for poets!!

[vichitra]

dear frenz here's something intresting that u people might like
These are couplets taken from the rhymezone site where there's
this competition for writing the most romantic first line and most
unromantic second.....here are a few of the entries.....

Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are you.
But the roses are wilting, the violets are dead, the sugar bowl's
empty and so is your head.
After you, my love, my only prize
Would be a bullet between my eyes
Of loving beauty you float with grace
If only you could hide your face
I thought that I could love no other
Until, that is, I met your brother
Kind, intelligent, loving and hot
This describes everything you're not
I want to feel your sweet embrace
But don't take that paper bag off of your face
I love your smile, your face, and your eyes-
Damn, I'm good at telling lies!
Every time I see your face
I wish I were in outer space
I saw your face as you walked by
but then I saw a better guy
What inspired this amorous rhyme?
Two parts vodka, one part lime
I see your face when I am dreaming
That's why I always wake up screaming
My love you take my breath away
What have you stepped in to smell this way
My feelings for you no words can tell
Except for maybe "go to hell"

[ranjitjat]

HI- Vichitra - nice poetry
another line
Love is natural says every body
True love between RAMPHAL& HIS jhhotty
Naughty but nice---nice but --- naughty
Very nice-very naughty- very naughty
NICE-----------but --------- naughty

[yvsgaawar]

Dharampal Ji,
Very Nice...Very Noughty.

[rathee]

tha to badhiya par mere khayal mein yo dhanesh ne pehlyan-eh post kar rakhya se site pe...!!!

[bharti]

Bhai Pradeep,
Tannay bhi likh di
pehli line badhiya(...tha to badhiya)
ar doosi bhoondi(.... pehlyan post kar ....).
Bhai achchi cheej dobara bhi padh li tay koi baat nahin.Mannay to pehli baar padha hai.

Nice Vichitra, keep it up.

[saketdhankar]

pradeep bhai ne te ek diary bana raakhi se jisme kati baniyaan jukar likhta rehva hai kis kis ne ke ke post kar rakha hai site pe.....bera na bhai kitni baar jatland site check kara hai.....ya baat iske ghar aala tai batani padegi....ke bera ib bhi lath khaa ke yo sudhar ja....aur kimme padhai-wadhai ya kuch aur koi kaam-shaam karle......mana laga hai din bhar jatland.com pai baitha rehva hai...

that was my attempt to recollect some forgotten haryanvi at the expense of pradeep.

[rathee]

dhankar saab main saare din to jatland.com pe nahin bethya rahta par haan is section ke shuru hon te leke eeb lag saare chutkale padh rakhe sein...er bhai itna te ghee-doodh ke yaadasht aachhi khaasi se...!!!

baaki rahi baat trying something funny on my expense...to bhai jis cheez te sabke munh pe haansi aa ja uski lhiyaan to mein hamesha tayaar hun...!!!

[naina_redhu]

Wow! I now realise how much I miss speaking jaatu with my Naani. I used to somehow manage it with her.....it's been 2 years since I met her and effectively 2 years since I spoke jaatu!

Bera na phir kab mauka lagega....eeb to sab jatland.com ke bharose sai!

Love you guys.
Naina

[ranjitjat]

Hey NAINA
Jatland ally aapko kati NeeM per chhadha kar khob NIMOOLI khiladay gay ki----------- yah mulakat yad rakho gi.
Naina KO NANI YAD AAJAGI>>>>>>>>>>>