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anne
November 15th, 2003, 05:29 PM
hazaar baar samjhyaa inhe,
sab ke saamne na aa jaya karo,
mujhe tanha karte ho,
kamzori meri dikhaya na karo.
Bole, aansoo ban kar aate hai,
kamzori nahin, tumhara dard dikhate hain.
rokte hain hum bhi khud ko,
par bari mehfil mein
tumko tanha paa kar
beh jaaya karte hain!
annie
November 15th, 2003, 08:04 PM
Hmmmmmm sweet
drnchaudhry
November 15th, 2003, 10:05 PM
The little water drops, together fill up the ocean.
Keep it up!
anne
November 16th, 2003, 04:53 PM
Thanks for the support!
uday
November 17th, 2003, 09:30 AM
really good one..
dahbal
November 17th, 2003, 12:46 PM
Really nice...
-Balraj
amar0974
November 17th, 2003, 02:02 PM
badhia hai! ek merey taraf sey bhey
Iktehaar se inqalaab ki lau ko jala dena...2
agar sher samajh aa jaaye to mujhe bhi samjha dena
Hamaari to Har Shaam Nashey Mey Gujarti They,
Ek Din Shaam Nashey Mey They Magar Hum Gujar Gaye.
hehehehe :-)
uday
November 17th, 2003, 02:09 PM
:-) hA..hA..hA.. Kasoota badhiya !!
Amardeep Bazaad (Nov 17, 2003 04:36 a.m.):
badhia hai! ek merey taraf sey bhey
Iktehaar se inqalaab ki lau ko jala dena...2
agar sher samajh aa jaaye to mujhe bhi samjha dena
Hamaari to Har Shaam Nashey Mey Gujarti They,
Ek Din Shaam Nashey Mey They Magar Hum Gujar Gaye.
hehehehe :-)