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devdahiya
September 18th, 2006, 05:17 PM
Bharpai ka bhai aaya,dekh kaljja phuutt gayya
Saassu bolli jairoi,dekh kattadda chhutt gaya
Ghanne dinna mei bhai aaya,Bharpai ka munh khilgya
Saassu keh rhi,deedda kitt sei,issa tnne aaj ke milgya
Bhai ne jib haal yo dekhya,bandhh sabbar ka tuutt gaya
Saassu........................................
Bhajj ke bebey galle lagga li,aanssu tapp-2 paddan lagge
Nyu boli beera tu aaya te aaj merre ye bhagg jagge
Sarri hanna nyun sochchhun thhi,tuukk kaljja ruuth gaya
Sassu......................................
Bhai tein badhh ke duniya mein,pyari konya cheejj manne
Bhukhkha hogga ghallun rotti,laggi hoggi bhukhh tanne
Aur batta bhai maa-babbu nei sandesha ke naya diya
Sassu........................
Bhai bolya na merri bebey,manne bhukhkh katti konya
Merri bebey dukhhi ghanni sei,Innke sharram katti konya
merra dhabbi Sattey [jeejja] kyukkar itana dhheethh huya
Sassu................................
netrapalsingh
September 18th, 2006, 05:29 PM
Bharpai ka bhai aaya,dekh kaljja phuutt gayya
Saassu bolli jairoi,dekh kattadda chhutt gaya
Ghanne dinna mei bhai aaya,Bharpai ka munh khilgya
Saassu keh rhi,deedda kitt sei,issa tnne aaj ke milgya
Bhai ne jib haal yo dekhya,bandhh sabbar ka tuutt gaya
Saassu........................................
Bhajj ke bebey galle lagga li,aanssu tapp-2 paddan lagge
Nyu boli beera tu aaya te aaj merre ye bhagg jagge
Sarri hanna nyun sochchhun thhi,tuukk kaljja ruuth gaya
Sassu......................................
Bhai tein badhh ke duniya mein,pyari konya cheejj manne
Bhukhkha hogga ghallun rotti,laggi hoggi bhukhh tanne
Aur batta bhai maa-babbu nei sandesha ke naya diya
Sassu........................
Bhai bolya na merri bebey,manne bhukhkh katti konya
Merri bebey dukhhi ghanni sei,Innke sharram katti konya
merra dhabbi Sattey [jeejja] kyukkar itana dhheethh huya
Sassu................................
sir jee ram ram,
kafi dino ke baad aapke jat land par dekh kar kafi
khushi mahsoos kar rhaa hoo rahee kavitaa kee baat
to aap ke har kavita har chutkale sb lajwab hote hai
netra.......
sunitahooda
October 13th, 2006, 11:47 AM
Dev Ji aapki Kavita dekh kai likhey bina na dattya jata....
Dekh naya Zamana har rishta laachar hua
dekh durgati bebey ki Bhai bhi majboor hua
yaar-dost tai bana lyo kitney
Bhaiyan ka todda jarur hua
Friend kah dey Sister na kehvein
Duniya ka naya dastoor hua
Chhori jai Bhai keh dein tai choo uth jya
Padh-likh kai adar-satkar chaknachur hua
Musibat mai Girl Friend nai cousin bana ley
Aaj ka Marad itna darpokk hua????
Rishtyan ki foonk dein holi pal mai
Dekh ya adhunikta....Mera dil tar-tar hua
choudharyneelam
October 13th, 2006, 12:57 PM
Dev Ji aapki Kavita dekh kai likhey bina na dattya jata....
Dekh naya Zamana har rishta laachar hua
dekh durgati bebey ki Bhai bhi majboor hua
...............
Rishtyan ki foonk dein holi pal mai
Dekh ya adhunikta....Mera dil tar-tar hua
Dev Sir has written very expressive feelings and Sunita your reply is too good....all you written here is very true...good work!!:)
ravinderdahiya
October 13th, 2006, 01:05 PM
wonderful sir
devdahiya
October 21st, 2006, 10:36 PM
Dev Ji aapki Kavita dekh kai likhey bina na dattya jata....
Dekh naya Zamana har rishta laachar hua
dekh durgati bebey ki Bhai bhi majboor hua
yaar-dost tai bana lyo kitney
Bhaiyan ka todda jarur hua
Friend kah dey Sister na kehvein
Duniya ka naya dastoor hua
Chhori jai Bhai keh dein tai choo uth jya
Padh-likh kai adar-satkar chaknachur hua
Musibat mai Girl Friend nai cousin bana ley
Aaj ka Marad itna darpokk hua????
Rishtyan ki foonk dein holi pal mai
Dekh ya adhunikta....Mera dil tar-tar hua
Bebey Sunita....Dil ko chhu lenne walli lines likh di aapne. Really nice!