Kuch Qalaam Mohobbat Ke Naam

[sejwaldeepak]

Ruk si jati hain dhadkane tamaam huzum ki,
Sarakti hain julfein jab tere shano se.

Jhuk si jati hain ye palkein aapki,
Jikr sunte ho bhari bajm jab apne deewano se.

[choudharyneelam]

Good start Deepak...ab wait karti hun baakiyon ka ki aake apne apne sunhare shabd likhen:)

[sejwaldeepak]

Neelam mere tei thara dukh dekhya na gaya.. is mare yo dhaga piro diya mohobbat ke phool mein.:)

Dekho ibb kis kis terah ke khubsurat phool aaweinge is dhage mein.:)

Ek aur phool dun...

Badalna nahi aata hame mausam ki terah,
Har ik rut mein tera intezaar karte hain.

Na sameit sakoge jise Qayamat tak,
Kasam se tumhe itna pyar karte hain.

[choudharyneelam]

Deepak ab to maine Rajendra Sir aur Karmveer dono ko bol diya...hope ki wo bhi jaroor kuch likhenge...aur bahaut bahaut shukriya aapka itni concerns dikhane ke liye apne members ke liye:) ...ab maja to tab aayega jab Dev Sir, Vijay, Shamsher, Monika, aur jitne bhi acche shayar hain sab aa jaayen to....waiting for them also to be here to make it glamorous:) :)

[rkumar]

wah wah...

hume unkee hansee ne mara
hume unkee berukhi ne mara
kiya kiya ginayen ub yaaro
unke labon ki surkhi ne mara

unki subah ki muskurahat shaam tak khilkar hansee ban gayee
unki subah ki ungdaiyan, shaam tak ubharkar bebasee ban gayee
hum din bahr takte rahe unke mehndi bahre haathon ko
wo hamare dekhte dekhte, shaam tak kisi ki zindgi ban gayee

RK^2

[choudharyneelam]

wah wah...

hume unkee hansee ne mara
hume unkee berukhi ne mara
kiya kiya ginayen ub yaaro
unke labon ki surkhi ne mara

unki subah ki muskurahat shaam tak khilkar hansee ban gayee
unki subah ki ungdaiyan, shaam tak ubharkar bebasee ban gayee
hum din bahr takte rahe unke mehndi bahre haathon ko
wo hamare dekhte dekhte, shaam tak kisi ki zindgi ban gayee

RK^2

Extremely Good Sir....now i can see the happy and smiling faces of everyone writing such beautiful shayaris...keep it going like that:)

[skarmveer]

Bhaut Khoob Sejwal Bhai
Sukria RK Sir,
Thanks Neelam Ji,

Aap sab ne jee Rajji ker diya,

Arey Jatland walo sab khub hanso,
Tum nahi hasogey to hum kanhi or chaley jayegey.

Jivan key dukho say logo ko bachaya jai,
aao milker kisi rotey ko hansaya jaaya.

Karmveer

Extremely Good Sir....now i can see the happy and smiling faces of everyone writing such beautiful shayaris...keep it going like that:)

[choudharyneelam]

Deepak you are great...ek aur khush kar diya tumne..see how happy is Karmveer feeling now...;) :D


one from my side now...this one i stolen from one sweet song..;) ..not my composition....actually deemag main aaya nahin kuch bhi:( ....issliye yahi suno meri taraf se:D ....


kaise kaise hote hain ye dekho dilwaale
dheere se udaate hain ye aankhon ke ujaale
aankhon ka ujaala pardesi le gaya
jaate jaate mitha mitha gum de gaya
jaane anjaane usse pata na chala
moti moti ankhiyon mein aansu de gaya
ek pardesi mera dil le gaya.....;) :D :D

[rkumar]

Deepak you are great...ek aur khush kar diya tumne..see how happy is Karmveer feeling now...;) :D


one from my side now...this one i stolen from one sweet song..;) ..not my composition....actually deemag main aaya nahin kuch bhi:( ....issliye yahi suno meri taraf se:D ....


kaise kaise hote hain ye dekho dilwaale
dheere se udaate hain ye aankhon ke ujaale
aankhon ka ujaala pardesi le gaya
jaate jaate mitha mitha gum de gaya
jaane anjaane usse pata na chala
moti moti ankhiyon mein aansu de gaya
ek pardesi mera dil le gaya.....;) :D :D

umm..

wo pardeshi kaun thaa
kuch bola, ya maun thaa

jate jate wo bas dil le gaya
ya fir dil ke badle, dil de gaya

dekhiye kahin uska rumaal gira hoga
rumal ke oopar kuch likha bhi hoga
nahi kuch likha to aansu ponch lijiye
naak saaf karke, rumal fenk dijiye

RK^2

[shamshermalik]

umm..

wo pardeshi kaun thaa
kuch bola, ya maun thaa

jate jate wo bas dil le gaya
ya fir dil ke badle, dil de gaya

dekhiye kahin uska rumaal gira hoga
rumal ke oopar kuch likha bhi hoga
nahi kuch likha to aansu ponch lijiye
naak saaf karke, rumal fenk dijiye

RK^2

Ha ha ha aha aha ha ahaa haa aha aha haa aha haa aha aha aha ahaaha ahah ahaa aha aha aha ahaa aha aha aaha anhaaahnaaha aha ahaa aha aha aha aha aha aha

[swati]

na kitaabon mein mila na rishaalon(magazine) mein
hume sukh bhi mila to bus khayalon mein
meri parchhai ne bhi mujhse ye keh diya
ki main tera saath to dungi magar ujaalon mein!:)

[choudharyneelam]

umm..

wo pardeshi kaun thaa
kuch bola, ya maun thaa

jate jate wo bas dil le gaya
ya fir dil ke badle, dil de gaya

dekhiye kahin uska rumaal gira hoga
rumal ke oopar kuch likha bhi hoga
nahi kuch likha to aansu ponch lijiye
naak saaf karke, rumal fenk dijiye

RK^2


Wo aaya aur milke chala gaya
Deke sapno ki duniya dil mera le gaya
Baithi hun uske hi intezaar mein
Wo aayega ek din kuch aisa mujhse kah gaya


Itne puraane andaaz ka nahin mera pardesi
Jo kuch likh ke kahin gira de apna rumaal
Likhwaayega ek din kagaz pe hum dono ka naam
Aur aapko bhi phir dega nyota hai uska khayaal:)

[choudharyneelam]

na kitaabon mein mila na rishaalon(magazine) mein
hume sukh bhi mila to bus khayalon mein
meri parchhai ne bhi mujhse ye keh diya
ki main tera saath to dungi magar ujaalon mein!:)

nice one:)

[rkumar]

Wo aaya aur milke chala gaya
Deke sapno ki duniya dil mera le gaya
Baithi hun uske hi intezaar mein
Wo aayega ek din kuch aisa mujhse kah gaya


Itne puraane andaaz ka nahin mera pardesi
Jo kuch likh ke kahin gira de apna rumaal
Likhwaayega ek din kagaz pe hum dono ka naam
Aur aapko bhi phir dega nyota hai uska khayaal:)

hahahaha...good one... magar;

yen pardeshi bade be-iman hote hain
katl karke jakhmon se anjan hote hain
intzar me unki butt bane dekha hai kitne
button ko kaun samjhaye, wo be-jan hote hain.

