Jeevan ke Sangharsh me kitney akele hum
apne huay beganey aur anjano ke saath hum
saansein thehri,dil roya aur aankhein hui num
honth hiley kehney ko par kuch nahi bolle hum
mai jo pag uthaun to samay ki raftar ho madham
sabkey liye hai ujjala mere liye kai sooraj bhi kum
jiss aur chalna chahu har rah wahin jati hai thum
har taraf kanton ka jhurmutt phool hai par bohot hi kum
kamnanadar (November 28th, 2013)
Sangharsh ka naam hi Jeevan hai. Nice comments on Sangharsh. really good.
good stuff indeed
kaabil-ey -taarif.....aur agar yey khud likhi gayi hai to mein istakbaal karta hu ... good keep pourin moreOriginally Posted by speedcrazy
I dont have personality,i am mere statistics.I used to be "downtoearth". Now this is my present name. Do i possess a name, a face ,an individuality ?:rolleyes:
Wrote it just now in few minutes and i believe nice thought dont need any amendment just pen down as they flash....thanks very much Sirkaabil-ey -taarif.....aur agar yey khud likhi gayi hai to mein istakbaal karta hu ... good keep pourin more
well !
well,,, i really respect ur belief.... but there is a lot of diff between self written n copy paste stuff............waitin for sm more minutes for u to write smthin:p......... keep going
I dont have personality,i am mere statistics.I used to be "downtoearth". Now this is my present name. Do i possess a name, a face ,an individuality ?:rolleyes:
quite trueSangharsh ka naam hi Jeevan hai. Nice comments on Sangharsh. really good.
Let your friends underestimate your potential, let your ememies overestimate your weakness
hey gauri very nice stuff. keep visiting jatland and post this kind of nice things.. and once again be careful from KILLKI TAULL !!!! they are around you and trying to catch you , once you caught you can never escape :rolleyes:
Deepak Sejwal
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really gud stuff keep it up.
NICE POEM............................KEEP IT UP....................
अर दुआ करते है िक आप का Sangharsh आप को कामयाबी दे
cheers...........................
I'm sometimes too frank for polite correspondence. This sometimes irks people, so I apologize in advance -- my intentions are always to be clear, not curt.
Why , How , Where - It's in my nature.
पढ़्ये-ओड़ तैं कढ़्या-ओड़ स्याणा हो सै
भांग रगड़ क पिया करूँ , मैं कुण्डी सोट्टे आला सुं !!
kya baat h.this is the first time i have seen deepak commenting on somebodys poem.shyad naam ka kamal h.hum t likh likh mar liye.par kade do bol na bole deepak ne praise k.laage s naam badlna padega.hahahhahaha
Bahut Sunddar... Likhte rahiyega...its really quality stuff.
mere path me chahe kante ho, ya hon phool
chahe ho ghanee dupahree, ho chahe dhool
badhte sada rahenge path par, hanste hanste
nadiyon par tirte aur chattano se ladte
hon hum ekele ya fir koi saath hamsafar
muskurate chalte jayenge, hum dagar dagar
RK^2
Last edited by rkumar; June 16th, 2006 at 06:17 PM.
aapki kavita padhkar merra mann prafullit ho utha hai................................uproket likhe waakyoun se hum praniyoun ko prerna lekar iss Jeeven ruppi amrit ko peena chaiye...............
Become more and more innocent, less knowledgeable and more childlike. Take life as fun - because that's precisely what it is!
it's soooooooo good.....perfect one
क्यो बालका न डराओ सो ................. िकत ए ना पाड़ते हम .................
heheheheheheh
कोए बात ना िरतु बेबे ...... नाम बदलन की कोए जरुरत ना स ............ िरतु तो प्यारा नाम स ना ......
यो तो नए महमाना का स्वागत कर ए स
cheers,,,,,,.............
Last edited by dndeswal; August 20th, 2006 at 05:54 PM. Reason: two posts merged
I'm sometimes too frank for polite correspondence. This sometimes irks people, so I apologize in advance -- my intentions are always to be clear, not curt.
Why , How , Where - It's in my nature.
पढ़्ये-ओड़ तैं कढ़्या-ओड़ स्याणा हो सै
भांग रगड़ क पिया करूँ , मैं कुण्डी सोट्टे आला सुं !!
Ritu ji issi te koi bat koni,, main tei.. khud hi itni shayari , peoms ki threads pasts dal chuka hun ki sab paak liye the.. you can see my earlier posts..haan jahan tak aapki post ka sawaal hai may be main last kafi dino se office mein kuch busy tha isliye reply na diya hoga,, bakki gauri naam ki baat mein kuch damm to hai:p
Deepak Sejwal
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"दम" के आड ए कुशती लडनी स ..
.............. दम दाम कुछ नही खम (खाम खा) बोलन लाग रहया स ......
kilki @ कुशती
सही पका िदये भाई
भाई र तु बजी ही रहया र आड ए दंगे करवावे गा तु .........
ना त थपड थपडा तो करवा ही देगा .......... हीहीहीहीही
cheers.....................
I'm sometimes too frank for polite correspondence. This sometimes irks people, so I apologize in advance -- my intentions are always to be clear, not curt.
Why , How , Where - It's in my nature.
पढ़्ये-ओड़ तैं कढ़्या-ओड़ स्याणा हो सै
भांग रगड़ क पिया करूँ , मैं कुण्डी सोट्टे आला सुं !!
Aree o jhakoi angreji mein likha lya kar bhai... hade win2000 server sei.. koni dikhta ke likhya hai .
Deepak Sejwal
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meri bhi yahi problem se me iske post na pad paati
बदल लो भई
I'm sometimes too frank for polite correspondence. This sometimes irks people, so I apologize in advance -- my intentions are always to be clear, not curt.
Why , How , Where - It's in my nature.
पढ़्ये-ओड़ तैं कढ़्या-ओड़ स्याणा हो सै
भांग रगड़ क पिया करूँ , मैं कुण्डी सोट्टे आला सुं !!
Thanks to all friends and Lady members that my words could touch your hearts in some way
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Originally Posted by speedcrazy