Aane ka karke vada wo na aaye

[santoshbenaam]

Aane ka karke vada wo na aaye hamne intjaar bahut kiya
Jis ghadi se hame thi nafrat us se hamne bahut pyar kiya
Tumhare liye hamne kya socha tha tumne hame kya soch liya
Jab jab gujra ek ek pal hamne na jane khud ko kaise tham liya
Main apne gile sikwe tumse kahta magar dil ne inkaar kiya
Na jane kon se wo ghadi thi jab hamne tumse pyar kiya
Na aaye tum iska na mujhe afsos hai magaar kyu wada kiya
Tumhare na aane se tumhe kya pata is dil ne kitna intjaar kiya.

santosh benaam

[meena]

Santosh, u r really talented!
Beautiful shayaari....! May yr intzaar end soon and be fruitful!
Best wishes!

[rkumar]

here are few from my side on the same theme..

1. Mere paas thaa bhi kia, ek sabr ke sivai
wo bhi aaj luta diya, teri intzaar mai

2. jaldi aaiye, humne phool bikhraaye hain teri rah me
der agar ki to phoolon ko chale jayenge dushman rond kar

3. ne jaane kyoon aa jaati hai roj , yah kambakhta raat.
hokar majboor hatani partee hain nigaahen, teri raah se.

Rajendra

[dahbal]

Santosh ji and Rajinder ji,

Aap dono ki shayari really wonderful hai...

-Balraj

[sweet_monu]

Hi Santosh,
Really cool man. Do keep writing like this.....its really nice. Yes i really wish the same that tumhara intezaar zaldi se khatm ho.

Rajendra...your sher are nice too especially this one
Mere paas thaa bhi kia, ek sabr ke sivai
wo bhi aaj luta diya, teri intzaar mai.

[santoshbenaam]

Meena Singh (Jan 16, 2004 10:31 p.m.):
Santosh, u r really talented!
Beautiful shayaari....! May yr intzaar end soon and be fruitful!
Best wishes!

sukriya meena ji , bas main kya kahu, aapko sayari pasand aayi iski bahut khushi hai

[santoshbenaam]

Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jan 16, 2004 11:04 p.m.):
here are few from my side on the same theme..

1. Mere paas thaa bhi kia, ek sabr ke sivai
wo bhi aaj luta diya, teri intzaar mai

2. jaldi aaiye, humne phool bikhraaye hain teri rah me
der agar ki to phoolon ko chale jayenge dushman rond kar

3. ne jaane kyoon aa jaati hai roj , yah kambakhta raat.
hokar majboor hatani partee hain nigaahen, teri raah se.

Rajendra

bahut bahut sukriya rajendra ji

[santoshbenaam]

monika (Jan 19, 2004 05:02 a.m.):
Hi Santosh,
Really cool man. Do keep writing like this.....its really nice. Yes i really wish the same that tumhara intezaar zaldi se khatm ho.

Rajendra...your sher are nice too especially this one
Mere paas thaa bhi kia, ek sabr ke sivai
wo bhi aaj luta diya, teri intzaar mai.

mera intjaar kabhi khatm nahi hoga monika ji , jab tak meri saans hai , intjaar khatm ho gaya to life me kya maja rah jayega

santosh benaam

[ranjitjat]

Bahut Khub

AANE ka karke vada wo nahi aaye
Wo Aaye der aaye- dursat aaye
Phulo ka haar bhi- dil mae saja kar aaye
vad kismati tum intjar hi nahi kar paye

cheers

[sujatadahiya]

Santosh ji aap kamal hai .
Dudee uncle aap bemisal hai .

Carry on .

[santoshbenaam]

Sujata Dahiya (Feb 05, 2004 01:02 a.m.):
Santosh ji aap kamal hai .
Dudee uncle aap bemisal hai .

