es baar ghar mai bhee banaongi

[shashiverma]

Nadi: Har baar sochati hue
es baar ghar mai bhee banaongi
waha thahar kar apnai jeevan chakr per
mai bhee vichar kar paaongi

bahtee hei chalee jaate hue
kabhe gaon-kabhee sahar
har baar ek nayee dagar pakad
chaltee hei chalee jaate hue mai
phir sochatee hue samander per kuch
pal thahar kar vichar kar paaongi
waha leharo kei daud mei kho jaate hue
phir ek naye dagar pakad
ek aur nayai gaun ke aur chalee jaate hue mai

Na jaane ye daud meri aadat hai ya jarorat
sochatee hue es baar ghar banaongi
waha ruk kabhi to soch paaongi
koi to maapdand khada kar paaongi mai

Hum : Tum sochatee hue nadi ke tum bhee ghar banao
kuch pal thahar apnai chakr per kuch vichar kar pao
Hum insaano ko dekho nadi

Hum insaano ne ghar bhee hai basaye
Phir bhee makano mei hum jee rahai hai
bachpan jawanee kee aur bhagata hai
jawani jindagee kee daud mei joud jaate hai
aaj wo daftar ko nikala to maloom pada
budhapa darwajee per khada hai

her baar ek naya chakr lagaya
basee hue gharo mei thahar kar
vichar karnee ka pal kabhee nahin aaya
hum har baar daudati hei rahe
waqt reit ke tarah na jaane kab nikal gaya
bahee hue reit ko kaha se sameit laon

Kabhi baith kar socha hei nahee kei
ye daud aadat hai ya jarorat
kabhee un gharu mei baith kar socha hei nahee
ke hum bhee koi maapdand bana paatai
jeevan ko sirk ek chakravyuh hei nahee
balkee ek desa bhee de paatai

Tum sochatee to hue nadi kei tum bhee ghar banao....

[vivekdh]

bahut accha shashi ji bahut gahri baaten kerte ho aap.:)

[cooljat]

Hi, Shashi,

Indeed gud composition, very thoughtful, deep with a philosphical touch! :)

Well, this is paradox of journey called Life!! ... u gotta decide, u work to live or u live to work?? :rolleyes:

my two cents - 'One should try to achieve Balance in life on both fronts, personal n proffesional!'


Rock on
Jit

[chhavi]

Great composition!

Cheers

[shashiverma]

Thanks for ur comments... This is in continuation with the above picture....

Jab se hosh sambhala logo ko daudatee hue hei paya
Mai samjh nahin payee....kyon daud rahin hai ye sab
Ek daudane wale ko roka aur pocha....kis ke peechai daudee jaate ho
usne batalya .....mai jindagi paane kei leyee daud raha hue
Mai asmanjas mei thee
tabhi sadak kei kinarre ek baba ko paani leyee khada dekha
Maine jakar poocha yaha kyon khadee hue ho baba
Baba bola....paani lekar khada hu...daudanee waloo mei koi
pyasa ho to paani pilado usko
aur pocho use se kei ye kaun se jindagi kei pechai daud rahei hai...
(Baba : )Gao mei rehta tha mai....ghar se koa (well) bohut dor tha
panne bharnee roz daud kar jaata tha...per shanz se pehlai laut aata tha
Ek baar kisi ne pocha..kyon daudtai ho...
Maine batalaya jindagi lenai jata ho
Kuch dore phauch kar pechai se jindagi ka shor maine bhee us deen suna tha
Mai to paani bhar kei laut aaya per tabse dekh raho
Log daudati jaate hai.....kehtai hai jindagi kei peechai daud rahai hai
Ye kaun se jindagi hai meri samjh mei nahin aate...

Log jindagi kei pechai daud rahai hai
Jindagi ko paane kei leyee har baar jindagi he ko dauv per laga rahai hai...

[devdahiya]

Mature and dignified lines put across in a soberer manner.Loved it a lot!Bebey Thanks!

[ravileo]

Nice
poem

Thank
you

[nehasinghaz]

ur poem is too good . keep up good writing & thoughts

[nehasinghaz]

looking forward for ur next poems