Tu nahi aayega kabhi........

[shwetadhaka]

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................

[dkumars]

:confused: ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????

[vivekdh]

Bari asani se dil lagaye jate hain .
Magar bari mushkil se waade nibhaye jate hain.

e haseena na fera ker nazar itni berahmi se
aashikon ke inhi baaton pe janaze uthaye jate hain

ab jalne kaa dard na bata muje
aksar bewafa yaadon ki aag me jalaye jate hain

Le jati hai mohabbat un rahon par
jahan diye nahi dil jalaye jate hain

[ritu]

janti hu tu nahi ayega kabhi
lekin ye intzar karnae ka hak to hai mujhe
mana ki ishq ki aag barabar nahi dono traf
lekin meri mohabbat ko nibhane ka to hak hai mujhe
mere jeete ji tu nahi ayega kabhi
lekin tere intzaar me palke khuli rakh ke marnae ka to hak hai mujhe

[devdahiya]

janti hu tu nahi ayega kabhi
lekin ye intzar karnae ka hak to hai mujhe
mana ki ishq ki aag barabar nahi dono traf
lekin meri mohabbat ko nibhane ka to hak hai mujhe
mere jeete ji tu nahi ayega kabhi
lekin tere intzaar me palke khuli rakh ke marnae ka to hak hai mujhe



Mrein terre dushman bebey...uss sussre kameen nei e ludhhkan de nei.

[ritu]

hahahhaahah bhai kavita me maru thi sacchi ki thodi na:p.mere tahi te jisne aana tha kad ka aaliya.Mrein terre dushman bebey...uss sussre kameen nei e ludhhkan de nei.

[dkumars]

janta hu tu nahi ayegi kabhi
lekin ye intzar karnae ka hak to hai mujhe
mana ki ishq ki aag barabar nahi dono traf
lekin meri mohabbat ko nibhane ka to hak hai mujhe
mere jeete ji tu nahi ayegi kabhi
lekin tere intzaar me palke khuli rakh ke marnae ka to hak hai mujhe

Dev kaka mere tai bhi likhiyo kuch... meri gail bhi saaka chaal rahya hai

[devdahiya]

janta hu tu nahi ayegi kabhi
lekin ye intzar karnae ka hak to hai mujhe
mana ki ishq ki aag barabar nahi dono traf
lekin meri mohabbat ko nibhane ka to hak hai mujhe
mere jeete ji tu nahi ayegi kabhi
lekin tere intzaar me palke khuli rakh ke marnae ka to hak hai mujhe

Dev kaka mere tai bhi likhiyo kuch... meri gail bhi saaka chaal rahya hai



Tu tei nyu keh se akk Kaka merri kadd mei bi khaaj kariye thodi si...ha...ha..ha..ha...i loved that really.


Devender ka phanss rhya se tankka
Arr yo bann gya se chhora bankka
Arr isski jyan nei ho gya karrdda sankka
Issnei chahiye ek saachhe pYAAR ka phankka.


Bol kisi rahi...hey-2!

[dkumars]

Tu tei nyu keh se akk Kaka merri kadd mei bi khaaj kariye thodi si...ha...ha..ha..ha...i loved that really.


Devender ka phanss rhya se tankka
Arr yo bann gya se chhora bankka
Arr isski jyan nei ho gya karrdda sankka
Issnei chahiye ek saachhe pYAAR ka phankka.


Bol kisi rahi...hey-2!


Toadd paddiya kaka tennai tai
Kaka bahut aachi rahi per maadi si amendment chahiye...

Devender ka phanss rhya se tankka nahi
Devender ka phanss rhya tha tankka... aajkaal tei mein toot rehya hoon kati
Jyan tahi ye yadei JL pe mind divert karan tai aaoonsu saacchi bujai tei

[deepakchoudhry]

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................


Kavi nahin hoon, per ek koshish hai.

Koshish batanay ki yeh hai ki, people fall in love with personlaities not with the concept of love, And picture of doom and gloom about life is painted.

