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kapilrana
May 8th, 2005, 10:49 AM
Mein darbaro ke liye abhinandan geet nahi gata
Mein tajo ke liye samarpan geet nahi gata
Gaun bhale hi ho jau maon nahi ho sakta mein
Putra moh me shastra tyag kar guru draun nahi ho sakta mein
Kitne hi peh-re batha do meri krud nighao par
Mein dilli se baat karunga bheed bhare chauraho par
Meine bhu par rashmi-rathi ka ghauda rukte dekha hai
Paanch tamencho ke aage dilli ko jhukte dekha hai
Mein dilli ka vansaj dilli ko darpan dikhlata huein
Ishliye mein again-gandha geet sunata huein.

Jab bharat ka yaan khda tha kandharo ki dharti par
Asmenjasta bani huie thi bhartiyo ki mukti par
Raaven attahas karta tha panchvati ki raho mein
Bheem chupa kar muh betthe the besarmi ke daman mein
Arjun ka gaandeev pada tha kayerta ke aagan mein
Hum humdardi khoj rahe the Kabul wale gero mein
Apni topi jaker rekhdi di afgano ke pero mein
Jinke baaju sir bhi Karachi tak badhte dekhe hai
Jo daman mein umar-laden chupa kar batthe hai
apni aanko mein pindi ka nain chupa kar batthe hai
unki makari mein mera bharat chala gyua
aur vaarta karne unke darvaje par chala gya
bharat khoon sne haatho se haath milane chala gya
ek sher kute ke aage poonch hilane chala gya
afgani chhere ujle par man ke kale the
Taliban ke paanse sare mama shakuni wale the
Unse koi aasha karma dilli ki naadani thi
Ish chaurash mein haar udhisther ki nischit ho jani thi
Dilli ke darbar phesle galat varan kar batthe hai
Pandav khud hi draupdi ka cheer haran kar batthe hein
Swaqbhiman ko girvi dhar batthe hue hein hum
Mein darbaro ki lachari ko chankya path padhata huein
Ishliye mein keval again-gandha geet gaata huein.

Jinke dil mein daya nahi umdi ramjan ke mahene mein
Jinko phark nahi padta masoomo ke marne jeene mein
Jab hatyro ne insani rishte tyage the
Aur phhiroti mein dilli se chhatish kedi maange the
Tab dilli walo ne nirnya keval ek liya hota
Chhatiso ko top ke muh par baandh diya hota
Aur chunoti de di hoti sidhe rawalpindi ko
Bhism pitamah kshma nahi kar sakte aur shikhandi ko
Kash hamri dilli ki aankho mein kaal dikha hota
Vajpayee ki aankho ka dora lal dikha hota
Netra teeshra damroo wale shiv ne khol diya hota
Lal-Quila se seena taan kar hamla bol diya hota
Agar khronch bhi aiye bharat ke baasindo ko
Jinda nahi chhodenge Pakistan mein chipe darindo ko
Bandhak bhi bachte bharat ka gaurav bhi jinda rehta
Aur hamara sir bhi duniya mein yuein na sharminda hota
Aatanko ki aandhi tufan sabhi rukte dikhte
Chand tare sab bharat maa ke aage jhookte dikhte
Kaash unko hum Hindustani paani yaad dila dete
Unko to kya unke baap ko nani yaad dila dete
Lekin hum to har kimat par samjhote ke aadi hai
Gaal par thapad khane wale pak-ke Gandhi wadi hai
Ye kayerta ka khel na hua hota
Agar gad-di par sardar patel jaisa koi hua hota
Ugravad ki sanjh kar di jaati
Aatankio ki cokh baanjh kar di jaati
Mein ish kayerta par mutthi kas-kas kar reh jaata huein
Ishliye mein keval agni-gandha geet sunata huein.

