a poem in haryanvi

[vickypanwar]

This is my first attempt at writing in haryanvi.
Wrote this last year; can only recall parts of it now. Hope you like it.

Aaj kasoota mee barsya
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kali ghata umadti aave,
din main hogi raat janu
roosi sajni, bhi sajan tain,
soche karlyun baat janu
boond padi saara cho dhu gya,
aaj kasoota mee barsya

gitwade mein gosse bheeje,
indhan alla nyara hogya
roti poun, aag bale na,
chule upar khada hogya
pani dekh par bhookh bhaaj rhi,
aaj kasoota me barsya

pasu pakheru nach uthe sab,
paani amrit sa laagya
johad ke maa tiren baachde,
mehsan ke bhi jee-sa aagya
kue bhar ge, panghat saj gya
aaj kasoota me barsya

-Vikas

[deepakdahiya]

panwar bhai....yo te kasuta composition kar diya......
bhai sach much me he.... kasuta mee barsha hoga........

kuch bhi kaho... phela or dusara attemp......per sare gaam ka najara is kavita me ghal diya......aur gaam ki yaad dila di.......aap ki ek-ek line padhte hua sare najare aankho ke aage ghom rahe the......

great line from a great compositon...

* gitwade mein gosse bheeje, *
* indhan alla nyara hogya.............. *

* *********************** *

* pasu pakheru nach uthe sab, *
* paani amrit sa laagya *
* johad ke maa tiren baachde, *
* mehsan ke bhi jee-sa aagya........... *

thanx for remembering such great moments......

so bhaiyo aap ko koi najara dekha ki nahi...panwar bhai ki kavita me..........

[deepakdahiya]

galti se do bar post kar di the ishleye.......mater delete kiya he...kya karo edit he kar sakta hu delete nahi.........


but really poem is so good that i m exited that i have posted it two times.......

[vickypanwar]

bahut-bahut dhanyavaad Deepak bhai.