Ab mujhjhe chalna hoga

[devdahiya]

Begannon ki duniya hei,ek ajjibb tanhhai hei
Abb mujhjhe chalna hoga

Charron taraff hazzum hei insaaniyat ka
Sab kuchh dhhundhh rahe hein
Patta nahin kya dhhundhh rahe hein par
Inko furssat nahin hei
Issliye abb chalna hoga......

Iss bhheedd mein maano appna koi nahin
Mei guum-suum sa khadda sab dekh raha huun
Sochta huun ye kaissi tlash hei
Ye kaissi daudd hei ki koi rukk kar dekhta hi nahin
Issliye abb chalna hoga..............

Iss bhheedd mei kabhi-2 koi chehra janna-pehchanna sa lagta hei
Mein pukarta huun,wo mudd kar ek nazzar dekhta hei aur
Firr kuchh dhhundhhane lagta hei
Aisse ki jaisse usse kissi apne ke honne ka aabhass hi nahin
Issliye abb chalna hoga.....................

Mujhhe ab ek manzil ki talash hei
Aissi manzzil jissmei talash tou ho par aaissi talash
Jiska koi auchitya ho,jiska koi mehtava ho
issi bedaradd bhheed se jara hatt ke,judda ho kar
Issliye mujhjhe chalna hoga...................

[vivekdh]

kaka tadke tadke kit chale :D

[sejwaldeepak]

Begannon ki duniya hei,ek ajjibb tanhhai hei
Abb mujhjhe chalna hoga

Charron taraff hazzum hei insaaniyat ka
Sab kuchh dhhundhh rahe hein
Patta nahin kya dhhundhh rahe hein par
Inko furssat nahin hei
Issliye abb chalna hoga......

Iss bhheedd mein maano appna koi nahin
Mei guum-suum sa khadda sab dekh raha huun
Sochta huun ye kaissi tlash hei
Ye kaissi daudd hei ki koi rukk kar dekhta hi nahin
Issliye abb chalna hoga..............

Iss bhheedd mei kabhi-2 koi chehra janna-pehchanna sa lagta hei
Mein pukarta huun,wo mudd kar ek nazzar dekhta hei aur
Firr kuchh dhhundhhane lagta hei
Aisse ki jaisse usse kissi apne ke honne ka aabhass hi nahin
Issliye abb chalna hoga.....................

Mujhhe ab ek manzil ki talash hei
Aissi manzzil jissmei talash tou ho par aaissi talash
Jiska koi auchitya ho,jiska koi mehtava ho
issi bedaradd bhheed se jara hatt ke,judda ho kar
Issliye mujhjhe chalna hoga...................

jhola thaa liya ke aapne???:confused::eek:

[devdahiya]

jhola thaa liya ke aapne???:confused::eek:



Saath mein Sotta arr Kammanddal bi sei...challei ga ke?Chaal huddeie BHARMAUR challanggei donnun...KYUN?

[sejwaldeepak]

Saath mein Sotta arr Kammanddal bi sei...challei ga ke?Chaal huddeie BHARMAUR challanggei donnun...KYUN?

koni jaun aapki gelya manne bera sei udde tei dhakaoge mannee...:D:rolleyes:.. chalo le kaku katti bhi jii na lagta hade ibb.. kimme ghana hi upset sa ho rhya hun kaii din tei .. udehi donu kaka beta dhunii ramavenge bhole ke naam ki :)hehehehehe......Jai Shankar Ji:rolleyes:

[anilsinghd]

le rai yaa to kavita type nikli:eek: manne tai sochi ki Dev ji chaal pade kitai :D

manne bhi apna bag thaa liya tha ! ;)

[devdahiya]

le rai yaa to kavita type nikli:eek: manne tai sochi ki Dev ji chaal pade kitai :D

manne bhi apna bag thaa liya tha ! ;)



Ibbe appne baggdde nei tekkein raakhh Anille...ibbe badda temm se terre dhhorre...25 saal paachhe aa jyaiye mharre BADDE pe...tnnei yo Deepakka merri chilam bharta paaweigga....arr mein uss chillam nei SOHRRTA....ha..ha...ha.

