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tushankurs
May 31st, 2003, 11:48 PM
Ander ke Ghalib ko garmi aur machcharon ne pareshan kar diya to sher ka jehan mein aana hua….
Arz Kiya Hai....
Machchar ne mujhe kaata Machchar ko junoon tha,
khujli fir aisi machi ki dil besukoon tha,
Humne use pakda, fir chhod diya gaalib,
kambakht ki ragoon mein apna hi khoon tha.!!!!
Tushankur
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**Use a mirror in difficult times. You will see both the cause and resolution - The Tao**
akdabas
June 1st, 2003, 07:18 AM
Wah ! Wah ! Hoozoor. Apne to mehfil hee zama dee.
Bhot Badhiya !
tushankurs
June 1st, 2003, 07:28 PM
Dhanyawaad Dabas Bhai...
rinu
June 1st, 2003, 09:10 PM
NiCe!!!!!!!!
RiNu
rkumar
June 1st, 2003, 10:16 PM
Bahut khoob huzoor....masallah achaa likh lete ho.....Hume bhi likhne ka bahut shauk hai. Magar serious shairee hone ke karan jatland par nahi likha kabhi. Thoda bahut humor bhi likha hai...may be we have a Shairee forum where we can share our writings.. Here are few light ones. Hope members will like. Will post more on further feedback from members..
1. Ji Karta hai ki doob jaun, chullu bhar paani mai
Awaaj de lena hume, jab paani se bhar jaye chullu aapkee.
2. e dil tu gamm nikal de dil se
aur fir dhadak, hokar be-dhadak
3. Kabr me let kar bhi ne so paaye chain se.
peeste hain raat bhar daant murde, le lekar tera naam.
Rajendra
ssiwach
June 1st, 2003, 11:43 PM
Rajendra[/quote]
....
kya baat hai Rajender jee...
ranz kee jab guft-gun hone lagee
aap se tum , tum se tu hone lage
yeh sahi hai...thanks
yajuvender
June 2nd, 2003, 11:04 AM
Tushankur Bhai lage raho....
Jatland par bane raho.......
Tushankur Saroha (May 31, 2003 02:18 p.m.):
Ander ke Ghalib ko garmi aur machcharon ne pareshan kar diya to sher ka jehan mein aana hua….
Arz Kiya Hai....
Machchar ne mujhe kaata Machchar ko junoon tha,
khujli fir aisi machi ki dil besukoon tha,
Humne use pakda, fir chhod diya gaalib,
kambakht ki ragoon mein apna hi khoon tha.!!!!
Tushankur
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**Use a mirror in difficult times. You will see both the cause and resolution - The Tao**
rathee
June 2nd, 2003, 04:33 PM
1. Ji Karta hai ki doob jaun, chullu bhar paani mai
Awaaj de lena hume, jab paani se bhar jaye chullu aapkee.
2. e dil tu gamm nikal de dil se
aur fir dhadak, hokar be-dhadak
3. Kabr me let kar bhi ne so paaye chain se.
peeste hain raat bhar daant murde, le lekar tera naam.
Rajender ji bura matt na maniyo, thoda sa aur light karun sun aapki shayari ne...
1. ji kare ya na kare bharke laana hai kuen (well) se paani
nahin te ghar mein badan nahin degi meri beerbani....
2. ramphal likaad de in mhesyan (buffalo) ne jhod te,
nahin tera babu phenk dega teri taangan ne tod ke...
3. gobar pe phisal ke dhaad te gire zameen pe,
aadmi te haanse, haanse kutte bhi seem (boundary of village)te....
rkumar
June 2nd, 2003, 06:23 PM
Pradeep Singh Rathee (Jun 02, 2003 07:03 a.m.):
Rajender ji bura matt na maniyo, thoda sa aur light karun sun aapki shayari ne...
1. ji kare ya na kare bharke laana hai kuen (well) se paani
nahin te ghar mein badan nahin degi meri beerbani....
2. ramphal likaad de in mhesyan (buffalo) ne jhod te,
nahin tera babu phenk dega teri taangan ne tod ke...
3. gobar pe phisal ke dhaad te gire zameen pe,
aadmi te haanse, haanse kutte bhi seem (boundary of village)te....
hahahahahhahahahaa, bhai maja aa gaya...bahut badhiya ....
Rajendra
yvsgaawar
June 2nd, 2003, 07:32 PM
3. gobar pe phisal ke dhaad te gire zameen pe,
aadmi te haanse, haanse kutte bhi seem (boundary of village)te....
hahaha, bhaut badhiya...
shivashakti
June 2nd, 2003, 07:47 PM
Ha..ha...ha....
Bhot badhiya. Lath sa gaar diya..
rkumar
June 2nd, 2003, 07:57 PM
bhai ek baar hema malini Dharmendra ke saath gaum me gayee aur yoon bolli...
raja jani, oye raja jani..
tu leya bhus, khal and paani,
mai kar diangee sanni...
fer sunaange chal ke ragini.....
Rajendra
tushankurs
June 19th, 2003, 11:57 PM
Rajendraji- bahut achcha hai...aap bheejo to serious shayari bhi....audience apne aap ban jayenge
Pradeep bhai...gaam ki yaad diya di....bahut hi acche the teeno.
ashokpaul
June 23rd, 2003, 10:43 AM
Tushankur Saroha (May 31, 2003 06:18 p.m.):
Ander ke Ghalib ko garmi aur machcharon ne pareshan kar diya to sher ka jehan mein aana hua….
Arz Kiya Hai....
Machchar ne mujhe kaata Machchar ko junoon tha,
khujli fir aisi machi ki dil besukoon tha,
Humne use pakda, fir chhod diya gaalib,
kambakht ki ragoon mein apna hi khoon tha.!!!!
Tushankur
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**Use a mirror in difficult times. You will see both the cause and resolution - The Tao**
vaise tanne kyukar bera laqgya ke vo machchar tha