I hope it makes sense.

shakisyat hoti hai kamzor,shakisyat say na pyar karo
Yeh ganga behti hai bhitar, Iska tum gyan karo

Mann ki sunatay ho jo hai swatrh, chao kar sakte ho paramarth
mann ki is vayarth katha ka, nirthark malay gaan na karo,
shakisyat hoti hai kamzor, shakisyat say pyar na karo

beh janay doh yeh ganga, Bhuja doh jag ki aag
Nafrat ka Junoon faila kar, fun baitha hai aaj

Apnay is prem ka, kuch toh vistaar karo
shakisyat hoti hai kamzor, shakisyat say pyar na karo

Dhaltay hua suraj, Balak ki muskaan
Kya Indradhunush nay mangaa hai kabhi hisab

Din raat apany prem ka nirbhay tum daan karo
shakisyat hoti hai kamzor, shakisyat say pyar na karo

[prashantacmet]

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................


shweta.......... ghani baat lakhowe....hamne to aaj byara patya ek aapke bheetar ek kaviyatri bhi lukhi baithhi.:p:p.....iss kaviyatri ne jhaankan de baahar ne......arr hor bagya de isse isse 2-4..:):)

[prashantacmet]

:confused: ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????

arrreee........oooooo banbatte....ROOKKKKKAAA@banbatte.... ..........banbatta thesis karan laag gya rya jaat college baraut main..:p.......itne prasanwaachak kyooker laaye bhai.....majhe issa lagge tu bhi thesis karan laag gya deekhe :p:p......ROOOOKKKAAAA@ prasanwaachal@thesis

[vivekdh]

Devender ka phanss rhya tha tankka
Arr yo bann gya uske balkan ka kaka
Arr isski jyan nei ho gya karrdda sankka
la la ke sove hai neend ki goliyan ka phankka.:D:D:p




Tu tei nyu keh se akk Kaka merri kadd mei bi khaaj kariye thodi si...ha...ha..ha..ha...i loved that really.


Devender ka phanss rhya se tankka
Arr yo bann gya se chhora bankka
Arr isski jyan nei ho gya karrdda sankka
Issnei chahiye ek saachhe pYAAR ka phankka.


Bol kisi rahi...hey-2!

[devdahiya]

Devender ka phanss rhya tha tankka
Arr yo bann gya uske balkan ka kaka
Arr isski jyan nei ho gya karrdda sankka
la la ke sove hai neend ki goliyan ka phankka.:D:D:p



Kis nei keh se re bhundde munh aale...ha..ha..ha..ha..ha...tu pittegga maar dogyyan mer dhhorre.

[vivekdh]

kaka yu devender hi keh hai ke iski gela bhundi ban rahi hai usne hi kahu tha

dogyye te jab maroge naa jab main apke pakad me aaunga baj lunga kasuta hoke :D:D



Kis nei keh se re bhundde munh aale...ha..ha..ha..ha..ha...tu pittegga maar dogyyan mer dhhorre.

[sumeetmalik]

I am genuinely impressed by the poem Shweta. So I see a poetic beauty behind a boring Accountant/CA facade. Sorry.
Very well written. It says a lot and yet it doesnt. Far away from home I felt a connection.

Btw, it good to see everyone back in action at Jatland. Now when I come back here there's at least something interesting to read. Dev Kaka also is active now which makes a huge difference.

Keep on having fun like this fellow Jatlanders

[shwetadhaka]

I am genuinely impressed by the poem Shweta. So I see a poetic beauty behind a boring Accountant/CA facade. Sorry.
Very well written. It says a lot and yet it doesnt. Far away from home I felt a connection.

Btw, it good to see everyone back in action at Jatland. Now when I come back here there's at least something interesting to read. Dev Kaka also is active now which makes a huge difference.

Keep on having fun like this fellow Jatlanders

:rolleyes:hmmmmmmm ........ Boring !!!

Come on u cant say CA can be boring or Doctors can be interesting, or something alike! I mean every person has many facets irrespective of his professional area of work. Nothing sorry about that still! Thanx for the connection anyways! Hahaaaaaa !

[devdahiya]

:rolleyes:hmmmmmmm ........ Boring !!!

Come on u cant say CA can be boring or Doctors can be interesting, or something alike! I mean every person has many facets irrespective of his professional area of work. Nothing sorry about that still! Thanx for the connection anyways! Hahaaaaaa !



Boring te sei e...issmei ke shakk se...hey-2.

