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ajaynehra
August 1st, 2002, 09:37 PM
""abadiyon me dasht ka manzar bhi ayega
gujaroge shahar se to mera ghar bhi ayega ""

"Ya to deewana hanse, ya tu jise taufeeq de;
Warna is duniya mein rah kar, muskara sakata hai kaun"

"Gul se lipati huee titalee ko hata ker dekho,
aandhiyo.n tumne Darakhto.n ko giraya hoga"

"falak ke teer ka bhi dekh... kya nishana tha
vaheen giraa.... jahaan apna aashiyana tha!!
pahunch rahee thi kinaare pe kashti-e ummeed
vaheen be-waqt is toofan ko bhi aana thaa!!"

"Mohabbat zindagi ki sabse mushkil aazmaaish hai
Lekin shaayed yeh aazmaa lene laayek aazmaaish hai"


I think it is enough



AJAY NEHRA (desiJAT)

akdabas
August 1st, 2002, 11:48 PM
Wah.wah.wah.......ib aaya se rang jatland pe ....bahut badhiya.


keep it up.

proudjat
August 2nd, 2002, 05:27 PM
Ajay ye thodi nahin bahut saari shayari hai.....

Good Ones....

and keep going on.......

anurana
August 2nd, 2002, 06:14 PM
AJAY NEHRA (Aug 01, 2002 12:07 p.m.):
I think it is enough
AJAY NEHRA (desiJAT)
Bhai chokha tanne toda saans to le liya....tu te gahne kasute - kasute le raha ss..
manne to ek yo he aawe ss..

Itni gaherai mein na ja....Itni gaherai mein na ja..
Re doob-e ga ke...

Bhaut koob bhai Ajay!

shokeen123
August 2nd, 2002, 06:55 PM
I am sorry bhai Ajay...

Itni gahrai me na ja
Itni gahrai me na ja
Kyun ki ab tera dukh
mujh se yuin saha nahi jata....

Yakin nahi ayae lafzon ka
to zaroor ajma lena

Kabhi gujroge bhavishye me America se
To mera ghar bhi ayega
Tumhari Atyant complicated shayri
mein dooba mera bheja bhi payega....

Sujata

saurabhsaharan
August 3rd, 2002, 01:21 AM
hahahaha,,,, bhaai yo complicated shayari toh mere palle konya padi,,parr haan anu ji arr sujata ji ki "uncomplicated" shayari padh ke maja aa gaya :)

shokeen123
August 3rd, 2002, 01:40 AM
Bhai Saurabh, nu e te mai kahun suin, tum saare Jat so - er Jat e raho. Matna pado eis shayari ke chakkar mai. Na te saare rah bhool jyaoge!

Hum ne ke bera "Falak" er "titliyaan" ka? Udati hongi kit e dusre sahar mai...

:-D

Sujata

rathee
August 6th, 2002, 07:54 PM
bhai mein bhi teri shayari te impress ho ke ek-do sher likhan ki koshish karun sun...mulayza farmaiye ----

ke jo guzroge tum mere kheton se
to mera bitoda bhi nazar aayega
jo gobar ko de do shape to wo gosa kahlayega...!!

mila nahin jo saag to ganthhe se roti kha lenge...
hui nahin jo barsaat to nahar kaat ke khet baha denge...

gaam ki lugaiyaan ne dekho
dhaatha maar rakhya hoga
sar pe bharota nahin to banta (matka) utha rakha hoga....

bhai eebe itna hi jo jatland.com ke members ki farmaish aaye to aapki khidmat mein aur sher bhi pesh kiye jayenge...!!!

anurana
August 6th, 2002, 08:11 PM
Pardeep Bhai,
Chala pad diya aap ne to... isse kasuti shayeri to na kiisi ne kahi hogi na suni hogi.....aap farmaish ki baat karo so ...yo to kati HIT ss ...aur sunao isse to ...

rathee
August 6th, 2002, 08:18 PM
bas anu ji fikar matt na karo ke ibe to injan start hoya se...isi shayari ka to mein laanda sa laa dyunga...!!

mansi
August 6th, 2002, 08:32 PM
Pradeep bhai
kit thai app jama maja sa a gaya paad kai yo kar diya app nai to jatan ala kaam ......shayari ka bitoda sa dha diya jama bada jee sa aya paad ka hansi to dhamdi aa konya aur likho esai esai to baat dekhan han.

shokeen123
August 6th, 2002, 08:37 PM
Pradeep we want more of the same.....