Bandhako ke parijan bhi sab khudgarji mein jhool gaye
Apne rishte yaad rahe par bharat maa ko bhool gaye
Unke har parijan ne darpok hone ka aabhash diya
Nahi kisi ne desh prem ka vaton ko vishvaas diya
Kash unke gharwalo ne himmat na todi hoti
Humne jung mein desh prem ki ek aur katha jodi hoti
Yatrio ke parivao ki bhi koi jimedari thi
Sach poocho to dilli unkr parivaro se hari thi
Kya ye desh unhi ka hai jo yudho mein mare jaate hai
Aisa yudh vatan ki khatir sabhi ko ladna padta hai
Sankat ki ghadi mein sabko sainik banna padta hai
Jo kom vatan ki khatir marne ko tyar nahi
Ushki santiti ko azad jeene ka adhikar nahi
Kiske kitne lal salone sima par chinn jate hai
Guru gobind ke bache diwaro mein chin jaate hai
Mangal pandey azadi ka deewana ho jaata hai
Udham singh dayer se badle ka parvaana ho jaata hai
Jhansi ki raani aan pe rajdhani mitwa deti hai
Panaa dhay wafadari par apna beta katwa deti hai
Ghas phoons ki roti khakar rana nahi lad-de the kya
Banda-varagi ke tan par hathi nahi chhadhe the kya
Ye gaatha unko suraj ki lali mein rakh deti hai
Ab dadao se darna chhodo aur Karachi se nata todo
Mein arjun ko shri Krishna ki gita yaad dilate huein
Ishliye mein keval agni-gandha geet sunata huein.

Ek Rubisha ki mukti ka galat nirnya liya dilli ne
Aur tabhi se saari ghati bhar gai aatanki darindo se
Aur hamare darbao ne loh phansle nahi kiye
Arjun machli ki aankho mein teer chalana chuk gaye
Muthi bhar jugnu suraj ke jot kalash par thook gaye
Aakhir yu darte-darte dunia se kya ladenge hum
Koi dilli maange ga to kya dilli bhi de dange hum
Jail bhare kyon batthe hai hum adamkhor darindo se
Azadi ka dil ghyal hai jinke gaurakb dhando se
Ghati mein aatankwad ke karak bane hue hai jo
Bacho ki muskano ke sanharak bane hue hai jo
Jahrile naago ko bhi doodh kyon pilati hai dilli
Musharaph jaise kshadyantrakari ko biryani khilati hai kyon dilli
Inke nirnya mein chuk rahi kaise
Unki gerden phansi ke phande se door rahi kaise
Ab kanoon ko kada karo
unko phansi ke taktho par khada karo
pagal kut-te ki hatya majboori hai
gadaro ko phansi bahoot jaruri hai
mein bajrango ko unki takat yaad dilata huein
ishliye mein keval agni-gandha geet sunata huein.

Compiled by Kapil Rana & Associates.

kapilrana
May 8th, 2005, 10:56 AM
I'm quite busy in my Chartered Accountancy course so I couldn't approach to my associates and friends that the reason we are nt able to serve the community properly and after Wo lahu jaat ka hota hai there was a great demand for something like that Myself and my assoicates try to fulfill the demand and hope that this times too response will be the same as "Wo lahu jaat ka hota hai".
waiting for your comment and appreciation

Yours jaat bhai
Kapil Rana

ramksehrawat
May 8th, 2005, 01:52 PM
Kapil, this is really a great composition !! Tumhare andar ek jawala hai, use bujhne mat dena.

rkumar
May 8th, 2005, 02:05 PM
Really inspiring Kapil..reminds me Subhadra Chauhan and Chandra bardai style of writing.. Compile them all in a book form some day...

RK^2

pardeephooda
May 8th, 2005, 05:13 PM
Dear Kapil

Really Great and inspiring.

Keep writing

sumitsehrawat
May 8th, 2005, 10:13 PM
...efforts are appreciated.

~$umit

ratananmol
May 9th, 2005, 05:51 AM
Dear Kapil:
i will read this very very carefully once i get time; a small reading tells me it is too good. Have you thought carefully about copyrighting it.
Very best wishes,
anmol.

positivelook
May 9th, 2005, 10:09 AM
Hi man
Accha laga shayarana andaz apni aag dikhane ka. keep it up. I m more than happy now JAts are doing great in ecvery field.

Abhimanyu
Jat!the real tigers

vickypanwar
May 9th, 2005, 10:24 AM
Dear Mr Rana,

Incase you are oblivious to the fact, this is a poem by famous poet Hari Om Panwar from Meerut who was felicitated recently.

And you say that you have compiled it?
Well, "compiled" can also mean collecting (like an anthology). But it's difficult to give you that benifit of doubt reading your post(s).

