Main or mere room mates aksar yeh baatein karte hai............

[d_dhankhar]

You all've heard this song from silsila ...main aur meri tanhai...
now read this updated version of bachelors like me staying in Australia...
Enjoy!!!!!!!


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Main Aur mere roommates
aksar Yeh Baatain Karte Hain
Ghar saaf hota to kaisa hota
Main kitchen saaf karta,tum bathrooom dhote
main hall saaf karta, tum balcony dekhte
Log is baat pe hairaan hote
aur us baat pe haste....
Main aur mere roommates ,
aksar Yeh Baatain Karte Hain

Yeh hara bhara sink hai
ya bartanon ki jang chidi hui hai
Yeh colour full kitchen hai
ya masalon se holi kheli hai

Hai farsh ki nayi design
ya doodh,beer se dhuli hui hain

Yeh cellphone hai ya dhakkan,
sleeping bag ya kisika aanchal,
ye airfreshner ka naya flavour hai,
ya trash bag se ati badboo
Yeh pattiyon ki hai sarsarahut
ke heater phirse kharab hua hai
Yeh sonchta hain roommate kab se gum sum -
Ke jab ke usko bhi yeh khabar hai
Ke machar nahi hai, kaheen nahi hai
magar uska dil hai ke kah raha hai
machar yaheen hai, yaheen kaheen hai !

Toand ( pet ) ki ye haalat, meri bhi hai, uski bhi,
dil mein ek tasvir idhar bhi hai, udhar bhi
Karne ko bohot kuch hai magar kab kare hum
Kab tak yoon hi is tarah rahe hum
Dil kahta hai Safeway se koi vaccum cleaner la de
ye Carpet jo jine ko zoonz raha hai, fikwa de
Hum saaf rahe sakte hai, logon ko bata dain,
Haan hum roommates hai - roommates hai -roommates hai
Ab dil main yehi baaaat, idhar bhi hai udhar bhi......
Sab ko bata dain........


how u find it do tell me.

love
deepak

[proudjat]

Deepak, Tum aur Tumhare room Mates badi achi shayari karte hain.... that's a nice one, I really enjoyed that

[amar0974]

Bhai Deepak tum or tumhara roommate bahut he badhia baatein kartey ho, kasam se maja aa gaya padh kar.
Hahhhhhhhaaaaa

[bhim]

very nice deepak

[akdabas]

Deepak bhai,

Very nice.

[satyeshwar]

Deepak, You reminded me of my days in college. Our apartment's condition was exactly as you described. haha, good one!

[biotechs2001]

Deepak,
Zabardast . maan ge tane. taan to bilkul mere apartment ka zyo-ka-tyo haal suna diya.
aur bhee bhundi halat freez ki ho sai jab Freezer mai beer ke can paat jya hai.
per mere apartment bechara dukhi to ho raha hoga, kade jaat ke chakker mai pad gya.

[rsdalal]

Wo college ke din er wo safaee.
Hum char ladke ek bade se room me the, hostel me. Ek ke parents ane wale the, To Hamara safaee Abhiyan suru hua. Beddings dhule, jhaddo mang ke laye, er jhadoo laga mahino me. Jab uske parents bathe the to sab expect kar rahe te kee kab wo hamari safaee ke tarif kare. Kafee der bad jab koyee response nahi aya te, ek ne pooch he liya, "Aunty ji Safaee kassi Lagi".
Bhai Aunty ji ne kaha "Theek hee hai"

[d_dhankhar]

very loving aunty atleast she said something right ar mere room mate(in chandigarh) ki mummy was like "tu kabhi nahin sudhar sakta, aaj pataa tha ki maine aanaa hai to safaaii varnaa apni kyaa shaamat aayii jo main karoon safaaiii"
Ranvir Singh Dalal (Nov 17, 2002 09:24 a.m.):
Wo college ke din er wo safaee.
Hum char ladke ek bade se room me the, hostel me. Ek ke parents ane wale the, To Hamara safaee Abhiyan suru hua. Beddings dhule, jhaddo mang ke laye, er jhadoo laga mahino me. Jab uske parents bathe the to sab expect kar rahe te kee kab wo hamari safaee ke tarif kare. Kafee der bad jab koyee response nahi aya te, ek ne pooch he liya, "Aunty ji Safaee kassi Lagi".
Bhai Aunty ji ne kaha "Theek hee hai"

[d_dhankhar]

really seema ji u wont get enough time to do all these safaai in australia. ek to saraa ghar carpetted kanhiii se gandaa dikhtaa hee nahin, bas hamain to to tabhi pata chaltaa hai jab real estate agents last main kehte hain "SORRY MR. DEEPAK WE ARE GOING TO DEDUCT 50 $ FROM UR BOND MONEY FOR THE STEAM VACCUME. UR CARPET WAS VERY DIRTY".