RK^2

[choudharyneelam]

hahahaha...good one... magar;

yen pardeshi bade be-iman hote hain
katl karke jakhmon se anjan hote hain
intzar me unki butt bane dekha hai kitne
button ko kaun samjhaye, wo be-jan hote hain.

RK^2


Ye to waqt batayega ki pardesi kaise hote hain
Kitno ko jakhmi kar kitne ilzaam sar pe lete hain
Intezaar karne ka matlab butt banna nahin
Ye intezaar aadmi kya jaane, jo intezaar karwate hain

[rkumar]

.....
Ye intezaar aadmi kya jaane, jo intezaar karwate hain


hahhaaa... kiya point mara Neelam ji.....bahut khoob....
Masa-allah aap bhi achchee khasi shayraa hain....

RK^2

[choudharyneelam]

hahhaaa... kiya point mara Neelam ji.....bahut khoob....
Masa-allah aap bhi achchee khasi shayraa hain....

RK^2


RK Sir

I'm not any shayar but just give the reply what i feel and think....so this is all i do....i don't know shayari....but would like to learn it, so i'll try my best to learn it....aur agar mere jawabon mein hi aap sab aisa kuch dekhte hain to i think shayari is very simple....kyunki ye mere sirf jawab hain...bas reply karne ka style different hai...:)

Regards
Neelam

[rkumar]

RK Sir

I'm not any shayar but just give the reply what i feel and think....so this is all i do....i don't know shayari....but would like to learn it, so i'll try my best to learn it....aur agar mere jawabon mein hi aap sab aisa kuch dekhte hain to i think shayari is very simple....kyunki ye mere sirf jawab hain...bas reply karne ka style different hai...:)

Regards
Neelam

U are on right track...just keep writing what ever comes to your mind...

RK^2

[choudharyneelam]

U are on right track...just keep writing what ever comes to your mind...

RK^2

Sir, say like that.....''just keep writing whatever comes in your" heart:D ...as i put my feelings here....baaten banani nahin aati mujhe....issliye jo mann mein hota hai wo prakat hota hai mere replies mein :D ...whether it is of serious kind or something like this that i'm writing nowadays.:)

[sejwaldeepak]

Neelam tu bhi chupi rustam sei.. khamakha mhara ullu khinch ri hai .. koi na laagi reh...le ek aur phool dun hun tanne...:)


Ye surkh hont Gulaab se, badan makhmali, nazaron se sharab chalakti hai,
Thodi to pila de inse ki ab hosh khone ko jee chahta hai,

Laut aata hun tere pehlu mein majboor hokar,
Ab to har waqt madhosh hone ko jee chahta hai,

Na kar rukhsat be-abaru karke apni mehfil sei,
Ke ab to chand-taare teri maang mein sajane ko jee chahta hai,

Bahut badnaam tere ishk ne kar diya hai Zalim,
Tu aaye mere aagosh mein Kya tera Jee nahi chahta hai ???

[swati]

KHUDA KE KARISHME MEIN GAR RAT NA HOTI
TO KHWABON MEIN BHI UNSE MULAKAT NA HOTI
YUN TO BADI HASRAT SE DEKHTE HAIN WO HUMEIN
KYA KARE KE AGAR BAAT NAHI HOTI:)

[mothsara1st]

Neelam tu bhi chupi rustam sei.. khamakha mhara ullu khinch ri hai .. koi na laagi reh...le ek aur phool dun hun tanne...:)


Ye surkh hont Gulaab se, badan makhmali, nazaron se sharab chalakti hai,
Thodi to pila de inse ki ab hosh khone ko jee chahta hai,

Laut aata hun tere pehlu mein majboor hokar,
Ab to har waqt madhosh hone ko jee chahta hai,

Na kar rukhsat be-abaru karke apni mehfil sei,
Ke ab to chand-taare teri maang mein sajane ko jee chahta hai,

Bahut badnaam tere ishk ne kar diya hai Zalim,
Tu aaye mere aagosh mein Kya tera Jee nahi chahta hai ???

GADAR
AshkoN ko humne kayi baar roka,
phir bhi na jane kyoN ankheN dhoka de gayi,
Bharosa to tha hameiN apne aap par magar,
unka zikr aate hi naa jane kyoN palkeN nam ho gayi.

[choudharyneelam]

Neelam tu bhi chupi rustam sei.. khamakha mhara ullu khinch ri hai .. koi na laagi reh...le ek aur phool dun hun tanne...:)


Ye surkh hont Gulaab se, badan makhmali, nazaron se sharab chalakti hai,
Thodi to pila de inse ki ab hosh khone ko jee chahta hai,

Laut aata hun tere pehlu mein majboor hokar,
Ab to har waqt madhosh hone ko jee chahta hai,

Na kar rukhsat be-abaru karke apni mehfil sei,
Ke ab to chand-taare teri maang mein sajane ko jee chahta hai,

Bahut badnaam tere ishk ne kar diya hai Zalim,
Tu aaye mere aagosh mein Kya tera Jee nahi chahta hai ???



hehehe..aisi hi hun main...ye lo ab padho meri daastaan...aur tumhara phool bhi accha hai

Kisi ki saadgi pe mera dil aaya hai
Uske dil mein apna aashiyan banane ko jee chahta hai

Wo aaye to ek baar meri maang sajaane
Uske nagar mein khushi se jhumne ko jee chahta hai

Khuli hai meri baahein uske liye
Apni baahon mein usko bharne ko jee chahta hai

Naa jaane kab aayega wo thaamne mera haath
Kya uska bhi mere sang har lamha gujaarne ko jee nahi chahta hai?????

[rkumar]

hehehe..aisi hi hun main...ye lo ab padho meri daastaan...aur tumhara phool bhi accha hai

Kisi ki saadgi pe mera dil aaya hai
Uske dil mein apna aashiyan banane ko jee chahta hai

Wo aaye to ek baar meri maang sajaane
Uske nagar mein khushi se jhumne ko jee chahta hai

Khuli hai meri baahein uske liye
Apni baahon mein usko bharne ko jee chahta hai

Naa jaane kab aayega wo thaamne mera haath
Kya uska bhi mere sang har lamha gujaarne ko jee nahi chahta hai?????