[VPannu]

Issliye mujhjhe chalna hoga...........
Kakaji, 2 savaal utthe aapki kabitta paddh ke.
kiss time jaan ka jikar se yu?
sabere-2 jaate hoge? bottal bhar liyo ttthaadii paani ki ar na te johadd, rajbaahe dhorre jaayiyo.:p:p
ar je kisse or tame jaao ho te bakkhatt te pahlam ulte aa liyo gharaa, kaki ar baalak baaatt dekhte honge.
acchi likhi sei nyu te:)

[vivekdh]

arre panne ker diya kaka ki kavita kaa nash :D:D

kit kaka sutri suthri jagha ki soch raha tha jaan ki tanne kurdiyan pe bej diya :D:D


Kakaji, 2 savaal utthe aapki kabitta paddh ke.
kiss time jaan ka jikar se yu?
sabere-2 jaate hoge? bottal bhar liyo ttthaadii paani ki ar na te johadd, rajbaahe dhorre jaayiyo.:p:p
ar je kisse or tame jaao ho te bakkhatt te pahlam ulte aa liyo gharaa, kaki ar baalak baaatt dekhte honge.
acchi likhi sei nyu te:)

[VPannu]

arre panne ker diya kaka ki kavita kaa nash :D:D

hahahaha, na bhai, kabitta nyu ki nyu se ekdam suchchi.
par kakaji agar nyu bata dete ak kis tame jaaunga to fer kimme nyaari e baat thi:D

[sunitahooda]

Jab ugga sooraj savere-savere
ssanjh ne kaha ab mujhe challna hoga

Tanhaayiyon ke shorgull mein
aawaz ne kaha ki ab mujhe challna hoga

Thak gayi deh jab bojha dhote
to saanson ne kaha ab humey challna hoga

loongi mai janam kahi aur
iss aatma ko sharir badalna hoga

Naakamyaab ho gaye jab rishton ki bheed se
to socha ab mujhe ghar challna hoga

anjaney-chehrey paraye se ye apney log
inki jhoothi pukaar ko andekha karna hoga

Mai jahan khud ko pahchan paun
Aisa jarur ek jahan mujhe talashta hoga

pal-pal dhalti huyi jindagi me
apna vishwas kaayam rakhna hoga

Tim-timmate tare jab huay madhamm
DEEPAK ki lau ne kaha Mujhe aur kitna jallna hoga

P.S. Last 2 lines have been added for Deepak Sejwal keepin his :p< smiley in mind

[sejwaldeepak]

Jab ugga sooraj savere-savere
ssanjh ne kaha ab mujhe challna hoga



yo manne original word sa laage hai su..:p

[sunitahooda]

Can be deleted as did by mistake

[dndeswal]

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गांव के लोग उसे ’काका’ कहते थे । एक दिन वैरागी बन गए काका जी और दूर एक गांव के बाहर जा डेरा लगाया । उनके चेलों की तादाद बढ़ती गई - वैसे सारे चेले उसे ’काका’ ही कहते थे । एक दिन सारे गुरु-चेले अपनी-अपनी चादर बिछाये बैठे थे कि ’दीपू’ नाम का एक नया लड़का आया और वैरागी काका से पूछने लगा :

दीपू - महाराज, मैं बहुत दुखी हूं ।

काका - क्यूं, के हुया तेरै ?

दीपू - महाराज, मैं एक लड़की से बहुत प्यार करता हूं, पर वो तो मुझे घास भी नहीं डालती ।

काका (अपने दूसरे चेले से) : अरै रामलाल, एक चादर इसकी भी बिछा दे !!
.

[sunitahooda]

Par mahrey Deepu ki tai Ghass sookh kai peeli bi holi:).
गांव के लोग उसे ’काका’ कहते थे । एक दिन वैरागी बन गए काका जी और दूर एक गांव के बाहर जा डेरा लगाया । उनके चेलों की तादाद बढ़ती गई - वैसे सारे चेले उसे ’काका’ ही कहते थे । एक दिन सारे गुरु-चेले अपनी-अपनी चादर बिछाये बैठे थे कि ’दीपू’ नाम का एक नया लड़का आया और वैरागी काका से पूछने लगा :

दीपू - महाराज, मैं बहुत दुखी हूं ।

काका - क्यूं, के हुया तेरै ?

दीपू - महाराज, मैं एक लड़की से बहुत प्यार करता हूं, पर वो तो मुझे घास भी नहीं डालती ।

काका (अपने दूसरे चेले से) : अरै रामलाल, एक चादर इसकी भी बिछा दे !!
.

[sejwaldeepak]

.
गांव के लोग उसे ’काका’ कहते थे । एक दिन वैरागी बन गए काका जी और दूर एक गांव के बाहर जा डेरा लगाया । उनके चेलों की तादाद बढ़ती गई - वैसे सारे चेले उसे ’काका’ ही कहते थे । एक दिन सारे गुरु-चेले अपनी-अपनी चादर बिछाये बैठे थे कि ’दीपू’ नाम का एक नया लड़का आया और वैरागी काका से पूछने लगा :

दीपू - महाराज, मैं बहुत दुखी हूं ।

काका - क्यूं, के हुया तेरै ?