Seema Nehra (Nov 16, 2002 01:22 a.m.):
Deepak, Tum aur Tumhare room Mates badi achi shayari karte hain.... that's a nice one, I really enjoyed that

[dkumar]

Dear Deepak,

Reality nicely said in the parody!!!!!

hey i guess 99% bachelors accomondation remains like this!

[harvinder]

bhai deepak..tu to talented balak sai..aur likh isi isi shayari

[virender]

Agar ya sari tsnne ae likhi sai to .. try kar .. modern Shayri me utarane ke tere pure chance hai .

Vest of luck
:) Virender

[virender]

mein or mera room mate aksar raat ko ye sochte hai ram kare tadke uth ke yo(room mate) jadu thaak ke arr safai karan jag ja , aur mein halke haath se bahar kat lnu tab ayun jab wo puri safai kar de .main aur mera room mate aksar aise din ki taalash me rahte hai but pata nahin mein aur mera room mate wo din kab dekhenge. mein aur mera room mate............

[nainsandeep]

waakai bhai deepak isa talent chupaanka nahi hota.....aur bhej 2-4

[jitender_dhaka]

Deepak DHANKHAR (Nov 16, 2002 12:41 a.m.):
You all've heard this song from silsila ...main aur meri tanhai...
now read this updated version of bachelors like me staying in Australia...
Enjoy!!!!!!!


-------------
Main Aur mere roommates
aksar Yeh Baatain Karte Hain
Ghar saaf hota to kaisa hota
Main kitchen saaf karta,tum bathrooom dhote
main hall saaf karta, tum balcony dekhte
Log is baat pe hairaan hote
aur us baat pe haste....
Main aur mere roommates ,
aksar Yeh Baatain Karte Hain

Yeh hara bhara sink hai
ya bartanon ki jang chidi hui hai
Yeh colour full kitchen hai
ya masalon se holi kheli hai

Hai farsh ki nayi design
ya doodh,beer se dhuli hui hain

Yeh cellphone hai ya dhakkan,
sleeping bag ya kisika aanchal,
ye airfreshner ka naya flavour hai,
ya trash bag se ati badboo
Yeh pattiyon ki hai sarsarahut
ke heater phirse kharab hua hai
Yeh sonchta hain roommate kab se gum sum -
Ke jab ke usko bhi yeh khabar hai
Ke machar nahi hai, kaheen nahi hai
magar uska dil hai ke kah raha hai
machar yaheen hai, yaheen kaheen hai !

Toand ( pet ) ki ye haalat, meri bhi hai, uski bhi,
dil mein ek tasvir idhar bhi hai, udhar bhi
Karne ko bohot kuch hai magar kab kare hum
Kab tak yoon hi is tarah rahe hum
Dil kahta hai Safeway se koi vaccum cleaner la de
ye Carpet jo jine ko zoonz raha hai, fikwa de
Hum saaf rahe sakte hai, logon ko bata dain,
Haan hum roommates hai - roommates hai -roommates hai
Ab dil main yehi baaaat, idhar bhi hai udhar bhi......
Sab ko bata dain........


how u find it do tell me.

love
deepak

bhai wah dil le liya

Josh Aur Taqat

[nainsandeep]

till now u must have come to know that the room mate deepak is talking about is me......so
hum hi hain woh room mates jo aksar baatein karte hain ki
Ghar saaf hota to kaisa hota
Main kitchen saaf karta,tum bathrooom dhote
main hall saaf karta, tum balcony dekhte
Log is baat pe hairaan hote
aur us baat pe haste....
hum hi hain woh roommates ,
jo aksar Yeh Baatain Karte Hain