Some Lines By Me

[Gauri]

HI frends.

This thread is for all u writers in jatland and people who like reading poems.
I m adding some of my lines to start with.
Me being new to the jatland family,hope to know some more grt talent .
NJOY :)
Cheerzzzz

KyA hAi ZiNdAgI



AB KE JAB KHAFAA HAI MUJHSE ZINDAGI
KISI SHAAM MEINE BHI DEKHA SITARON MEIN KAHIN
PA SAKI NA TUJHE DHOONDA BAHUT
ITNI KYA ROOTHI HAI TU MUJHSE ZINDAGI

Rishton KE AAD MEIN
KUCH KHILKARIYAN,KUCH DHADKAN
KUCH JUNOON,KUCH BANDHAN
KUCH KASHMAKASH,KUCH SISKIYAN

Kabhi bachpan bankar,kabhi dhadkan bankar
kabhi ek hansi ke sath,kabhi ansun dekar

UMR KE LAMBE SAFAR SE,
SAANP KE DASTE SHAHAR SE,
AAS SE AUR AANSUON SE, ...
ZINDAGI KA UFF SAFAR.
CHAND SAANSE,PHIE KHAMOSHI
KYA BUS AISI HI HAI TU ZINDIGI.......

MAIENE DHuNDNA CHAHTI HUN
AISA KYA MANG LIYA TUJHSE
TUNE CHEENA ZINDAGI KA SABAB MUJHSE
NA JANE KYA CHAHTI HAI YE ZINDAGI MUJHSE.

BY-Gauri Fauzdar

[divyakadyan]

Zindagi yu hui basar tanha
Kafila sath aur safar tanha

Apne saye se chuank jate hai
Umra gujri hai is kadar tanha

[Gauri]

Thanx for the very first reply mate

[mukeshkumar007]

ZINDAGI KA UFF SAFAR.
CHAND SAANSE,PHIE KHAMOSHI
KYA BUS AISI HI HAI TU ZINDIGI.......



aisi hi hai ji :)

good one :)

[vivekdh]

gr8 bahut badiya

Zindagi yu hui basar tanha
Kafila sath aur safar tanha

Apne saye se chuank jate hai
Umra gujri hai is kadar tanha


HI frends.

This thread is for all u writers in jatland and people who like reading poems.
I m adding some of my lines to start with.
Me being new to the jatland family,hope to know some more grt talent .
NJOY :)
Cheerzzzz

KyA hAi ZiNdAgI



AB KE JAB KHAFAA HAI MUJHSE ZINDAGI
KISI SHAAM MEINE BHI DEKHA SITARON MEIN KAHIN
PA SAKI NA TUJHE DHOONDA BAHUT
ITNI KYA ROOTHI HAI TU MUJHSE ZINDAGI

Rishton KE AAD MEIN
KUCH KHILKARIYAN,KUCH DHADKAN
KUCH JUNOON,KUCH BANDHAN
KUCH KASHMAKASH,KUCH SISKIYAN

Kabhi bachpan bankar,kabhi dhadkan bankar
kabhi ek hansi ke sath,kabhi ansun dekar

UMR KE LAMBE SAFAR SE,
SAANP KE DASTE SHAHAR SE,
AAS SE AUR AANSUON SE, ...
ZINDAGI KA UFF SAFAR.
CHAND SAANSE,PHIE KHAMOSHI
KYA BUS AISI HI HAI TU ZINDIGI.......

MAIENE DHuNDNA CHAHTI HUN
AISA KYA MANG LIYA TUJHSE
TUNE CHEENA ZINDAGI KA SABAB MUJHSE
NA JANE KYA CHAHTI HAI YE ZINDAGI MUJHSE.

BY-Gauri Fauzdar

[vikas18]

Sulagti aankh mehkati hansi se kya kehti
Jo mujh pe beet rahi thi kisi se kya kehti
Dayare dil mein koi gam ka aashna na mila
Main apni baat kisi ajnabi se kya kehti
Likhi thi pyaas mere aansuon ke daaman par
Main khud mein doobi thi behti nadi se kya kehti
Har ek Sint jahan shor ki numaish thi
Main koi baat wahan saadgi se kya kehti
Har ke lamha mere gam ka goonga behra tha
Bichad gayi thi zindagi se kya kehti
Tammam umar jisse maine khud hi jhutlaya
Wo Zindagi ki haqiqat kisi se kya kehti

[loginrahul]

Zindagi yu hui basar tanha
Kafila sath aur safar tanha

Apne saye se chuank jate hai
Umra gujri hai is kadar tanha



heeyyyyu its piracy.....Jagjit Singh case kar dege.....

Any way its one of my fav..

[loginrahul]

NA koi Saval na koi sikayat rah gayi,
Meri tammana mere dil mein hi rah gayi,
Kya vo bhul payegi mujhe umar bhar,
Use bhuljaon main vo jate-jate kah gayi.

Rahul

[nishantrathi82]

O mere shayar jat bhai kya baat hai kitna accha lagta hai jab jat koi kavita ya shayri karta hai:rock:):rock

[vikas18]

unki nazron se door jayenge hum ,
dur fizaon mein kabhi kho jayenge hum ,
meri yaadon se lipat ke royenge wo ,
zammen odh ke jab so jayenge hum .

[vikas18]

Rahne de aasama
zamin ki talash kar ,
sab kuch yahi hai ,
na kahi aur talash kar .
Har arzu puri ho to jine ka kya maza ,
jine ke liye bas 1 kami ki talash kar .

[divyakadyan]

Thanx for the very first reply mate

Heyyyy no thnks:). Was going through ur thread nd just recalled few lines of this famous gazal. It suited the topic as well;). hence the post....

[divyakadyan]

heeyyyyu its piracy.....Jagjit Singh case kar dege.....

Any way its one of my fav..

I never mentioned tht it was written by me:).I too like this gazal. These few lines suited the topic so i wrote them. I hope ab to koi case nahin karega...:)