Sujata

rathee
August 7th, 2002, 09:11 PM
is saari tareef ka hakdaar ajay se kyonki usne hi mujhe inspire karke mere andar ke is kalakaar ko ubhaar ke nikala hai...

bhai ajay mere bheetar ke is kalakaar ko nikhaarne ke liye kuchh aur sher post karo taaki main bhi apne jazbaaton ko jhakjhor ke usme se aur dard bahar nikalun...!!!!!!!!!!!!!

akdabas
August 7th, 2002, 09:49 PM
Bhai Ajay & Pradeep, isa ke dukh pad raha sai?Jo SHAYARI ki badolat apna dukh bhar kadhana chao so.

rathee
August 7th, 2002, 10:01 PM
bhai ashok main apna nahin duniya ka dukh bhaar kaadhan ka intezam karan laag rhya sun...

bharti
August 11th, 2002, 02:27 PM
Ajay....

JITNA SANWAROGE ... UTNI SANWAR JAAYEGI
ZINDAGI KHAAB NAHIN HAI ... JO BIKHAR JAYEGI

bharti

bharti
August 11th, 2002, 03:07 PM
bhai Pradeep.... chala pad diya , maja aa gya ..

par ye Edit kare hod sain ke???? (You being Editor)
ar farmaish ki tai ib line laagyi rah gi ......
irshaad!!!!!!

naveenadalal
August 11th, 2002, 08:14 PM
Bahut badhiya aap logo ki shayari ka jawab nahi . aapki ttarif mein mein bhi kuch araj kiya hai.


Ajay aur pardeep bhai apne to kamal kar diya, socha tha ek -do sher hoga per aapne to pura parcha bhar diya,

Issi- issi shayari likhte raha karo , kudh bhi hansa karo aur auro ko bhi hansaya karo,

Aapki Shayari ne to aapki khubio ka khulasa kar diya, padke mera dil bhi gad-gad ho gaya.


Ajay u r really a good shayar, keep it up.

rathee
August 12th, 2002, 10:55 AM
bharti ji ye special aapke liye...

jitna bhi pukaro wo na paas aayegi...
ye rambhal ki jhoti se usike ghar jayegi...!!!

bharti
August 12th, 2002, 03:33 PM
Bhai Pradeep....

main tai bekar phansgi in shayaran ke beech main....

jhote- jhote ladan ... jhadan ka kho !!!!

bharti.

mansi
August 12th, 2002, 06:56 PM
Bhai Pradeep
mara dhora koya shiled , trophie ya medal koni nahin to main aaj apnai mahra no 1 jat shayar officialy declair kar dewon ! bhai kaymai to sooch liya karo hasan ala ka kay hal honda ho ga aap ki shayri tain!bas bola hon ki kasar rah ja sai:-):-)
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Pradeep Singh Rathee (Aug 12, 2002 01:25 a.m.):
bharti ji ye special aapke liye...

jitna bhi pukaro wo na paas aayegi...
ye rambhal ki jhoti se usike ghar jayegi...!!!

mansi
August 12th, 2002, 06:58 PM
Bhai Pradeep
mara dhora koya shiled , trophie ya medal koni nahin to main aaj apnai mahra no 1 jat shayar officialy declair kar dewon ! bhai kaymai to sooch liya karo hasan ala ka kay hal honda ho ga aap ki shayri tain!bas bola hon ki kasar rah ja sai:-):-)
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Pradeep Singh Rathee (Aug 12, 2002 01:25 a.m.):
bharti ji ye special aapke liye...

jitna bhi pukaro wo na paas aayegi...
ye rambhal ki jhoti se usike ghar jayegi...!!!