दीपू - महाराज, मैं एक लड़की से बहुत प्यार करता हूं, पर वो तो मुझे घास भी नहीं डालती ।

काका (अपने दूसरे चेले से) : अरै रामलाल, एक चादर इसकी भी बिछा दे !!
.

hahahhaha uncle ji . maar giree.. sare chele sudha maharaj( kaka ) isse dukh mein bethe the udee. hahahahha.. btw uncle aaj taiin tei ya nobat aayi na . ke ghans na dali ho kisse ne. :p

[VPannu]

Tim-timmate tare jab huay madhamm
DEEPAK ki lau ne kaha Mujhe aur kitna jallna hoga

jab saari postein honne lagi OFF TOPIC
to Shunita ji ne socha ab mujhe bhi kuchh (ON TOPIC) likhna hoga:p

[sunitahooda]

Jab heeron ki khan ne ugalley pather
To ghar walo ne kaha iss choorey ka naam PANNA dharna hoga:D


Laagya reh nuay seekh jaaga Pannu....nuay padd-padd kai swaar hoya karein;):pjab saari postein honne lagi OFF TOPIC
to Shunita ji ne socha ab mujhe kitna(ON TOPIC) likhna hoga:p

[dndeswal]

Par mahrey Deepu ki tai Ghass sookh kai peeli bi holi:)

वो तो कोई और दीपू था सुनीता - all characters are imaginary.
.

[sunitahooda]

Par iss Jatland ke Sarpanch ka ke karein YO saari BADHIYA BAAT apney pai le jya sai...Dhokhey mai:D:D;)वो तो कोई और दीपू था सुनीता - all characters are imaginary.
.

[sejwaldeepak]

वो तो कोई और दीपू था सुनीता - all characters are imaginary.
.


rhaan dyo ibb,, ku bhakkaao ho aap :rolleyes:

[VPannu]

Jab heeron ki khan ne ugalley pather
To ghar walo me kaha iss choorey ka naam PANNA dharna hoga:D
hehehehe, ya bhi 100 ki 100 kah di;)
(shunita ji,with reference to this kursi foto)
Jab kisi or pe na chalaa jor
to socha ab is kursi ko hi todnaa hoga:D
or ab mujhe challna hoga......hahahahahaha

[dndeswal]

Par mahrey Deepu ki tai Ghass sookh kai peeli bi holi:)

rhaan dyo ibb,, ku bhakkaao ho aap :rolleyes:

Kaka ke chele badh rahe hain. And congratulation for your 1100 posts, Deepak. Aur kaka ki post almost 5400 ho gayi - tagaze tein 10,000 bhi ho jyangi ! None of Jatlanders can beat great Kaka Kavirai.
.

[sejwaldeepak]

Kaka ke chele badh rahe hain. And congratulation for your 1100 posts, Deepak. Aur kaka ki post almost 5400 ho gayi - tagaze tein 10,000 bhi ho jyangi ! None of Jatlanders can beat great Kaka Kavirai.
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manne tei dhyan bhi na diya tha 1100 pe. hahaha thanks ..


Ek tanhaiii si kuredti hai mere seene ko,
Mujhe ehsaas hai iss shaam mujhe tujhse milna hoga,

Mujhko maloom hai tu milegi nahi mujhse kabhi,
Ab to har shaam mujhe ek dhakkan kholna hoga:D:p

[ssindhu]

i m ready 2 cum along kaku...no bag, no bowl n no othr articles. as empty as i came, will i go. hav just wings of receptiveness which flutter to b received...

[sunitahooda]

Pomerian tai tu naa darrey
tere pachey tai German-Shephard khollna hoga:):Dhehehehe, ya bhi 100 ki 100 kah di;)
(shunita ji,with reference to this kursi foto)
Jab kisi or pe na chalaa jor
to socha ab is kursi ko hi todnaa hoga:D
or ab mujhe challna hoga......hahahahahaha

[VPannu]

Pomerian tai tu naa darrey
tere pachey tai German-Shephard khollna hoga:):D
hahaha, na na pindi pyaari sein manne.
par kakaji se 1 savaal poochhte hain.
Kakaji aapne mujhjhe mein itni baar 'JH' likh diya, kitt jaan ka vichaar se aapka? Jhajjhar ak Jhunjhunu?:D
And congratulation for your 1100 posts, Deepak. Aur kaka ki post almost 5400 ho gayi - tagaze tein 10,000 bhi ho jyangi
uncle ji , kakaji ar sachin tendulkar me bus maada sa e farrk se:p:D

[sunitahooda]

Jhinjholli bi jaa sakein sai ye to....:)hahaha, na na pindi pyaari sein manne.
par kakaji se 1 savaal poochhte hain.
Kakaji aapne mujhjhe mein itni baar 'JH' likh diya, kitt jaan ka vichaar se aapka? Jhajjhar ak Jhunjhunu?:D

uncle ji , kakaji ar sachin tendulkar me bus maada sa e farrk se:p:D

[anilsinghd]

Kabhi kabhi uthti hui ( kathinaaiyaan roopi ) lehron ki kya bisaat
mujhe rokne ke liye to sagar ko umadna hoga :)

hum chalenge jab mil ke
to parbat ko bhi jhukna hoga !



tried my hand at it but failed :(


@ sunita : very well wrote !!! :) really nice lines !

