों की है पावन गरिमा
रिश्तों की है धड़कन बिटिया
सखियाँ राह निहारें पल-पल
पीहर वाला आँगन बिटिया

अन्नपूर्णा सी वरदानी है
समृद्धि है अनधन बिटिया
शुभ मुहुरत में आई घर में
गंगा सी है पावन बिटिया

अपने साजन संग बंधी है
प्यारी-सी है दुल्हन बिटिया

-हरीश दुबे

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[netrapalsingh]

Beti jiski gaud mein aati hai
Khushiyon se wo ghar bhar jata hai

Uski pyaari muskan se
Ghar ka har kona chahakta hai

Laad pyaar mein badi hoti hai
Palkon pe bitha har nata rakhta hai

Kitne naazon se palti beti
Maangne se pahle sab milta hai

Babul ka dil ka ye tukda
Jo vidayi pe sabko rula jata hai



bhoot ache neelam jee kafi dino ke baad ek achee kavita dekhne ko mili hai
aise hee likhte rahiye.........

netra.......

[jakhar77]

Nice posts from all of you. Dil ko chhoo gai ye kavitayen. :)
Thanks Neelam for starting a nice thread.

[aphougat]

U guys r just too good.....am no poet....just thought of sharing some thing I read ...

Woman...

You can feel her innocence in form of a Daughter....

You can feel her care in form of a Sister....

You can feel her warmth in form of a Friend....

You can feel her passion in form of a Beloved....

You can feel her dedication in form of a Wife...

You can feel her divinity in form of a Mother....

You can feel her blessings in form of Grandmother...

Yet she is so Tough...

Her heart is so Tender...

So Naughty....

So Charming....

So Sharing...

So Melodious....

She is a WOMAN....

She is Life.

Respect Her.

[choudharyneelam]

U guys r just too good.....am no poet....just thought of sharing some thing I read ...

Woman...

You can feel her innocence in form of a Daughter....

You can feel her care in form of a Sister....

You can feel her warmth in form of a Friend....

You can feel her passion in form of a Beloved....

You can feel her dedication in form of a Wife...

You can feel her divinity in form of a Mother....

You can feel her blessings in form of Grandmother...

Yet she is so Tough...

Her heart is so Tender...

So Naughty....

So Charming....

So Sharing...

So Melodious....

She is a WOMAN....

She is Life.

Respect Her.

Dear Anuradha, you too expressed in a different and beautiful manner....i really liked it..exactly true everywhere....keep sharing your marvelous thoughts.

Regards
Neelam

[choudharyneelam]

Thanks to all my dear friends for lots of praisings:) :)

Regards
Neelam

[choudharyneelam]

Beti apni kismat pahle se apne saath laati hai
Bhool kismat ko wo sapne kyun mann mein sajati hai

Mil jaaye sab kuch aaj bhi usse pahle jaise
Aise deepak kyun mann mein wo jalati hai

Sabko hansta dekhne chahe wo har pal
Kyun aise khudke armaan bhulati jaati hai

Isko banaya Khuda ne aisa ki
Dusre ki khushi mein hi apni khushi chaahti hai

[satender]

Beti jiski gaud mein aati hai
Khushiyon se wo ghar bhar jata hai

Uski pyaari muskan se
Ghar ka har kona chahakta hai

Laad pyaar mein badi hoti hai
Palkon pe bitha har nata rakhta hai

Kitne naazon se palti beti
Maangne se pahle sab milta hai

Babul ka dil ka ye tukda
Jo vidayi pe sabko rula jata hai



nice poem.....aise hi likhte rahiye :)

[choudharyneelam]

nice poem.....aise hi likhte rahiye :)

jaroor...ye sabse pahli post maine khud ko mile pyaar ko soch ke likhi thi....:) ...i really have got lots of love from my papa dearest and from every member of my family, all relatives....bas bayaan nahin kar sakti ki kitna sara pyaar mila hai mujhe aaj tak aur abhi bhi waise hi barkarar hai....i feel myself the luckiest one when i compare the stock of love from others that i gained from everyone...really unforgettable memories for me :) ..touchwood!!...:) :)...aur baaki aage ki lines kisi kisi ki life dekh ke likhi hain :)

[skarmveer]

Really nice and heart touching thread,

True love and effection we get from-mother-sister and then doughter i never find this type of love any where in my life although I am very much satisfied with my life partner but the type of love i got from my doughter
no comparison.

Thanks to all women's for this uncompareable love and for Neelam Ji for this
nice thread and nice poems.

Karmveer
jaroor...ye sabse pahli post maine khud ko mile pyaar ko soch ke likhi thi....:) ...i really have got lots of love from my papa dearest and from every member of my family, all relatives....bas bayaan nahin kar sakti ki kitna sara pyaar mila hai mujhe aaj tak aur abhi bhi waise hi barkarar hai....i feel myself the luckiest one when i compare the stock of love from others that i gained from everyone...really unforgettable memories for me :) ..touchwood!!...:) :)...aur baaki aage ki lines kisi kisi ki life dekh ke likhi hain :)

[choudharyneelam]

Really nice and heart touching thread,

True love and effection we get from-mother-sister and then doughter i never find this type of love any where in my life although I am very much satisfied with my life partner but the type of love i got from my doughter
no comparison.

Thanks to all women's for this uncompareable love and for Neelam Ji for this
nice thread and nice poems.

Karmveer

Thanks a ton for praising my such compositions:)