Arz Kiya hai [Archive] - Jatland Forums

swati

September 29th, 2006, 11:20 AM

Arz kiya hai..........

Ret par naam likhne se kya faydaa,

Ek leher aayegi sab badal jayega......

Tumne pathar - dil humko keh to diya,

Patharon pe likhoge mitega nahi.......

sejwaldeepak

September 29th, 2006, 12:42 PM

Arz Kiya Hai,

Ret per naam likhne wale nadaan hote hain,
Woh log aane wali lehron se anjaan hote hain,
Jo kehte hain pathar dil chahne walon ko,
Woh mohobbat ke jahaan mein gumnaam hote hain.:)

yashbeniwal

September 29th, 2006, 12:54 PM

Arz kiya hai..........

Ret par naam likhne se kya faydaa,

Ek leher aayegi sab badal jayega......

Tumne pathar - dil humko keh to diya,

Patharon pe likhoge mitega nahi.......

Khud ki mohabbat ko Fanaah kaun karegaa..
Sabhi nek banege toh gunah kaun karegaa..
E-Khuda salamat rakhna mere Bewafa sanam ko..
Warna roz meri maut ki "DUA" kaun karegaa....

swati

September 29th, 2006, 01:47 PM

Dard ko bhi dard hone laga, Dard khud hi mere gham dhone laga, Dard ke liye hum na roye kabhi, Dard hemein choo kar khud hi rone laga.

mothsara1st

September 29th, 2006, 01:55 PM

Khud ki mohabbat ko Fanaah kaun karegaa..
Sabhi nek banege toh gunah kaun karegaa..
E-Khuda salamat rakhna mere Bewafa sanam ko..
Warna roz meri maut ki "DUA" kaun karegaa....
Ultimate............

mothsara1st

September 29th, 2006, 01:57 PM

Dard ko bhi dard hone laga, Dard khud hi mere gham dhone laga, Dard ke liye hum na roye kabhi, Dard hemein choo kar khud hi rone laga.

wah waaaaaah Ye to pahale wale se bhi acha hai ....nahin b..bahut acha hai....ye sher mujhe yaad nahin rahte .warna main bhi ek sher jaroor likhta

skarmveer

September 29th, 2006, 02:16 PM

vrshokeen

September 29th, 2006, 02:23 PM

Aap sabhi ney bahut achchaa likha hai or mujhey lagata aap sabhee achchaey shayar hai.

Mey ek bat janna chahata hu kya shayari gum me he ke jati hai.
Jadater shayar Roney, lutney or marney ke bat kartey hai Khusion bhari shayari nahi hoti kaya or agar hoti hai to bhaio or bahanji khusion wala kuch
likho, Khud bhee khush raho or oroko bhee khush rakho.

Shayeri se Anjan
Karmveer Chahal

Kisi kee yaad mein jeene mein kya rakha hein
kisi kee yaad mein marne mein kya rakha hein
ye to adat see ho gai hein udash rhene kee
warna udash rhene mein kya rakha hein

aisa lagta hein kee shari aur udashi kuch najdiki dost hein

mothsara1st

September 29th, 2006, 02:47 PM

ek do sher maine bhi dundhe(likhe nahin hain .....kyonkee main aaj bhi sher nahin likhta:D ) hain dosto....

copy kiya hai ......
Yeh mere aasu jinhe koi pochne wala bhi nahi,
Koi aanchal enhe milta to sitare hote..........wah wah
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.Be Positive sher
Dil na umid to nahi, nakam hi to hai,
Lambi hai gam ki shyam magar, shyam hi to hai.......

Too coool sher
Itni raat gaye Kyon apni qabra khod raha hai Galib
Itni raat gaye kyon apni qabara khod raha hai Galib
La, phawda mujhe de de !!

skarmveer

September 29th, 2006, 02:49 PM

Bhai Vijay Raj Ji

Bahut badhiya aapney sahi kaha hai Udas reh key jeeney may kya rakkha hai. Bhai khush raho< Bhagwan ne etni saree cheej they rakhi hai ek aadhi ne bhee de to koi bat nahi, Jo dey rakhi hey onhey bhee kyu bekar karo dukhi reh key.

