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    Post “mein Dilli Se Baat Karunga Bheed Bhare Chauraho Par” After “wo Lahu Jaat Ka Hota Hai

    Mein darbaro ke liye abhinandan geet nahi gata
    Mein tajo ke liye samarpan geet nahi gata
    Gaun bhale hi ho jau maon nahi ho sakta mein
    Putra moh me shastra tyag kar guru draun nahi ho sakta mein
    Kitne hi peh-re batha do meri krud nighao par
    Mein dilli se baat karunga bheed bhare chauraho par
    Meine bhu par rashmi-rathi ka ghauda rukte dekha hai
    Paanch tamencho ke aage dilli ko jhukte dekha hai
    Mein dilli ka vansaj dilli ko darpan dikhlata huein
    Ishliye mein again-gandha geet sunata huein.

    Jab bharat ka yaan khda tha kandharo ki dharti par
    Asmenjasta bani huie thi bhartiyo ki mukti par
    Raaven attahas karta tha panchvati ki raho mein
    Bheem chupa kar muh betthe the besarmi ke daman mein
    Arjun ka gaandeev pada tha kayerta ke aagan mein
    Hum humdardi khoj rahe the Kabul wale gero mein
    Apni topi jaker rekhdi di afgano ke pero mein
    Jinke baaju sir bhi Karachi tak badhte dekhe hai
    Jo daman mein umar-laden chupa kar batthe hai
    apni aanko mein pindi ka nain chupa kar batthe hai
    unki makari mein mera bharat chala gyua
    aur vaarta karne unke darvaje par chala gya
    bharat khoon sne haatho se haath milane chala gya
    ek sher kute ke aage poonch hilane chala gya
    afgani chhere ujle par man ke kale the
    Taliban ke paanse sare mama shakuni wale the
    Unse koi aasha karma dilli ki naadani thi
    Ish chaurash mein haar udhisther ki nischit ho jani thi
    Dilli ke darbar phesle galat varan kar batthe hai
    Pandav khud hi draupdi ka cheer haran kar batthe hein
    Swaqbhiman ko girvi dhar batthe hue hein hum
    Mein darbaro ki lachari ko chankya path padhata huein
    Ishliye mein keval again-gandha geet gaata huein.

    Jinke dil mein daya nahi umdi ramjan ke mahene mein
    Jinko phark nahi padta masoomo ke marne jeene mein
    Jab hatyro ne insani rishte tyage the
    Aur phhiroti mein dilli se chhatish kedi maange the
    Tab dilli walo ne nirnya keval ek liya hota
    Chhatiso ko top ke muh par baandh diya hota
    Aur chunoti de di hoti sidhe rawalpindi ko
    Bhism pitamah kshma nahi kar sakte aur shikhandi ko
    Kash hamri dilli ki aankho mein kaal dikha hota
    Vajpayee ki aankho ka dora lal dikha hota
    Netra teeshra damroo wale shiv ne khol diya hota
    Lal-Quila se seena taan kar hamla bol diya hota
    Agar khronch bhi aiye bharat ke baasindo ko
    Jinda nahi chhodenge Pakistan mein chipe darindo ko
    Bandhak bhi bachte bharat ka gaurav bhi jinda rehta
    Aur hamara sir bhi duniya mein yuein na sharminda hota
    Aatanko ki aandhi tufan sabhi rukte dikhte
    Chand tare sab bharat maa ke aage jhookte dikhte
    Kaash unko hum Hindustani paani yaad dila dete
    Unko to kya unke baap ko nani yaad dila dete
    Lekin hum to har kimat par samjhote ke aadi hai
    Gaal par thapad khane wale pak-ke Gandhi wadi hai
    Ye kayerta ka khel na hua hota
    Agar gad-di par sardar patel jaisa koi hua hota
    Ugravad ki sanjh kar di jaati
    Aatankio ki cokh baanjh kar di jaati
    Mein ish kayerta par mutthi kas-kas kar reh jaata huein
    Ishliye mein keval agni-gandha geet sunata huein.

    Bandhako ke parijan bhi sab khudgarji mein jhool gaye
    Apne rishte yaad rahe par bharat maa ko bhool gaye
    Unke har parijan ne darpok hone ka aabhash diya
    Nahi kisi ne desh prem ka vaton ko vishvaas diya
    Kash unke gharwalo ne himmat na todi hoti
    Humne jung mein desh prem ki ek aur katha jodi hoti
    Yatrio ke parivao ki bhi koi jimedari thi
    Sach poocho to dilli unkr parivaro se hari thi
    Kya ye desh unhi ka hai jo yudho mein mare jaate hai
    Aisa yudh vatan ki khatir sabhi ko ladna padta hai
    Sankat ki ghadi mein sabko sainik banna padta hai
    Jo kom vatan ki khatir marne ko tyar nahi
    Ushki santiti ko azad jeene ka adhikar nahi
    Kiske kitne lal salone sima par chinn jate hai
    Guru gobind ke bache diwaro mein chin jaate hai
    Mangal pandey azadi ka deewana ho jaata hai
    Udham singh dayer se badle ka parvaana ho jaata hai
    Jhansi ki raani aan pe rajdhani mitwa deti hai
    Panaa dhay wafadari par apna beta katwa deti hai
    Ghas phoons ki roti khakar rana nahi lad-de the kya
    Banda-varagi ke tan par hathi nahi chhadhe the kya
    Ye gaatha unko suraj ki lali mein rakh deti hai
    Ab dadao se darna chhodo aur Karachi se nata todo
    Mein arjun ko shri Krishna ki gita yaad dilate huein
    Ishliye mein keval agni-gandha geet sunata huein.

