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ajaynehra
August 1st, 2002, 09:52 PM
"Jaaney kya baadalon ke darmiyan saajish hui..
Jinkey ghar mitti ke they unhi ke ghar baarish hui"

akdabas
August 2nd, 2002, 12:02 AM
Ib te bhai sukha pad raha se is saal te jhopadi aala ne bhi daran ki jarut kona.ha.ha.ha.ha.ha.............khoob maja aa raha se.


keep it up.

shokeen123
August 2nd, 2002, 01:38 AM
Ashok, kyun tu shayari taang tode sai?

Cheers...

Sujata

shokeen123
August 2nd, 2002, 01:46 AM
Na bhai Ajay yo kissa eis tarah tha:

Na kahin baadal garjay
Na kahin baarish hui
Mitti ke ghar to kya
door tak paani ki
boond tak nahi giri...

Sujata

rathee
August 6th, 2002, 08:15 PM
o tera bhalla ho yhaade te saare mirza ghalib bana ho rhe sein...

bhai bakash de hamne in dard bhari aahon se
ke hum nahin denge aawaz khet aali rahon se....

mansi
August 6th, 2002, 08:41 PM
Pradeep bhai
wah -wah ------wah -wah -------wah -wah-------wah -wah--------wah-wah----wah-wah............................................ar wah-wah
hansi nahin rukdi jama, aur likho ya shayari to..............
EETNA SA LIKH KA PRADEEP BHAI APP RUK NAHIN JANA ,ASI SHAYRI TO HUM JATON KO AUR SONANA !

shokeen123
August 6th, 2002, 09:09 PM
Bhai Ajay:

Tunne yo Pradeep eib shuru kar diya... kati bandh na ho!

Sujata

rathee
August 7th, 2002, 09:03 PM
bhai jis dhaal mere sher isse tagaje te popular hge is site pe to manne thoda sa lalach ho gya....bhai tam mein te koysa publisher howe to manne jatu sheran ki ek kitaab chhapwani se...:-)

ha ha fikar mana karo beech beech mein chhodta rahunga ek aadha suthra sa...asal mein ati har cheez ki buri hoti hai !! jo kam milta hai wahi sona hota hai...!!

o tera bhalla ho eebe manne aap apna bhashan padhya to ahsaas sa hoya ki jo indira gandhi nahin hoti to uski jagah manne-eh milni thi....!!!

anurana
August 7th, 2002, 09:08 PM
Bhai Pardeep Indira Gandhi ki jagah ki to sardar bhi baat deeke tha ... tanne uske patta kat diya

rathee
August 7th, 2002, 09:15 PM
kamaal se anu ji mera er sardar ka ke mukabla...wo thahrya ek adna sa banda aur hum to there jatland.com ke shayar no. 1 !!!

dekhte jao sahaj sahaj si bush ka patta katan ki soch rhya sun mein....

ajaynehra
January 7th, 2005, 08:19 PM
NEW ONE -

"Khuli chatton ke diye kab ke bhuj gaye hote;
Koi tah hai to hawaon ke parr katarta hai "

Nehra Ajay

gajeshd
January 9th, 2005, 03:01 PM
New One ke baad New Two pesh hai bhai Pradeep ur bhai Ajay,

Ab ke sawan shararat ye mere saath hui,
mera ghar chod ke kul shehar (city) mai barsat hui.
Mat puchiye kya hum pe safar mai guzri,
tha luteron ka jaha gaanv(village)waha raat hui.

(lines from poem of Kavi Neeraj)

ajaynehra
January 10th, 2005, 12:25 PM
Wah Wah Bhai .. great .......