Galihara saker lijiye, wo aata hi hoga
Nazren utal lijiye, wo aata hi hoga

unke dil se kheliye ya fir aashiyana baniye
dhadakte dil ki lekar, wo aata hi hoga

failakar rakhna tum daman ko upne,
piar ka nazrana, wo lekar ataa hi hoga

gile sikwon ke kliye to sari umar padi hai
muskura ke milna, bas wo aata hi hoga.

RK^2

[sejwaldeepak]

hehehe..aisi hi hun main...ye lo ab padho meri daastaan...aur tumhara phool bhi accha hai

Kisi ki saadgi pe mera dil aaya hai
Uske dil mein apna aashiyan banane ko jee chahta hai

Wo aaye to ek baar meri maang sajaane
Uske nagar mein khushi se jhumne ko jee chahta hai

Khuli hai meri baahein uske liye
Apni baahon mein usko bharne ko jee chahta hai

Naa jaane kab aayega wo thaamne mera haath
Kya uska bhi mere sang har lamha gujaarne ko jee nahi chahta hai?????



Mujhko khinch layi mehak tere jism ki,
Teri Zulfon ke saye mein gujre waqt ye jee chahta hai.

Mila noor meri ruh ko chukar tera daaman,
Teri god mein rakh kar sir sone ko ye jee chahta hai.

Samayi rehti hai teri soorat har waqt Zahan mein mere,
Man ke mandir mein sajakar tujhe pujne ko ye jee chahta hai.

Tassavur mein chhai hai is kadar tu , tera intezaar na seh sakunga,
Beete har pal har lamha teri bahon mein mera ye jee chahta hai.

[choudharyneelam]

Galihara saker lijiye, wo aata hi hoga
Nazren utal lijiye, wo aata hi hoga

unke dil se kheliye ya fir aashiyana baniye
dhadakte dil ki lekar, wo aata hi hoga

failakar rakhna tum daman ko upne,
piar ka nazrana, wo lekar ataa hi hoga

gile sikwon ke kliye to sari umar padi hai
muskura ke milna, bas wo aata hi hoga.

RK^2

Sir aap bhi bade samajhdar ho...ek baar to majak udaate ho kisi ke intezaar ka aur dusre pal mein uske saath hote ho...hahhahahaha...anyway your this reply is good :)

Regards
Neelam

[choudharyneelam]

Mujhko khinch layi mehak tere jism ki,
Teri Zulfon ke saye mein gujre waqt ye jee chahta hai.

Mila noor meri ruh ko chukar tera daaman,
Teri god mein rakh kar sir sone ko ye jee chahta hai.

Samayi rehti hai teri soorat har waqt Zahan mein mere,
Man ke mandir mein sajakar tujhe pujne ko ye jee chahta hai.

Tassavur mein chhai hai is kadar tu , tera intezaar na seh sakunga,
Beete har pal har lamha teri bahon mein mera ye jee chahta hai.



O Deepak, thahar jaao yahin pe....hahahaha...ye saari shayari hum sabko suna doge to jo aayegi usse kya sunaoge....;) :D ....kahin phir ladai naa ho jaaye ki pata nahin kis ladki ko deemag mein rakh ke likhte the....hahahahahaha....issliye pahle ab uska naam likho uske baad hi aage kuch likhna uske liye:D :D :D :D

[sejwaldeepak]

ke ho gya neelam ji, yar main to aapki shayari ka reply de raha tha bas aur koi intention nahi hai.. wase main bhi yahi soch raha tha ki hum dono shuru to ho gaye hain kahin aur sab kuch aur hi matlab na nikal lein.. hahhaha:D

wase chinta ki koi bat nahi tum shayari enjoy karo aur ase hi reply deti rAHO .. meri teraf se line clear hai , mere dimag mein koi ladki nahi main to bas shayari lik h raha hun, by the way shyad tumhe pata nahi ki mera to pehlam hi kalyan ho liya hai . ghar aaleyan ne kalesh kat diya mera tei ghana hi fudkan laag rhya tha main. hahahaha.. meri gazal tei gharan bethi sei. main konya panga leta ibb choriyan tei..pehlam bahut sari gazal thi ibb tei ek hi sei bas.:(

[choudharyneelam]

ke ho gya neelam ji, yar main to aapki shayari ka reply de raha tha bas aur koi intention nahi hai.. wase main bhi yahi soch raha tha ki hum dono shuru to ho gaye hain kahin aur sab kuch aur hi matlab na nikal lein.. hahhaha:D

wase chinta ki koi bat nahi tum shayari enjoy karo aur ase hi reply deti rAHO .. meri teraf se line clear hai , mere dimag mein koi ladki nahi main to bas shayari lik h raha hun, by the way shyad tumhe pata nahi ki mera to pehlam hi kalyan ho liya hai . ghar aaleyan ne kalesh kat diya mera tei ghana hi fudkan laag rhya tha main. hahahaha.. meri gazal tei gharan bethi sei. main konya panga leta ibb choriyan tei..pehlam bahut sari gazal thi ibb tei ek hi sei bas.:(


arrey baat aise nahin thi...even i know that a very different person would like to be with me...hehehehe...and you are not that unlucky...;) ...wo koi aur hi hai jo mujhe jhel lega :D.....mujhe bhi nahin pata kahan chhipa baitha hai mujhse darta....hahahaha....haan people can think and start discussing some strange and useless talks if they don't know us...but inn baton ki chinta nahin karni chahiye....and nice to know that your shayari is with you now :) .....aur uss ek ghazal ke hone pe munh kyun latkaya....arrey sabse acchi to wahi ghazal hai...so always have big grin on your face :D ....and i know that your are just writing your shayari...so carry on :)

[swati]

arrey baat aise nahin thi...even i know that a very different person would like to be with me...hehehehe...and you are not that unlucky...;) ...wo koi aur hi hai jo mujhe jhel lega :D.....mujhe bhi nahin pata kahan chhipa baitha hai mujhse darta....hahahaha....haan people can think and start discussing some strange and useless talks if they don't know us...but inn baton ki chinta nahin karni chahiye....and nice to know that your shayari is with you now :) .....aur uss ek ghazal ke hone pe munh kyun latkaya....arrey sabse acchi to wahi ghazal hai...so always have big grin on your face :D ....and i know that your are just writing your shayari...so carry on :)


ey bobo yahan to dher gajab ka topic ched diya tamne:D

[choudharyneelam]

ey bobo yahan to dher gajab ka topic ched diya tamne:D


hahahaha.....tum itna accha likhti ho ki mujhe jawab dene ko shabd hi nahin milte...waise abhi to seekh rahi hun kuch kuch likhna...:D ...to tum aur likho ab :)

[choudharyneelam]

Galihara saker lijiye, wo aata hi hoga
Nazren utal lijiye, wo aata hi hoga

unke dil se kheliye ya fir aashiyana baniye
dhadakte dil ki lekar, wo aata hi hoga

failakar rakhna tum daman ko upne,
piar ka nazrana, wo lekar ataa hi hoga

gile sikwon ke kliye to sari umar padi hai
muskura ke milna, bas wo aata hi hoga.

