dostt

[ritu]

lahu se jude to rishte bane
rasmo se jude to rishte bane
rishto se jo aage jude to rishte bane
dil se jo dil jude to dostt bane
apno se bhi jo badkar apne lage vo dostt bane
dil ne jinko apna mana vo dostt bane
onke dukh me ho dil dukhi
onki khushi me m nachu jo mere dostt bane
rishto ne na milaya jinse
jindagi me kisi mod pe jo yu hi mile vo dostt bane

[neels]

Beautiful..... as Usual....!

[desijat]

As beautifull as ritu di... amazing

[rajeshrathee]

suthra se:D

[trueblueindian]

WOW.......... tooo gud ritu bae

here comes an old saying

DOST = DO + SATYA.... meaning dosti is something when two truths meet ( dosti woh hoti hai jab do satya aapas mei milte hai ) and the ones who allways remain truthfull to eachother forever, moreso whn a friendship / relationship is based on TRUTH it can never fail, also it would bring pleasure and happiness in life's . .. . . thats one reason why friends are the best possesion of ones life :)

Alll my sacchhe doston................ Cheeeerrrssssss !!!!!

[ritu]

dabas kya baat batyi tumne.kitni sachi .jab do satya milte h.u r rt friends r the best possessions of ones life.WOW.......... tooo gud ritu bae

here comes an old saying

DOST = DO + SATYA.... meaning dosti is something when two truths meet ( dosti woh hoti hai jab do satya aapas mei milte hai ) and the ones who allways remain truthfull to eachother forever, moreso whn a friendship / relationship is based on TRUTH it can never fail, also it would bring pleasure and happiness in life's . .. . . thats one reason why friends are the best possesion of ones life :)

Alll my sacchhe doston................ Cheeeerrrssssss !!!!!

[poonam]

Excellent Ritu!

[ritu]

thanks neel,desi,dabas,rajesh and poonam for encouraging me.:)

[sunitahooda]

Bohot badhiya Ritu...fursat si mai mai bhi likhungi....as i cherish my FRIENDS n their FREINDSHIP ...the most in my life when i think of my achievements:)

[yashbeniwal]

Excellent Didi,,
nice thoughts ,,, few lines frm me,,,

KABHI ANKAHI BAATON KI ADA HAI DOSTI,
KABHI GAM KI DAWA HAI DOSTI,
KAMI HAI PUJNE WAALON KI,
WARNA ZAMEEN PAR KHUDA HAI DOSTI,,,,,,

Friends Forever!!!!!!!!!!!!

lahu se jude to rishte bane
rasmo se jude to rishte bane
rishto se jo aage jude to rishte bane
dil se jo dil jude to dostt bane
apno se bhi jo badkar apne lage vo dostt bane
dil ne jinko apna mana vo dostt bane
onke dukh me ho dil dukhi
onki khushi me m nachu jo mere dostt bane
rishto ne na milaya jinse
jindagi me kisi mod pe jo yu hi mile vo dostt bane

[ritika]

nice one ritu ji...
:)
one frm my side....
Teri dosti mein khud ko mehfooz maante hain, hum doston mein tumhe sabse azeez maante hain. Teri dosti ke saaye mein zinda hain, hum to tujhe khuda ka diya hua tabeez maante hain. file:///E:/my%20poems/my%20poems%202/New%20Folder%20(2)/n_files/right-double-quote.jpg

[cjbjat]

Reality behind this is 100 times the how much anyone can think


lahu se jude to rishte bane
rasmo se jude to rishte bane
rishto se jo aage jude to rishte bane
dil se jo dil jude to dostt bane
apno se bhi jo badkar apne lage vo dostt bane
dil ne jinko apna mana vo dostt bane
onke dukh me ho dil dukhi
onki khushi me m nachu jo mere dostt bane
rishto ne na milaya jinse
jindagi me kisi mod pe jo yu hi mile vo dostt bane

[sunitahooda]

Chupke se jo dil me aakar
biyabaan ko chaman bana jata hai

Khushi me bhale ho kosso door
dukh me saath jarur nibhata hai

sooni-sooni zindagi ki tanhayi ko
ek jala-tarang sa sangeet de jata hai

kabhi door hokar bhi kareeb hota hai
kabhi paas ho kar bhi juda nazar aata hai

saath chale ek adrishya saaye ki tarah
girney se pehley haath tham jata hai

kehney ko mahaz dost hai woh mera
par lagta ek Humsaya sa hai:)