[shwetadhaka]

janti hu tu nahi ayega kabhi
lekin ye intzar karnae ka hak to hai mujhe
mana ki ishq ki aag barabar nahi dono traf
lekin meri mohabbat ko nibhane ka to hak hai mujhe
mere jeete ji tu nahi ayega kabhi
lekin tere intzaar me palke khuli rakh ke marnae ka to hak hai mujhe

Wah ! Bahut pyara ! Aapko to shayari aati hai, mai to bas kabi kabi kuch tod mod deti hu ! Ek baat batayengi aap, kya aap apne 'unko' bi apni likhi shayari sunaati hai, jo aapne unke liye likhi ho ?

[shwetadhaka]

Boring te sei e...issmei ke shakk se...hey-2.

Kaku, agar boring ka matbal 'Bahutttttt badhiyaaaaa' hove sain, to mai bahuttttt boring soon!!:p;)

[devdahiya]

Kaku, agar boring ka matbal 'Bahutttttt badhiyaaaaa' hove sain, to mai bahuttttt boring soon!!:p;)



Bebey ya ultti chal kadd tein pakkadd li...kheir tu tei laddli bebey se...terra jikkar na tha....CA...FI E ka jikkar tha.Hey...2..2....Bebey Tu CA tei na sei..?

[shwetadhaka]

Bebey ya ultti chal kadd tein pakkadd li...kheir tu tei laddli bebey se...terra jikkar na tha....CA...FI E ka jikkar tha.Hey...2..2....Bebey Tu CA tei na sei..?

CA... FIE :confused: Ab yo ke hove sai:confused: Mai to Chartered Accountant waali CA hu, baaki na bera manne@!

[prashantacmet]

Wah ! Bahut pyara ! Aapko to shayari aati hai, mai to bas kabi kabi kuch tod mod deti hu ! Ek baat batayengi aap, kya aap apne 'unko' bi apni likhi shayari sunaati hai, jo aapne unke liye likhi ho ?

inke 'wo' ghanne busy rahte hai tame kona 'unke' dhoorre.........;).arr mharri ritu bobbo dhorre bhi tame kona 'untai' sunana ka..yeh to chaa-party main busy rah karre.........:p:)

[anilsinghd]

nice ones Shweta ji and Ritu ji :)


and best one by vivek dhankar :D

kilkiiii @ yo ban gaya uske baalkaan ka kaka :D

[subhashbalhara]

:( Don't Be So Sad:(
:)enjoy Ur Life Happily
This World Is Full Of Love

[ssindhu]

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................

gotta remember a fantastic song frm black n white era "aayega, aayega, aayega aane waala aayega...aayega..."

[bamelrajni]

[quote=shwetadhaka;146389]Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................

..Ae Shweta..very touching lines.......Umeed ki shama jalae rahkho....aur agar phir bhi nahi aata uske intjaar ko apne jine ki vajah bana lo..I have read some lines, somewhere..and writing those line here..
Rehne de aasma zamin ki talash kar,
Sab kuch yahi hai na kahi aur talash kar,
Har arzu puri ho to jine ka kya maza,
Jine k liye kisi ek kami ki to talash karan
Rajni Bamel

[ssindhu]

[quote=shwetadhaka;146389]Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................
..Ae shweta..very touching lines....if this is real..I mean related to your life then i want to write some lines..
aap bhi keyboard aajma lyo lage haatho fir to

[shwetadhaka]

[quote=shwetadhaka;146389]Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi........................

Zindagi ki raakh me fir bhi dhoodti hoon tera chehra
Har chupe ehsaas me dhoondti hu teri aahat

Saanjh dhale teri yaad dil ke raste aankhon me utar aati hai
Un aansoon ki do boond saare sapno ko baha le jaati hai

Tere intzaar ki kabr par aaj bhi baithi hain meri saanse
Teri tasveer ke sahaare duniya se bhi bagwat kar li

Intzaar tera karte karte aankhon ne sadiya guzaar di
Waqt ne kiya shikwa to maut se thodi zindagi udhaar le li

Jaanti hu tu nahi aayega kabhi.........................