How do you explain claiming other people's work as your own?

-Vikas

stokas
May 9th, 2005, 07:28 PM
I can't say about the writer of this - but atleast can have a glimpse......

Several poets from different regions including Punjab, Lucknow and Madhya Pradesh recited poems advising Prime Minister to attack Pakistan and solve the problem once for all.

"Padosi To Naag Hai, Ise Chandan Na Chadao Tum;
Aatankvad To Sirf Kuchla Jata Hai, Ise Dabao Na Tum"
said noted poet Hari Om Pawar amidst thunderous applause.

Pawar stole the show with his poem, highlighting the plight of Kashmir. As he finished his poem, in which the politicians faced sarcastic remarks, the entire hall including the Prime Minister, Home Minister L K Advani, three former premiers P V Narasimha Rao, I K Gujaral and V P Singh applauded in appreciation.

http://www.dailyexcelsior.com/01dec27/national.htm#8


Dear Rana, if this is the original work of Sh. Hari Om Pawar - than it's really bad to take the credit on your own.
It's good to compile - but atleast, you should have given the name of the author. The sweetness and greatness of this poem must have remained the same after that also.

Shailendra

nmalik
May 9th, 2005, 07:55 PM
Kapil sahab ib aap kuchh bolo ar is saare vishay pai parkash gero

lekin jo panwar ji ne baat kahi sai jai va saachi sai to bhot ghani galat baat

panwar ji dhanyavad information ke liye



Dear Mr Rana,

Incase you are oblivious to the fact, this is a poem by famous poet Hari Om Panwar from Meerut who was felicitated recently.

And you say that you have compiled it?
Well, "compiled" can also mean collecting (like an anthology). But it's difficult to give you that benifit of doubt reading your post(s).

How do you explain claiming other people's work as your own?

-Vikas

raj_rathee
May 9th, 2005, 11:06 PM
Hmm... I knew soimething was up when I couldn't make much sense of the poem.
(grin.) And on top of that it was in the humor section.

Vicky, congrats on the book ! Impressive !
Would you mind sharing your experiences in getting your work published ?
How you got a publisher to be interested and so on ? How many people did
you approach ? ...just all the groundwork you had to do ..... Just curious
to learn about that. Send a private email if you wish... (raj_rathee@yahoo.com).
Thanks..




Dear Mr Rana,

Incase you are oblivious to the fact, this is a poem by famous poet Hari Om Panwar from Meerut who was felicitated recently.

And you say that you have compiled it?
Well, "compiled" can also mean collecting (like an anthology). But it's difficult to give you that benifit of doubt reading your post(s).

How do you explain claiming other people's work as your own?

-Vikas

vickypanwar
May 10th, 2005, 01:13 PM
Thanks Raj.

Yes publishing the book was fun. I tried for at least a year before I got it done. There are many ways to go about it -

1. You could go to a publisher and try to convince him about how great your book is. This is done by sending manuscripts to publishers. It's a lengthy and painful process with a very small success rate. You need a lot of patience.
A quick google search will return a lot of results.

2. Publish online. Some companies allow you to publish your book online.

3. Publish your book yourself. This is called self-publishing. There are companies that can take care of printing, legal stuff, order processing and even marketing for you. But ofcourse for a price. Here are some links to self-publishing - www.bookpublisher.com/ http://www.printingforless.com/index.html
www.go-publish-yourself.com
www.self-publishing.co.uk
www.trafford.com

4. For poetry you can try www.poetry.com. It allows poets to publish their poems on their site. You can find a few of my poems there too. They also have a book publishing service.

Hope that helps,
-Vikas

raj_rathee
May 10th, 2005, 10:22 PM
Thanks Vicky. This was interesting information about the self-publishing
model. I guess for this to be successful publishers will need to be aggressive
about advertising/marketing, as well as following the amazon model of
reader reviews as well as sample pages from the book.

Otherwise it becomes very hard for a potential customer to gaze the contents
before buying, as these books are not available in book stores.

Of course one other option would be online distribution in electronic form.

Anyways, great work and thanks.


Thanks Raj.