Mein Bhagwan sey perrathana karta hun kee ye jitney bhee shaya dukh bhari shyari likhetey enhey itna sukh dey ke enhay yad he na rahey ki dukh kya hota hai.

Karmveer Chahal

Kisi kee yaad mein jeene mein kya rakha hein
kisi kee yaad mein marne mein kya rakha hein
ye to adat see ho gai hein udash rhene kee
warna udash rhene mein kya rakha hein

aisa lagta hein kee shari aur udashi kuch najdiki dost hein

swati

September 29th, 2006, 02:58 PM

yaar ya phawde wali jo baat hai ya ghani badhiya lagi majhe
humare bade bhi kahein "Doosron ki madad (help) karni chaha":D

mothsara1st

September 29th, 2006, 03:10 PM

yaar ya phawde wali jo baat hai ya ghani badhiya lagi majhe
humare bade bhi kahein "Doosron ki madad (help) karni chaha":D
Bahut punay ka kam hai sawati jee kar hi dalo

yashbeniwal

September 29th, 2006, 03:17 PM

good one.......

Dard ko bhi dard hone laga, Dard khud hi mere gham dhone laga, Dard ke liye hum na roye kabhi, Dard hemein choo kar khud hi rone laga.

"Koi dikha ke roye, koi chupa kar roye...
Humein rulane wala humein rula kar roye..
Marne ka maza toh tabh hain yaaro..
Jab kaatil bhi janaze par aakar roye.."

yashbeniwal

September 29th, 2006, 03:22 PM

Bhai Vijay Raj Ji

Bahut badhiya aapney sahi kaha hai Udas reh key jeeney may kya rakkha hai. Bhai khush raho< Bhagwan ne etni saree cheej they rakhi hai ek aadhi ne bhee de to koi bat nahi, Jo dey rakhi hey onhey bhee kyu bekar karo dukhi reh key.

Mein Bhagwan sey perrathana karta hun kee ye jitney bhee shaya dukh bhari shyari likhetey enhey itna sukh dey ke enhay yad he na rahey ki dukh kya hota hai.

Karmveer Chahal

"Yeh wo dard hain bhai sahab jo dawa lene ke saath saath badtaa jaata hain"

swati

September 29th, 2006, 03:23 PM

Bahut punay ka kam hai sawati jee kar hi dalo

TO BATAO KAB AANA HAI AAPKI MADAD KARNE
:D

mothsara1st

September 29th, 2006, 03:50 PM

TO BATAO KAB AANA HAI AAPKI MADAD KARNE
:D
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha......chor do swati jee ..main to abhi baccha hoon ........aur bhi kai help less log hai is duniya. main

sejwaldeepak

September 29th, 2006, 05:00 PM

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha......chor do swati jee ..main to abhi baccha hoon ........aur bhi kai help less log hai is duniya. main

aur paad le gadhe murdeyan ne..:D

sandeepsomu

September 29th, 2006, 08:39 PM

Karmveer, bhai tu to ghana badiya aadmi lage maine to, bhagwan se kuch maana bhi orr wah hi dusro ke khatir...wah.......

Bhai Vijay Raj Ji

Bahut badhiya aapney sahi kaha hai Udas reh key jeeney may kya rakkha hai. Bhai khush raho< Bhagwan ne etni saree cheej they rakhi hai ek aadhi ne bhee de to koi bat nahi, Jo dey rakhi hey onhey bhee kyu bekar karo dukhi reh key.

Mein Bhagwan sey perrathana karta hun kee ye jitney bhee shaya dukh bhari shyari likhetey enhey itna sukh dey ke enhay yad he na rahey ki dukh kya hota hai.

