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raj_ecstasy
August 12th, 2002, 05:52 PM
hey guys,thanx for taking so much interest on my post,so here is one..........!!!
lets go for a walk,a walk so long....;
lets go fro a walk to where we belong!!
lets go to the darker side of the moon...;
where there ain't any day,or noon.....;
to disturb us,while we are asleep,
dreaming of that love,that is so deep!!
just love ,you, and me....,
if we leave something on earth,let it be..!!
lets go for a walk,with hands in hand.....,
lets walk to the moon,lets start a trend!!!
hey hey hey,feel free to make comments and yes compliments,looking forward for ur replies, happy teej anyways...!!!

ranjitjat
August 12th, 2002, 06:35 PM
Raj bhae poem badiya per kuchpal nahi pada .English mae hath kamjor hh.
Good try keep it up
greetings happy TEEJ TO u

mansi
August 12th, 2002, 07:21 PM
hey hey hey guy bhai!
ya oki toki ki walki to achi karwa di but please make sure you don't take them on the sunwalk it's very hot there! aur ees walk kai liya aap ka dhnyawad jo bena space shuttle kai hum saab ti bhi oki toki kai saath moon ki sair karwa di appnai!:-)
good one!

shokeen123
August 12th, 2002, 07:23 PM
Good one Raj!
Nice to see a different flavor on Jatland!

Sujata