RK^2

Uski hi raah dekh rahi hun, wo aati hi hoga
Apne sar pe sehra baandh, wo aata hi hoga

Sab rishtedar kahde hain dwar pe swaagat ko unke
Baaraat leke ghodi pe sawar hoke wo aata hi hoga

Tayyar khadi hain meri bahnen bhi
Neem jhadayi lengi usse, wo ab aata hi hoga

Jute chuppayegi meri behan aur uski sakhiyan
Wo woodland ya red chief ke jute pahan ke aata hi hoga:D

Bhai bhi saja raha hai mandap apni bahan ka
Pandit baitha diya hai, ab jaldi wo aata hi hoga

Babul ki aakhon se chalak rahen hain pyaar ke aansu
Unki phool si beti ko lejane unse, wo aata hi hoga:)

[sejwaldeepak]

hahha neelam nothing like that yar i m very much happy with my gazal:)

wo to bas kuch extra fun to hona hi chahiye na life mein..just kiddin. u r really such a sweet gal u will find a wonder fool ............:D jo tumhe jhel sake:D hahhaha

[vijay]

Uski hi raah dekh rahi hun, wo aati hi hoga
Apne sar pe sehra baandh, wo aata hi hoga

Sab rishtedar kahde hain dwar pe swaagat ko unke
Baaraat leke ghodi pe sawar hoke wo aata hi hoga

Tayyar khadi hain meri bahnen bhi
Neem jhadayi lengi usse, wo ab aata hi hoga

Jute chuppayegi meri behan aur uski sakhiyan
Wo woodland ya red chief ke jute pahan ke aata hi hoga:D

Bhai bhi saja raha hai mandap apni bahan ka
Pandit baitha diya hai, ab jaldi wo aata hi hoga

Babul ki aakhon se chalak rahen hain pyaar ke aansu
Unki phool si beti ko lejane unse, wo aata hi hoga:)


Very Nice, Neelam ! :)

[skarmveer]

Bhai Deepak,

"Dil hai key manta nahi"
"Ye dil mangey more"

Karmveer Chahal
hahha neelam nothing like that yar i m very much happy with my gazal:)

wo to bas kuch extra fun to hona hi chahiye na life mein..just kiddin. u r really such a sweet gal u will find a wonder fool ............:D jo tumhe jhel sake:D hahhaha

[skarmveer]

Bahut Sunder likha hai.

Karmveer Chahal

Uski hi raah dekh rahi hun, wo aati hi hoga
Apne sar pe sehra baandh, wo aata hi hoga

Sab rishtedar kahde hain dwar pe swaagat ko unke
Baaraat leke ghodi pe sawar hoke wo aata hi hoga

Tayyar khadi hain meri bahnen bhi
Neem jhadayi lengi usse, wo ab aata hi hoga

Jute chuppayegi meri behan aur uski sakhiyan
Wo woodland ya red chief ke jute pahan ke aata hi hoga:D

Bhai bhi saja raha hai mandap apni bahan ka
Pandit baitha diya hai, ab jaldi wo aata hi hoga

Babul ki aakhon se chalak rahen hain pyaar ke aansu
Unki phool si beti ko lejane unse, wo aata hi hoga:)

[rkumar]

[QUOTE=choudharyneelam;118061]Uski hi raah dekh rahi hun, wo aati hi hoga
Apne sar pe sehra baandh, wo aata hi hoga

Sab rishtedar kahde hain dwar pe swaagat ko unke
Baaraat leke ghodi pe sawar hoke wo aata hi hoga

Tayyar khadi hain meri bahnen bhi
Neem jhadayi lengi usse, wo ab aata hi hoga..............
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Neelam u made me now very emotional. Here is the version of a father;

Dekh aaj hamari gudiya ki shaadi ho rahee hai
tujhe yaad kar karke wo kai din se ro rahee hai

sabhi aa gaye hain, magar bas ek tu nahi hai
shadi ke riti riwazon ki, mujhe khabar nahi hai

Tere bhaiyon se bhat kaun lega, tere jagah kaun lega
kuch bhi to batakar nahi gayee , ne jane aaj kiya hoga

Teri badi yaad aa rahee hai, teri kami khaa rahee hai
bas thodi der me teri beti ki barat aa rahee hai

Kash ki tum aaj hotee, samdhan ko gale lagati
aur fir samdhi ke kurte par thodi si haldi lagati

hamari Beti ke feron par, khali hogee teri jagah
karna hoga mujhe hi sab kuch bas kisi tarah

Bidai ki soch soch kar bahut dar lag raha hai
kal teri ek aur nishani se ghar khali ho raha hai

teri tarah wo bhi mujhe ub bhool jayegee
ghar ki har cheej ko bas dhool khaayegee

RK^2

[choudharyneelam]

Neelam u made me now very emotional. Here is the version of a father;

Dekh aaj hamari gudiya ki shaadi ho rahee hai
tujhe yaad kar karke wo kai din se ro rahee hai

.................................................. ..........

teri tarah wo bhi mujhe ub bhool jayegee
ghar ki har cheej ko bas dhool khaayegee

RK^2

Even you too made me emotional now...Now listen what a daughter says to her Father....

Nahin papa aap kabhi ye na sochna ki
Paraayi hoke aapse ye aapko bhul jaayegi

Ye to chup chup ke sabse kisi kamre mein
Baith yaad karke aapko kai baar royegi

Maa ki di hui har seekh jeevan ki
Yaad rakhegi aur har bandhan ko nibhayegi

Jab bhi maa ki yaad aapko aaye
Aapki beti aapke paas chali aayegi

Lakin kabhi rona naa yaad karke beete pal ko
Warna ye aapki chinta leke aage ghar jaayegi

Aap laakh chhupao apne aansu kisi se
Magar ye beti ek pal mein pahchan jaayegi

Bhai rah jaayega peeche mere jaane ke baad
Karwa ke uske phere ek nayi khushi ghar mein aayegi

Bhool jaaoge aap sab rulane waale wo pal jab
Hansti hui apne parivaar ke sang aapki laadli ghar aayegi :)

[choudharyneelam]

Mujhko khinch layi mehak tere jism ki,
Teri Zulfon ke saye mein gujre waqt ye jee chahta hai.
.............................................

Tassavur mein chhai hai is kadar tu , tera intezaar na seh sakunga,
Beete har pal har lamha teri bahon mein mera ye jee chahta hai.



baat to sahi bolte ho..thora majak bhi hona hi chahiye....and thanks for your sweet wishes..aur agar wo sach mein fool hua ;) to use phool main bana dungi....:D ...to ab ye lo tumhari uss shayari ka jawab....

Khuli hain meri zulfen kabse uske liye
Aae to ek baar wo, inn zulfon tale chupane ko jee chahta hai

Har aur jaati hai meri nazar usko dhundti hui, kab aayega wo
Apni gaud mein sar rakhwa halke haathon se sahlaane ko jee chahta hai

Mere bhi mann mein basi hai uski surat har pal
Mujhpe har haq ab usko dene ko jee chahta hai

Intezaar to maine kiya hai uska, aur kitna karwayega
Ab to har pal uss sang zindagi beetane ko jee chahta hai

[choudharyneelam]

A Special Thanks to all the members for priasing me every moment...:) :) :) :) :)

[vijay]

Kisi ki julfon mein khookar duniyan ko bhool jaayen
En ghanghor ghataaon mein doobne ko jee chaahta hai

Ye pyasi nighahen jo dhoondhti hai dil ka sahara koi
Kisi ke aanchal mein aaj sar chhupaane ko jee chaahta hai

Jiski surat ko kabse dil mein basaaye baithe hain hum
Aaj unke dil par apna haq jataane ko jee chaahta hai

Intezaar to duniyan karti aai hai apni mohabbat paane ko
Kisi naznee ko 'Vijay' ki zindagi bataane ka jee kartaa hai

[sejwaldeepak]

baat to sahi bolte ho..thora majak bhi hona hi chahiye....and thanks for your sweet wishes..aur agar wo sach mein fool hua ;) to use phool main bana dungi....:D ...to ab ye lo tumhari uss shayari ka jawab....

Khuli hain meri zulfen kabse uske liye
Aae to ek baar wo, inn zulfon tale chupane ko jee chahta hai

Har aur jaati hai meri nazar usko dhundti hui, kab aayega wo
Apni gaud mein sar rakhwa halke haathon se sahlaane ko jee chahta hai

Mere bhi mann mein basi hai uski surat har pal
Mujhpe har haq ab usko dene ko jee chahta hai

Intezaar to maine kiya hai uska, aur kitna karwayega
Ab to har pal uss sang zindagi beetane ko jee chahta hai



one more!!!! phool for a beautifool....:D


Talashta har shaksh hai mere wajood ko,
Main yunhi dooba rahun jaam mein tere ishk ke ye jee chahta hai,

Mitakar khood apni hasti ko tujh per,
Teri sanson mein pahaan pa lun ye jee chahta hai.

[swati]

bobo jib tu kahe at likhna to padei hai !!!!!!1111111:D
ke karun control ni hotta
;)

[choudharyneelam]

bobo jib tu kahe at likhna to padei hai !!!!!!1111111:D
ke karun control ni hotta
;)

Swati you are very sweet, loving:) ...abki baar bhi kuch likhna tha naa...will be waiting for more here from your side :) :)

[choudharyneelam]

Kisi ki julfon mein khookar duniyan ko bhool jaayen
En ghanghor ghataaon mein doobne ko jee chaahta hai
.........................


Intezaar to duniyan karti aai hai apni mohabbat paane ko
Kisi naznee ko 'Vijay' ki zindagi bataane ka jee kartaa hai

You also started very nicely....:)

Kahte hain sab duniya badi rangeen hai
Aaj khushi ke har rang mein rangne ko jee chahta hai

Meri ye aankhen kabse sapne dekh rahi hain
Aake har sapna sajaaye wo mera ye jee chahta hai

Har kisi ke dil mein basti hai kisi na kisi ki surat
Mere mann mein jo chhipi hai sabko dikhane ko jee chahta hai

Intezaar ki ghadi to ek din rukegi mere liye bhi jaake kahin
Haath pakad ke uska zindagi ka safar pura karne ko jee chahta hai

[choudharyneelam]

one more!!!! phool for a beautifool....:D


Talashta har shaksh hai mere wajood ko,
Main yunhi dooba rahun jaam mein tere ishk ke ye jee chahta hai,

Mitakar khood apni hasti ko tujh per,
Teri sanson mein pahaan pa lun ye jee chahta hai.


oye kya bole tum...kabhi kisi fool ki beauty dekhi hai ya kabhi kisi beauty ko fool suna hai..ab apni galtiko theek karo:D ...haan tumhare phool kaafi sunder aur mahakate hue hain....:)

Dhunda na iss dil ne kisi ko kabhi, magar wo jab aaya saamne
Tabse dekh ke usko usme sama jaaun ab to mera ye jee chahta hai

Ek pal jo ho wo saath mere ye dil kisi soch mein doob jata hai
Bas uski baahon ke sahare baith har sunder pal dekhne ko jee chahta hai

Khelun main lehron se uske saath kisi samander ke kinaare
Aur phir jaayen hum long drive pe kahin aisa kuch mera jee chahta hai:D :D :D :D :D

[choudharyneelam]

Jiske haathon ki lakeeron mein thi main hi basi
Ab papa ke kahne pe main uske sang chali jaaungi


Ab tak main tum sabke saath hansi boli
Ab usko apni wo sadi shayari sunaungi:D


Kisi din rakhna tum sab phir se jaat meet
Aur main uss sang sabse milne chali aaungi


Jo mili mujhe phursat kabhi apni duniya se
To tumse bhi do chaar baat kar jaaungi :)


Dear friends,


Now this is my last shayari.....aur nahin jhelni padengi ab meri taraf se kisi ko bhi;) :D ......ab bas...sirf enjoy karungi sabki great poetries ko aur praises aate rahenge meri taraf se......now you all continue ahead so that i can read and enjoy:)


And thanks a lot to all those who always praised me and encouraged me to write something...i really liked the company of every person here...all are nice and good in one or the other sense.....GOD BLESS YOU ALL!!...:) .....now pls no ques. and no reply to this post as i just wanna stop my poetries here only....wanna just enjoy others posts:) :) .