Karmveer Chahal

choudharyneelam

September 29th, 2006, 08:57 PM

Karmveer, bhai tu to ghana badiya aadmi lage maine to, bhagwan se kuch maana bhi orr wah hi dusro ke khatir...wah.......

you are right Sandeep, Karmveer seems kind-hearted person....so now you pray for him that his wish should be listened soon by God :)

and you all other members Swati, Deepak, Yash, Sujeet are writing very good shayaris...but dear all of you take some concerns for happiness also.

vijay

September 29th, 2006, 11:53 PM

Kya dua maange aaj us khuda se hum bhi
Mere sanam ko ek haseen si zindagi de de
Kaun shikaayat karta hai ab kisi bedard se
Bus yahi sochte hain ki unko bandagi de de

yashbeniwal

September 30th, 2006, 10:29 AM

"Unki khwaahish hai ki woh barbaad humein dekhein..
Chalo isi bahane sahi woh ek baar to humein dekhein.."

swati

September 30th, 2006, 10:52 AM

Meri Tamannaon Ki Tu Duniya Sanwaar De...................

Meri Tamannaon Ki Tu Duniya Sanwaar De...................

Mujhe Baksh De Padosiya Ko Maar De :d

swati

September 30th, 2006, 10:54 AM

sejwaldeepak

September 30th, 2006, 10:55 AM

vrshokeen

September 30th, 2006, 12:13 PM

Ishaq mein pade...............kun bhai khade kyon nahi
Mohabbat mein doobe........jarori tha terna seekh ke saroo hote
Pyar mein gire .................dekh ke chalte
fall in love.......................pls take care

choudharyneelam

September 30th, 2006, 01:59 PM

specially for Neelam and Karamveer bhai.

Wo Shyari Hi Kya Jisko Kabhi Dard Na Chua.
Aur Wo Insaan Hi Kya Jisko Kabhi Ishq Na Hua.

Arz Kiya Hai......

Dil ka dard ubhar aata hai shyari mein meri,
Na jane kis kis mukaam se gujra tha ashqui mein teri.

Ab to hansti hai ye duniya halat pe meri,
Ek aur Nikkama "Galib" ban raha hun mohabbat mein teri.

phir wahi dard bhari shayari.....:mad: :mad: ...Deepak tum galat ho apni baat pe....shayari mein pyaar bhi jhalakta hai kahin na kahin...to usse kyun chupa rahe ho tum sab...ya to tum logon ne kiya nahin ya sab chupa rahe ho;) :D ....lakin tum sab log mujhe kisi din rula ke chodoge iss dard bhari shayari ko suna suna ke....May God bless me....mujhe aisi dard bhari shayari kabhi likhne ki jaroorat na pade....aur ek aur baat sab jaat jiddi hote hain....abhi tak sunti thi ab dekh liye.....koi bhi happy shayari ko continue hi nahin karta....sab sad waali poetries mein interest lete hain :(

sejwaldeepak

September 30th, 2006, 02:15 PM

choudharyneelam

September 30th, 2006, 02:41 PM

neelam hade sare diljale sein.. dukhi aatma, tu kade fans gayi aake:D hahhaa...ibb sun bat issi sei.. yo thread shuru hi kuch dard tei hui thi is mare sab dard bhari shyari kar rahe hain..koi happiness wali thread check kar le ude tanne sare rajji milenge.. na tei ek shuru kar le thread..pher dekhiye reply..:)

agar main itni acchi hoti likhne mein to ab tak pata nahin kitne happy shayari waale threads shuru kar chuki hoti bina kisi ko bole....issliye baithke wait karungi...kabhi na kabhi to koi mere jaisa sochega...:) ..ab kisi happiness waali thread ka wait karungi...phir dekhungi kitne karte hain reply uspe....:) :) ...saare bhaag bhaag ke karte hain reply sad feelings ke liye...ab kisi happiness waali thread ke liye dekhna hai ki kitne reply karenge....lagta nahin koi aayega....sab diljalon mein shaamil hona pasand karte hain... anyway lets see ...i'm there at jatland always :D

skarmveer

September 30th, 2006, 02:56 PM

Bhai Sejwal Ji

Bhai Aap ke baat theek hai kee Insan ko Isk to karna jaruri hai per theek
jagah karo na tum dukhi ho or na samney waley(jissey Isk kartey ho) oosey dukhi Karoo.