mansi
August 12th, 2002, 06:59 PM
Bhai Pradeep
mara dhora koya shiled , trophie ya medal koni nahin to main aaj apnai mahra no 1 jat shayar officialy declair kar dewon ! bhai kaymai to sooch liya karo hasan ala ka kay hal honda ho ga aap ki shayri tain!bas bola hon ki kasar rah ja sai:-):-)
:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)
Pradeep Singh Rathee (Aug 12, 2002 01:25 a.m.):
bharti ji ye special aapke liye...

jitna bhi pukaro wo na paas aayegi...
ye rambhal ki jhoti se usike ghar jayegi...!!!

mansi
August 12th, 2002, 07:05 PM
DEKHYA KAYMAI TO HANS HANS KA BOLA HO BHI GAYA JO TEEN TEEN BAI YO REPLY POST KAR DIYA :-)

mansi
August 12th, 2002, 09:41 PM
BHARTI JI
JHADAN KA KAY KAHNA SAI, UNKA KAAM TO LADNA AA SAI WA BHI LAD DAAYA HON GAI KITA KISA KA ,EEB TAHIN TO KAHJ THA RAKHI HO GI AGLAY KAI LAD LAD KA !KHASOTNI KARDA/KARDI PHIRDA/PHIRDI HO GA/GI :-)
bharti sindhu (Aug 12, 2002 06:03 a.m.):
Bhai Pradeep....

main tai bekar phansgi in shayaran ke beech main....

jhote- jhote ladan ... jhadan ka kho !!!!

bharti.

rathee
August 14th, 2002, 02:03 PM
mansi tere inte reply dekh ke mai samajh sakun sun ki tera ke haal hoya hoga....par ke karun ye saare kati direct dil se likade sein...!!!

nareshsindhu
August 18th, 2002, 07:21 PM
RAAM RAAM
Hat JAAO EEEBBB AALIYA SE TSAAYA MAANASH
KIHE NE TSAAYA NHI RAHAN DU.DBO DUNGA SABNE SHAYRI ME.

AANDI AATI HAI TOOFAAN AATAA HAI
JAB JATLAND PE TSAAYA INSAAN AATAA HAI

HUM APNE GUM KI TOHIN KAR GAYE HOTE
GAR JATLAND(SITE) NA MILI HOTI TO MAR GAYE HOTE

LOG KAHTE HAI HAME AADAT HAI MUSKURANE KI
YE BHI TO AK ADAA HAI GUM CHHUPAANE KI


DAALI DAALI DAALI JIS DAALI PE NAJAR DAALI
BEWAFAA BAAGWAAN NE VO DAALI HI KAAT DAALI.

Tsaaya Maanash

naveenadalal
August 18th, 2002, 09:18 PM
wah ! Naresh bhai apki sayari to kamaal ki hai, aap to sachmuch sab shayaron ko dho dalne ke mood mein ho, hame aapki sayari ka intezaar rahega.

keep it up!

mansi
August 19th, 2002, 05:48 AM
BHAI NARESH
BHOT BADHIYA SHAAR SUNAYAI AAP NAI TO.LAGA HAI AAP SARA JAT BHAIYA NAIN MIRJA GALIB KI CHHOOTI KARAN KA KAAM PAKA KAR DIYA SAI AAPNI NO 1 JAT SHAYARI TAIN:-)
GOOD ONE KEEP IT UP !

anurana
August 19th, 2002, 10:14 AM
Wah Bhai Naresh , Bhaut badhiya . Per bahi DAALI DAALI ER PHER SE DAALI wali baat gahi e kasuti kah di.

akdabas
August 21st, 2002, 06:42 AM
Bhai Naresh,

Wah wah wah wah........Bhaut badhiya,
kati kamal ki shayari likhi sai aap nai bhi bas likhe jaao ase hi.


