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devdahiya
October 2nd, 2005, 11:38 AM
The honour killings of Weman and every day's harrassments and tortures on women have prompted me to create this poem:
Izzat nahin jahan aurat ki, pyar wahan nahin reh payega
Beshak daulat se lathpath hon,ek din bhooka mar jayega
Paida karke badda kare wo,Beta-2 karti rehti
Uss par hi jo karein julam,wo uppar unke hi marti rehti
Jo bhi aanssu dega usko, jindagi mein dhakke khayega
Beshak............................................ ..........
Rakhi lekar khaddi rahen ye,bahan hamaari jo kehlaati
Bhai ko dein ghee ki roti, Sukhi dekho khood kha jati
Maut mile RAKHI ke badle,bahen ka dil bhi thharayega
Beshak............................................ .............
Kukram karte aadami saare, tohmand aurat ko lag jati
Pish jati ye chinti hardamm, mandrate rehte ye haathi
Viwash bechari abla dekho, kya kabhi inka bhi din aayega
Beshak..........................
Rajwadon mei isse nachaya, dance bar bhi bhare huwe hein
Noch-2 kar khane wale,gali-2 mei bhare huwe hein
Agar KRISHNA lein awtaari, har ghar mei Ek Draupadi payega.
Beshak............................................ .................
ratananmol
October 2nd, 2005, 11:51 AM
Dev ji:
your excellent description reminds me' of a song sung by Gurdaas Maan in a music album released last year titled "Heer".
Very good indeed.
Regards,
Anmol.
devdahiya
October 2nd, 2005, 03:33 PM
Dev ji:
your excellent description reminds me' of a song sung by Gurdaas Maan in a music album released last year titled "Heer".
Very good indeed.
Regards,
Anmol.
Anmol bhai ji....thanx so much for the praise and frankly i do my utmost to put across an issue in best possible manner through these poems. Thanx again.
mrsdahiya
October 3rd, 2005, 05:51 PM
Bohot koob dev bahi,
aisi hi soch agar har jat ki ho jai toh jat bohot jaldi tarraki ke us mukaam par pahunch jaiengay ki phir jato ki misaal dee jane lagegi. Apki ye poem mere dil ko chu gai, bohot khoob, bohot khoob.
devdahiya
October 3rd, 2005, 07:48 PM
Bohot koob dev bahi,
aisi hi soch agar har jat ki ho jai toh jat bohot jaldi tarraki ke us mukaam par pahunch jaiengay ki phir jato ki misaal dee jane lagegi. Apki ye poem mere dil ko chu gai, bohot khoob, bohot khoob.
Thanx for your kind words ma'm. I am grateful.
radhikachhillar
October 4th, 2005, 01:42 PM
great poem. thank u dev ji
devdahiya
January 11th, 2006, 09:26 AM
Why women are at recieving end always? Aren't they qualified to get Dignified treatment in our society?
devdahiya
March 23rd, 2006, 08:16 PM
Aurat ki halat par jitna likh sakun utna kamm hoga...they are still suffering like hell.
drjatin
March 23rd, 2006, 09:32 PM
The honour killings of Weman and every day's harrassments and tortures on women have prompted me to create this poem:
Izzat nahin jahan aurat ki, pyar wahan nahin reh payega
Beshak daulat se lathpath hon,ek din bhooka mar jayega
Paida karke badda kare wo,Beta-2 karti rehti
Uss par hi jo karein julam,wo uppar unke hi marti rehti
Jo bhi aanssu dega usko, jindagi mein dhakke khayega
Beshak............................................ ..........
Rakhi lekar khaddi rahen ye,bahan hamaari jo kehlaati
Bhai ko dein ghee ki roti, Sukhi dekho khood kha jati
Maut mile RAKHI ke badle,bahen ka dil bhi thharayega
Beshak............................................ .............
Kukram karte aadami saare, tohmand aurat ko lag jati
Pish jati ye chinti hardamm, mandrate rehte ye haathi
Viwash bechari abla dekho, kya kabhi inka bhi din aayega
Beshak..........................
Rajwadon mei isse nachaya, dance bar bhi bhare huwe hein
Noch-2 kar khane wale,gali-2 mei bhare huwe hein
Agar KRISHNA lein awtaari, har ghar mei Ek Draupadi payega.
Beshak............................................ .................
Bhai DEV SAHIB BARE SENTIMENTAL KAVITA LIKHI SAI:D
Par Bhai e khuch purani baat se nahin hai. Ya kavita mere khayal te aaj ke chori pe laagu nahin hoti.:confused:
PAR BHAI BAS AANSU TAAPKAN AALE SAIN:D
JOKES APART WELL DONE
manu14
March 23rd, 2006, 10:10 PM
aisi hi soch agar har jat ki ho jai toh jat bohot jaldi tarraki ke us mukaam par pahunch jaiengay ki phir jato ki misaal dee jane lagegi. Apki ye poem mere dil ko chu gai, bohot khoob, bohot khoob.
i agree with maam in this context
m not at all good at poetry & writing but still can appreciate the high standards of the composer .
the poem is really really good great ,dahiya sahab
devdahiya
March 24th, 2006, 09:28 PM
aisi hi soch agar har jat ki ho jai toh jat bohot jaldi tarraki ke us mukaam par pahunch jaiengay ki phir jato ki misaal dee jane lagegi. Apki ye poem mere dil ko chu gai, bohot khoob, bohot khoob.
i agree with maam in this context
m not at all good at poetry & writing but still can appreciate the high standards of the composer .
the poem is really really good great ,dahiya sahab
Bhai aap donno ka dhanyavad...you liked it is a great pleasure for me.Thanks a ton.