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raj_ecstasy
August 14th, 2002, 04:51 PM
so i think i am a hit on jatland.com!! my post got 38 replies,thats good going,right?? anyways here is one more poem,and dedicated to mansi who really appreciated my work but pls don't call me brother,v can be frends,right?
so here it is....!!
i have died a million deaths,
everlasting it feels,that last breath!!
so many unfinished businesses,and regrets;
now its redundant wat u give and wat u get!!
time comes to standstill,yes forever,
wat u forgot,u can't do now, and never!!
u forget everything,even ur name,
now everything is ending,ur life and fame!!
that fading light,thats not sunset.....;
and memories fade,where v last met??
all the colours seems same,pink,blue ,red......,
now stop thinking, 'coz u r dead!!!
i hope u will like it,bye and take care!!
raj

mansi
August 14th, 2002, 06:17 PM
BHAI Raj
aap ki bat to theek sai par ka karan appnai jatan main friend warend ka system nahin hoya karta BHAI bura na maniya , ya friend to banaiya kita aur ja ka ura to sara bhan(SISTER) ar bhai(BROTHER) ay rahwan gai!
baki aap ki marji BHAI(BROTHER)!
ya poem to bhaut achi ti par thodi si cheerful ar happy happy hondi to aur bhi achhi hondi subara subara to waha badiya rahya karan din bhi happy happy ho ja pad kai BHAI Raj!:-)

bharti
August 17th, 2002, 04:04 PM
Raj...
you said u found JATS rude and no romantics . your romance with death is interesting .
good effort but next time write something cheerful!!!!

youn to maut ke samunder main doob gaye the hum
magar ....laash ne ruswa kiya pani par tair kar!!!

rajeshsindhu
August 17th, 2002, 10:53 PM
Bharti Ji,
wa..waa..h..
Hum to aap ki shaayari ki gahraai mein doob gaye!!
Keep it up,
-Rajesh


[b]bharti sindhu (Aug 17, 2002 06:34

youn to maut ke samunder main doob gaye the hum
magar ....laash ne ruswa kiya pani par tair kar!!!