3. Publish your book yourself. This is called self-publishing. There are companies that can take care of printing, legal stuff, order processing and even marketing for you. But ofcourse for a price. Here are some links to self-publishing - www.bookpublisher.com/ http://www.printingforless.com/index.html
www.go-publish-yourself.com
www.self-publishing.co.uk
www.trafford.com

4. For poetry you can try www.poetry.com. It allows poets to publish their poems on their site. You can find a few of my poems there too. They also have a book publishing service.

Hope that helps,
-Vikas

vickypanwar
May 11th, 2005, 12:29 AM
Hi Raj,
Are you a member of BAJA(bay area jat association)? I think you are.
I am also on the group but never attended any of the meetings/get-togethers.

-Vicky

raj_rathee
May 11th, 2005, 01:10 AM
Vicky, Yes I am in Baja. You should certainly be a part of the gatherings. Do
make sure to attend the next one, probably sometime later this year. It is
a good way to keep in touch with a lot of the Jats here.


Hi Raj,
Are you a member of BAJA(bay area jat association)? I think you are.
I am also on the group but never attended any of the meetings/get-togethers.

-Vicky

kapilrana
May 14th, 2005, 08:31 PM
Dear all
as you make a qualification on the poem coposor, you are right taht i do not copose it and i never claim on. myself and my associates just compiled it from the resources and make some amendment in which we think were not up to our standard. As far the name of composor is concerend I am particularly not aware if I were I dont have to mentioned the name herein.
THank you for
Kapil Rana

kapilrana
May 14th, 2005, 09:02 PM
Sorry I intend if I know the name of composor i would not have any reservation to mentiond it
and i do not intend to take the credit of someones else work credit just want to share stuff with community.......

siddharthpunia
December 23rd, 2005, 12:53 AM
kapil bhai bahut dino se net pe hari om ji kavitayen dhoondh raha tha, bahut achchi kavita mili, uske liye dhanyawad, If you can get kashmir or some more poems would be a great obligation.

Regards
Siddharth

baliyansachin
December 23rd, 2005, 04:00 AM
An amazing composition. Keep it up Kapil. :)

anildabas1701
December 23rd, 2005, 02:39 PM
bhai kapli " WOH LAHU JAT KA HOTA HAI" was written by you and your associates or it was compiled by you and your associates from the resources and made some amendment in which you think were not up to your standard.
if it is compiled may i know the writers name please

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And This Poem I Want To Dedicate For Armypersonals

Phool Mein Kitna Wazan Hai,
Shool Mein Kitni Chhubhan Hai,
Yeh Batayenge Tumhe Wey
Loot Gaya Jinka Chaman Hai

Deep Mein Kitni Jalan Hai,
Dhoop Mein Kitni Tapan Hai,
Yeh Batayenge Tumhe Wey
Zindgee Jinki Havan Hai

Preeti Mein Kitni Lagan Hai,
Geet Mein Kitne Saijan Hai,
Yeh Bataynge Tumhe Wey
Jalbhara Jinka Nayan Hai

Path Kyun Chalna Kathin Hai,
Aur Kyun Kata Na Din Hai,
Wey Batayenge Ki Jinka
Shat Hua Chalta Charan Hai

Har Tarak Kaisi Umas Hai,
Kyun Nei Antar Tam Saras Hai,
Yeh Batayenge Tumhe Wey
Mann Gaya Jinka Baras Hai

Hath Mein Kitni Sarjan Hai,
Maath Par Kaisi Shhikan Hai,
Yeh Batayenge Tumhe Wey
Jag Jinka Suraj Gahan Hai

Pyas Mein Kitni Shudha Hai,
Boond Mein Kitni Sudha Hai,
Yeh Batayeenge Tumhe Wey
Kanth Hi Jinka Rundha Hai

Preeti Ne Kaise Chhua Hai,
Roop Jo Paras Hua Hai,
Yeh Batayenge Tumhe Wey
Di Jinane Dil Se Dua Hai

Kyon Hua Seeta Haran Hai,
Rakshi Ant Karan Hai
Wey Batayenge Ki Jinka
Martyu Se Pehle Maran Hai

Kya Pragati Hai Kya Patan Hai,
Aasuoon Ka Kya Kathan Hai
Wey Batayenge Ki Jinne
Haas Mein Dekha Rudan Hai
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