Carry on .

hey sujata, bahut bahut sukriya

dharmpal ji aapka sukriya ada kaise karu samaj nahi aata

santosh benaam

[ranjitjat]

Sabhi Kala karo ka Sawagat hae
KOn kis ko bulata hae
Kon kisky Aata hae
Yah to Adar Maan- DIL ki chahat hae


Aane ka karke vada wo jarur aaye
Sorry Tum pahachan hi nahi paye

[saharawat]

very nice dude uncle

[santoshbenaam]

Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Feb 06, 2004 03:36 a.m.):
Sabhi Kala karo ka Sawagat hae
KOn kis ko bulata hae
Kon kisky Aata hae
Yah to Adar Maan- DIL ki chahat hae


Aane ka karke vada wo jarur aaye
Sorry Tum pahachan hi nahi paye


tune chaha nahin halaat badal sakte the
tere aansoo meri aankhon se nikal sakta the
tu sada thehri rahi jheel ke paani ki tarah
agar dariya banti to bahut door nikal sakte the

santosh benaam

[shooraashok]

very nice dubee jee!!!

[amar0974]

Dudee Uncle Aap to Tope Ho,
'Benaam Daruwala' Aap Jatland Ke Hope Ho.

Bahut Badhia, Laagey Raho :-)

Sujata Dahiya (Feb 05, 2004 01:02 a.m.):
Santosh ji aap kamal hai .
Dudee uncle aap bemisal hai .

Carry on .

[handsome_nashier]

nice one!!
cheers...

[ranjitjat]

Dear Dheeraj, Ashok, Amardeep and all
pasand ky liye danyavad

TutAy- murjhye phool
Kahbi Khil nahi sakaty
Tutay huye dil bhi
Kahbi mil nahi sakaty

Dariya ky 2 kinary
Sath sath rah sakaty han
Parantu hakikat yah hae
Ki khabi mil nahi sakaty

[sandeepk]

that was really good santosh ji. aap koi kitab kyon nahi likhte, bhaut chalegi.
dudee uncle kya shayiri hai app ki, that was realy great of u.

[manas]

wah bhai...............benam "badshah"

[santoshbenaam]

Suresh Deswal (Feb 11, 2004 12:51 a.m.):
wah bhai...............benam "badshah"



Suresh Deswal , sukriya

santosh benaam

[santoshbenaam]

Sandeep Kadian (Feb 10, 2004 08:06 p.m.):
that was really good santosh ji. aap koi kitab kyon nahi likhte, bhaut chalegi.
dudee uncle kya shayiri hai app ki, that was realy great of u.


dear sandeep kadian ji , main bhi soch raha hu apni koi kitab nikalu, jisme meri khushi or mera dard ho,

santosh benaam

[vinod_maanju]

It's gooooood yaar

[santoshbenaam]

Vinod Kumar Maanju (Feb 13, 2004 12:05 p.m.):
It's gooooood yaar

sukriiiiya vinod kumar


santosh benaam

[amar0974]

Wah Uncle Ji Wah! Kaya Baat Kahi Hai, Maza Aaga or aan do.....
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Feb 10, 2004 12:04 p.m.):
Dear Dheeraj, Ashok, Amardeep and all
pasand ky liye danyavad

TutAy- murjhye phool
Kahbi Khil nahi sakaty
Tutay huye dil bhi
Kahbi mil nahi sakaty

Dariya ky 2 kinary
Sath sath rah sakaty han
Parantu hakikat yah hae
Ki khabi mil nahi sakaty

[vijay]

Aane ka karke vada wo na aaye hamne intjaar bahut kiya
Jis ghadi se hame thi nafrat us se hamne bahut pyar kiya
Tumhare liye hamne kya socha tha tumne hame kya soch liya
Jab jab gujra ek ek pal hamne na jane khud ko kaise tham liya
Main apne gile sikwe tumse kahta magar dil ne inkaar kiya
Na jane kon se wo ghadi thi jab hamne tumse pyar kiya
Na aaye tum iska na mujhe afsos hai magaar kyu wada kiya
Tumhare na aane se tumhe kya pata is dil ne kitna intjaar kiya.

santosh benaam


very Nice,


Woh to humse roz wada kar jaate hain aane ka
Humne intezaar mein zindagi ka har pal gujar diya

Na jaane kab qayaamat hogi unki meharbaani ki
Humne to kabhi ka unko ess dil mein utaar liya

Kis se shikva karen aur kisko dard-e-dil dikhayen
Jab humne khud apne aap ko pyar mein bemaar kiya

Dekhate hain ab kisko kya rang dikhati hai ye kismat
"Vijay" ne seekhi zindagi ya tumne apna pyar haar diya