Isk on sey karo jo dukh na dey,
Jo dukh dey on sey isk kaisa.

Or Bhai Bakki yo Shokeen Bhai ki Likhi Bhee Padho sari theek-2 bata rakhi hai.

Ishk Karna Hai To Bagwan sey karo in Bewafao mey kaya rakhaa Hai,
Marna hai to Hans ker maro, ro-2 ker marney me kaya rakha hai.

Karmveer Chahal

quote=sejwaldeepak;117158]specially for Neelam and Karamveer bhai.

Wo Shyari Hi Kya Jisko Kabhi Dard Na Chua.
Aur Wo Insaan Hi Kya Jisko Kabhi Ishq Na Hua.

Arz Kiya Hai......

Dil ka dard ubhar aata hai shyari mein meri,
Na jane kis kis mukaam se gujra tha ashqui mein teri.

Ab to hansti hai ye duniya halat pe meri,
Ek aur Nikkama "Galib" ban raha hun mohabbat mein teri.[/quote]

skarmveer

September 30th, 2006, 03:02 PM

Bhai sejwal Ji,

Yo her tame dukhi rahn ke aadat baniu mey ho hai jatta me to na hoti
ye jat kue baniu ke nakal kern laggey samejh me n aaie.

With prey for Happines to All Jats
Karmveer Chahal

neelam hade sare diljale sein.. dukhi aatma, tu kade fans gayi aake:D hahhaa...ibb sun bat issi sei.. yo thread shuru hi kuch dard tei hui thi is mare sab dard bhari shyari kar rahe hain..koi happiness wali thread check kar le ude tanne sare rajji milenge.. na tei ek shuru kar le thread..pher dekhiye reply..:)

skarmveer

September 30th, 2006, 03:10 PM

Bhaio/behno,
Deney me/Tyagne me jo Sukh hai wo leney/Mangney mein nahi hai.

Keuki Kisi bastu ko pana hamarey hath mey nahi hai perntoo oos bastu ko paney ki ichcha ko tyagna hamrey haath mey hai.

Give happynes to all but dont expect any thing in return. This is a true love.

With Love
Karmveer

rkumar

September 30th, 2006, 03:15 PM

Arz kiya hai..........

Ret par naam likhne se kya faydaa,

Ek leher aayegi sab badal jayega......

Tumne pathar - dil humko keh to diya,

Patharon pe likhoge mitega nahi.......

umm... bahut khoob....

ne khelo yun dil se, badi chot lagtee hai
kash ki yeh bhi pathar ka hota, aapki tarah

aapka Dil pathar ka ho ya fir sheshe ka
bikhar kar raste me dono jakhm karte hain

RK^2

skarmveer

September 30th, 2006, 03:15 PM

Bhai Sandeep,

Apney liyey to sab mangtey hai ---Miley to khush na miley to dukhi--dusro key liye mangney mey jo khushi hai wo apney liye mangney mein kahan.

Karmveer

Karmveer, bhai tu to ghana badiya aadmi lage maine to, bhagwan se kuch maana bhi orr wah hi dusro ke khatir...wah.......

sejwaldeepak

September 30th, 2006, 04:11 PM

le bhai karamvir , hade tei RK Uncle bhi aa liye ibb karlyo ke karoge..hahhaa inne rok ke dhikhao. inne to apni gali ka naam bhi Galib dhar rakhya hai.:D

skarmveer

September 30th, 2006, 04:34 PM

Bhai Sejwal,

Bhai hum to gum mein bhee khushi dhondney walo main hai.
or dil majbut rakhey hai dekhy koi keuker tod dega.

RK Sir,

Do something for happiness not for this todna-fodna.