..Ae Shweta..very touching lines.......Umeed ki shama jalae rahkho....aur agar phir bhi nahi aata uske intjaar ko apne jine ki vajah bana lo..I have read some lines, somewhere..and writing those line here..
Rehne de aasma zamin ki talash kar,
Sab kuch yahi hai na kahi aur talash kar,
Har arzu puri ho to jine ka kya maza,
Jine k liye kisi ek kami ki to talash karan
Rajni Bamel

Hahaaaaaaa ! thanx for the concerned message ji!

Anyways, these lines r nice!

[ssindhu]

mujhe aisa kyo lag raha hi ki aisa kuch Sri Ram Centre ki library mae padha ho?

[mansi420]

Walking past,
thou had dreams that crashed;
the broken crumble into mud,
smiles shining above the lost;
let the pain be washed

Let the faith be rekindled:)

[vivekdh]

ke bolge ji madda saa hindi me batao:D


Walking past,
thou had dreams that crashed;
the broken crumble into mud,
smiles shining above the lost;
let the pain be washed

Let the faith be rekindled:)

[ritu]

thanks shweta.ye to meri shyari se darr jaate hai .jab bhi humari ladai hoti hai to oska juwab ek kavita hoti hai.ab to ye alam hai ki kavita ke darr te ladai bhi nahi kartae.:pWah ! Bahut pyara ! Aapko to shayari aati hai, mai to bas kabi kabi kuch tod mod deti hu ! Ek baat batayengi aap, kya aap apne 'unko' bi apni likhi shayari sunaati hai, jo aapne unke liye likhi ho ?

[ritu]

ha tanne te ghana bera se ki me kitt buzy rahu su.is chaaa party ne te nirre rolle kar diyye .eb dinner party karni padegi.inke 'wo' ghanne busy rahte hai tame kona 'unke' dhoorre.........;).arr mharri ritu bobbo dhorre bhi tame kona 'untai' sunana ka..yeh to chaa-party main busy rah karre.........:p:)

[shwetadhaka]

thanks shweta.ye to meri shyari se darr jaate hai .jab bhi humari ladai hoti hai to oska juwab ek kavita hoti hai.ab to ye alam hai ki kavita ke darr te ladai bhi nahi kartae.:p

Hahaaaaaaaaa ! kya baat hai ! par mujhe lagta hai mujhe to aapse ladai karni padi aise to, ab kavita ke liye yehi sahi !:)

[prashantacmet]

Hahaaaaaaaaa ! kya baat hai ! par mujhe lagta hai mujhe to aapse ladai karni padi aise to, ab kavita ke liye yehi sahi !:)

thaam donnu aapas main ladai mat kar baithyo..............donnu merri laadli bobbo ho...................ladai ki baat bhi na kar diyo ..simjhi donnu..................

[bamelrajni]

mujhe aisa kyo lag raha hi ki aisa kuch Sri Ram Centre ki library mae padha ho?

hey seema..kahin se bhi le lo pur likhi to sahi...dear,ab shweta jaise touching poem to mein likh nahi sakti ......to kahin aur se padke to likhni hi thi....

[shwetadhaka]

Mere dil ki zameen se guzarte hain jab teri yaadon ke silsile,

To bujhe sapno ki aankhon me ik harkat si hoti hai

Keh nahi sakti kitni sadiyon se jaanti hu tujhe,

Par isi mod se guzarte hue kai umar hain dekhi maine.

[vivekdh]

bahut khubsurat lines :)


Mere dil ki zameen se guzarte hain jab teri yaadon ke silsile,

To bujhe sapno ki aankhon me ik harkat si hoti hai

Keh nahi sakti kitni sadiyon se jaanti hu tujhe,

Par isi mod se guzarte hue kai umar hain dekhi maine.

[shwetadhaka]

bahut khubsurat lines :)

Aap kuch bolte hain to lagta hai khichai ki ja rahi hai ! Bata diya karen kripya !:o

[ssindhu]

hey seema..kahin se bhi le lo pur likhi to sahi...dear,ab shweta jaise touching poem to mein likh nahi sakti ......to kahin aur se padke to likhni hi thi....
it was nt 4 u rajni, i wrote it 4 shweta's poem

[vivekdh]

nahi ji sacchi me bahut khubsurat hain :)

khichai maine kab ki ?? kiski ?? JL pe to meri hi hoti rehti hai aksar :D



Aap kuch bolte hain to lagta hai khichai ki ja rahi hai ! Bata diya karen kripya !:o