.

rathee
August 21st, 2002, 03:59 PM
aandhi aati hai toofan aata hai
jab meri markhani jhoti ko ufaan aata hai !!


hum apne khetaan te ghar gaye hote
jo na milta roti gael gantha to mar gaye hote !!


log kahte hain ki hamein aadat hai gud khaane ki
ye bhi to ek adaa hai apni haar(thakaan) mitane ki !!


daali daali jis jhaab(handi) mein sheet(lassi) daali
raldu ki maa ne wohi jhaab phod daali !!


bhai Tsaaya Maanash...kyamein pyaas bujhi ke teri...??!!

shokeen123
August 21st, 2002, 06:37 PM
Ley bhai Pradeep eib bhua ki shayari (mixed with yours) soon:

aandhi aati hai toofan aata hai
jab meri markhani jhoti ko ufaan aata hai !!

Hurricane aate hai tornado aate hai
Jab Pradeep er Dharam Pal Bhai ki shayari amricca tak pahunchati hai
To saath mai India se clylone bhi aate hai

hum apne khetaan te ghar gaye hote
jo na milta roti gael gantha to mar gaye hote !!

Hum highway 95 te Indian store gaye hote
Agar good ki dali nahi milti to baniya ka sir phod aaye hote

log kahte hain ki hamein aadat hai gud khaane ki
ye bhi ek adaa hai apni haar(thakaan) mitane ki !!

log kahte hai ki hamein aadat hai chane ka saag khaane hi
Yahi ek tarkeeb hai gaam ka nostalgia mitaane ki

daali daali jis jhaab(handi) mein sheet(lassi) daali
raldu ki maa ne wohi jhaab phod daali !!

daali daali jis Indian store nai desi ghee ki ishtehaar daali
canastar te canastar, hum ne kuppi bhi baramad kar daali


:-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D

Sujata

ajaynehra
August 21st, 2002, 07:18 PM
Hi

Haryanvi shyaari sun kah jii sa aa gya ....jah galti tah ...Mirza Gaalib jinda hota tah .. fansi kha leta ... musse maran ki goli kha leta ya pher wo bhi Haryana mah migrate ho jaata auur jatland join karne ki arzi de deta.......par us khatar usnah JAT hona hota , wo wo ho nahi paata ......

Gooooooooooooooood

I never thought it could be so intersting and good posting these few shers.......I will shortly post next collection

NEHRA

mansi
August 21st, 2002, 07:31 PM
SUJATA DI AR PRADEEP BHAI
JAMA KASOTA KASOTA SHAIR SUN DIYA YA TO BERA NAHIN AJ HANS HANS KA KAI HO JA GA JAMA KASOTI SHAYARI SAI YA TO MIRJA GALIB BHI TARASDA HO GA ESI JAT SHAYARI SIKHAN KHTAR TO !:D:D:D:D:D

ranjitjat
August 21st, 2002, 08:04 PM
KADARDANO KI KIDHMAT MAE 2LINE PAESH HH
HAM to KADAR DANO ky SEWAK hh HAMY KAHA JOSS HA
SACH KO TAKRI RO MAE PABOGY NA TAHRIRO MAE
SACH KAHI HA TO BAH HA INSANO KY SHEENO MAE
HAM PARBARIS LAHU SY KALAM KARTY RAHYNGY
JO DIL PER GUJRATI HA RAKAM KARTY RAHYNGY

SONO RY ISAQK MAE APANI HASTI DUNDHANY WALO
YAH VAH MANJIL HA JIS PER INSAN LADKHADA JATY HA

mansi
August 21st, 2002, 09:11 PM
Dhrampal bhai
aap bhi shayari ka mood main ho gai baki bhan bhaiyan ki majadar shayari dekh kai! bhot badhiya likha sai aur likho esa esa to,jama shayari ki mahfil si jam gi ya to bhala ho ajay bhai ka!:-)
Dharmpal Singh Dudee (Aug 21, 2002 10:34 a.m.):
KADARDANO KI KIDHMAT MAE 2LINE PAESH HH
HAM to KADAR DANO ky SEWAK hh HAMY KAHA JOSS HA
SACH KO TAKRI RO MAE PABOGY NA TAHRIRO MAE
SACH KAHI HA TO BAH HA INSANO KY SHEENO MAE
HAM PARBARIS LAHU SY KALAM KARTY RAHYNGY
JO DIL PER GUJRATI HA RAKAM KARTY RAHYNGY

SONO RY ISAQK MAE APANI HASTI DUNDHANY WALO
YAH VAH MANJIL HA JIS PER INSAN LADKHADA JATY HA

shokeen123
August 22nd, 2002, 09:28 PM
Here I go again guys....