Regards
Karmveer

le bhai karamvir , hade tei RK Uncle bhi aa liye ibb karlyo ke karoge..hahhaa inne rok ke dhikhao. inne to apni gali ka naam bhi Galib dhar rakhya hai.:D

sejwaldeepak

September 30th, 2006, 04:49 PM

manne ek thread shuru kar di hai bhai.. ""Kuch Qalaam Mohobbat ke Naam"" thari taklif dekhi na gayi bhai.. dekhein ibb kon kon hapiness lawega ude..:)

choudharyneelam

September 30th, 2006, 04:53 PM

Bhai Sejwal,

Bhai hum to gum mein bhee khushi dhondney walo main hai.
or dil majbut rakhey hai dekhy koi keuker tod dega.

RK Sir,

Do something for happiness not for this todna-fodna.

Regards
Karmveer

Karmveer ab yahan se bahar nikalke dekho, Deepak ne nayi aur happiness waali thread shuru ki hai...wahan aake kuch likho ab....actually main likh nahin paati accha...lakin agar kuch aaya deemag mein to jaroor likhungi...tab tak tum dono to aage badho :)

choudharyneelam

September 30th, 2006, 05:01 PM

umm... bahut khoob....

ne khelo yun dil se, badi chot lagtee hai
kash ki yeh bhi pathar ka hota, aapki tarah

aapka Dil pathar ka ho ya fir sheshe ka
bikhar kar raste me dono jakhm karte hain

RK^2

Rajendra Sir

you also write very beautifully...so now contribute the share of happiness and love that you have experienced in your life....just have a look at the new thread started by Deepak- our administrator.

Regards
Neelam:)

zigyasa

September 30th, 2006, 09:43 PM

well done yash
aap itni aachi shero shayri karteyhai pata nahi tha mujhey......

ritu

October 1st, 2006, 12:28 AM

wah wah swati very good.
Dard ko bhi dard hone laga, Dard khud hi mere gham dhone laga, Dard ke liye hum na roye kabhi, Dard hemein choo kar khud hi rone laga.

ritu

October 1st, 2006, 12:34 AM

humari bhi ek koshish hazir h

kaun kar paya h madad in ishq ke bimaro ki
ishq hi bimari inki ishq hi dava inki
ab dekho kis ishq ki taseer m h itna dum
jo dava bane na ki bimari inki

TO BATAO KAB AANA HAI AAPKI MADAD KARNE
:D

ritu

October 1st, 2006, 12:42 AM

ret par sau bar likhenge
lahro ka khauf kisko
ab koi kisi bhi nam se pukare
namo ka khauff kisko
diwane hogaye h hum ab to
jamane ka khauff kisko[ab to
quote=swati;116993]Arz kiya hai..........

Ret par naam likhne se kya faydaa,

Ek leher aayegi sab badal jayega......

Tumne pathar - dil humko keh to diya,

Patharon pe likhoge mitega nahi.......[/quote]

vijay

October 1st, 2006, 12:53 AM

Ye dil ka dard bhi bada bedard hota hai yaaro
Koi lut jaata hai yahan kisi ke aetbaar mein
Woh lakh gunah karen koi bhi nahin poochhta
Hamaari har khata chhap jaati akhbaar mein

vijay

October 1st, 2006, 01:01 AM

Arz kiya hai..........

Ret par naam likhne se kya faydaa,

Ek leher aayegi sab badal jayega......

Tumne pathar - dil humko keh to diya,

Patharon pe likhoge mitega nahi.......

Woh aur honge jo ret par naam likhte hai
Humne to en pathron se dil lagaaya hai
Chal padi hai ye kishtiyan samander mein
Na jaane kitni baar saahil ko aajmaaya hai

nitika

October 1st, 2006, 05:49 PM

kya baat hai yash aap to shayar ban gaye
yeh darde dil abhi tak gaya nahin hai kya
hahahahhahahahah

shamshermalik

October 1st, 2006, 05:59 PM

Woh aur honge jo ret par naam likhte hai
Humne to en pathron se dil lagaaya hai
Chal padi hai ye kishtiyan samander mein
Na jaane kitni baar saahil ko aajmaaya hai

