Hari-ana , Hari-ana

[chhavi]

Jatlanders are invited to append:D

Kal mere office main Isht Dev Narayan chale aaye!
Mujh pe aisi kripa , apne divvy darshan karwaye!!
Sashtaang prnaam kar, apna mastak jhukaya!
Samman purvak unko maine apni chair pe bithaya:)!

Bole mujh se,

Chaavi, is kalyug main, Kalki ko avtarit karna hai
Phir ek baar, is lok mian, bhakti sagar bharna hai:o!
Ab zara, Google Earth pe mujey woh pradesh dikhana
Jahan aaj bhi log pukarein hain, “ HARI-ANA, HARI-AANA”:p!!(Haryana)

Main boli, Hey Ishwar! Aap mere office ka sadupyog karien
Mere Dell ke computer se, swayam ka sahyog karien!!
Sari information aap ko turant mil jayegi
Kalki ko avatrit karney hetu, koi mushkil nahin aayegi!!

Thori hi der main, Shri Narayan hue pareshan
Unki baat sun, main thi hairaan:confused:!

Bole Mujh se,

Khoj raha tha HARI-ANA, par paya JATLAND
Jaton ne toh mil kar yahan, baja rakha hai Band!:rolleyes:

Aise Pradesh main,
Kal jab KALKI ka mandir bun jayega!
Doodh ki jagah , Koi “BEER” chadeyga:cool:!!
Dhoop-deep jala ke, Jaton ke jokes se sunayega;)
5 Rs daan karega, 50 udhaar le jaayega

Puja, archana kar ke meri, khud ka bhavishay sudharega
Narayan ki jagah, shayad “TAU” mujhey pukarega!:eek:

Isilye, main, vapas apne param-dhaam ko jaata hoon
Kalki ko avatrit karney, Koi nayi jagah dundwata hoon!!:mad:

Cheers

[dkumars]

Jatlanders are invited to append:D

Kal mere office main Isht Dev Narayan chale aaye!
Mujh pe aisi kripa , apne divvy darshan karwaye!!
Sashtaang prnaam kar, apna mastak jhukaya!
Samman purvak unko maine apni chair pe bithaya:)!

Bole mujh se,

Chaavi, is kalyug main, Kalki ko avtarit karna hai
Phir ek baar, is lok mian, bhakti sagar bharna hai
Ab zara, Google Earth pe mujey woh pradesh dikhana
Jahan aaj bhi log pukarein hain, “ HARI-ANA, HARI-AANA”!!(Haryana)

Main boli, Hey Ishwar! Aap mere office ka sadupyog karien
Mere Dell ke computer se, swayam ka sahyog karien!!
Sari information aap ko turant mil jayegi
Kalki ko avatrit karney hetu, koi mushkil nahin aayegi!!

Thori hi der main, Shri Narayan hue pareshan
Unki baat sun, main thi hairaan:confused:!

Bole Mujh se,

Khoj raha tha HARI-ANA, par paya JATLAND
Jaton ne toh mil kar yahan, baja rakha hai Band!:rolleyes:

Aise Pradesh main,
Kal jab KALKI ka mandir bun jayega!
Doodh ki jagah , Koi “BEER” chadeyga:cool:!!
Dhoop-deep jala ke, Jaton ke jokes se sunayega;)
5 Rs daan karega, 50 udhaar le jaayega

Puja, archana kar ke meri, khud ka bhavishay sudharega
Narayan ki jagah, shayad “TAU” mujhey pukarega!:eek:

Isilye, main, vapas apne param-dhaam ko jaata hoon
Kalki ko avatrit karney, Koi nayi jagah dundwata hoon!!:mad:

Cheers





Gr8 Chavvi... Good composition
Par title dekh kar mujhe laga tha Haryana ki badaai ki hogi par tumne toh utaar li Haryana ki bilkul:p
Waise majja aaya padhne mein.. interesting hai... abb kalki ji ko kahan utaarogi ???:D

[chhavi]

Gr8 Chavvi... Good composition
Par title dekh kar mujhe laga tha Haryana ki badaai ki hogi par tumne toh utaar li Haryana ki bilkul:p
Waise majja aaya padhne mein.. interesting hai... abb kalki ji ko kahan utaarogi ???:D
Bhai Ji!