Takecare
with love and regards
Neelam:)

[sejwaldeepak]

Neelam ek kahawat to tane suni hogi , khubsurat ladkiyon mein dimag nahi hota...
all girls sorry pls don't mind..:)

to phool for beautifool kehna kuch galat to nahi tha :D :D

anyway , magar aapki ye baat pasand nahi aayi, is terah mehfil se chale jana to baki sabki tohin hogi..janab. mujhe nahi lagta aapki ye baat kisi ko pasand aayegi..khair koi kar hi kya sakta hai siwai iske ke yahan phir sei.. rone dhone wali shayari shuru karenge sab...:o

[swati]

le bobo tu keh ri at teri liya 2-4 line likh hi doon..............
DIKO LIKHA TO MAINEI HAI YO PAR CHEPKE LIKHA...:D

JO RAHE SABKE LABON PAR US HANSI KO DHUNDHIYE...
BANT SAKE SABKE GHARON MEIN US KHUSHI KO DHUNDHIYE....


KAAM MUSHKIL HAI PAR KEH RAHI HOON AAPSE..
HO SAKE TO BHEED MEIN SE KOI AADMI DHUNDHIYE.............:)

[swati]

phool lekar ham gaye phool kar usne kaha
phool ki kya jarurat thi tum to khud hi ek "FOOL" HO:D :D

[shamshermalik]

phool lekar ham gaye phool kar usne kaha
phool ki kya jarurat thi tum to khud hi ek "FOOL" HO:D :D

Shayad FOOL vo bhi kam naa tha, Jo aisa khyal aaya
Esliye phool ko dekhkar hi vo FOOL ko pahchan paya..:D :D

[choudharyneelam]

Neelam ek kahawat to tane suni hogi , khubsurat ladkiyon mein dimag nahi hota...
all girls sorry pls don't mind..:)

to phool for beautifool kehna kuch galat to nahi tha :D :D

anyway , magar aapki ye baat pasand nahi aayi, is terah mehfil se chale jana to baki sabki tohin hogi..janab. mujhe nahi lagta aapki ye baat kisi ko pasand aayegi..khair koi kar hi kya sakta hai siwai iske ke yahan phir sei.. rone dhone wali shayari shuru karenge sab...:o


Deepak i know ki ladki kaisi bhi ho deemag kam hota hai..and in my case it is totally gone...kya karun:( ..jab bat raha tha tab late ho gayi pahaunchne mein...and no problem you can call me the way you like:D ..i'll never mind it :) ....actually what happens with me i take immediate steps...yahi galti baar baar karti hun...aur haan pls aap sab koi bhi rone dhone wali shayari nahin likhoge....i feel happy to see smile on everyone's face...baaki kuch bhi bolo tum sab mujhe....aur haan ye idiotic post karke ek galti to ki but ab nahin karungi...i'll be here with you all forever:) ...hope my mood get changed soon and i'll also come out with my happy feelings again...till then you all pls continue with your great poetries:)

with love and regards
Neelam is Back :)

[choudharyneelam]

le bobo tu keh ri at teri liya 2-4 line likh hi doon..............
DIKO LIKHA TO MAINEI HAI YO PAR CHEPKE LIKHA...:D

JO RAHE SABKE LABON PAR US HANSI KO DHUNDHIYE...
BANT SAKE SABKE GHARON MEIN US KHUSHI KO DHUNDHIYE....


KAAM MUSHKIL HAI PAR KEH RAHI HOON AAPSE..
HO SAKE TO BHEED MEIN SE KOI AADMI DHUNDHIYE.............:)

Very sweet dear...love you :)

[sejwaldeepak]

Deepak i know ki ladki kaisi bhi ho deemag kam hota hai..and in my case it is totally gone...kya karun:( ..jab bat raha tha tab late ho gayi pahaunchne mein...and no problem you can call me the way you like:D ..i'll never mind it :) ....actually what happens with me i take immediate steps...yahi galti baar baar karti hun...aur haan pls aap sab koi bhi rone dhone wali shayari nahin likhoge....i feel happy to see smile on everyone's face...baaki kuch bhi bolo tum sab mujhe....aur haan ye idiotic post karke ek galti to ki but ab nahin karungi...i'll be here with you all forever:) ...hope my mood get changed soon and i'll also come out with my happy feelings again...till then you all pls continue with your great poetries:)

with love and regards
Neelam is Back :)


Ibb aagi akal thikane..:D :D

That's like a sweet friend. May God bless you on this Diwali with all his hapiness and lots of Mithais, Patakhe, Dresses and ofcourse lots of paise.:) hahhaa

Keep Writing Dear:)

Chalo isi bat pe ek aur phoolllllllllllllllllll........

Gehra hai bahut ahsaas meri chahat ka,
Tu jo chu de to ek umar mile pyar ko mere.

Ye dua rehti hai har pal khuda sei meri,
Mile Khushiyan jahaan bhar ki mehboob ko mere.

[swati]

Shayad FOOL vo bhi kam naa tha, Jo aisa khyal aaya
Esliye phool ko dekhkar hi vo FOOL ko pahchan paya..:D :D


acha ji aisa hai kya

hamein to pata hi nahi tha

anyways

shukriya:cool:

[choudharyneelam]

Ibb aagi akal thikane..:D :D

That's like a sweet friend. May God bless you on this Diwali with all his hapiness and lots of Mithais, Patakhe, Dresses and ofcourse lots of paise.:) hahhaa

Keep Writing Dear:)

Chalo isi bat pe ek aur phoolllllllllllllllllll........

Gehra hai bahut ahsaas meri chahat ka,
Tu jo chu de to ek umar mile pyar ko mere.

Ye dua rehti hai har pal khuda sei meri,
Mile Khushiyan jahaan bhar ki mehboob ko mere.

Thanks a ton Deepak for all your sweet wishes...God bless you the same :) :) ...aur haan ye phool bhi accha hai...beautifool ise bhi padh ke khush hui:D :D ;)

[sandeepsomu]

vijay bhai badut badiya

her sabd mein zindagi daal di dost....excellant



Jiski surat ko kabse dil mein basaaye baithe hain hum
Aaj unke dil par apna haq jataane ko jee chaahta hai

Intezaar to duniyan karti aai hai apni mohabbat paane ko
Kisi naznee ko 'Vijay' ki zindagi bataane ka jee kartaa hai[/QUOTE]

[vijay]

vijay bhai badut badiya

her sabd mein zindagi daal di dost....excellant



Thanks a lot for the appreciation, Bhai

[deepakchoudhry]

Thanks a lot for the appreciation, Bhai

Vijay,

Ek thakloos (pseudonym) ki kami hai bus...
Varna shayar ho tum bade kaam kay. :)


Deepak

[vijay]

Vijay,

Ek thakloos (pseudonym) ki kami hai bus...
Varna shayar ho tum bade kaam kay. :)


Deepak


Thnaks Deepak Bhai for the suggestion.

My personal thinking is that if a person have something in himself he can make his way without any pseudonym. Talent doesn't need any imaginary name but it speaks by itself.