[rakeshdahiya]

Very well said.....as someboby has said that ristee or padosee to redaymade mill jatee hain or badleee bhee nahi jaa sakteee ( to an great exten)

...but friendship is something where we we can have our own say i.e. we can always choose our own friends

[choudharyneelam]

lahu se jude to rishte bane
rasmo se jude to rishte bane
rishto se jo aage jude to rishte bane
dil se jo dil jude to dostt bane
apno se bhi jo badkar apne lage vo dostt bane
dil ne jinko apna mana vo dostt bane
onke dukh me ho dil dukhi
onki khushi me m nachu jo mere dostt bane
rishto ne na milaya jinse
jindagi me kisi mod pe jo yu hi mile vo dostt bane

Extremely Good !!

[choudharyneelam]

Chupke se jo dil me aakar
biyabaan ko chaman bana jata hai

Khushi me bhale ho kosso door
dukh me saath jarur nibhata hai

sooni-sooni zindagi ki tanhayi ko
ek jala-tarang sa sangeet de jata hai

kabhi door hokar bhi kareeb hota hai
kabhi paas ho kar bhi juda nazar aata hai

saath chale ek adrishya saaye ki tarah
girney se pehley haath tham jata hai

kehney ko mahaz dost hai woh mera
par lagta ek Humsaya sa hai:)

This too has it's own beauty.

[ritu]

k baat sunita chale pad diye.tooo good.:) Chupke se jo dil me aakar
biyabaan ko chaman bana jata hai

Khushi me bhale ho kosso door
dukh me saath jarur nibhata hai

sooni-sooni zindagi ki tanhayi ko
ek jala-tarang sa sangeet de jata hai

kabhi door hokar bhi kareeb hota hai
kabhi paas ho kar bhi juda nazar aata hai

saath chale ek adrishya saaye ki tarah
girney se pehley haath tham jata hai

kehney ko mahaz dost hai woh mera
par lagta ek Humsaya sa hai:)

[seemaantil1]

really nice poem:)

[ritu]

a mere dostt teri dosti ka dum bhrte bharte
dum nikal jayega mera dostt dostt karte karte
nam h kai dostoo ke alag alag
dostti ka ye ehsas namo se juda nahi hota
me kabhi onko khud me kabhi khud ko onme dostt dekhu
har kisi me kyu ye dostti ki ada nahi hoti
hasne bolne walo se baate hi hoti h kabhi kabhi dostti kyu nahi hoti

[manjeemalik]

a mere dostt teri dosti ka dum bhrte bharte
dum nikal jayega mera dostt dostt karte karte
nam h kai dostoo ke alag alag
dostti ka ye ehsas namo se juda nahi hota
me kabhi onko khud me kabhi khud ko onme dostt dekhu
har kisi me kyu ye dostti ki ada nahi hoti
hasne bolne walo se baate hi hoti h kabhi kabhi dostti kyu nahi hoti



Very nice composition Ritu bebe...having few real friends is like a priceless possession which we can cherish throughout life...

[ritu]

oski aankho me ho ashk to ho mere aankho me nami
is zazbe ko kuch bi kaho mane to nam h diya dostii

[ritu]

ehsas se tola hai isse
matlab se aaka nahi
dil se ki ja ti hai dosti
tol mol ke jo karte hai
vo vyapar hai dostti nahi

[choudharyneelam]

ehsas se tola hai isse
matlab se aaka nahi
dil se ki ja ti hai dosti
tol mol ke jo karte hai
vo vyapar hai dostti nahi



bahaut sunder...keep writing!!

[ritu]

lakh khajane lut gaye to shikan nahi mamuli si
ek dostt jo kho gya to kitne garib ho jayenge hum

[monikadahiya]

ritu bebe,

itne sundar words ki aankhen bhar aai.. i cant explain what friends are to me! no words for friends nai toh meaning kam ho jaayega rishte ka! kya yaar aaj serious kar diya aapne..hehe :p

[monikadahiya]

Sunita bebe,

bohot hee sundar words!! amazing what words can do to you seriously!!
:)