Mana ki lahren mitta deti hain
magar Kitna asan hai ret par naam likhna
khud ko tod usne meri hasti mitta di
Kitna mushkil tha us pathar pe naam likhna

rkumar

October 1st, 2006, 07:43 PM

Mana ki lahren mitta deti hain
magar Kitna asan hai ret par naam likhna
khud ko tod usne meri hasti mitta di
Kitna mushkil tha us pathar pe naam likhna

Arrey bhai;

Ret unglyon ki juban samajhta hai
pathar heron ki juban samajhta hai
pathar pe ek baar jara heere se likhye
aur fir dekhiye, naam kaise mit ta hai

RK^2

swati

October 3rd, 2006, 03:29 PM

Woh aur honge jo ret par naam likhte hai
Humne to en pathron se dil lagaaya hai
Chal padi hai ye kishtiyan samander mein
Na jaane kitni baar saahil ko aajmaaya hai
wow yaar apne to humein bhi maaf kar diya
well done

swati

October 3rd, 2006, 03:34 PM

are yaar ye baar- baar ret pathar ret - pathar mat karo yaar ab jyada ho raha hai
:(

yashbeniwal

October 4th, 2006, 09:55 AM

"Dard se dosti ho gayi hain doston
Zindagi bedard ho gayi hain doston,
Kya hua jo jal gaya aashiyaa hamara
Magar dur tak roshni ho gayi hain doston."

swati

October 4th, 2006, 12:27 PM

DUA MAANGI THI EK AASHIYANE KI ,
CHAL PADI AANDHIYAN ZAMAANE KI,
MERA GAM KOI NA SAMAJH PAAYA ,
KI MUJHE AADAT HAI MUSKURAANE KI...:)

sejwaldeepak

October 4th, 2006, 12:35 PM

swati reply to ur last one... lil funny pls don't mind.

Fuunk dalo uss jamane ko,
Jisne tod diya aashiyane ko,
Gar samjhta kisi ka dard koi,
Yun na muskarata door khada koi.

sparsh

October 4th, 2006, 12:43 PM

swati reply to ur last one... lil funny pls don't mind.

Fuunk dalo uss jamane ko,
Jisne tod diya aashiyane ko,
Gar samjhta kisi ka dard koi,
Yun na muskarata door khada koi.

chal padi hai kashtiyaan samandar, door hai kinaraa
in maajoon se pooch lena, kya haal hai hamara
ab hawaein kareingi, roshiniyon ka faisla
jis diye main jaan hogi, woh diya reh jayega

vijay

October 4th, 2006, 05:36 PM

DUA MAANGI THI EK AASHIYANE KI ,
CHAL PADI AANDHIYAN ZAMAANE KI,
MERA GAM KOI NA SAMAJH PAAYA ,
KI MUJHE AADAT HAI MUSKURAANE KI...:)

Kisi ke liye dua mangi aur unhe yaad bhi kiya
Khamoshi se dil mein koi armaan paltaa raha
Bhujh gayi tamaam roshniyaan aandhiyo mein
Bus ek unki mohabbat kaa chiraag jaltaa raha

swati

October 5th, 2006, 03:56 PM

good one yaar:)

mothsara1st

October 5th, 2006, 07:08 PM

SUJEET JI KYON BADNAAM KAR RAHE HO ! Janaab Humne Aapko Pakdaa Hi Kab Tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YE TO PEHLI BAAT KA REPLY THA AB DOOSRI BAAT KA REPLY YE HAI..................