It's just my passion to write poetry and i don't do that for any recognition. :)

Ye zindagi isi tarah pyar mein beet jaaye to aachhaa
Warna naamwalon ko to ye duniyan badnaam karti hai
:) :) :)

[swati]

Thnaks Deepak Bhai for the suggestion.

My personal thinking is that if a person have something in himself he can make his way without any pseudonym. Talent doesn't need any imaginary name but it speaks by itself.

It's just my passion to write poetry and i don't do that for any recognition. :)

Ye zindagi isi tarah pyar mein beet jaaye to aachhaa
Warna naamwalon ko to ye duniyan badnaam karti hai
:) :) :)


UJALE APNI YAADON KE MERE DIL MEIN HE REHNE DO,
NA JAANE KIS PAL ZINDGI KI SHAAM HO JAAYE..........................

[shamshermalik]

acha ji aisa hai kya

hamein to pata hi nahi tha

anyways

shukriya:cool:


Donot be so serious...all in humor...LOL

[vijay]

UJALE APNI YAADON KE MERE DIL MEIN HE REHNE DO,
NA JAANE KIS PAL ZINDGI KI SHAAM HO JAAYE..........................


Ye yaadon ke pal dil mein basa kar rakhna
Ess chahat ko apne seene se lagakar rakhna
Ye duniyan bahut zaalim hai mere humdum
Khud ko inki buri nazaron se bacha kar rakhna

[choudharyneelam]

le bobo tu keh ri at teri liya 2-4 line likh hi doon..............
DIKO LIKHA TO MAINEI HAI YO PAR CHEPKE LIKHA...:D

JO RAHE SABKE LABON PAR US HANSI KO DHUNDHIYE...
BANT SAKE SABKE GHARON MEIN US KHUSHI KO DHUNDHIYE....


KAAM MUSHKIL HAI PAR KEH RAHI HOON AAPSE..
HO SAKE TO BHEED MEIN SE KOI AADMI DHUNDHIYE.............:)


Apni har muskaan se ye sabke chehre khilaayegi
Baant ke har hanseen pal sabke dil mein bas jaayegi

Apni har mushkil ko asaan ye khud hi karegi
Koi bhi aaye iss nacheez ke liye bas aane ka intezaar karegi

Jo ho gayi fariyaad iski puri kabhi to
Iss duniya ki bheed mein ye sabse khush milegi:) :)

[choudharyneelam]

Gehra hai bahut ahsaas meri chahat ka,
Tu jo chu de to ek umar mile pyar ko mere.

Ye dua rehti hai har pal khuda sei meri,
Mile Khushiyan jahaan bhar ki mehboob ko mere.

Gharayi iss chhote se dil mein bhi hai
Jo koi dekh sake to dekh le

Khushiyan hi khushiyan hain iske paas
Koi ise ek baar apna ke to dekh le

[choudharyneelam]

UJALE APNI YAADON KE MERE DIL MEIN HE REHNE DO,
NA JAANE KIS PAL ZINDGI KI SHAAM HO JAAYE..........................


Har pal yuhin hanste hue jeete rahna
Naa jaane kab aakhiri saans ruk jaaye

[choudharyneelam]

Ye duniyan bahut zaalim hai mere humdum
Khud ko inki buri nazaron se bacha kar rakhna


Koi saccha saath ho humdum ke
To kiski buri nazar use lag sakti hai

Chaahe laakh kar le koi koshish inke sang
Kismat ke alawa koi aur inhe juda nahin kar sakti hai

[choudharyneelam]

Now here's a song which i sung to someone indirectly.....;) ;)

Mere bhole balam mere pyaare balam
Mera jivan tere bina o mere piya hai vo diya
Jisme tel na ho ke jisme tel na ho
Mera jivan tere bina vo ek baag hai bahaar
Jisse hatkar guzre door door se guzre
O mujhe apna bana le, o bhole apna bana le
Tere kadmo mein mera pyaar mera sansaar meri kismat hai
Mujhe apna bana le, mujhe apna bana le


and now hoping to hear something from that someone like this.......;) :D :D

O meri pyaari Neelu meri bholi re Neelu
Meri maathi re Neelu, Neelu Neelu re Neelu
Meri prem ki nayiya beech bhanwar mein
Gud gud gote khaye tu jhat pat paar laga de
Apni bayiyan gale mein daal banja mere gale ka haar
Jhule prem hindole prem hindole
Mujhe mann mein basa le, pal pal palkon mein chhupa le
Tu jhat pat aake jhat pat mere andhe kuen mein deep jala ke kar de ujaala

this also.....:D :D

Hiding from the rain and snow
Trying to forget but i won't let go
Looking at a crowded street
Listening to my own heartbeat
So many people all around the world
Tell me where do i find someone like you girl

Take me to your heart take me to your soul.....:)

[sejwaldeepak]

Neelam ji chha gaye tussi tei...:)

By the Way who is that someone ????:confused: Hum sub ko nahi bataoge:confused:

[swati]

Ye yaadon ke pal dil mein basa kar rakhna
Ess chahat ko apne seene se lagakar rakhna
Ye duniyan bahut zaalim hai mere humdum
Khud ko inki buri nazaron se bacha kar rakhna


kabhi aakhon hi aakhon mein kaha maan leta....

Bina bole hi dil ka baat aksar jaan leta hai..........

wo ladta hai jhagadta hai sataata hai kabhi mujhko........

main hansti hoon to dil ke dard ko pehchaan leta hai........
:)

[skarmveer]

Wah-wah Neelam Ji,

Really good stuff.

Karmveer

[choudharyneelam]

Neelam ji chha gaye tussi tei...:)

By the Way who is that someone ????:confused: Hum sub ko nahi bataoge:confused:

hmmmm...bade curious ho jate hain sab agar koi aisi kuch baat kar de to....bataungi bataungi jaroor bataungi lekin pahle koi milne do ;) :D....koi hai hi nahin abhi ;) :D

[choudharyneelam]

Wah-wah Neelam Ji,

Really good stuff.

Karmveer


thankyou thankyou :D

[choudharyneelam]

kabhi aakhon hi aakhon mein kaha maan leta....

Bina bole hi dil ka baat aksar jaan leta hai..........

wo ladta hai jhagadta hai sataata hai kabhi mujhko........

main hansti hoon to dil ke dard ko pehchaan leta hai........
:)

wah!! swati bahaut accha likhti ho tum bhi....tum sab itna accha likhte ho ki tum sabke shabd mere dil ke taar chhu jaate hain aur dil garden garden ho jata hai :D :D ....kaash jaldi main bhi aisa likhna seekh jaaun

[rkumar]

kabhi aakhon hi aakhon mein kaha maan leta....