Jab se Ajay, Pradeep, er Dharam Pal Bhai ki shayari Jatland pe aaye hai
Mere office ke chaaron taraf, tillchutton (roaches) ki bahar aaye hai

Wo kahete hain shayari ki lut chhodo, shayari dilon ko todati hai
Maine kaha, bakwaas bandh karo, shayari mere liye ub ek nai chunauti hai

Meri lab may ek Russian scientist or uske subject (cat) ki aapas main hui ladaai hai
Billi bhagi sir me electrodes sahit, boli mera sir chhedeta hai, tu kya mera naai hai?

Thodi der mein mai nikli cafeteria mein lunch khaane ke liye
Alu gobhi, bangan or ganthy bhage apni jaan bachaane ke liye

Lan me ek dholi huns ke boli, “O, hi, how do you do?”
Mai boli jiji kyun hai hai kar rhi sai, “What is wrong with you”?

Wo boli, “O…. I was just asking, how is life?”
Mai boli, jiji baki subh te theek sai except for the Afghan strife!

Wo boli, “Why….Afghanistan, what is going on?”
Mai boli jiji mhare Prezel-dent Dubya ne bhej rakay B-52s, including un-manned drone!

Wo boli, “Do the women in your country wear the dresses Afgan type?”
Mai boli, na jiji mhare gaam ki Jatni paharen silwar kurta choonthadi with dhatha tight!

Wo boli, “Tell me more about your country, I have long been a fan of India!”
Mai boli, jiji login on Jatland, bera paat jyaga bhed saara, from ghaghri to bindia!

Wo boli, “Thanks for the information I really appreciate!”
Mai boli, koi na jiji pher baat karenge jib pher hogi bhaint

Wo boli, “Bye now, have a good weekend …. see you later alligator…”
Mai boli, jiji ram ram te theek, par baki ki harfaan ki tanhi chaheye munne translator!”

Waapas mai jib aaye, lunch khaa ke tillchuttayan ne kar rakha tha mera office hijack
Mai boli, you will be sorry guys, wait til Pradeep, Ajay er Dharam Pal bhais are back…

To be continued…. :-D

Sujata

mansi
August 22nd, 2002, 11:14 PM
Sujata di
esi shayari mari kai hum pahunch gaya on cloud nine padh dai ha ho gaya mahra mood bhi very very very fine!:-)
mega super duper hit shayari sai ya to next series kad reliese karo gai ,hum to baat dekhan haan !:-D

saurabhsaharan
August 22nd, 2002, 11:44 PM
sujata jiji,,very good shayari,,keep it up!!!

rathee
August 23rd, 2002, 02:17 PM
ye sher bhej ke bhua tanne paad diya chaala....
teri shayari padh ke to ho jaga paagal upar aala...!!!

ghee sa ghaal duya...

ajaynehra
August 23rd, 2002, 04:53 PM
Sujata (Aug 22, 2002 11:58 a.m.):

Hi Sujata ji

GrEaT

Aap to GREAT hain ....... Aapki shaayari sun kar mann gad gad ho gaya .....i will say A JAT can do anything ....He can Become a Scientist , Artist, ...........A SHAYAR and SHARARNI also ...... But last but not least anyone non JAT can't become a JAT......

This JATland.com , site represents the wide spectrum of the talents of All JATS.... on the site.

GrEaT.......realy GrEaT


AJAy NEHRA ....desiJAT


Here I go again guys....