    Ek Rubisha ki mukti ka galat nirnya liya dilli ne
    Aur tabhi se saari ghati bhar gai aatanki darindo se
    Aur hamare darbao ne loh phansle nahi kiye
    Arjun machli ki aankho mein teer chalana chuk gaye
    Muthi bhar jugnu suraj ke jot kalash par thook gaye
    Aakhir yu darte-darte dunia se kya ladenge hum
    Koi dilli maange ga to kya dilli bhi de dange hum
    Jail bhare kyon batthe hai hum adamkhor darindo se
    Azadi ka dil ghyal hai jinke gaurakb dhando se
    Ghati mein aatankwad ke karak bane hue hai jo
    Bacho ki muskano ke sanharak bane hue hai jo
    Jahrile naago ko bhi doodh kyon pilati hai dilli
    Musharaph jaise kshadyantrakari ko biryani khilati hai kyon dilli
    Inke nirnya mein chuk rahi kaise
    Unki gerden phansi ke phande se door rahi kaise
    Ab kanoon ko kada karo
    unko phansi ke taktho par khada karo
    pagal kut-te ki hatya majboori hai
    gadaro ko phansi bahoot jaruri hai
    mein bajrango ko unki takat yaad dilata huein
    ishliye mein keval agni-gandha geet sunata huein.

    Compiled by Kapil Rana & Associates.
    Thanks & Regards,

    CA. KAPIL RANA | Director
    iN Technologies Inc.

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    I'm quite busy in my Chartered Accountancy course so I couldn't approach to my associates and friends that the reason we are nt able to serve the community properly and after Wo lahu jaat ka hota hai there was a great demand for something like that Myself and my assoicates try to fulfill the demand and hope that this times too response will be the same as "Wo lahu jaat ka hota hai".
    waiting for your comment and appreciation

    Yours jaat bhai
    Kapil Rana
    Thanks & Regards,

    CA. KAPIL RANA | Director
    iN Technologies Inc.

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    Kapil, this is really a great composition !! Tumhare andar ek jawala hai, use bujhne mat dena.
    JAT - Justice And Truth

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    Really inspiring Kapil..reminds me Subhadra Chauhan and Chandra bardai style of writing.. Compile them all in a book form some day...

    RK^2

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    Thumbs up Great

    Dear Kapil

    Really Great and inspiring.

    Keep writing
    Jai Hind!!!!!!!

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    ...efforts are appreciated.

    ~$umit

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    really good

    Dear Kapil:
    i will read this very very carefully once i get time; a small reading tells me it is too good. Have you thought carefully about copyrighting it.
    Very best wishes,
    anmol.

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    Accha laga

    Hi man
    Accha laga shayarana andaz apni aag dikhane ka. keep it up. I m more than happy now JAts are doing great in ecvery field.

    Abhimanyu
    Jat!the real tigers

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    copyright violation ?

    Dear Mr Rana,

    Incase you are oblivious to the fact, this is a poem by famous poet Hari Om Panwar from Meerut who was felicitated recently.

    And you say that you have compiled it?
    Well, "compiled" can also mean collecting (like an anthology). But it's difficult to give you that benifit of doubt reading your post(s).

    How do you explain claiming other people's work as your own?

    -Vikas
    http://tharsis-tholus.tumblr.com/
    http://www.trafford.com/robots/04-2584.html

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    ??????

    I can't say about the writer of this - but atleast can have a glimpse......

    Several poets from different regions including Punjab, Lucknow and Madhya Pradesh recited poems advising Prime Minister to attack Pakistan and solve the problem once for all.

    "Padosi To Naag Hai, Ise Chandan Na Chadao Tum;
    Aatankvad To Sirf Kuchla Jata Hai, Ise Dabao Na Tum"
    said noted poet Hari Om Pawar amidst thunderous applause.

    Pawar stole the show with his poem, highlighting the plight of Kashmir. As he finished his poem, in which the politicians faced sarcastic remarks, the entire hall including the Prime Minister, Home Minister L K Advani, three former premiers P V Narasimha Rao, I K Gujaral and V P Singh applauded in appreciation.


    http://www.dailyexcelsior.com/01dec27/national.htm#8


    Dear Rana, if this is the original work of Sh. Hari Om Pawar - than it's really bad to take the credit on your own.
    It's good to compile - but atleast, you should have given the name of the author. The sweetness and greatness of this poem must have remained the same after that also.

    Shailendra

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    Unhappy doubt mat chhodo

    Kapil sahab ib aap kuchh bolo ar is saare vishay pai parkash gero

    lekin jo panwar ji ne baat kahi sai jai va saachi sai to bhot ghani galat baat

    panwar ji dhanyavad information ke liye


    Quote Originally Posted by vicky_panwar
    Dear Mr Rana,

    Incase you are oblivious to the fact, this is a poem by famous poet Hari Om Panwar from Meerut who was felicitated recently.

    And you say that you have compiled it?
    Well, "compiled" can also mean collecting (like an anthology). But it's difficult to give you that benifit of doubt reading your post(s).

    How do you explain claiming other people's work as your own?

    -Vikas

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    Hmm... I knew soimething was up when I couldn't make much sense of the poem.
    (grin.) And on top of that it was in the humor section.

    Vicky, congrats on the book ! Impressive !
    Would you mind sharing your experiences in getting your work published ?
    How you got a publisher to be interested and so on ? How many people did
    you approach ? ...just all the groundwork you had to do ..... Just curious
    to learn about that. Send a private email if you wish... (raj_rathee@yahoo.com).
    Thanks..



    Quote Originally Posted by vicky_panwar
    Dear Mr Rana,

    Incase you are oblivious to the fact, this is a poem by famous poet Hari Om Panwar from Meerut who was felicitated recently.

    And you say that you have compiled it?
    Well, "compiled" can also mean collecting (like an anthology). But it's difficult to give you that benifit of doubt reading your post(s).

    How do you explain claiming other people's work as your own?

    -Vikas

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    publishing information

    Thanks Raj.

    Yes publishing the book was fun. I tried for at least a year before I got it done. There are many ways to go about it -

    1. You could go to a publisher and try to convince him about how great your book is. This is done by sending manuscripts to publishers. It's a lengthy and painful process with a very small success rate. You need a lot of patience.
    A quick google search will return a lot of results.

    2. Publish online. Some companies allow you to publish your book online.

    3. Publish your book yourself. This is called self-publishing. There are companies that can take care of printing, legal stuff, order processing and even marketing for you. But ofcourse for a price. Here are some links to self-publishing - www.bookpublisher.com/ http://www.printingforless.com/index.html
    www.go-publish-yourself.com
    www.self-publishing.co.uk
    www.trafford.com

    4. For poetry you can try www.poetry.com. It allows poets to publish their poems on their site. You can find a few of my poems there too. They also have a book publishing service.

    Hope that helps,
    -Vikas
    http://tharsis-tholus.tumblr.com/
    http://www.trafford.com/robots/04-2584.html

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    Thanks Vicky. This was interesting information about the self-publishing
    model. I guess for this to be successful publishers will need to be aggressive
    about advertising/marketing, as well as following the amazon model of
    reader reviews as well as sample pages from the book.

    Otherwise it becomes very hard for a potential customer to gaze the contents
    before buying, as these books are not available in book stores.

    Of course one other option would be online distribution in electronic form.

    Anyways, great work and thanks.

    Quote Originally Posted by vicky_panwar
    Thanks Raj.

    3. Publish your book yourself. This is called self-publishing. There are companies that can take care of printing, legal stuff, order processing and even marketing for you. But ofcourse for a price. Here are some links to self-publishing - www.bookpublisher.com/ http://www.printingforless.com/index.html
    www.go-publish-yourself.com
    www.self-publishing.co.uk
    www.trafford.com

    4. For poetry you can try www.poetry.com. It allows poets to publish their poems on their site. You can find a few of my poems there too. They also have a book publishing service.

    Hope that helps,
    -Vikas

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    Hi Raj,
    Are you a member of BAJA(bay area jat association)? I think you are.
    I am also on the group but never attended any of the meetings/get-togethers.

    -Vicky
    http://tharsis-tholus.tumblr.com/
    http://www.trafford.com/robots/04-2584.html

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    Vicky, Yes I am in Baja. You should certainly be a part of the gatherings. Do
    make sure to attend the next one, probably sometime later this year. It is
    a good way to keep in touch with a lot of the Jats here.

    Quote Originally Posted by vicky_panwar
    Hi Raj,
    Are you a member of BAJA(bay area jat association)? I think you are.
    I am also on the group but never attended any of the meetings/get-togethers.

    -Vicky

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    Dear all
    as you make a qualification on the poem coposor, you are right taht i do not copose it and i never claim on. myself and my associates just compiled it from the resources and make some amendment in which we think were not up to our standard. As far the name of composor is concerend I am particularly not aware if I were I dont have to mentioned the name herein.
    THank you for
    Kapil Rana
    Thanks & Regards,

    CA. KAPIL RANA | Director
    iN Technologies Inc.

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    Sorry I intend if I know the name of composor i would not have any reservation to mentiond it
    and i do not intend to take the credit of someones else work credit just want to share stuff with community.......
    Thanks & Regards,

    CA. KAPIL RANA | Director
    iN Technologies Inc.

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    appriciation

    kapil bhai bahut dino se net pe hari om ji kavitayen dhoondh raha tha, bahut achchi kavita mili, uske liye dhanyawad, If you can get kashmir or some more poems would be a great obligation.

    Regards
    Siddharth

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    Really original!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    An amazing composition. Keep it up Kapil.

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