Lonliness...4 A Companion..

[addy]

LONLINESS


When the sun is sinking below the horizons
My heart is gripped with fear
A feeling of lonliness creeps over me
I see the world deserting me
As I stand alone before the sunset
No hand leads me to the world of light
No voice speaks endearingly to my burning soul
All I feel is serpentine fear
Slowly creep over me
All i hear is the weakend throb
of a slowly dying heart
My hopes, my efforts dash with ruddy drops
On the ground at my feet
All I see around me are the fragments
Of broken dreams,unfulfilled desires
And with them I have to go on again
Into the dark, cold world
Where love or peace I have not found
The very thought of being alone
Fills me with dread..
I don't want lonliness for a companion again
I have had enough and I have to break away
...And as the last rays of the sun
Hide behind the crimson veil
An echoing cry escapes my lips
I only seem to say......
"Take me,Oh,take me with you
Leave me not alone....Again"

[choudharyneelam]

Marvellous!!:)

[ritu]

very nice and hearttouching.keep posting stuff like this.:) :) :)

[cooljat]

hey fauji bhai
very gud composition
sounds like a song's lyrics!
planin to make a slow rock song of it

rock on
Jit

[vdahiya]

eventually we are all alone, the sooner we accept this the better it is

[vijay]

Lonliness teaches us the real facts about life and relationships.

Anyways, nice and touchy composition. :)

[nitika]

arrey yaar kuon jaa raha hai aapko akela chod kar
hahhahahahah