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shobhitdeshwal
January 5th, 2007, 11:17 AM
Eik din aurat ka din hoga
Eik din vah khilayegi
dhhodh me sani rotiyan
duniya ke saare bachho ko
Eik din hongi uski chaatiyan
prem ki nadi se bharpoor
vah chalna sikhayegi
duniya ki saari sabhyataon ko
vah hansegi ki
uski hansi me hogi sirf hansi
aur kuch nahi hoga
geet phootenge hothon se
loriyan ban kar
vah sthagit kar degi
saare yudhh, saare dharm
vah aitbaar ka paath padhayegi
Eik din Aurat ka din hoga
jab hum jaan nahi paayenge uska sukh
kyunki hum kabhi jaan nahi paaye
DUKH USKA!!!!

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal.

samranwa
January 5th, 2007, 11:46 AM
again a piece of art
seems like you're a feminist :rolleyes:
I like that...beautiful poem again!
you got wonderful talent sir,
keep it up! kudos!!

regards,
sam

shobhitdeshwal
January 5th, 2007, 03:55 PM
again a piece of art
seems like you're a feminist :rolleyes:
I like that...beautiful poem again!
you got wonderful talent sir,
keep it up! kudos!!

regards,
sam


Yeah Sam am a bit of feminist....
Thanks for the appriciation....
Vaise its said that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder!!! :)

Cheers!!

Shobhit Deshwal.

ritu
January 5th, 2007, 06:38 PM
kavita to bahut hi badiya likhi.
par bhai aurat ke to saare hi din ho se.:cool: