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jaatni
December 30th, 2002, 11:51 PM
aadmi ka jism kya hai,jis par shaida hai jahan.
ek mitti ki imarat, ek mitti ka makan.
khoon ka gaara banaya,inten hain jismen haddiyan.
chand shvason par data hai yeh khyale aasmaan.
maut ki purzor aandhi,jab isse takraigi
toot kar yeh imarat,khaak main mil jaayegi

vinoddhaaka
January 2nd, 2003, 11:52 AM
A Good Couplet and a rare talent among JATS
Keep it up !

dkumar
January 2nd, 2003, 12:48 PM
good interpretation of reality in shero-shayri!

amar0974
January 2nd, 2003, 03:38 PM
Wah Simran Ji Shabdon main Itni Gehrai,
Kahan se Paai,
Shayari Ka Agar Yahi Satar Aagey Bhey Kayam Rakh Paaogey,
Too Ek Din Jaroor Badi Shayar Ban Jaaogey.

jaatni
January 2nd, 2003, 11:50 PM
thanks all for the protsahan.......but to be very frank this really is not my creation....i read it somewhere.anywayz.....even i found it good!!!!
simran