Ishwar Haryana main hi avtrit hongey..pakka...kyunki sab se seedhe saadhey log hain yahan..POEM ABHI BAKI HAI..he he he

cheers

[chhavi]

Main toh shayad nahin par hollywood zarur Narayan ko Jesus ke roop main avatrit karwane ki soch rahein..TAZA khabar

http://www.amarujala.com/today/homenews.asp?home=19pk2e.asp

[devdahiya]

Wonderful stuff indeed! Thank you Chhavi bebey.

[dkumars]

Bhai Ji!

Ishwar Haryana main hi avtrit hongey..pakka...kyunki sab se seedhe saadhey log hain yahan..POEM ABHI BAKI HAI..he he he

cheers


Chavvi... Itihaas ke anusaar Iswar sabhya logo mein nahi avtarit hote... Iswar wahan avtarit hote hai jahan paap badh jata hai, jahan log sabhya nahi hote unn sabko seedha karne ke liye, sudhaarne ke liye unhe bhi wahi avtarit hona padta hai... par mujhe lagtaa hai abb jaldi hi haryana mein bhi avtarit honge :)

[pmalhan]

A very nice poem indeed.
Thanks Chhavi

[neels]

Kal mere office main Isht Dev Narayan chale aaye!
Mujh pe aisi kripa , apne divvy darshan karwaye!!
Sashtaang prnaam kar, apna mastak jhukaya!
Samman purvak unko maine apni chair pe bithaya:)!
.
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Isilye, main, vapas apne param-dhaam ko jaata hoon
Kalki ko avatrit karney, Koi nayi jagah dundwata hoon!!:mad:

Cheers



Chhavi..... Superb !!! Now this is some thing which is called creative:).
Very intersting as well.

[VPannu]

5 Rs daan karega, 50 udhaar le jaayega

Puja, archana kar ke meri, khud ka bhavishay sudharega
Narayan ki jagah, shayad “TAU” mujhey pukarega!:eek:

Too Good Chhavi. I really applaud this creative and humorous poem.:)
Narayan=TAU hahahahaha:D

[stokas]

Jatlanders are invited to append:D

Kal mere office main Isht Dev Narayan chale aaye!
Mujh pe aisi kripa , apne divvy darshan karwaye!!
Sashtaang prnaam kar, apna mastak jhukaya!
Samman purvak unko maine apni chair pe bithaya:)!

Bole mujh se,

Chaavi, is kalyug main, Kalki ko avtarit karna hai
Phir ek baar, is lok mian, bhakti sagar bharna hai:o!
Ab zara, Google Earth pe mujey woh pradesh dikhana
Jahan aaj bhi log pukarein hain, “ HARI-ANA, HARI-AANA”:p!!(Haryana)

Main boli, Hey Ishwar! Aap mere office ka sadupyog karien
Mere Dell ke computer se, swayam ka sahyog karien!!
Sari information aap ko turant mil jayegi
Kalki ko avatrit karney hetu, koi mushkil nahin aayegi!!

Thori hi der main, Shri Narayan hue pareshan
Unki baat sun, main thi hairaan:confused:!

Bole Mujh se,

Khoj raha tha HARI-ANA, par paya JATLAND
Jaton ne toh mil kar yahan, baja rakha hai Band!:rolleyes:

Aise Pradesh main,
Kal jab KALKI ka mandir bun jayega!
Doodh ki jagah , Koi “BEER” chadeyga:cool:!!
Dhoop-deep jala ke, Jaton ke jokes se sunayega;)
5 Rs daan karega, 50 udhaar le jaayega

Puja, archana kar ke meri, khud ka bhavishay sudharega
Narayan ki jagah, shayad “TAU” mujhey pukarega!:eek:

Isilye, main, vapas apne param-dhaam ko jaata hoon
Kalki ko avatrit karney, Koi nayi jagah dundwata hoon!!:mad:

Cheers




A very good composition indeed!!

Regards and love to you Chhavi dear!!

[chhavi]

:p Thank you all for the immense apperciation and love for this creativity.

The poem can be extended by some more humous imaginations.

Best wishes and Regards! :D

[cooljat]

Hummmm....:rolleyes: intresting!!
appreicate ur creativity :)
keep writin'

gud composition indeed...


Rock on
Jit