Bina bole hi dil ka baat aksar jaan leta hai..........

wo ladta hai jhagadta hai sataata hai kabhi mujhko........

main hansti hoon to dil ke dard ko pehchaan leta hai........

:)

Umm..

yeh sirf char maheene ka khel hai
yeh sara isq fer ekdam rail hai
wo engine hoga aur aap dibba
bas din bhar kam ki pelam pail hai

hehehhee

RK^2

[vijay]

kabhi aakhon hi aakhon mein kaha maan leta....

Bina bole hi dil ka baat aksar jaan leta hai..........

wo ladta hai jhagadta hai sataata hai kabhi mujhko........

main hansti hoon to dil ke dard ko pehchaan leta hai........
:)

Ye ankhen bina kuchh bole sab kah jaati hai
Dil se dil ke ye rishtey bade kareeb hote hain
Hansi mein chhupe hue dard ko pehchan le koi
Jinhe aisa pyar mila woh khushnaseeb hote hain

[swati]

Umm..

yeh sirf char maheene ka khel hai
yeh sara isq fer ekdam rail hai
wo engine hoga aur aap dibba
bas din bhar kam ki pelam pail hai

hehehhee

RK^2

ha ha ha ha ha
sir bahut achaa likha hai:D

[vijay]

Umm..

yeh sirf char maheene ka khel hai
yeh sara isq fer ekdam rail hai
wo engine hoga aur aap dibba
bas din bhar kam ki pelam pail hai

hehehhee

RK^2


Ye engine or dibba yahi zindagi ki kahnai hai
Bado se suni hai aur bachho ko sunaani hai
Ye mohabbat har insaan karta hai zindagi mein
Lekin jo mil gaya usi ke saath zindagi bitaani hai

[rgsverma]

Intezar main hai jo maza vo mulakat main kahan,
Ikrar main hai jo kaza vo bhala israar main kahan,

Bekarar hai koi gar milne ko pardesi sa ban yahan,
Kyon na pardesi ban jaayen kuch der ko hum yahan,

Is terah to na thi koi chhahat kabhi kisi pardesi si,
Bas ek tere saath ki hai aahat aur suhani saanjh si,

Gazab koi na ho jaaye in hansi lamhon se kahin,
Vafa karate na bevafa ho jaayen is terah se kahin,

Khwab ban kar na kho jaaye in andheron mai yahin,
Aao vaada karein ki milain to bas ek dost ki tereh,

Zindagi hai bahut choti jiyenge ise apno ki terah,
Shaan se jeene ka andaaz nas-nas mai hi basa hai,
Itihas hai gavah humne to bas vachan nibhaya hai,
Hum hon ya ho pardesi bas rishton ki hain kahani,
Humne dee gar jubaan to aur baat hain be-maani!

[choudharyneelam]

Intezar main hai jo maza vo mulakat main kahan,
....................
Humne dee gar jubaan to aur baat hain be-maani!


Welcome Sir in the poetry section and your contribution is also nice...now continue sharing more with us :)

With Regards
Neelam

[kanu01]

:) Thanks Neelam for yr presence everywhere.

[choudharyneelam]

knock!! knock!! saare shayar chhutti pe hain kya??????.....sabki kalam araam kar kar ke thak chuki hogi ab to....ye mohabbat waali thread pe breaks ke options nahin hone chahiyen......chalne do isse bina breaks ke

[sejwaldeepak]

Thik keh hai neelam sare chhutti mana rein sein.. koi na main tei aa liya bakki bhiaa lenge.. Here is the new phool for you...........:D

Tere intezaar ki tadap mein na soya raat bhar,
Kashish tere hoton ki khawabon mein chhai rahi.

So jane de in reshmi zulfon ke saye mein pal bhar.
Sakoon kuch to nasib ho bechain rooh ko meri.

[rgsverma]

Khawab ko tum vaasna to naa banao,
Rangon ke khel ko afsana naa banao,
Aur bhi gam hain muhabbat ke sivay,
Ise kam-se-kam itna sasta naa banao!

Meri julfain nahin hain manzil koi,
Pal bhar ke safar ka nahi khilona koi,
Sakoon unko kaise ho naseeb kabhi,
Pal-pal main baantne jo zindagi kahin!

[sejwaldeepak]

verma ji assi koi baat nahi ,, reply to kasutta diya hai aapne.. magar yahan asi koi ghatna nahi ghati hai:D thoda gehrai sei padhiye meri lines sab kuch saaf saaf nazar aayega.. ismein koi vasna nahi hai.. hahaha aur ek ashiq ke liye to uski mehbooba ki zulfein bhi maa ki god ka ahsaas diladeti hain:) fir kon apni maa ki god ko chhodd ke idhar udhar bhatkega:confused:

[choudharyneelam]

Thik keh hai neelam sare chhutti mana rein sein.. koi na main tei aa liya bakki bhiaa lenge.. Here is the new phool for you...........:D

Tere intezaar ki tadap mein na soya raat bhar,
Kashish tere hoton ki khawabon mein chhai rahi.

So jane de in reshmi zulfon ke saye mein pal bhar.
Sakoon kuch to nasib ho bechain rooh ko meri.

hmmm sabse active shayar hai ye Deepak:D

shukra hai koi 'fool' nahin bheja..:D ...aur hamesha ki tarah ye phool bhi accha hai...ab iss thread ki phoolon ki mala kaafi acchi ban jaayegi....bahaut saare phool ikkatthe ho gaye....phir jab puri ban jaayegi naa tab main....tab main bhagwan ke mandir mein Parvati mata ki murti ko pahna aaungi :D :D

iss thread ki rukawat phir se door hui
aur neelam padh ke phir se khush hui :D

[choudharyneelam]

Khawab ko tum vaasna to naa banao,
Rangon ke khel ko afsana naa banao,
Aur bhi gam hain muhabbat ke sivay,
Ise kam-se-kam itna sasta naa banao!

Meri julfain nahin hain manzil koi,
Pal bhar ke safar ka nahi khilona koi,
Sakoon unko kaise ho naseeb kabhi,
Pal-pal main baantne jo zindagi kahin!

Jo baant baant ke de sabko zindagi nayi
Uske saath hi chalti hain khushiyan kai
Mohabbat ko yahan gum bataya kisne
Ye to wahi jaanta hai jisne paya pyaar koi

[ranbirsheoran]

kya majburi thi unhone batai to hoti,judai ke kahani hume sunai to hoti,apni kabar ke mitti de dare unko,mrei moot ke khawahish jatai to hoti.9813043366

[rgsverma]

:) Deepak,
your poetic expressions was better than me.
I just tried to give a response,
may be in a different perspective.
(You can see things in many perspectives).
Lovely, nice and well-intended, keep it up,
I did'nt mean anything else....:)