~~ ... Ek Patti si ... ~~

[shwetadhaka]

Few lines by me :

Ek patti si meri zindagi ...
kabhi yaha chale kabhi waha ko udd jaaye ...
kuch dhoondhti si kabhi lehraaye kabhi tham si jaaye ...
ped se thi judi to rehti thi hari bhari khushnuma si ...
par aaj pathjhad me ye padi hai murjhaayi si anmani si ....

Ek patti si meri zindagi .....
Kehti thi kabhi mujhse ki aa chale hawa ko choo aaye...
kabhi kehti ki aa oss ki boondo ki god me so jaaye...
zinda thi to roz kuch na kuch kaha karti thi ...
par aaj prano ko kho zameen ki kokh me hai samaayi si...

Ek patti si meri zindagi .....
isne kabhi sapno ki meethi baarish ko pehna tha...
kabhi odh ke dekhi thi dukh ki surkh dhoop ....
khoobsoorat chatakh hare rang ki chunar pehne itraati thi kabhi..
aaj maayus kaalima me mukh ko chupaaye si hai padi ...

[vivekdh]

gaam ki bakriyan ke aage ger do ye patti si jindgi.
yaa hari bhari kadde sukhi patti si jindgi ............:rock

[dreamer]

gaam ki bakriyan ke aage ger do ye patti si jindgi.
yaa hari bhari kadde sukhi patti si jindgi ............:rock


Waah Janab Kya khoob kaha hai aapne :boxing

[bislas]

Zindaggi se zindagi ka wasta zinda rahe,
Hum rahe jab tak hamara hosla zinda rahe.
Waqt ne mana hamare beech rakh di duriyan,
Koshise yeh hon dilo mein rasta zinda rahe.


Few lines by me :

Ek patti si meri zindagi ...
kabhi yaha chale kabhi waha ko udd jaaye ...
kuch dhoondhti si kabhi lehraaye kabhi tham si jaaye ...
ped se thi judi to rehti thi hari bhari khushnuma si ...
par aaj pathjhad me ye padi hai murjhaayi si anmani si ....

Ek patti si meri zindagi .....
Kehti thi kabhi mujhse ki aa chale hawa ko choo aaye...
kabhi kehti ki aa oss ki boondo ki god me so jaaye...
zinda thi to roz kuch na kuch kaha karti thi ...
par aaj prano ko kho zameen ki kokh me hai samaayi si...

Ek patti si meri zindagi .....
isne kabhi sapno ki meethi baarish ko pehna tha...
kabhi odh ke dekhi thi dukh ki surkh dhoop ....
khoobsoorat chatakh hare rang ki chunar pehne itraati thi kabhi..
aaj maayus kaalima me mukh ko chupaaye si hai padi ...

[cooljat]

Gud one Shweta, indeed quality composition !! :)
remember, Go with the flow! thats the way deary!....


Rock on
Jit

[ritu]

haahaha funny but very nice.:)gaam ki bakriyan ke aage ger do ye patti si jindgi.
yaa hari bhari kadde sukhi patti si jindgi ............:rock

[ritu]

jo patti si ho meri jindagi to hawa ki bagdor muje chahiye
yu hi udda de idhar udhar mujhe un jhoko pe adhikar mujhe chahiye

[ritu]

very nice shwetaFew lines by me :

Ek patti si meri zindagi ...
kabhi yaha chale kabhi waha ko udd jaaye ...
kuch dhoondhti si kabhi lehraaye kabhi tham si jaaye ...
ped se thi judi to rehti thi hari bhari khushnuma si ...
par aaj pathjhad me ye padi hai murjhaayi si anmani si ....

Ek patti si meri zindagi .....
Kehti thi kabhi mujhse ki aa chale hawa ko choo aaye...
kabhi kehti ki aa oss ki boondo ki god me so jaaye...
zinda thi to roz kuch na kuch kaha karti thi ...
par aaj prano ko kho zameen ki kokh me hai samaayi si...

Ek patti si meri zindagi .....
isne kabhi sapno ki meethi baarish ko pehna tha...
kabhi odh ke dekhi thi dukh ki surkh dhoop ....
khoobsoorat chatakh hare rang ki chunar pehne itraati thi kabhi..
aaj maayus kaalima me mukh ko chupaaye si hai padi ...

[divyakadyan]

Nice lines Shweta. I remember few lines of a famous Gazal which indicate the same feeling....

apne marzi se kahan apne safar ke hum hain
rukh hawaoo ka jidhar ka hai, udhar ke hum hain

[ysjabp]

Ek patti si meri zindagi
Nai koplo.n ko dekh kaise muskari thi
Per dusare hi pal mukh par udasi chai thi
Aaj kitani pyari hai ye pattiyan ,
kal inaka bhi wahi mukaam hoga
yahi soch kar patti ki Ankh bhar aayi thi

Ek patti si meri zindgi
kamosh palo.n ki awaaz sunti rahi
kitni gahrai thi us khamoshi mein bhi
pattiyon ki charcharahat se aisa mahsoos hota hai
jaise phir kuchh toota hei
kisi ne kuchal diye hain sab arman mere
kaise hawao.n ne ujada hei gahronda mera
kiise bhikar gaye hei sabhi khawab mere

[ysjabp]

During evolution, we humans developed a neo-cortex and lost touch with nature for ever. Rest of the living beings animals or plants, remained firmly embedded in Nature. Here is a lovely poems about trees… Rajiv Krishna Saxena
Keywords: Trees, ancient, tredition, Nature, natives, resiting change, leaves

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*Suryabhanu Gupt

[ysjabp]

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HARIVANSH RAI BACHCHAN

[ysjabp]

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"Bal Kavi Bairagi"

[vijay]

Few lines by me :

Ek patti si meri zindagi ...



एक पत्ती-सी मेरी ज़िंदगी..........

जो हवा के हर प्रत्येक झोंके के संग लहलहाई
पेड़ के हर सुख दुःख में उसके साथ मुस्कराई
जब वो कच्ची कोंपल फूटी तो सबको थी भाई
आज न जाने किसलिए वो हो गई सबसे पराई

एक पत्ती-सी मेरी ज़िंदगी..........

बरसात के मौसम में मस्ती में झूम जाती थी वो
सूरज की धूप में पेड़ की घनी छाँव पाती थी वो
कभी अपनी उस हरियाली पर इठलाती थी वो
कभी पतझड़ के पीलेपन पर दोष लगाती थी वो

एक पत्ती-सी मेरी ज़िंदगी..........

तनहाइयों के इस सफर की ये भी एक कड़ी है
खुशहाली के रास्ते में कितनी बर्बादियाँ खड़ी है
किसलिए आज वो धरती पर मुंह छुपाये पड़ी है
अभी तो झेलनी ज़िंदगी में मुसीबते बहुत बड़ी हैं

एक पत्ती-सी मेरी ज़िंदगी..........
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[vijay]

Nice lines Shweta. I remember few lines of a famous Gazal which indicate the same feeling....

apne marzi se kahan apne safar ke hum hain
rukh hawaoo ka jidhar ka hai, udhar ke hum hain


इस जमाने को देखकर कब अपना नजरिया बदलते हैं हम
मंजिलें ख़ुद बदल लेती हैं अपना रास्ता जब चलते हैं हम ||

[neels]

Gud going Guys.... both v nice... Shweta's n Vijay's