[ssindhu]

[quote=anilsinghd;146884]Kabhi kabhi uthti hui ( kathinaaiyaan roopi ) lehron ki kya bisaat
mujhe rokne ke liye to sagar ko umadna hoga :)

hum chalenge jab mil ke
to parbat ko bhi jhukna hoga !


well written bt parbat ka meaning bata dyo

[devdahiya]

Kakaji, 2 savaal utthe aapki kabitta paddh ke.
kiss time jaan ka jikar se yu?
sabere-2 jaate hoge? bottal bhar liyo ttthaadii paani ki ar na te johadd, rajbaahe dhorre jaayiyo.:p:p
ar je kisse or tame jaao ho te bakkhatt te pahlam ulte aa liyo gharaa, kaki ar baalak baaatt dekhte honge.
acchi likhi sei nyu te:)




Bottal ki jarrurat konya...hum tei gheessanni krya kraan saare......chelle bi merre saare kahi mein sein.........Khapeettar terre deemaag mein ya baat aai kyukkar....tu krruddiyan pe bathhya rhya se bachpann mein pakkam-pakkan...kai-2 ghantte...arr maa dhhundhhati haanddi hogi tnnei purre gaam mein...ha..ha..ha.

[anilsinghd]

@Seema ji : by parbat i meant mountain !! :)

[poonam]

sari posts off-topic.........moderators kit oberey main badh kae so gae eeb..hehehe.........:D

[devdahiya]

sari posts off-topic.........moderators kit oberey main badh kae so gae eeb..hehehe.........:D




Bebey Thhanssre liya arr tel chhiddak ke timmalla de de iss tagge mein Dakdarrni......Tnnei yo tagga suhaya konya...jyan tahin tei jalladdan nei bullawei se isski garddan muchhawann nein............Suhaan konya thharrei merre naam ki.....hey-2-2......Dhhumma thhawwa de dahuun.

[poonam]

:pBebey Thhanssre liya arr tel chhiddak ke timmalla de de iss tagge mein Dakdarrni......Tnnei yo tagga suhaya konya...jyan tahin tei jalladdan nei bullawei se isski garddan muchhawann nein............Suhaan konya thharrei merre naam ki.....hey-2-2......Dhhumma thhawwa de dahuun.

Ghani tension lyo so kaka, aapne bera konya...tokke peechhe naa kare lock...:D

[devdahiya]

:p

Ghani tension lyo so kaka, aapne bera konya...tokke peechhe naa kare lock...:D



Ha..ha..ha..ha..ha...Merri bebey ka steill se yo...Killkki @ tokke paachhe......fer dhhorre-2 kei handdein jaange DRAANT thha kei...Muchchein konyan...hey-2..sahi kahi.

[devdahiya]

:p

Ghani tension lyo so kaka, aapne bera konya...tokke peechhe naa kare lock...:D



Ha..ha..ha..ha...Sahi keh se Dakkdarni bebey.Par mujhe ab chalna hoga:


Ab mujhjhey chalna hoga
Ek gehri aag mei jalna hoga
Kuchh aissi durdasha ho chali iss samajj ki
Mujhe ab lohe ki tarah aag mei galna hoga
Ab mujhe chalna hoga.........
Sochta huun mujhjhe bhi orron ki trah Care free ho kar jeena chahiye
lekin usske liye mujhjhe Dhhalna hoga
Par mujhjhe aissa banaya hi nahin uppar wale nei ki dhall jaun
Tou fir mujhe apni disha mei hi chalna hoga
Ab mujhjhe chalna hoga......

Jindagi jara si aur kaam ittne,lagta hei sab jaldi hi beet jayega
Par mujhe samay rehte sambhalna hoga
Sab kehte hein mujhe duniya se kya lena
Par ei Dev tujhhe tou kuchh alag karna hoga
Ab mujhe chalna hoga......

Insaniyat ka takajja hei ki chuhe ki chal se hatt kar kuchh ho jaye
Warna ek din haath malna hoga
orr koi terre saath chale na challe
mujhjhe ek alag destination ki aur badhhna hoga
Ab mujhjhe chalna hoga.................