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uday
June 16th, 2003, 02:41 PM
Gud ki bheli ke tarah ekdam Garam or Tazaa likha hai ( self written).....



Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;
Dekhkar muskurana shayad yun hi tera ek andaaz hai!
Teri 'Enhi' addaoon ka hr koi yu hi nahi Mureed-a-nawaaz hai;
Per khuda jaane,yeh Husn-a-noor kiski humraaz hai !!

akdabas
June 16th, 2003, 06:18 PM
Bhai Dahiya Sahab,

Aapne bhee kati lath sa gad diya :)

rinu
June 17th, 2003, 01:21 AM
Oh My GoD..........u WrOTe It???

DIS IZ AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG.......REALLY BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL


RiNu




Uday Dahiya (Jun 16, 2003 05:11 a.m.):
Gud ki bheli ke tarah ekdam Garam or Tazaa likha hai ( self written).....



Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;
Dekhkar muskurana shayad yun hi tera ek andaaz hai!
Teri 'Enhi' addaoon ka hr koi yu hi nahi Mureed-a-nawaaz hai;
Per khuda jaane,yeh Husn-a-noor kiski humraaz hai !!

uday
June 17th, 2003, 10:03 AM
Ashok Kumar Dabas (Jun 16, 2003 08:48 a.m.):
Bhai Dahiya Sahab,

Aapne bhee kati lath sa gad diya :)

Thanx Dabas Sahib
Thanx Rinu ji..

Stay Tuned :-)

rkumar
June 17th, 2003, 11:23 AM
Bahut sundar Dahiya ji. Dahiya ji Musaairaa me aao naa..khoob jamegee....

Rajendra

uday
June 17th, 2003, 04:58 PM
Rajenderji,

Thanx !!

Aaj to time laga nahi...kal Zaroor aayengey Musaairaa me... Logon ko protsahit karo jab kuch likhan hai to kuch original hi likhe


Rajendra Kumar Kalkhunde (Jun 17, 2003 01:53 a.m.):
Bahut sundar Dahiya ji. Dahiya ji Musaairaa me aao naa..khoob jamegee....

Rajendra

yvsgaawar
June 17th, 2003, 07:12 PM
Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;


Bahut acche Uday bhai.

uday
June 18th, 2003, 12:18 PM
Thanx Yagyavirji..

YagyaVir Singh Gaawar (Jun 17, 2003 09:42 a.m.):
Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;


Bahut acche Uday bhai.

VirenderNarwal
June 20th, 2003, 02:02 PM
bhut badhiya nagme bhai dahiya ji
uae likhte rahe to sayar ban jao ge
pick uuuupppp

jaatni
June 21st, 2003, 12:17 AM
Uday Dahiya (Jun 16, 2003 05:11 a.m.):
Gud ki bheli ke tarah ekdam Garam or Tazaa likha hai ( self written).....


Ghataon ke nayanno main Kajal ka machalta hua raaj hai;
Dekhkar muskurana shayad yun hi tera ek andaaz hai!
Teri 'Enhi' addaoon ka hr koi yu hi nahi Mureed-a-nawaaz hai;
Per khuda jaane,yeh Husn-a-noor kiski humraaz hai !!

this is too good ....

naveenadalal
June 21st, 2003, 01:40 AM
Wah.....
Kya baat hai, lagta hai zuban per dil ki baat hai
jaane kab tak aap apna yeh hunar chhupate, yeh to jatland ki inyaat hai varna aisa shayraina andaz kahan paate...

Very well done , ap to chupe Rustam nikle...
Keep it up.

uday
June 23rd, 2003, 01:38 PM
bus ji ye to aap jason ka Aashirwad or saath hai.... :-) :-)

Naveena Dalal (Jun 20, 2003 04:10 p.m.):
Wah.....
Kya baat hai, lagta hai zuban per dil ki baat hai
jaane kab tak aap apna yeh hunar chhupate, yeh to jatland ki inyaat hai varna aisa shayraina andaz kahan paate...

Very well done , ap to chupe Rustam nikle...
Keep it up.