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vijay
September 12th, 2006, 10:58 AM
Humne jahan tak dekha sara jahaan apna lagta hai
Har kisi ka ranj ab humen jaana pehchana lagta hai

Jo bhol gaya mohabbat mein es matlabi duniyan ko
Wahi shakhs aaj es jamaane ko dewaana lagta hai

Jin ankhon mein humne apni zindagi dekhi thi kabhi
Mohabbat ka woh humsafar humen anjaana lagta hai

Kya itne mushkil hote hai ye zindagi ke raaste yaaro
Kisi mukaam tak pahunchane mein jamaana lagta hai

Kahne ko to lakhon hain hamaare chahne wale yahan
'Vijay' ne jise apna samjha wahi aaj begaana lagta hai

mothsara1st
September 12th, 2006, 12:40 PM
koye baat konee vijya bhai ....Dheeraj dhar le thodi haan isa tame to kisse pai bi aa sake sai ha ha ha h........un tere sher bhaut badhiya sai

choudharyneelam
September 19th, 2006, 09:08 PM
Humne bhi dekhe kai begaane iss duniya mein
Lakin sirf apnon ka hi humara dil khayal rakhta hai

Mohabbat ki hai jisse humne duniya mein
Aaj uss se juda har rishta pyara lagta hai

Inn aankhon ne dekha har waqt bas usko
Uss surat se hi iss dil ka har sapna banta hai

Zindagi mein apna banana chaha hai sirf usko
Bas thora waqt uss tak pahaunchne mein lagta hai

Chahega tumko bhi koi iss kadar jaise humne kisi ko chaha
Phir kahoge tum bhi ek din ki hai abhi koi jo apna sa lagta hai

dndeswal
September 19th, 2006, 09:59 PM
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भाई वाह, इतनी दर्द भरी शायरी चल रही है यहां पर !

जिंदगी गम की चादर यूं ओढ़े हुए,
हर तरह मेरे फन को सजाती रही ।

दर्द के दरिया में बन के मांझी सी वो,
खुद-ब-खुद उसमें गोते लगाती रही ।

वो आयेंगे बस इतनी उम्मीद में,
धड़कने दिल की वो फिर बढ़ाती रही ।

गम के मैखाने में एक मैकश सी वो,
दर्द के जाम लब से लगाती रही ।

- राजकुमार सिंह राज

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vijay
September 19th, 2006, 10:04 PM
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भाई वाह, इतनी दर्द भरी शायरी चल रही है यहां पर !

जिंदगी गम की चादर यूं ओढ़े हुए,
हर तरह मेरे फन को सजाती रही ।

दर्द के दरिया में बन के मांझी सी वो,
खुद-ब-खुद उसमें गोते लगाती रही ।

वो आयेंगे बस इतनी उम्मीद में,
धड़कने दिल की वो फिर बढ़ाती रही ।

गम के मैखाने में एक मैकश सी वो,
दर्द के जाम लब से लगाती रही ।

- राजकुमार सिंह राज

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Nice one, Deswal sir

choudharyneelam
September 20th, 2006, 09:39 PM
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भाई वाह, इतनी दर्द भरी शायरी चल रही है यहां पर !
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Sir, can you tell me why you all like Dard Bhari shayari?...everbody have some pains inside but remembering those again and again cannot heal those....but if anybody tries to change the mood on his own then we can see and grab all the happiness that is scattered everywhere in this beautiful world....anyway here you all are putting your beautiful words in sad expressions....so continue it....poetry is going good.

Regards
Neelam

shamshermalik
September 21st, 2006, 08:36 AM
Sir, can you tell me why you all like Dard Bhari shayari?...everbody have some pains inside but remembering those again and again cannot heal those....but if anybody tries to change the mood on his own then we can see and grab all the happiness that is scattered everywhere in this beautiful world....anyway here you all are putting your beautiful words in sad expressions....so continue it....poetry is going good.

Regards
Neelam

Kanton par chalne ki aadat pad gayee
Jaane kyoon phoolon se ab darr lagata hai

Bhool gaya aaj main apni hi hansi ko
Jaane kyoon ab khushiyon se darr lagata hai

Pyasa hoon magar maut manjoor mujhe,
Jaane kyoon ab pani se darr lagta hai

Kaise pahooch jayee mukam tak koi,
Us taraf jaate har raaste se darr lagta hai

Koi pukar naa de usko mere naam se aaj,
Ab to apne hi naam se darr lagta hai.

vijay
September 21st, 2006, 06:20 PM
Gujarate they jahan se rozana hum unke saath kabhi
Woh jana pehchana raasta aaj humen anjaana lagta hai

Humen ab itna bhi hosh nahin raha ki ghar kahan hai
Jis aur bhi dekhte hain wahi ghar ab maikhana lagta hai

Woh pal bhar ke liye zindagi mein aur chale bhi gaye
Par humen to unko bhool jaane mein zamaana lagta hai

Mehfilon ke daur aur roshni se jagmagaata ye shamaa
Jaane kyon fir bhi ye shahar humen veeraana lagta hai

Koi shakhs us sadak ke kinaare baitha hai gamgeen sa
Fir koi 'Vijay' ban gaya kisi appne ka nishana lagta hai

deepakchoudhry
September 21st, 2006, 06:37 PM
Kya Yaar...Hamesha Ronay Dhonay ki Baat Karte rehte ho.:)

Pyar Yeh...Mohhabot woh. Ityadi Ityadi

Life is not all doom and gloom.

Lets hear some postive and inspiration shayari from you.

Let me a quote you someone....

He Prayeth well who loveth well
Both Man and bird and Beast.
He Prayeth best who loveth best
All things both great and small.

choudharyneelam
September 21st, 2006, 09:13 PM
Kanton par chalne ki aadat pad gayee
Jaane kyoon phoolon se ab darr lagata hai

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Koi pukar naa de usko mere naam se aaj,
Ab to apne hi naam se darr lagta hai.


Kaanton ki raah hi ek din phool pyaar ke khilaayegi
Rahna uss apne ke saath jo saath tumhara nibhayegi

Apni hansi bhule ho aaj, ismein chinta ki baat nahin
Kisi apne ki hansi se ek din tumhari zindagi muskayegi

Marne na kabhi degi wo aise iss pyaase ko
Apne prem ki barsaat tumhare jeevan mein laayegi

Har raasta koi na koi manzil dikhata hai
Aayegi ek raah wo bhi jab sab uljhane dur ho jaayengi

Iss begaane ko to hum rok denge, naam tumhara na lega phir
Magar uss apne ko ek baar pukaaro tum aur wo daudi chali aayegi

shamshermalik
September 22nd, 2006, 12:23 AM
Kaanton ki raah hi ek din phool pyaar ke khilaayegi
Rahna uss apne ke saath jo saath tumhara nibhayegi

Apni hansi bhule ho aaj, ismein chinta ki baat nahin
Kisi apne ki hansi se ek din tumhari zindagi muskayegi

Marne na kabhi degi wo aise iss pyaase ko
Apne prem ki barsaat tumhare jeevan mein laayegi

Har raasta koi na koi manzil dikhata hai
Aayegi ek raah wo bhi jab sab uljhane dur ho jaayengi

Iss begaane ko to hum rok denge, naam tumhara na lega phir
Magar uss apne ko ek baar pukaaro tum aur wo daudi chali aayegi


Very nice Neelam...

deepakchoudhry
September 22nd, 2006, 03:32 AM
Kaanton ki raah hi ek din phool pyaar ke khilaayegi
Rahna uss apne ke saath jo saath tumhara nibhayegi

Apni hansi bhule ho aaj, ismein chinta ki baat nahin
Kisi apne ki hansi se ek din tumhari zindagi muskayegi

Marne na kabhi degi wo aise iss pyaase ko
Apne prem ki barsaat tumhare jeevan mein laayegi

Har raasta koi na koi manzil dikhata hai
Aayegi ek raah wo bhi jab sab uljhane dur ho jaayengi

Iss begaane ko to hum rok denge, naam tumhara na lega phir
Magar uss apne ko ek baar pukaaro tum aur wo daudi chali aayegi


Thats more like it :)

choudharyneelam
September 22nd, 2006, 07:04 PM
Thanks Shamsher and Deepak for appreciations:) :)

choudharyneelam
September 23rd, 2006, 01:50 PM
Gujarate they jahan se rozana hum unke saath kabhi
Woh jana pehchana raasta aaj humen anjaana lagta hai

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Koi shakhs us sadak ke kinaare baitha hai gamgeen sa
Fir koi 'Vijay' ban gaya kisi appne ka nishana lagta hai

Gujre jamaane aur raahen ek afsana sa ban jaate hain
Jo mile aage raah mein humein to sirf wahi apna sa lagta hai

Wafa se bhare pyaar ke jaam lagao kisi apne ke saath
Sapna jo aankhon ko dikhta hai phir wo saccha sa lagta hai

Ek sabse badi kami hai har aadmi ki iss duniya mein
Jo na ruke unke liye ek pal bhi unke mann mein vo hi basa lagta hai

Jab tak koi jeevan saathi na milega kisi ko yahan
Tab tak har kona uski duniya ka andheron sa kala lagta hai

'Vijay' ke to naam mein bhi jeet dikhti hai hamesha
Phir kyun logon ki bheed mein ye khud ko hara sa lagta hai

bahadur1
September 28th, 2006, 03:16 PM
Well done, Neelam, you are fully utilising your leisure time.... keep on