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ritika
December 22nd, 2005, 08:04 PM
When friendship shows a sympathetic move,
When a truth in glance should appear
The lips may smile with a dimple
But the test of affection is a tear


When loved ones from our lives go apart
This hope in my heart is very near
If shall we meet again in our lives
May we meet;as we part;with a tear


When my soul fly in the region of sadness
And the feelings of heart are not clear
Something which helps me to console me is
From the eyelid;a fallen tear


Life will leave me;as it has arrived
I don’t hedge myself in any fear
All I wish that where my ashes consume
The dust should get moisten with a tear.

By,
Ritu.

devdahiya
December 22nd, 2005, 08:08 PM
Ritika Ma'm very nice sentiments indeed. Thanks for sharing.

rynsingh
December 22nd, 2005, 08:22 PM
wow the poem is awesome ,
gr8 work ritika

rynsingh
December 22nd, 2005, 08:29 PM
well one frm my side also
Whispers in the dark
I hear your voice from afar
Dreaming, wishing on the same star?
I don’t know you quite yet


But I’m all ready in love
If only God would let
I hold the girl sent to me from above

So far away, I don’t know where you are
Some days it feels like you are in my heart
But you are just someone in my head
I dream about you lying in my bed
Holding you, loving you
There isn’t anything I wouldn’t do
Anything at all it seems
To find the girl of my dreams

It’s a secret who my true love is
I only see you while I sleep
Sometimes I feel I should just quit
But when I see you my heart skips a beat
I wake up to a shadow resembling you
But in my heart I really knew
That you will stay away from me
Never know how things could be
I wake up to a brand new day
Happy, but sad things will never go my way

So far away, I don’t know where you are
Some days it feels like you are in my heart
But you are just someone in my head
I dream about you lying in my bed
Holding you, loving you
There isn’t anything I wouldn’t do
Anything at all it seems
To find the girl of my dreams

Anything…to find the girl of my dreams




well ya offcourse i havent written it

devdahiya
December 22nd, 2005, 08:38 PM
A poet is born. Indeed a great stuff. May you meet your love at the earliest. My best wishes and blessings !

vinodks
December 22nd, 2005, 09:13 PM
Ritu cool, cool ritu, ritu ritu, cool cool.

Gautam's poem is also nice.... Jatland has many budding talents now!

-Vinod

kiran.takhar
December 23rd, 2005, 06:50 AM
very nice poem, ritika

best wishes
Kiran