KI AB Aap Keh Rahe Ho To HUM Maan Lete Hain.........
Chalo Aao Dono Kisi Aur Ki "help" Karte Hain
Haan...yehi sahi rahega ....wo kya kahte hain aise mauke par ke sanp bhi mar gaya aur lathi bhi nahin tutegi................good

mothsara1st

October 5th, 2006, 07:12 PM

Bechaini ya samet ke sare zaha ki,
Jab kuch n ban saka to mera dil bana diya

ek aur hai
jab bhi main khud ko samjhaooN, tu mera nahi hai,
dil mein koi cheekh uthta hai, nahi aisa nahi hai,
kab utarta hai koi dil mein utar jaane ke baad,
ki is gali ke doosri jaanib koi aur raasta nahi hai.

swati

October 6th, 2006, 12:32 PM

Haan...yehi sahi rahega ....wo kya kahte hain aise mauke par ke sanp bhi mar gaya aur lathi bhi nahin tutegi................good
haan bilkul theek kaha aapne:)

swati

October 6th, 2006, 12:35 PM

swati

October 6th, 2006, 12:44 PM

Ye dil ka dard bhi bada bedard hota hai yaaro
Koi lut jaata hai yahan kisi ke aetbaar mein
Woh lakh gunah karen koi bhi nahin poochhta
Hamaari har khata chhap jaati akhbaar mein

akse khushboo hoon bikharne se na roke koi,
gar bikhar jaun to na samete koi.............

yahi soch ke ghabra jaati hoon mehfil mein,
mere chehre pe tera naam na padhle koi.....

vijay

October 6th, 2006, 05:39 PM

akse khushboo hoon bikharne se na roke koi,
gar bikhar jaun to na samete koi.............

yahi soch ke ghabra jaati hoon mehfil mein,
mere chehre pe tera naam na padhle koi.....

khushboo se Mahakate hue ek taaza jhonke ki tarah
Aate hai jab woh mehfil mein to dhadkan ruk jaati hai
Kaise jaan paayega koi ki kaun basa hai aakhon mein
Woh palke pal bhar ke liye uthate hai fir jhuk jaati hai

rakeshsehrawat

October 7th, 2006, 09:03 AM

Sham Hote Hi Charago Ko Bujha Deta Hoon Mein

Ye Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Mein Jalne K Liye

swati

October 7th, 2006, 04:03 PM

meri zindgi ke 2-4 din aur badha dega

kuch to gunah kiye honge jo aisi saja dega........................

kabhi haath pe to kabhi lifafe pe

likhega naam mera aur mita dega................:)

vijay

October 7th, 2006, 07:45 PM

meri zindgi ke 2-4 din aur badha dega

kuch to gunah kiye honge jo aisi saja dega........................

kabhi haath pe to kabhi lifafe pe

likhega naam mera aur mita dega................:)

Zindagi ke din to woh uppar waala likhta hai
Milega wahi jo insaan ki taqdeer mein hoga
Lifafe pe naam likh kar koi kab tak mitayega
Nahin mita sakta jo haath ki lakeer mein hoga

choudharyneelam

October 8th, 2006, 03:45 PM

Zindagi ke din to woh uppar waala likhta hai
Milega wahi jo insaan ki taqdeer mein hoga
Lifafe pe naam likh kar koi kab tak mitayega
Nahin mita sakta jo haath ki lakeer mein hoga

Bilkul sahi kaha tumne...jo taqdeer mein hai wahi milega...and i wish that everyone get the best :)

skarmveer

October 12th, 2006, 11:54 AM

Reat per likhey hua naam kabhee mit-tey nahi,
ye alag baat hai orro ko dikhai nahi datey.

Haath or lifafay per likhay naam mitay nahi jatey,
ya alag baat hai dikhaney main thodi dair lagaigi.

Bhagwan aapko lambee umar dega sabi khushiyo key sath,
yea alag baat hai kee yea dua hamney aapkey liya mangee.

Karmveer

meri zindgi ke 2-4 din aur badha dega

kuch to gunah kiye honge jo aisi saja dega........................

kabhi haath pe to kabhi lifafe pe

likhega naam mera aur mita dega................:)

swati

October 12th, 2006, 01:26 PM

thank u sir :)

swati

October 12th, 2006, 01:29 PM

Zindagi ke din to woh uppar waala likhta hai
Milega wahi jo insaan ki taqdeer mein hoga
Lifafe pe naam likh kar koi kab tak mitayega
Nahin mita sakta jo haath ki lakeer mein hoga

good one again