gazal

[jyotichoudhry]

hi frndz
its , me a new member in u'r group
hope u"ll enjoy this
jyoti

Hum mein hi thi na koi baat,yaad na tum ko aa sake
tum ne humein bhula diya hum na tumhain bhula sake

tum hi na sun sake ager qissa gham sune ga koun?
kis ki zaban khule gi phir,hum na ager suna sake

hosh mein aa chuke the hum josh mein aa chuke the hum
bazam ka rang dekh ker sar na magar utha sake

ronaq bazam ban gaye,lab pe haqayatein rahen
dil mein shikayatein rahen,lab na magar hila sake

shauq-e-wisal hai yahan,lab pe sawal hai yahan
kis ki majal hai yahan,hum se nazar mila sake

[keshavdahiya]

that was really grt.....aate hi laath gaad diya....isne paad bhi liye..;)
Any way, hope u will visit this site daily.....
and you are most welcome here on your online home
keep rocking

[jyotichoudhry]

thanx keshav
:o

[raj2rif]

Very good Jyoti, Welcome to Jatland. We hope to see constructive and entertaining contribution from you. Good luck.

[cooljat]

hey Jyoti
ram ram
Welcome to ur own online home!
aasha hai aap yahan aa kar kuch nayi jyoti laayengi ;)
just kidding....this place is wonderful,
keep visiting
take care

rock on
Jit


Ps- btw, good gajal thou I've no idea about these stuff ;)

[sjakhars]

Welcome Jyoti to the online home for Jats.
Your Ghazal was really nice.
Keep it up.