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palsaniya
January 12th, 2004, 09:21 PM
Theses shaayaris are not copied from somewhere...made by me only.....

haan arj kiya hai...

ik kaanta chubha hai dil mein
kaash us kaante ko mehsoos na kar paate hum
dushmanon ke paas fursat thi mere liye
kaash tumhaari dosti ko dushmani mein badal paate hum
hum hain kya,hamaari hasti kya
kaash tumhaare samjhane se pehle,khud hi samajh jaate hum

uday
January 12th, 2004, 09:42 PM
very nice... keep innovating in New fields !!!


R.C. Palsaniya (Jan 12, 2004 11:51 a.m.):
dushmanon ke paas fursat thi mere liye
kaash tumhaari dosti ko dushmani mein badal paate hum
hum hain kya,hamaari hasti kya
kaash tumhaare samjhane se pehle,khud hi samajh jaate hum

neena009
January 13th, 2004, 07:41 PM
wow thats gr8 .......hey we have a shayar in the making.......best of luck

dahbal
January 14th, 2004, 08:56 AM
Very good.Bahut badiya hai bhai kuch or aise hi aane do.

-Balraj

sweet_monu
January 19th, 2004, 02:48 PM
Umm good one...but why man....dushmano ki kami hai kya jo dosto ko dushman bana rahey ho. Just kidding. Its nice.