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desijat
January 10th, 2007, 09:58 PM
Zindagi hai choti, har pal mein khush raho…
Office me khush reho, ghar mein khush raho…
Aaj paneer nahi hai, dal mein hi khush raho…
Aaj gym jane ka samay nahi, do kadam chal ke he khush raho…
Aaj Dosto ka sath nahi, TV dekh ke hi khush raho…
Ghar ja nahi sakte to phone kar ke hi khush raho…
Aaj koi naraaz hai, uske iss andaz mein bhi khush raho…
Jisse dekh nahi sakte uski awaz mein hi khush raho…
Jisse paa nahi sakte uske yaad mein he khush raho
MBA karne ka socha tha, S/W mein he khush raho…
Laptop na mila to kya, Desktop mein hi khush raho…
bita hua kal ja chuka hai, usse meeti yaadein hai, unme he khush raho…
aane wale pal ka pata nahi… sapno mein he khush raho…
Haste haste ye pal bitaenge, aaj mein he khush raho
Zindagi hai choti, har pal main khush raho
neels
January 10th, 2007, 10:46 PM
Very Simple, but True. Nice one.
downtoearth
January 10th, 2007, 11:04 PM
dats the way aha aha , i like it......;):):)......keep t p desi
poonam
January 11th, 2007, 01:14 AM
Very nice Vikas!
Pretty neat, easy and simple!!
priti
January 11th, 2007, 02:23 AM
what a nice break from the heavy duty discussions....very good composition Desi bhai...
vkaschaudhary
January 11th, 2007, 03:25 AM
original na likh Pao to koi baat nahi
copy paste kar k khush raho.........:)
desijat
January 11th, 2007, 09:24 AM
what a nice break from the heavy duty discussions....very good composition Desi bhai...
:p Didi
indeed this is a nice composition but surely not by me:p i saw it somewher and liked it so just shared it among all of us
MKadwa
January 11th, 2007, 11:10 AM
:p Didi
indeed this is a nice composition but surely not by me:p i saw it somewher and liked it so just shared it among all of us
Afterall nice compilation . . . . .
priti
January 12th, 2007, 02:00 AM
koe baat na...ke bera chep chep ke tu bhi compose karan lagja:p ...keep rolling the good stuff...:p Didi
indeed this is a nice composition but surely not by me:p i saw it somewher and liked it so just shared it among all of us
desijat
January 12th, 2007, 11:13 AM
koe baat na...ke bera chep chep ke tu bhi compose karan lagja:p ...keep rolling the good stuff...
Hi di,
I am a composer too, pasting links to 3 of my poetry composition which i posted on Jatland,i hope you like them.
http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=14200
http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=14307
http://www.jatland.com/forums/showthread.php?t=13465
choudharyneelam
January 12th, 2007, 12:35 PM
Too simple and true :)
deepshi
January 12th, 2007, 01:09 PM
very nice ..
if u can eat wid ur own hands, can smile,talk n perform bodily functions wid ur own will, r blessed wid the basic necessities ,,then u r VERY blessed
happiness lies in realizing how blessed v r..its a state of mind.:)
else, v can alwaz start frm a scratch;)
put in very beautiful words viks..
ritu
January 12th, 2007, 05:42 PM
gulabo well said.
every word u wrote so true.
simple but true lines.
very nice ..
if u can eat wid ur own hands, can smile,talk n perform bodily functions wid ur own will, r blessed wid the basic necessities ,,then u r VERY blessed
happiness lies in realizing how blessed v r..its a state of mind.:)
else, v can alwaz start frm a scratch;)
put in very beautiful words viks..
monikadahiya
January 13th, 2007, 12:41 AM
very nice vikas..:)
Keep on posting such lovely stuff!!
priti
January 13th, 2007, 12:53 AM
tu te saache e compose kar le se bhai....really liked the first two...koe baat na...ke bera chep chep ke tu bhi compose karan lagja:p ...keep rolling the good stuff...
sunitahooda
January 16th, 2007, 03:17 PM
Desijat....good one....:) Zindagi hai choti, har pal mein khush raho…
Office me khush reho, ghar mein khush raho…
Aaj paneer nahi hai, dal mein hi khush raho…
Aaj gym jane ka samay nahi, do kadam chal ke he khush raho…
Aaj Dosto ka sath nahi, TV dekh ke hi khush raho…
Ghar ja nahi sakte to phone kar ke hi khush raho…
Aaj koi naraaz hai, uske iss andaz mein bhi khush raho…
Jisse dekh nahi sakte uski awaz mein hi khush raho…
Jisse paa nahi sakte uske yaad mein he khush raho
MBA karne ka socha tha, S/W mein he khush raho…
Laptop na mila to kya, Desktop mein hi khush raho…
bita hua kal ja chuka hai, usse meeti yaadein hai, unme he khush raho…
aane wale pal ka pata nahi… sapno mein he khush raho…
Haste haste ye pal bitaenge, aaj mein he khush raho
Zindagi hai choti, har pal main khush raho
gaganjat
January 17th, 2007, 07:03 PM
matlab... kuch bhi ho jaa...kush raho... sidha aek line mai likh deta bhai mre...kyo dukhti rago pe baar-baar haath dhar dhar bollae sai khus raho-khus raho:p