one more(poem) , please bear with

[georgian]

have you ever met a warrior who just lost a war,
someone with bleeding wounds and a fresh scar,

ask him the pain of loosing, a nearly won battle,
his own people who played dirty, he sure will rattle.

he was no ordinary man, he never hanged his sword,
he never let his head bent , barring the almighty GOD,

Still he lost to enemy; best of his men were beheaded
The site was a real pity, more blood than tears shredded.

Limbs chopped off both, Human and Humanity,
Where life dwelled, Death now inhabited the City,

This Pain belongs to all of us, we loose some battles every day,
But “ Never give up “ is still the key, “Please keep depression at bay

NEVER GIVE UP

[devdahiya]

Great thoughts these.....Yes keep your head high....come what may?



The freedom we enjoy today had a attached cost
Thousands were wounded and millions were lost
I don't know whether they were victorious or loosers
But for our liberty,every thing they sacrificed merre DOST

[georgian]

Problems will try to deafeat you,you need to stand tall,
take yourself to a level where all problems seem small.

soar high, with feet firmly on the ground
never let the world rule, your inner sound

dont just wish, work to achieve your aim
blessings of the elders will help u in the game.


thanx for your blessings Dev Sir..... They will sure help me win the game

[choudharyneelam]

Extremely Good!!:)

But friend don't use "bear" word for such beautiful poems.....we enjoy reading such good thoughts written by anyone.....keep on writing:) :)

[me_rathee]

have you ever met a warrior who just lost a war,
someone with bleeding wounds and a fresh scar,

ask him the pain of loosing, a nearly won battle,
his own people who played dirty, he sure will rattle.

he was no ordinary man, he never hanged his sword,
he never let his head bent , barring the almighty GOD,

Still he lost to enemy; best of his men were beheaded
The site was a real pity, more blood than tears shredded.

Limbs chopped off both, Human and Humanity,
Where life dwelled, Death now inhabited the City,

This Pain belongs to all of us, we loose some battles every day,
But “ Never give up “ is still the key, “Please keep depression at bay

NEVER GIVE UP





very nice .......keep posting