Jab se Ajay, Pradeep, er Dharam Pal Bhai ki shayari Jatland pe aaye hai
Mere office ke chaaron taraf, tillchutton (roaches) ki bahar aaye hai

Wo kahete hain shayari ki lut chhodo, shayari dilon ko todati hai
Maine kaha, bakwaas bandh karo, shayari mere liye ub ek nai chunauti hai

Meri lab may ek Russian scientist or uske subject (cat) ki aapas main hui ladaai hai
Billi bhagi sir me electrodes sahit, boli mera sir chhedeta hai, tu kya mera naai hai?

Thodi der mein mai nikli cafeteria mein lunch khaane ke liye
Alu gobhi, bangan or ganthy bhage apni jaan bachaane ke liye

Lan me ek dholi huns ke boli, “O, hi, how do you do?”
Mai boli jiji kyun hai hai kar rhi sai, “What is wrong with you”?

Wo boli, “O…. I was just asking, how is life?”
Mai boli, jiji baki subh te theek sai except for the Afghan strife!

Wo boli, “Why….Afghanistan, what is going on?”
Mai boli jiji mhare Prezel-dent Dubya ne bhej rakay B-52s, including un-manned drone!

Wo boli, “Do the women in your country wear the dresses Afgan type?”
Mai boli, na jiji mhare gaam ki Jatni paharen silwar kurta choonthadi with dhatha tight!

Wo boli, “Tell me more about your country, I have long been a fan of India!”
Mai boli, jiji login on Jatland, bera paat jyaga bhed saara, from ghaghri to bindia!

Wo boli, “Thanks for the information I really appreciate!”
Mai boli, koi na jiji pher baat karenge jib pher hogi bhaint

Wo boli, “Bye now, have a good weekend …. see you later alligator…”
Mai boli, jiji ram ram te theek, par baki ki harfaan ki tanhi chaheye munne translator!”

Waapas mai jib aaye, lunch khaa ke tillchuttayan ne kar rakha tha mera office hijack
Mai boli, you will be sorry guys, wait til Pradeep, Ajay er Dharam Pal bhais are back…

To be continued…. :-D

Sujata

sanjaykharb
August 23rd, 2002, 05:25 PM
Aaap sab key sher padd kar mera bhi ek chota sa sher likney ka mann kar rha hey...

Urjj kiys hey

Dil sey dil mila .....dilbarzani
Dil sey......dil mila dilbarzani

Teri dayin aankh kani, meri bayin aankh kani.

ranjitjat
August 23rd, 2002, 07:58 PM
Sabhi shayar aur Sherniyo ki sewa mae aaraj ha
Koe samajhy na insan dil ki bat kahany mae kaya haraj ha
Yah rah badi mushkil ha rahi-samjhana hamara faraj ha
Ham ko baybapha kahata yah jamana kitana khud garaj ha
Irasat

rathee
August 26th, 2002, 01:26 PM
Sanjay Kharb (Aug 23, 2002 07:55 a.m.):
Aaap sab key sher padd kar mera bhi ek chota sa sher likney ka mann kar rha hey...

Urjj kiys hey

Dil sey dil mila .....dilbarzani
Dil sey......dil mila dilbarzani

Teri dayin aankh kani, meri bayin aankh kani.

bhai sanjay tanne te kati khoonta sa gaad diya...haans haans ke paet paat gya..!!!

nareshsindhu
August 27th, 2002, 12:27 AM
Raam raam bhaiyo Aur bahno

hosla badhaane ka dhanyawaad.

Tsaaya Maanash

sujatadahiya
September 14th, 2002, 11:32 PM
maza aa gaya ye sher padh kar sanjay ji isay isay tei aur aan do .





Sanjay Kharb (Aug 23, 2002 07:55 a.m.):
Aaap sab key sher padd kar mera bhi ek chota sa sher likney ka mann kar rha hey...

Urjj kiys hey

Dil sey dil mila .....dilbarzani
Dil sey......dil mila dilbarzani

Teri dayin aankh kani, meri bayin aankh kani.

jat_somveer
September 15th, 2002, 05:35 PM
ajay bhai
laage se tagadi chot kha re so
aur pardeep bhai
tukbandi badhiya laagi
Aur bhai baat sun lo thaali ib dalal te bhi nahi rahya jaga.
ek aapni taraf te -
jala ghar mera bacha hi kya hai,
gar kuchh bach gaya to samajho jala hi kya hai.
apne haathon se likhni hai takdeer yaaro,
warna haathon ki in lakiron me rakha hi kya hai.
ajay bhai aur pradeep bhai bahot badhiyaa
kheench ke lo .

jat_somveer
September 15th, 2002, 05:38 PM
ajay bhai
laage se tagadi chot kha re so
aur pardeep bhai
tukbandi badhiya laagi
Aur bhai baat sun lo thaali ib dalal te bhi nahi rahya jaga.
ek aapni taraf te -
jala ghar mera bacha hi kya hai,
gar kuchh bach gaya to samajho jala hi kya hai.
apne haathon se likhni hai takdeer yaaro,
warna haathon ki in lakiron me rakha hi kya hai.
ajay bhai aur pradeep bhai bahot badhiyaa
kheench ke lo .

sunilchhikara
September 16th, 2002, 07:01 PM
bahi ajay
aap ki shari to ghani bhadiya ...........
ya shari bhand mat karyo

akdabas
September 16th, 2002, 08:18 PM
Wah wah wah...apne haathon se likhni hai takdeer yaaro,
warna haathon ki in lakiron me rakha hi kya hai.wah wah wah .......!!!
Mhara ak or shayar bhai aagya hai,bhai bahut badhiya aillhe bas maza aagya padh kai. :)

keep it up.



Somveer Dalal (Sep 15, 2002 08:08 a.m.):
ajay bhai
laage se tagadi chot kha re so
aur pardeep bhai
tukbandi badhiya laagi
Aur bhai baat sun lo thaali ib dalal te bhi nahi rahya jaga.
ek aapni taraf te -
jala ghar mera bacha hi kya hai,
gar kuchh bach gaya to samajho jala hi kya hai.
apne haathon se likhni hai takdeer yaaro,
warna haathon ki in lakiron me rakha hi kya hai.
ajay bhai aur pradeep bhai bahot badhiyaa
kheench ke lo .

rathee
September 17th, 2002, 03:11 PM
bhai ya te kasooti si sur-taal chhed rakhi se jatland.com ke members ne...!!!

ajaynehra
September 17th, 2002, 09:35 PM
Bhai Rathee Sahab

Baat sah nu , chot chaat nahi khai kite bhi , haan nu zaroor hai ak kain nah chot khava di hogi. Waise bhai Rathee saahab aap to waise humaare kaafi close hain , waise to har JAT humaare close hai , but Rathee humaare Mama hain.

Shaayari to nu e hai ak kite tah likh lete hain , kisi ki achhi shayari lagi to chura li aur share kar li ,

But on jatlan people realy liked it , it seems

anyway , n'joy

This shayari is one of the characterstic of the wide spectrum of JATS


Ajay Nehra



Pradeep Singh Rathee (Sep 17, 2002 05:41 a.m.):
bhai ya te kasooti si sur-taal chhed rakhi se jatland.com ke members ne...!!!

rathee
September 20th, 2002, 09:30 AM
bhai ajay yo te karda soot bethya...tere mama Rathee sein er mere mama Nehra !!! bhai yo sahi connection laagya....

ajaynehra
September 20th, 2002, 10:39 PM
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha ,..................le bhai Rathee sahab yu to kasoota chala paat gya. But this is anyway great.

By the way are you from Haryana ,if yrs from where. Main to hoon Rohtak tah

Chalo bhai sahab if you are in delhi , we can meet and that will again be great.

n'joy


ajay nehra

desiJAT

rathee
September 21st, 2002, 09:08 PM
bhai main bhi kati haryane ka-eh sun...mere gaam ka naam Kharhar se, yo padya kare jab sampla te matan ked jawen sein...!!!

bhai kati dilli main sun main to er zarur milenge...ya bhi koi bolan ki baat se...

rajeshrathee
November 29th, 2006, 02:42 AM
kuch purane shayaro ko bhi padh lo